To Err is Human (DMG+KYPHff) 1 note pg145 - Page 56

sorry my comp was frozen...so i mite have posted like 6 times.... 😛 😳 sorry....

Originally posted by: charminggenie

cant xpress in words how fab this part was,it was soooooooooo romantic,be it Armaan n Ridz cute icecream romance or d wet n wild silent passion b/w Angad n Kripa.........
evrythin was simply n delictably deliciously beautiful................
hats off 2 u 4 this amazin ode narratin d beginnin of luv.....
👏

aww...love the words u have selected to compliment this part...ur too sweet 😊 thanks charminggenie 🤗

Originally posted by: aspatel2

Awesome part bheeegi di I really liked the Armaan remembering "tumari car me meri jooti be nahi aygi" hahaha that was awesome and AK is just amezing i really like Angad's dailogue he gives kripa hints about himself but his kripa doent understand anythin 😕

Armaan taking notes inm library is really good as he is progressing towards becoming best doctor...

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

thanks axita...yes Ridz had to eat her words along with the ice cream 😆 😆 AK ka pyaa aisa hi hai...kaisa yeh pyaar hai? 😉

Originally posted by: Naina123

Bheegi Di!!!!

That was such an amazing part!!!! I totally loved it!!!! Shooooo cute!!! Armi-Ridz library scene was tooo shweet.. and i can so totally imagine armu doing all those funny expressions!!! 😆

Oh and Angad and Kripa rainy scene was really lovely... and Angad and Armaan are too mischevious!! Love their interaction together!! 😆



LUV
Nainu
xxx

thanks Nainu...i am glad u liked the part 😊 😊

Hey Bheegi,

another amazing update..loved the way ridz was fighting wid her brain and listening to her heart..you just brought about the conflict , in word, really well..so armaan was really jealous eh 😆 😆 ..

and the angad-kripa encounter was...umm..oh well, on the lines of being steamy 😉 haha not exactly but ya with all the props like rain n the loneliness of the night 😛 ..i hope they sort out their differences n get back...buh naa, i like their khatti-meethi takrar..it just adds more spice to the ff 😆

an amazing update as usual..sorry couldnt reply to you as soon as i read the update..cuz u understand the whole uni. scenario rii..exams frm next week..plus i'm a bio major..so i have like organic chem, biochem n genetics lined up one after the other 🤢 oh ya, life basically sucks for me..hahah..buh i cant complain as i chose it for myself..hehe..now i'll stop boring u with my ramayan and let u work on ur stuff..

continue the gr8 work...😃

Originally posted by: d3si

Hey Bheegi,

another amazing update..loved the way ridz was fighting wid her brain and listening to her heart..you just brought about the conflict , in word, really well..so armaan was really jealous eh 😆 😆 ..

and the angad-kripa encounter was...umm..oh well, on the lines of being steamy 😉 haha not exactly but ya with all the props like rain n the loneliness of the night 😛 ..i hope they sort out their differences n get back...buh naa, i like their khatti-meethi takrar..it just adds more spice to the ff 😆

an amazing update as usual..sorry couldnt reply to you as soon as i read the update..cuz u understand the whole uni. scenario rii..exams frm next week..plus i'm a bio major..so i have like organic chem, biochem n genetics lined up one after the other 🤢 oh ya, life basically sucks for me..hahah..buh i cant complain as i chose it for myself..hehe..now i'll stop boring u with my ramayan and let u work on ur stuff..

continue the gr8 work...😃

thanks d3si...i don't envy you those univ days...good luck with ur studies. I appreciate u taking time to read and then writing such wonderful comments 😊

bheegi!! amazing job, once again!! you're an amazing writer!! loved the car scene with AR and the rain part with AK!! really cuutee!! 😳 😳 great work and plz continue soon!! 👏

Originally posted by: zhasan2

bheegi!! amazing job, once again!! you're an amazing writer!! loved the car scene with AR and the rain part with AK!! really cuutee!! 😳 😳 great work and plz continue soon!! 👏

hi i m new to the forum...though i read a lot of FF on this forum. but ive commented on any as most of them are reall y goood😆..but this FF is just awesome.........it is sooo believable.........simply loved it....... pl. continue soon as i ve been even been dreaming abt it..........pl...... sooooooon...👏👏

Originally posted by: zhasan2

bheegi!! amazing job, once again!! you're an amazing writer!! loved the car scene with AR and the rain part with AK!! really cuutee!! 😳 😳 great work and plz continue soon!! 👏

thanks zhasan...i will write next part on sunday 😊

Originally posted by: ttimpy

hi i m new to the forum...though i read a lot of FF on this forum. but ive commented on any as most of them are reall y goood😆..but this FF is just awesome.........it is sooo believable.........simply loved it....... pl. continue soon as i ve been even been dreaming abt it..........pl...... sooooooon...👏👏

thanks Timpy...i am honored that u read and commented on this ff. Thanks again and keep commenting as and when u can 😊