To Err is Human (DMG+KYPHff) 1 note pg145 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Natalienaz

its ok di😃i was just joking i know this ff is gonna be so interesting im so excited

thanks natasha 😊

Originally posted by: bheegi

wow...sweet 16 👏 👏 👏 i hope u had an extra special one this year 😳

yup...i did!😳😳

esp. thanx 2 all da FAB frnds i hv at IF whu made mi day even more special!😳

Great Intro/first part 👏

so realistic, good job cant wait to see how angad and kripa; armaan and ridhima encounters 😆 😆 with eachother 😆 😆 😆

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

Originally posted by: aspatel2

Great Intro/first part 👏

so realistic, good job cant wait to see how angad and kripa; armaan and ridhima encounters 😆 😆 with eachother 😆 😆 😆

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

thanks axita...yes this ff will be more realistic and less fantasy unlike my previous one 😊

hi,bheegi first of all i would like to say.....AAARRRGGHHH!!!!!!!!! you are finally back!!!!!back with another FF!!!!aaaawwww thank you so much for beginning a new FF...i was missing your FF already and you .. 😭 😭 😭 ...and to say the truth i was a lil upset and angry you finished that FF of yours quite fast,i apologize but its just i love reading your FF yaar,feel like im watching a movie or a serial or even reading a novel...really saying straight from the heart Bheegi..you are just too good,just read up the intro and the 1st part too good..i feel like this story has a message written behind it,a very important message for us all..and yes i agree with u bheegi before we are born,our destiny has already been written..
Alrite yaar,cold wars between the two main couples has started.. 😈 lets see how hatred changed to friendship and sooner love wil be knocking on their hearts...
great FF yaar.. 👏
a big welcome 🤗 to you bheegi!!!!continue with this FF soon yaar and thanks for the pm!!
lots of love
Zafirah

Can you plz update fast....Plz I can't wait. Your ff's atract me too much. Continue fast.

Hey,

I loved the intro and the 1st part...very welll written....I love all the characters, and their different reasons for pursuing this career and each having their own ambitions and dreams...No two fingers are the same, and the same can be said about each of your characters.... they are ALL like CHALK AND CHEESE..

I loved the way you have potrayed their emotions from part 1, and the caricature scence... and ARMAAN and ANGAD'S interaction was tooo good. And in that scence u have easily defined their chracters...
ANGAD in this profession for money... with that song line...
ARMAAN... because.. he has been dragged in to it...

Just loved it... 👏 👏 👏

Brilliant ff, and i really cant wait to read more... 😃

Thank you v.much 😛
Naina
xxx

wow different and u have used AK in here as well... im sure u will get a great response since many here are AK fans

Love the use of words describing the characters

Love Kat

hii bheegi,this is tia....
the intro and first part r really very good....i have read ur earlier ff also and honestly speaking,i was crazy abt it....like while going off to sleep i wud always think abt what was going to happen nxt!!!! 😆 It was mindblowing and im 110% sure that even this one is going to be......have to take some tips frm u for my ff as well....
plzz keep up the ultracool work..... 😊
lots of luv,
tia