`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 96

Originally posted by: jdsean

Wow, this unsub is totally creeping me out.thanxx jdsean..hez creepin me out as well... Loved how Josh was telling Angad he was becoming a little too involved in the case. LOL o yaaa he iz def emotionally involved yu can guess why??? Can't wait for AK to spend time 2gether.o dey will be spendin more time den yu think...wait 4 it... Continue soon..i will def try nd cont soon...thanx 4 yur lovely commentz...❤️..

Originally posted by: deeya123

great part....awww thanx deeya
m hooked to it. ..LOL glad yur hooked..join da teem
very well written!!!heyyy thanxx...4 lovely commentz..❤️

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

how abt while going home AK have to spend a night together thanks to a car breakdown or becoz of something being messed up by the unsub... LOL welll yur talkin abt a nite..dey will be spendin much more den nite 2gether..yu just have 2 wait 4 it..hehehe..LOL cra breakdown by the unsub..nice nice i like it...LOL...angad would try to get kripa out but wilkl fail so & kripa is not traceable... making angad fall in love with her???? LOL awwww lovely prediction....nvr came 2 my mind @ all...butt keep it goin....yu might be on track or yu might not be...
that's what i have in mymind right now... if i find something else i will surely tell u... sure sure...illl keep waitin...4 yu 2 give me wonderful prediction nd feedbaqz..LOL..loved it though..
gr8 going btw...awww thanxx...❤️

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

omg!! this was fantastic! awwww thanxx qtt...
oh god! the kapoor guy was another psycho! god he didn't even spare his wife! yea another psycho...yea he did becuz he enjoyz killin...letz just say dat..
lol loved how josh was interestingly watching angad's reactoin to kripa...anyone can tell that angad has a thing for kripa lol! o yea josh iz keen observer nd he noticed it rite away it will happen...LOL angad def a thin 4 kripa..nd he really wantz 2 protect her datz y he doesnt want her 2 risk neythin...
and yess angad! u should start behaving like an agent! forget that ur on vacation! ur best friend's sister needs you!!! nop not like dat...wht josh meant wen he said interestin abt angad'z reaction wuz becuz of kripa nd josh saw dat angad iz emotionally involved w/ her..datz y angad doeznt want 2 use kripa 2 catch da unsub... wen angad said im on vacation meant dat he can be involved w/ kripa if he wantz cuz he iz on vacation so he can do wht he wantz..LOL yu get wht i mean..
and omg! the stupid psycho man strikes again! i feel sorry for whoever he has captured right now! well cant say neythin but dunt wrry it will be all clear in da next prt...so not 2 wrry...hehee
and kripa was really feeling uneasy wasn't she?? oh yea she def wuz feelin like a dead human..i mean seriously imagine if dat psycho callz yu nd talkz 2 yu da way he did 2 kripa..not dat it wud happen..but just a sugg....anyone would! rite onnn...ney1 wud...
lol loved the last line...come and get me!! LOL yeep...datz wer da promo came in..still got 1 more 2 go...hehe let the games begin 😃 it will def begin...
still waiting on prithvi's reaction though wonder what he gotta say about his wonderful sister...LOL o well yu will def see hiz reaction...maybe in not next but yu will...❤️
great part!!!thanxx qt...4 yur wonderful commentz...LOL ❤️

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, the last two parts were very good.....thanx faiza.... kripa will do anything to make sure she is helping...o yea she will do w/eva it takez 2 set thingz straight nd get her life baq 2 normal...but yes I dont want her ending up like kapoors wife,..dunt wrry she wunt end up like dat...i cant kill her cuz den wht will happen 2 angad..LOL..but i cant say neything yet... the man is a serious lunatic. lol o yeaa hez serious lunatic..LOL yu name it..what a song, really stupid. first he sings and then the mad man gets a lady screaming,o yaa..but dat screamin of lady wuz recorded nd it wuz becuz he wuz killin her..so yeh psycho dunt yu think?? this lunatic is seriously very bad. the plans perfect, now if only angad agree's , I'd love to see romance between ak. oh hez worst nd yu have seen nuttin yet...well 4 dat yu will have 2 wait til it cum..i wud luv 2 write abt der romance as well...LOL but be4 datt more serious wrk needz 2 be done..awesome part, keep it up..thanx faiza...4 yur lovely commentz...❤️

Faiza

Originally posted by: goldengrl

did you notice that i take up most of your pgs by my stupid gay a** comments ...how can i not..wen da whole pg iz filled w/ goldie..but i really luv yu commentz..keep itt goin..LOL

phew how come i never saw that..cuz yur blind as a BAT..datz y yu nvr noticed it..luv ya..❤️

Originally posted by: rima791

me too i was like OMG look at the way angad is reacting and etc but i surely do love josh's character😉 he is rocking plz continue soon👏

awww thanx rima.....LOL well yea angad iz def emotionally involved even if he wants 2 be or not...LOL i had fun time writin abt him 2..LOL..yea hez def rockin..i iwll def try nd cont as soon as i can..❤️ stay tun...

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

Originally posted by: misslovely

hey there! hey lovely....

i have just finished reading your story from the beginning to and end..awwww datz soo nice of yu..so yu liked it or not??started at like six in the morning and it was so addicting i just couldn't stop myself..LOL...thank yu thank yu 4 such lovely commentz...must tell you you are awesome writer..awww datz soo sweet of yu..thanx 4 da compliment...😊loved how you describe everything with so much details i can actually feel like i am there..and i am seeing it with my own eyes..welll dat wuzz da whole point...i wanted ppl 2 actually experience like dey wer present..so i am happy i got my point across..i hardly get any time to read because i am so busy with my work but for some reason i always have the time to read your story....awwww am i suppose 2 feel lucky...cuz dat whtz im feelin rite now...so lucky....thanx

there was not one thing i didn't like..i liked the whole story from point A to point B and all i can come up with is that it was fantastic..loved the character of angad, sujal, prithvi and kripa of course also liked the josh and practical josh..so i see you have so many characters involved who else is comming..what about kavya0--he is hot ..loved laksh being the name=dropper
kriipa.kriipa.krippa...was funny who is this psycho i want him to die already poor kripa but she is brave or is trying to be i like her spirit..i want to see prithvi's reaction i bet he will sweat in his pants because his darling sister is going in the psycho's hand with her so-called plan.

awwww..i'm like awwwwin awwwiin wen i am readin yur feedbaqq..yu've written it so sweetly...thanx...well dey re many more 2 cum...just wait 4 it...LOL as far as da psycho iz concerned..welll i cant reveal dat yet...nor kill him..so i guess yu will have 2 stick w/ him 4 now..LOL srry....well yu will def get prit'z nd angad'z reaction maybe in the next prt...LOL dunt wrry i wont 4get dat prt...itz one of my fav prt...LOL ❤️...

great work...fantastic...awesome writer ...THANK...
continue soon.waiting for it 😃...i will def cont soon..dunt want my fav buddy 2 stop feedbaqin me..w/ her lovely commentz..thanx 4 such wonderful commentz..❤️

Originally posted by: kneeduh2000

I just read your fanfic today...and just one word....WOW ...awwwww thanxxx 4 lovely commentz...
I love the storyline ..it's sooo mysterious, and that guy seems like a creep, and a very big one too lol ...LOL so sweet of yu 2 say dat..but yea i did want it 2 make it unique..o yaa da guy iz def creep and dat too BIG 1...LOL..but yu have seen nuttin yet...

Your fanfic was so addicting, I was supposed to clean up my room, but I ended up reading your fanfic, and after every part...I didn't feel like stopping 😳 ...awww so srry.....didnt mean 2 keep yu away frm yur wrk..hahahhaa...i will try not 2 be so addictin..LOL like kill AK nd den it will be borin..hahaha

I love your writing style...awwww nd i love yur lovely commentz...keep up the good work...it feels as if i'm watchin a movie...so descriptive...LOL awww nice nice...well i wanted it 2 be as descriptive as possible so yu guyz can actually feel it...im happy yu can actually get my msg...thanxx...

continue soon...can't wait ...ohh i will def cont soon...dunt want 2 keep yu waitin nd keepin away frm yur chores..LOL stay tune..❤️..thanx 4 yur lovely commentz...nd encouragement...