`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 5

Great part, didn't expect that one, its great with all the suspense, hopefully with all this AK will get closer. I feel so bad for Kripa and Prithvi though. Continue soon 😃

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

whoa long part! thanx for this long update!
this part gave me the chills and goosebumps...i don't know if it was cuz of the cold or ur story or both
but this guy is sick...whoever wants to kill kripa!! i mean what has she done to him...maybe she and is unaware of it...or the guy is just weird and disgusting!! 🤢
luv prithvi though...such a caring brother...he wants to protect his little sis at all costs and at the same time kripa is worried about his health...love their relationship
i also love how angad fits in here as the best friend of prithvi trying to protect his sister...okay so right now angad has brotherly feelings for kripa...but later we all know whats gonna happen 😉

and about the tape thing...i am a little confused....the man he talked to prithvi face to face about kripa?? and then he sent that conversation as a tape home?? and prithvi didn't see his face...but didn't he already see the guy's face when he came to his office??
sorry 😳 can u please clear it up for me thanx

wonderful part!! 😃

hey thanx 4 doz wonderful commentz...well even though yu got chillz from da cold n my story i hope yu wern't disappointed w/ my story so far...yep diz iz just da beginning...guy iz definately disgusting...yu'll find out lter on why he'z so after kripa's life...yep even in da original kyph prithvi wuz loving nd carin so i wanted to keep it da same way....LOL ofcourse we all knw da story iz nuttin w/o AK romance so we can't have them feelin like bro n sis can we..LOL
abt da tape...well since i didn't want 2 go in too much detail i just made it briefly but yeh da guy disguised himself nd confronted prithvi in hiz office...i didnt post da convo of them 2 yet..but yu will knw wht they wer talkin abt lter so i dunt want 2 let yu knw yet..but yea da killer did brin recorder w/ him n recorded da whole convo becuz he wanted to make sure prithvi doez wht he wuz suppose 2 do...which will be revealed lter on...hope i'm not makin yu ...more confused😕😕😕....so after da guy left he rerecorded w/ noise in it so dey won't be able 2 recognize him nd left it on da doorsteps of prithvi's house w/ da letter..& he aslo sended another copy 2 kripa @ her home in Chicago becuz yu knw dey dunt live 2gether...iz it clear now...sorry 4 da confusion

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part, didn't expect that one, its great with all the suspense, hopefully with all this AK will get closer. I feel so bad for Kripa and Prithvi though. Continue soon 😃

i knw itz not wht yu expected but i hope yu aren't disappointed w/ why yu got..LOLwell AK willl have to be 2gether cuz der'z no story w/o der romance right? 😉 but 4 dat yu still got long wait cuz da story haz just started n dey just met so dey have 2 get comfortable around each other nd risk their life @ every step of da way....I feel bad 2 for both of them...becuz kripa feelz she'll loose her bro cuz of illness n prithvi becuz of diz killer....nd dey have no1 besides each other...nd ofcourse ANGAD...enjoy

Originally posted by: Smileyface

wowwwwwwwwww....awesome partt...prithvi is definetly adorable...he is such a loving brother...and angad is also awesome as always...i wonder y the weirdo wants tto kill kripa and who he is....u have a really great fanfic here..its awesomee..cant wait for u to continue again...great jobb

every1 seemz 2 love prithvi's loving nd carin nature...im glad i thought yu guyz might want him 2 be da bad guy....kripa is def lucky to have such a wonderful bro...angad iz after an angad so hez got hiz status to protect so hez got 2 be da best of da best 😉😉 weirdo wants 2 kill kripa becuz........yu'll find out lter on LOL 😛 sorry but cant let da cat of da bag diz early now can we LOL thanx 4 lovely commentz....enjoy ❤️

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

hey thanx 4 doz wonderful commentz...well even though yu got chillz from da cold n my story i hope yu wern't disappointed w/ my story so far...yep diz iz just da beginning...guy iz definately disgusting...yu'll find out lter on why he'z so after kripa's life...yep even in da original kyph prithvi wuz loving nd carin so i wanted to keep it da same way....LOL ofcourse we all knw da story iz nuttin w/o AK romance so we can't have them feelin like bro n sis can we..LOL
abt da tape...well since i didn't want 2 go in too much detail i just made it briefly but yeh da guy disguised himself nd confronted prithvi in hiz office...i didnt post da convo of them 2 yet..but yu will knw wht they wer talkin abt lter so i dunt want 2 let yu knw yet..but yea da killer did brin recorder w/ him n recorded da whole convo becuz he wanted to make sure prithvi doez wht he wuz suppose 2 do...which will be revealed lter on...hope i'm not makin yu ...more confused😕😕😕....so after da guy left he rerecorded w/ noise in it so dey won't be able 2 recognize him nd left it on da doorsteps of prithvi's house w/ da letter..& he aslo sended another copy 2 kripa @ her home in Chicago becuz yu knw dey dunt live 2gether...iz it clear now...sorry 4 da confusion

oohh oh...gotcha...everything cclear now...thanx
u r doin a great job! keep it up!!👏😃

ok guys..kripa dying is all bull crap!! she aint dying, my hun is gone save her k..so take a chill pill..prithvis gone with his las wish to get angad and kripa married..lol....i just changed the story with my imagination lol..its not her story....its mine.so her story ask her..my lil analysis on the storya re stated hyp above.

sam.

awwwwwww prithivi is such a caring brother...always there by his sister...and taking care of her like a father...angad on the other hand sees kripa the same way...buddhu she is going to be your love soon dont see her as your sister...lol...hopefully kripa will be alright...awwwww angad sees the true innocent kripa underneath the outer shield...that everyone else fails to see...please continue soon am looking forward to reading more 😳

fab part
finally AK meet but who is this guy who wants to harm our princess????
angad's way of handeling the situation is cool... he is so calm...
continue soon

hey great part..continue soon 👏 👏

Originally posted by: chocolate p

ok guys..kripa dying is all bull crap!! she aint dying, my hun is gone save her k..so take a chill pill..prithvis gone with his las wish to get angad and kripa married..lol....i just changed the story with my imagination lol..its not her story....its mine.so her story ask her..my lil analysis on the storya re stated hyp above.

sam.

LOL ur imaginationz iz gr8 😉...sum wht of iz true...LOL of course yur imagination n yur story..keep up da gud wrk...❤️