`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 36

Originally posted by: goldengrl

i am glad i can at least make yu guyz laugh...nd take yur mind off of dat creep or psycho..LOL itz okk take yur time....no need to hurry...yu can read weneva yu can or have free time..❤️

Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part.

Originally posted by: goldengrl

such a sexy part..can't beleive kripa is alraedy thining about sleeping with him...wow when did that happen? seriously she is pretty fast forward..they have met only two days ago...damn she needs to control her feelings....but i guess it's allright since angad also loves her..or at least likes her right!!!...i hope he doesn't do anything foolish..loved how she is fighting herself....she even wants a family of her know and that too with angad...LOL damn funny!!!!really nice thought..loved it...your writing is really great...can't wait to see what angad will have to say to that😆😆😆

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

thanx 4 yur commentz....dey encourage me to write better...LOL now i guess derz a contradiction goin on here.....yu re just over reactin...i aint dat gud...itz just i try to be as good as i can possibly be...nd itz becuz of yu guyz...alwayz helpin me nd encouragin me to do better job everytime i post a new part...sooo a whole lot of thanx should go 2 yu guyz...👏...thanxxxxxxxxxx ❤️

nope you are definately good.....no contradiction at all......thanks..we are happy for encouraging you and helping you write better...even though we dont do anything..but it helps to know it helped...you are most welcome!!!

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

awwww thanx 4 lovely commentz...yur a gr8 write yurself...yu sud start thinkin abt writin yur own ff..im sure yu'll do a gr8 job....i though i saw yurz in der but im not sure....she def needs to control her feelinz....she iz goin way too fast....letz see wht angad will do nd how will react wen he finds dat out...nop angad doesnt love her...at least not yet...hez onli attracted to her......soo datz not love yet...love is way far along da line!!!!!nah he wont do nethin foolish...but he will def do sumthin stupid....cuz as yu knw....diz 2 love birds tend to get stupid sumtimez....itz in der nature..or blood line..LOL...she is really lookin towards a family of her own w/ her darlin lover angad but it will not happen so soon...thanxx...wonderful commentz....❤️

i did thouugh about writing my own ff..but i am not as good as you are...ya i started mine but than since i didn't like my concept i just left it incomplete...everyone out there are so great...i wish i can be like one of them...and they are barely 18...oh i thought angad loved her...well at least he feels strarcted towards her....hoping they wont do anything stupid and ruin their perfect life...but just dont separate them.. i hate it when they are separated!!!😭 cant wait to see what happens next!!cont

Originally posted by: goldengrl

nope you are definately good.....no contradiction at all......thanks..we are happy for encouraging you and helping you write better...even though we dont do anything..but it helps to know it helped...you are most welcome!!!

Originally posted by: goldengrl

i did thouugh about writing my own ff..but i am not as good as you are...ya i started mine but than since i didn't like my concept i just left it incomplete...everyone out there are so great...i wish i can be like one of them...and they are barely 18...oh i thought angad loved her...well at least he feels strarcted towards her....hoping they wont do anything stupid and ruin their perfect life...but just dont separate them.. i hate it when they are separated!!!😭 cant wait to see what happens next!!cont

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

LOL we have started our own chat session ova here.....diz iz da 2nd time it happened 2 me...goin baq n 4th..LOL but itz just too damn funny!!!!awwwww yu sud def cont...no1 iz betta den any1....yu wont knw wht yu have until yu have seen it yurself...take it frm me..i didnt knw i cud write until i started it...so itz always worth it...nd hey it doesnt matter if yur good or not..wht matterz iz dat yu tried....LOL soo cont...seriously!!!dont be so neg on yurself..welll as far as separtin goez..havnt thought that far along da line...so idk...even i dunt like separatin dem....welll all i can say iz datt my ff will bee really dif frm every1 out der.....LOL sooo just stay glued..nd enjoy da show!!!or rather da thrill hahahhaa ❤️

i understand...sometimes you do need to see from other's eyes in order to know yourself....but i guess maybe i just felt too lazy to cont...and started thinking negatively!!! i will give my best into...and try to cont!!!thanks for encouraging.....yep your ff is really different than any other i have read...no wonder i am hoooked on to it..

Originally posted by: goldengrl

i understand...sometimes you do need to see from other's eyes in order to know yourself....but i guess maybe i just felt too lazy to cont...and started thinking negatively!!! i will give my best into...and try to cont!!!thanks for encouraging.....yep your ff is really different than any other i have read...no wonder i am hoooked on to it..

Originally posted by: ndnhottie110586

datz da spirit!!!!keep it up...im sure yu will do a gr8 job...lookin 4ward 2 it...❤️

so i get it.....you love watching CSI...no wonder you have all those FBI's in there..hahhahaa really nice...i watch it too sometimes...