`*`CHASE`*` {A-K} Chp 14/2!!!pg. 152 ❤️ - Page 113

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hey awesome part, see i still think shes uo eith her plan and i think she pretty much is...lol
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Originally posted by: chocolate p

hey awesome part, see i still think shes uo eith her plan and i think she pretty much is...lol ...LOL ..so i gues yur stickin w/ yu prediction...gud gud...well letz see wht happenz..yu willl find outt next...❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

yayyy!! u made it!! yupppyy goo mee...LOL..thank you will comment after i read...no prob..take yu time...

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omg! u left a cliffy!yea....just had 2 do it...LOL i knw i knww butt i cudnt c**t w/o lettin all out now can i...i think yu 2 start wrkin yur brainz out a lil...after yu can guess whtz inside my mind soo startt guessinn..LOL..
god u included like everyone from the telly industry! lol!!ndd diz iz nott all..LOL more iz yet 2 cum..LOL itz def packed dunt yu think???
the sheriff is weird!!!he izz weird all rite...
kabir and azaan are funny!LOL yu think soo...LOL..i wuz actually makin it wroth it nd dey wer just doin der job...
yeah so don't like the sheriff much. he is playing too many mind games!LOL o yeaa he def thinkz he iz all dat...out smartin kabir nd azaan..LOL
who won't like some men sleeping in kripa's house?noww datz 4 mee 2 knww nd yu 2 find out...
and what is this talks about marriage!?!the guy who wont like kabir nd azaan sleepin in kripa's house..wntz 2 get married 2 kripa...
is he the pyscho?? the sheriff got connection with the psycho?? is that why the psycho can't be caught! something fishy here..o yaa sumthin izz def fishy..LOL but itz yur job 2 figure it out..LOL nice goin bdw..maybe he doez, maybe he doezn'tt who knwz...
or is it someone totally different...is it eijaz...u still have yet to introduce him!!LOL i knw i knww i still gotta brin him nd mny otherz sooo dunt wrryy he will cum...
great part! loved the suspense..thnkz qtt...LOL...❤️ 4 yur wonderful feedbaq nd gr8 prediction..mind readin..yu sud be a psychic..wud A's it like nthh..LOL

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Originally posted by: goldengrl

okay let me get this straight

you got ACP, Azaan, Kabir, Laksh, Sujal, Prithvi, Angad and Kripa oh and Aaliyah, Nishant..si anyone else is left out..letz see..LOL o yeaaa a whole lot of emm re left out..figure it out..who dey re....i really liked this part..i liked writin it 2... though.who is this sheriff guy....the sheriff guy izz????LOL yu have 2 wait...and who won't like if kripa stayed with any guys or not..wellll da guy izz?? a mystery..yu will find outtt...i think it's the psycho for sure.n doubt about it and this abhi is his pet dog always doing what his boss wants him to do...gr8 prediction...letz wait nd see who it iz...and he goes up to the agents telling them he is the law..HELL NO..LOL...welll dat my dear iz da irony der...LOL he iz weird all rite...but i want to know more..yu will def knw more..just not yet...why this suspense is not good..i luvv suspense...LOL really i doo...i can't wait till tomorrow.no no i just can't 😡😡..welll have fun waitin..LOL i think if i get good response i might post two prtz..LOL..IF i get it..ok ok nd not frm yu..so dunt even try out smartin me..LOL luv ya..❤️

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ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh----- very interesting-- cant wait to see wats gonna happen nxt !!-- and i like the characters ur introducing-- kabir and azaan khan !!-- is afreen gonna make an entrance as well ?? :P
newez-- cant wait to find out hu this possessive friend of the sheriff's is !!
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Originally posted by: sweetaddiction

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh----- very interesting--thanxx sweetz... cant wait to see wats gonna happen nxt !!--yu wunt have 2 wait long..im postin in couple of minz... and i like the characters ur introducing-- kabir and azaan khan !!-- lol...yu want me 2 brin her...LOL...so far itz all guyz except kripa of course...is afreen gonna make an entrance as well ?? :P
newez-- cant wait to find out hu this possessive friend of the sheriff's is..yu will soon find out who da possessive friend of sheriff izz..stay tune...❤️

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Posted: 17 years ago


Chapter Fourteen-Part 2


"When he finds out……." Azaan deliberately let the sentence trail off.

"Finds out what?"

"Kripa met someone while she was in Kansas City."

"It was love at first sight," Kabir interjected.

"That's not completely true." Azaan spoke to Kabir now as the agents continued to play the sheriff and feed him information. "She's known Angad all her life."

"No, she's known about him, but she never met him until last week."

"Who are you talking about?"

"Angad."

"Angad who?" the sheriff demanded, his frustration apparent.

"Angad Khanna."

"The man Kripa's in love with," Azaan explained.

"The funny thing is…," Kabir began.

"What?"

"This guy…Angad…"

"What about him?"

"He's Prithvi's best friend. Guess it was meant to be."

"Guess it was."

"And this Angad lives in Kansas City? Long-distance relationships don't work out."

"Oh, he doesn't live in Kansas City. He lives on the West Coast."

"Then I don't think Khandelwal (more will be known about him later on guys.) has anything to worry about. Like I just said, long-distance relationships rarely work."

The sheriff had unknowingly just given them his friend's name, but neither Kabir nor Azaan let him know it.

"Angad must have figured that too," Kabir said.

"Which is why he's moving here to Des Moines (guys Des Moines is a city in Iowa. I said it so many times but I forgot to mention this and oh yeah since I don't know it that well, except I got a family there I won't particularly know it too well so I will just keep on saying Des Moines instead of an exact town..ok..hope you understand.) to be with Kripa," Azaan added.

The sheriff's eyebrows shot up. "He's coming here......with her?"

"That's right," Azaan said. "Guess he doesn't want to take the chance of losing her."

"And it was love at first sight," Kabir reminded him again.

"Where's this fella going to stay?"

"Why here with Kripa of course, until they get married. Then I'm not sure where they'll live," Azaan told him.

"Get married, you say? Who'd you hear this from?"

"Kripa told us herself," Kabir answered.

"People will talk."

"I imagine they will."

"I got to get going now." The sheriff hastily shoved his handkerchief back into his pocket and headed for the door.

For all his considerable bulk, the lawman could move fast when he wanted to. Kabir and Azaan stood at the window and watched the sheriff run to the car.

"What a piece of........," Azaan muttered. "He didn't even ask us our names or ask to see our identification."

"He's got places to go, people to see........," Kabir began.

"And a friend name khandelwal to tell," Azaan concluded as he pulled out his cell phone and dialed.

The phone was answered on the first ring "You got him?" Azaan asked. He listened for another minute, then said, "Yes, sir," and hung up.

Kabir squatted down by the black case. "Let's get started," he said as he handed the other agent a pair of gloves. "This could take us all night."

Azaan was the eternal optimist. "Maybe we'll get lucky."

An hour later, they did get lucky. They found the video camera tucked high in a corner of the linen closet outside of Kripa's bedroom. The camera lens was pressed against a hole in the wall and was pointed toward Kripa's bed. He'd been watching her sleep.

Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
ok guyz..diz iz da last update in diz topic..frm now on it will continue on to diff topic *CHASE 2* here iz da link::

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=894769
Edited by ndnhottie110586 - 17 years ago
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hey!!im soo sorrie fir not commenting earlier butr was dead tired..do i even have to say that the last 3 updates were awesome?your work is spectacular..wonder who this khandelwal charachter is but i dnt realli think he is the stalker..keep it up

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