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Posted: 17 years ago
no problem monu!

hope, your mom gets well soon. Convey regards to her.
Edited by vallanki - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
its all gud the last part was so long...im still not done yet...haha lol JKZ jkz
hope ur mmommy gets well soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you , deeta, valli di, A&K_4Evr-S i am trying to update tonight short update.
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31st.
Diya say to rohan …….Buddy you look like fresh orange: hahahaha hai na mamma?

Kripa also smile at rohan & so every one, rohan feels too embarrassed in front of every one.
Rohan leave from there eminently, bec he looks horrible!

After leave rohan angad says to every one…… hey guys lets have breakfast now: I am too much hungry.

Sujal & josh with low tone ………… Haa itni mehnat Jo ki hai ussne, bhookh toh lagegi hi Na, both giggle and smile.

Angad and diya eating verry quietly beck they know if they do any thing ,kiap going to ask him if they went to school or not.

Kiap silently watching diva & angad, beck today both of them very quite & eating without any complaint! She thinks something fishy here.

Angad saw kripa staring him with strange face, he bends down near diya's face & says to her….

Angad too diya……….Kya baat hai baccha yeh Teri mom mere KO aur tere KO aise kyu ghoor ke dekh rahi hai'' kya hua hai aaj Jo itna ghoor rahi hai?

Diya to angad……….. Papa aaj subah se hi mom chup hai, pata nahi kyu. Aap ne kaha than a ki hum kuch nahi kahe mom KO humne nahi kaha.

Angad…… theek hai jaldi karoo hum dono aaj sabse pehle school jayenge: kyuki agar mom jee KO pata chala ki kal hum dono nahi gaye toh humara kya hoga yeh hum dono jante hai!

Kripa notice this secret convocation between father & daughter, and then she said to angad…

Kripa to angad………….. Angad kal tum diya ke school gaye they na? Kya hua waha tum ne bataya nahi?

Angad choked his food and cough! Then he says …

Haa gaye they na baat ho gaye: waha unlogo ne kaha ki next momday ko aaye admission ho jayega. He takes deep breath and saw diya with smile.

Kripa ………. oh ok thx.

Then angad say woh aaj mein diya ko apne sath le jata hu, warna who yaha bore hogi .koi nahi hoga na yaha: sab bachhe school gaye hai na.

Angad to diya……… chalo beta jaldi se breakfast finish karoo , hum phir bare papa ke paas off jayenge ok.

Diya finish her breakfast and get ready to go, she says baye to every one and went to kripa hug her.

Both of them just take a one step ahed kripa said:

RUKOOOOOOOOOO TUMMMMMM DONOOO.

Angad and diya stop and turn to kripa& they saw angry kripa, Angad & diya exchange their looks and they saw every one waiting then seriously.

Kripa to angad……angad tum kal kiss waqt gaye they school diya ke sath? Kitne baje gaye they? Aur haa waha kya baat huye?

Angad……… bataya than a ki unhone next week bulaya hai'' aur principal thi hi nahi who kahi bahar GAO gaye hai.

Kripa……. acha toh yeh baat hai! Angad tum diya ke sath kitne baje gaye they waha?

Anagd……….. 4 baje gaye they hum dono, kyu diya hai na.

Diya ……… haa mama papa theek keh rahe hai.

Kripa………… Chup karoo tum dono samjheee. Dono 1 no, ke jhoothey ho, mujh e bana rahe ho hai.

Nitin to kripa…….. Kripa beta kya baat hai tum in dono ko kyu data rahi hooo?

Kripa…….. Bare papa kal yeh dono school gaye hi nahi, aur kehte hai ko gaye they, balki dono kal sara din masti kar rahe they.

Dono fun park mein they, jab mere ko school ki principal ka phone aaya ki woh in dono ka waha wait kar rahi hai per yeh dono waha gaye hi nahi.

Aur jab meine angad ko mobile mein phone laga ya toh janaab ka phone out of area tha, kartik bahi ko phone kiya toh pata chala dono ghoomne gaye hai.

Angad tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho, woh bhi diya ke sath? Aur tum tum KO kya laga ki papa ki chamchi ban ke tum bach jaooge.

Angad…….. Acha haa hum nahi Gaye toh kya hua, meri beti KO mat daato samjhee, aaj hum dono waha ja ke form le aayenge acha meri maaaaa.

Every one laughs and went away, angad saw angry kripa and he wink at her, I am the best.
before going angad goes near kripa and kiss her on her cheeks , kripa saw angad with open mouth ,then angad say muh band ke le meri princess warna makhhi ghus jayegi.

Saying this angad left with diya.

Angad and diya went to school & collect form and spend one more day with each other.

Angad want to drop kripa at sharma house but diya say………

Diya to angad…….. Papa kya diya aaj aap ke swath aap ke gahr jaye, ghar mein mama har waqt kaam karti hai, aur baki sab ke exams hai toh woh sab mere saath khelte nahi hai, papa mein waha bore ho jati hu.

Angad ………. are bachha issmein poochne ki kya baat hai, who aap ka ghar hai" aap jab cahe aa sakte ho, chalo mein mama ko bata deta hu ki aaj aap humare yaha ja rahe ho.

Angad called kripa ……. HI kripa woh aaj diya humare yaha rahegi.

Kripa……per angad woh mein diya ke bina! Kripa stop in mid sentence.

Theek hai koi baat nahi, kya mein diya se baat kar sakti hu?

Angad……. are kyu nahi, then angad giving phone to diya.

Diya ……..Mama Aap kaise hoo? Aaj diya papa ke sath rahegi please! Rehsakti hai na?

Kripa never sleep with out diya its first time when she is going to sleep with out diya , she feels very bad but bec of diva's happiness she agree and say to her………….

Kripa to diya……… haa beta agar aap chate ho toh ruk jaao, per mama aap KO bahuit miss karegi!

Peeche se angad kehta hai aajao Na hum teeno sath mein soyenge maza aayega, then he smiles to think kripa in his bed room.

Kripa say to diya ……. beta papa ne kuch kaha hai kya?

Diya ….mama thank you soo much! Aap khud hi papa se pooch lo ki unhone kya kaha.

Diya handed mobile to angad & sit inside the car.

Angad with naughty face…….. Haa kripa bolo kya hua? Tum kuch keh rahi thi?

(Inside he says…. aabhi JA aabhija kya kripa ab maan bhi jaao na! waise koi baat nahi bus 2 mahine aur bus phir tum meri hoge.)

Kripa…….. Nahi angad woh diya KO raat KO akele sone ki aadat nahi hai! Toh tum usske sath hi so Jana please: aur haa ussko raat KO milk Dena mat bhoolna, who natak karegi per tum please ussko pila Dena.

Angad……… acha kripa theek hai jaisa tum kahooo! Waise agar tum bhi humare sath hoti toh nahi kehna parta Na.

Kripa…….. What kya kaha tumne?

Angad……… kabhi sahi baat dimaag mein eak baar mein aaye hai tumahre! Jaao baad mein samjhaauga.

Saying this angad cut the call leaving confused kripa and drove off with diya to khanna house.

Khanna house.

Angad & diya enter home & saw naina or sur playing together , diya run to naina and say……..

Diya to naina ……. dadi hum aagaye!

Naina to diya…….. Are mera choona baccha aaj yaha iss waqt kaise aaya, then she asking angad?

Angad yeh diya iss waqt yaha, kya hua koi khaas wajah?

Angad to naina……. maa aaj poti KO laya hu, kal bahu bhi aayegi don't worry. Diya aaj yahi rahegi apne papa ke sath& haa aaj poti se kaam chala lo.

Naina smile at angad and hug diya , diya and sur start playing while angad ask naina …

Angad to naina…. mom bhai kaha hai? Mujhe unse kuch baat karni hai?

Naina to angad….. Beta who apne room mein hai .jake baat kar lo tab tak mein dinner lagati hu.

angad says ok mom & gose to meet kartik.

Kartik working on his laptop angad enter and say hi bhai .

Kartik to angad……. are angad tum iss waqt yaha! Koi kaam tha kya?

Angad to kartik... haa bahi woh mujhe aap se diya event company ki kuch baat karni thi.

Kartik to angad……. haa bolo kya baat hai.

Angad to kartik….Bhai mein aap se yeh kehne aaya tha ki mein chata tha ki ab jab ki kripa apni naye event management company khool hi rahi hai toh aap mere sare shows usski com ko dede.


Kyuki bhai mein chata hu ki diya aur kripa ki company khoob aage jaye! Isske liye sabse pehle mein apne sare show's ki zimmedari kripa KO Dena chata hu.
Iss bahane mein usske paas bhi reh paauga, tab shayad woh mujhe jaldi maaf kar de.


Kartik……. good angad very good, I am agreeing with your idea! Mein kal hi kripa se baat kar ke ussko Sara kaam dedeta hu.

Angad……. Thank you bhai.

Angad come down to see diya, diya playing with sur & she is looking sooo happy: angad feels soo great to se har at khana house, he thinks….


Kaash aaj yaha bhabhi aur maa ke sath kripa bhi hoti, kahir aaj nahi hai par kal jaroor hogi: who din jaldi aayega?

All of them enjoy their dinner with diya & angad took tired diya in his arms & went to his room , angad force diya to drink milk , diya sleep soon bec she is too tired .

Angad saw diya's sweet face & smile.

Next moring.


Angad & diya sleeping hugging each other. Simon comes to angad's room to call them come & join us for breakfast, but when she saw angad diya sleeping she went back without disturbing them.


Other hand Sharma house kripa become restless without diya, she never stays with out diya.


Gayatri to kripa……. kripa itni bachin ho rahi ho toh wahi chali jaao. Aise mat pareshaan ho beta, diya apne ghar Gaye hai.


kripa….. Janti hu maa per man nahi lag raha. Aap theek kehti ho mein waha JA rahi, ab diya KO dekhe bina nahi reh skati mein. mama mein wahi nasta kar loogi.saying this she left from there.


Kripa enter khanna house and dilip welcome her, kripa ask...

Kripa to dilip….. Papa diya kaha hai?


Dilip……… beta baap beti dono so rahe hai upper, jaao JA ke khud hi dekh loo.
Kripa meet naina & simon and ask them to bring diya here, bec she feel soo shy to go angad's room.


Naina……….kripa tu kyu nahi jati angad ke room mein? JA khud jake utha dono ko .dekh na 10 baj gaye aur dono abhi tak neeche nahi aaye.


Kripa……..theek hai mom.


Kripa went upstairs and open angad's room door, kripa feels jealous bec angad and diya sleep very well.


Kirpa to herself………Hey bhagwaan dekho jara in dono KO yaha chain se so rahe hai dono, aur mein raat bhar nahi so PAYE .abhi batai hu in dono KO….

Then kripa wenr near angad and call him 2-3 times but no response, and then she went to diya again no response!


Kripa become mad and she took a full glass of water and throw at angad & diya.
angad diya got up and saw kripa near them, angad become soo happy but he think its dream & say to diya………

Angad to diya………….. Diya beta yeh kya hai? Yeh tumhari mom yaha, yeh koi sapna toh nahi hai Na please pinch me.


Diya……. kya papa mama yaha kaise aayegi who toh ab tak off chali Gaye hogi, so jaao mujhe need aarahi hai! Diya also think its dream.


kripa become mad at this point & screems ……
Angaddddddddddd diyaaaaaaaa mein tum dono ko choodugi nahi .mera mazak bante ho tum dono haaa.


Angad and diya open their eyes and say are yeh sapna nai hai, yeh mama hai.

Then they both get ready soo fast & come down, kripa saw angad and feels shy bec he looks sooo dam hot in blew jeans & white t –shirt.


After break fast kartik explain kripa every thing, he give kripa all angad's concert arrangement details and they sigh contract with kripa's new company.


Angad congrtas kripa and say…

Angad……. Wow kripa ab kitna maza aayega Na hum sath mein kaam karenge wowowo, I am soo happy. And give her naughty smile which kartik understand.


Now angad and kripa working together & now angad know he love kripa and he cant live without her,he know kripa also change soo much from before , now she is like same old kripa but he cant force her for anything .

Angad trying to spend time with kripa & trying to come close her but rohan comes between them every time & kripa give rohan more importance then angad ! This angad can't take it easily & he wants to kick rohan every time when he comes near kripa.


One day while angad & kripa working together kripa went to kartik's cabin when her mobile rings! Angad took with full rights and saw rohan send mess to kripa….

Rohan's mess…. HI kripa its long time we spend time together, jab se angad ke ssth kaam kar rahi ho hum mil hi nahi pate! Lets go and watch movie today, I booked tickets for us, me & you. 3-6 ka show hai mein tum KO lene aajaau ya tum aajaaogi.


Angad smile a lot and send reply…..


Why not rohan sure! But you don't need to come here I'll come by myself. Cu at pvr.bye kripa.

Then angad say……… chachundar tune kya angad ko ghadha samjha hai jo woh tere sath kripa ko movie dekhne dega! Hahahaha lets see kaun kisske swath movie dekhta hai aur kab.


Angad delete the mess and smile tooo much.


Kripa come back & see angad holding her mobile, she asks him…….

Kripa……. koi mess aaya tha kya angad?

Angad……No kripa rohan ka phone tha ussne tumko aaj PVR mein 6-9 ke show mein movie dekhne ko invite kiya hai .


Kripa …. Yeh rohan bhi Na, bina pooche pro bana deta hai, khair koi baat nahi kafi din hogey waise bhi ussko mile huye aaj shaam KO koi kaam bhi nahi hai, theek hai thx angad.

Then they both start working and make sure kripa become soooooo bussy so she forgets to cheq where her mobile is.

(Bec angad swith off her mobile and keep in his pocket)


Rohan become happy bec he is going to watch movie with kripa! He reaches PVR on dot 2.30 & start waiting for kripa.


Its 2.45 & kripa not come; he is trying to call her but kripa's mobile show swith off.
He become worried bec movie is going to start with in 10 min & kripa is late! Rohan call Angad's mobile...


Angad saw rohan's call so he went outside of room and recive the call……….

Angad……….. Hi rohan'' kya haal, aaj meri yaad kaise aagaye?


Rohan…… Angad kya kripa hai waha? Hum dono movie Jane wale they per who abhi taka aye nahi.


Angad……… OH haa kripa ne bataya tha, are who aajayegi agar kaha hai toh! Tum andar ja ke baithoo who tum ko join kar legi. Woh yaha se nikal gaye hai.


Rohan ……… thank you angad.bye.


Anagd …………. Bye bye baby, watch movie alone.


Angad went inside and start working with kripa, it's now 5 & angad saw kripa winding her work.


Kripa……. oh god 5 yahi pe baj gaya mein late ho jauuge, yaha se PVR door hai.

Angad ………. Don't worry kripa mein ussi taraf JA raha hu mein tum KO waha chood duuga, wapas rohan le aayega.


Kripa…… Thank you angad you are sooo sweet! Acha ab jaldi karoo mein jara fresh hoke aati hu.


angad …….. Haa haa jaao, mein bhi ready ho jata hu.


Angad I am realy soo sweet kripa! Aaj movie then dinner wowowwo I am toooooo good.


Angad & kripa reach PVR entrance (bec entry gate is diif direction & exit is Different so no worry to meet rohan.)


Kripa come down from car and say bye to angad, angad say to her pehle rohan KO aane do phir mein jauga ok, Kripa agree bec its odd to stand there and wait some one.

Its 45 min passed but no clue for rohan , kripa become angry and this angad can notice & he say to kripa……..


Angad…… Kya hua yeh rohan aaya nahi? Lagta hai kahi fas Gaya.


Kripa….. Nahi aana that oh bata sakta tha Na! Ab kya mein yaha pagalo ki tarah kahri hu.


Angad ……….kripa tum chaoo toh hum dono movie dekhne chale? If you don't mind.

Kripa……… haa angad yahi sahi hai, ab nahi lagta ki rohan aayega! Waise bhi ab mera mood nahi hai bina dekhe wapas Jane ka.but ticket? Iss waqt kaha milegi yaha toh house full ka bord laga hai.


Angad ………. tum chalo toh mein dekhta hu.then they both went inside and angad gose to ticket counter to show kripa, (he already has tickets, and he booked for them.)


Angad come to kripa & show her ticket, kripa become like child and hug angad .then they both enjoy movie.


Angad inform at home that he & kripa going to watch movie, every one shoked with this new development between them.


After movie angad take kripa for dinner & they have a great time.


Angad drop kripa at sharma house & both of them feels soo different today.
But kripa still mad at rohan, next day when rohan come to meet kripa at off then angad laugh a lot at rohan's condition.


Rohan come and with out saw any body he starts shouting at kripa;

Rohan ………..kripa yeh kya kal mein tumhara waha paglo ki tarah wait karta raha aur tum aaye hi nahi? Are nahi aana tha to bata deti, kam se kam akele movie nahi dekhni parti?


Kripa is also become now angrier & say……

…….
Tamara dimaag kharab hai kya, mein nahi aaye ya tum nahi aaye haa! Mein waha tumhara pagalo ki tarah wait kar rahi thi aur tum kehte ho ki mein nahi aaye. I think rohan tum KO na dr. ki jaroorat hai.


Every one watching this, kartik, sujal, kavaya& josh with angad.
They all notice only angad fell soo cool with this fight; they now understand its all angad's plan.

Kripa to rohan….. Dekho rohan abhi yaha se jaao mera dimaag bahuit kharab hai! Mein kal ki baat se kafi upset hu. Agar kal angad mere sath Na hota toh mein waha pagal bani khari rehti.


befor rohan say some thing angad got up & hug kripa from behind and say…….
Its ok kripa ho jaya hai Kaye bar, chalo ab gussa chodo hum KO apna kaam khatam karna hai Na. kal company ka inogration hai!


Now every one convince its all angad's karastani.

Rohan leave from there after saying sorry bec he doesn't know what is going on with him.

Today is diya event managemet company's enogration day.

Kripa got ready with diya and took blessings with every one & they went to venue .
Kripa innograte her company by diya's hand . Angad feel soo proud of her today & he stand with her whole time.


Angad dint like kripa give credit to rohan for this company launch.


He thinks……..
Why kripa give this chachundar soo much importance! Rohan ke bachhe mere paiwaar se door reh, warna mein tere KO choduga nahi.


Angad deside to throw a party for kripa's success but this time rohan come first and he throw a party for kripa's success!
Angad become mad but soon he controls his anger for only kripa.


Rohan scene coming on next part.
Next……….. Party & AK coming close &


Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part
angad is wicked 😉
poor rohan 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
good part.
Angad is in full force to manaofy kripa.
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice part
angad is wicked 😉
poor rohan 😆 😆 😆

thank you deeya , ab angad nahi rukega😆
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Originally posted by: vallanki

good part.
Angad is in full force to manaofy kripa.
continue soon

yes di angad is ready to do any thing 😆its not soo good part , next will be good.😊Thank you di .😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
ROCKING PART!
OMG Angad is sooo wicked! Such a Shaitaan! 😆
He got poor Rohan in trouble! 😆
I feel sorry for Rohan somehow....he was the one who helped and befriended Kripa when she needed help.
Where was Angad then? 😡

I dont think Angad shd get Kripa so easily....he shd suffer some more....his Gunaah was too big, what he did to kripa.... 😡

I hope Kripa slaps Angad in next part..........would love to see that! 😃

But father-daughter scenes were very cute....Aww Diya went to her own home for first time and slept with Angad.....HOW CUTE! 😳

But when Kripa scolded Angad for not going to school, why did her family support Angad? And Angad got off too lightly I think,....

OMG Angad.... Diya aur Diya music company ke zariye Kripa ke kareeb aana chahta hai....what a DEVIL! Hes too confident abt winning back her heart but can she trust him so easily again? 😭

pallavi
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Originally posted by: pallavi25

ROCKING PART!
OMG Angad is sooo wicked! Such a Shaitaan! 😆
He got poor Rohan in trouble! 😆
I feel sorry for Rohan somehow....he was the one who helped and befriended Kripa when she needed help.
Where was Angad then? 😡

I dont think Angad shd get Kripa so easily....he shd suffer some more....his Gunaah was too big, what he did to kripa.... 😡

I hope Kripa slaps Angad in next part..........would love to see that! 😃

But father-daughter scenes were very cute....Aww Diya went to her own home for first time and slept with Angad.....HOW CUTE! 😳

But when Kripa scolded Angad for not going to school, why did her family support Angad? And Angad got off too lightly I think,....

OMG Angad.... Diya aur Diya music company ke zariye Kripa ke kareeb aana chahta hai....what a DEVIL! Hes too confident abt winning back her heart but can she trust him so easily again? 😭

pallavi

pallavi haa angad diya ki company ke sahare kripa ke kareeb aana chata hai, he is thinking its eassy way to wih her heart but lets see

rohan bechara angad ki wajah se dhkhi ho raha hai He is realy tru frined you are right, angad ko thappad kripa se sochna parega .

yes diya went to her home first time with papa & sleep with himhe is every thing for her ,

kripa ki family aur angad ki family chati hai ki diya ko usska poora pariwaar mile bus

Rohan going to do one big mistake

Angad ko mafi asani se nahi milegi woh kaise rota hai i''ll show you , with in next part .


People going to kill me with my next part , but after read full going to 👏

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago

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