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Hi just caught up your FF.Lovely story dear.Plz pm me when you update.
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Hey where are u?
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I think most of you have forgotten but Monica is Shiv's sister

Part 41

Sujal went inside the room and knocked on the washroom's door again, he couldn't call her because Monica would hear him. He turned the knob again and it opened

Sujal to himself- iske darwaaza lock na karne ki aadat abhi tak nahin gayi

He enters the washroom, inside the cubicle but she sensed that someone had entered the washroom; she closed the shower before she could say anything Sujal speaks

Sujal- Kashish its me

Kashish- tum yahan kya kar rahe ho get out !!!

Sujal- oye chillao mat wo Monica hain na wo aayi hai isi liye main andar aa gaya

Kashish- what Monica aayi hai, par wo…..mujhe towel do

Wo apna haath bahar nikalti hai and Sujal becomes mischievous

Sujal- khud aa kar le lo

Kashish- main kaise aaun

Sujal suppressing his laughter- chal kar

Kashish- Sujal do plz

Sujal- no

Kashish- Sujal plz I m ***** you ****** ******* fine I'll do anything u want

Sujal- abbay gaalian to na de, anything?

Kashish- except for living with u

Sujal- uska intezaam to already ho chuka khair yeh lo {he gives it to her}

After sometime Kashish come out wrapped in a towel and Sujal's jaws dropped, it wasn't the first time he was seeing her like this. Kashish starts to leave but Sujal holds her hand

Kashish- kya hai

Sujal- u said u will do anything I want so….

Kashish- Sujal plz abhi nahin baad mein

Sujal- yeh baad mujhe malum hai kabhi nahin aaye ga

Kashish- fine jaldi bolo

Sujal- bolun ga nahin karoon ga

Kashish- huh

Sujal leaned and kissed her gently leaving Kashish speechless

Sujal smiles at her while she was trying to avoid any sort of eye contact

Sujal- Monica

Kashish- huh

Sujal- bahar

Kashish- huh

Bahar se awaz aati hai- Kashish

Kashish- yeh mere room mein aa gayi {loudly} kaun hai

Monica- Monica

Kashish- tum yahan kaise

Monica- bro ne tumhein yeh file dene ko kahi thi

Kashish- Monica tum bahar rakh do main le lun gee

Monica- okay fine main jaa rahi hoon

Kashish- bye

Sujal whispers- main bhi bye kahoon

Kashish- shut up!!

Monica- What!!!! Tumnein mujhe shut up kaha

Kashish- nahin Monica wo actually…um

Sujal- kaho

Kashish gives him a killing look- mere jo yeh neighbours hain har waqt ladte rehte hain to isiliye mun se shut up nikal gaya

Monica- fine, I am going

Kashish- bye

After Monica is gone Kashish glares at Sujal

Sujal- aisay mat dekho aankhein bahar nikal aaein gee, main jaa raha hoon Preity ke paas tum kapde change kar lo

After sometime Kashish comes out, Sujal smiles at her

Kashish sits on the table and Sujal passes her the coffee and she mutters a thanks

Sujal- so packing karna shuru kar di

Kashish- what packing

Sujal- we're leaving for NY in four days remember

Kashish- four days!!! When did this happen???? Why didn't someone inform me before!!!!

Sujal- that's what I'm doing, informing you

Kashish- But…..I can't…..I mean…how will I

Sujal- see you don't even have an excuse to delay our departure

Preity comes and sits on Sujal's lap

Preity, "Dad when are we going home"

Kashish, "you are at home only"

Preity, "mom I am talking about our home where we all live together"

Sujal- soon baccha soon

Preity- dad don't call me baccha, I am not a kid anymore

Sujal laughed- o yes I forgot that my daughter is a young lady now, I need to leave now

Preity- Dad please don't go

Sujal- I'll be back soon beta, I cant stay in the same clothes

Preity- Bring your stuff here dad, then u wont have to leave u can stay here

Kashish sternly- Preity

Sujal- actually she is right

Kashish- no she is not

Preity- mom, I am right

Sujal- yes baby but we will soon be reaching NY and then we will live together, okay

Preity- okay but when are we leaving

Sujal- In four days

Preity- And we wont come back

Sujal- we are going home princess

Preity- Oh God that means I have only four days to pack all my stuff

Preity runs away and Sujal grins

Sujal- You know Kashish it wont be bad If you would smile {He gets up and goes to her} I am going

Kashish- to jao

Sujal gasps looking on his left, Kashish immediately looks in that direction and Sujal kisses her on the cheek

Kashish- Sujal!

Sujal innocently- what

Kashish- you always do this

Sujal- jab pata hai to dekhti kyun ho

Kashish glares at him while Sujal smiles at her

Sujal- bye honey

Sujal goes, leaving behind a teary-eyed Kashish

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Posted: 15 years ago
oh that was lovely.................everything was cute...............sujal trying to get close to kashish and kashish' irritation are all very sweet................and preity is so much like sujal.................and the way she speaks and supports sujal is cute.................the last scene was funny..................cont soon dear...............cant wait more to read......................and u forgot to pm me this time...............
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part !!
Finally you continued !!
Cant wait for them to be "home"....I hope all the misunderstanding gets cleared...!
Lol....Yeah....I actually forgot that Monica was Shiv's sister....Hahaha !!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part.....................can't wait for next parts..................sk r going home back again after four days.......................con't sooon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear loved it cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome update
lovely
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part...i love it...ple continue soon...

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