SOULMATES part 1 uptd R&R

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Did you know that true love is the most hardest thing in the world no universe to recieve? Many people yearn for true love and to be with their soulmate but they can't. These young people have been given a chance to be with their soulmate, will they realize in time or will they lose that one chance and be left yearning for another chance?

It's really hard to give your love to someone else for their happiness, most people know this from first-hand experience. So does a young girl, she gave her love to someone else for their happiness. But what about her happiness? Doesn't she deserve to have her love by her side all the time? To go to bed with him on her side and wake up to be embraced in his arms? Doen't she deserve that?

This story is not just about a guy and girl and their love story? This is for 6 couples, everyone coming from different situations but they all add up to make one kahani.

The Kapoor's: Kashish, Shiv, Zaib, Prachi

The Khanna's: Sujal, Shabd, Soneya, Anjali

The Sharma's: Kavya, Gauri, Mahi, Neev

The kids have not seen each other for the past 13 years. Their parents are best friends and now that their kids are grown up, want to become in-laws. This is unknown to the kids. They are all content with their lives but they never knew that soon their life will become amazing from just content. When they meet, there are lots of flashbacks as they try to remember their past memories.

I hope you all enjoyed this little preview of the story. If you think I have the potential to continue please tell me. I don't want to keep on writing when no one reads this fanfiction, just to waste mine and your time. I'll type the introduction of the characters in a while. Until then please read this and tell me what you think. And for the silent readers, its okay if you don't want to comment. But i would really appereciate if you comment atleast once a while.

~~Khushpari~~

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sound's interesting 😉, nice cast 😊......good luck for your story 👏!!!!!!!!.........waitting for the next part!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great concept. Can't wait to read the story. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks a lot guys will add the intro of the charaacters and the prolougue soon!! look out for it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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seems interesting so far! Wow, that's a lot of characters...anyway, please continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thnx guys for ur lovely comments

this is the introduction of the characters

Kapoor Family

Kashish- The oldest daughter of Dilip and Naina. She's 22 years old. Very moderm yet sanskari. Loves her family and will do anything for them. She's really sweet, kind, and sometimes shy. Loves shopping!!!

Shiv- The oldest son of the Kapoors. He's 21 years old. Twin of Zaib, shiv is older by 10 minutes. He's really respectful to his elders but the minute they leave her turns into a little bit bad boy. Worries for his younger sis, and loves his siblings a lot. Prachi is his world.

Zaib- The youngest son of the Kapoors. He's 21 years old. Twin of Shiv, younger than Shiv. He cares for his eders but is very very modern and a bad boy. Loves his family and his older sis a lot, watches out for her all the time. She comes first in everything.

Prachi- The youngest child of the Kapoors. She's 20 years old. She is really bubbly, sweet, and shy. She is the jaan of the family and especially Shiv. She loves talking on the phone to her best friend who lives in another city, shopping, and just hanging out with her family.

Sharma Family

Kavya- The oldest son of Subhash and Gayatri. He is 21 years old. He's really out-going and modern. He is also very caring and respectful towards his elders. He loves annoying his brother. He is very overprotective of his twin sister, Gauri. He's really close to her and tells her everything.

Gauri- the oldest daughter of the Sharmas and twin of Kavya. She is very sweet and bubbly, yet still shy. She loves shopping and hanging out with her family. She tells her twin everything, no matter what. They talk about their dreams, hopes, and their dream boyfriend/girlfriend. She is really helpful to everyone, but sometimes gets jealous about things.

Neev- The youngest son of the Sharmas. He's 20 years old and twins with Mahi. He is really cute and sweet. He's always helping his family members in any way he can. Loves messing with Kavya. Really protective of Mahi and close to her. Their realtionship is like K/G. Loves flirting and hanging out with his friends.

Mahi- Twin of Neev. She's really bubbly and full of life. The jaan of the family. She loves flirting, shopping. People think she acts too flirty but she's just playing around until she finds her soulmate. She tells her twin everything. She keeps everyone happy with her bubbly nature and cuteness.

Khanna Family

Sujal- the oldest kid of the family. 22 yrs old. He's really polite towards elders. He's also very modern and outgoing, He cares for his family a lot. He flirts but not much. He's mostly in his own world. very protective of Anjali because she's the youngest.

Shabd- 21 yrs old, twins with Soneya. Loves taking pictures, is the photographer of the family. really flirty, laid back. He is very overprotecive of his sisters but mostly of Soneya due to her withdrawn nature.

Soneya- 21 yrs old, Shabd's twin. She is younger by 1 hour. She's outgoing, flirty, but never goes further than flirting. Usually she's quiet and withdrawn from everyone, even her twin but is still funny and bubbly. The only person she really opens up to is her best friend that lives in another city. Her family is somewhat worried about her, but she reamains unknown to that fact. She's the singer in the family.

Anjali- The youngest child of the Khannas. Really bubbly, full of life, and out-going. She loves flirting, shopping, talking to her friends. She doesn't date much, just flirt a lot. She's very modern but sanskari. Loves hanging out with Sujal, since their so close. Also she fights with Soneya a lot.

that was all the main characters that we need to know about. i'll write the first part soon.

Edited by khushpari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aw swet intro,..cnt wait to read more 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok first of all HAPPY VALENTINES DAY and now the first part of the story the story goes straight to when the families meet and some romance is in the air.

Soulmates Part. 1

Sujal's Pov

They were here. They meaning the 2 families coming to live with us. It was the Kapoor and the Sharma familes. Anjali wasn't happy to hear that we will be having guests for a couple of months. In fact, she was really really mad. She even screamed at mom, which was a first, since mom and Anju are really close. Like im close to dad and Shabd is close to both mom and dad. And Soneya wasn't close to either of them. She was only close to her best friend and Dadi. Anyway mom and dad went to go pick the newcomers up. Mom went to get the Kapoors and dad, the Sharmas. I wondered who was here first. The living room's door opens and mom steps in with I assume the Kapoor family. Theres two guys and two girls in their early 20's and an couple whos probably the parents. One of the guy is wearing blue faded jeans and a black muscle fitting tight shirt with black sneakers and dark blue studs on his ears. He has dark blue eyes and light brown hair. The other guy is wearing blue ripped jeans and a tight white muscle shirt and white sneakers and dark green studs on his ears. He has dark green eyes and dark brown hair. {{ps- Shiv has blue eyes and Zaib has green eyes i kno they really dont but they would look so HOT with these colored eyes and they kinda go with the story}} They were twins. The girl with the mid-back length black hair has dark brown eyes. She was wearing a dark blue salwaar-kameez. The last girl had my attention the most. She had lower-back dark and light brown hair and light blue/grey eyes. She was wearing a brown salwaar-kameez. She was like an angel. Soon mom introduced us. The guy with the blue eyes is Shiv and the one with the green eyes is Zaib. The girl with the black hair is Prachi and the one with the brown hair is Kashish. A beautiful name for a beautiful girl. Just after the introductions, the door opened and this time dad came with the Sharmas. Kavya is wearing dark blue ripped jeans and a white buttened shirt that was kind of see through and showed off his muscles. He has blue-green eyes and spiked black hair. He has a diamond stud in his right ear. Neev was wearing black dress pants and a dark see-through blue shirt that showed his body. He has light brown eyes and black hair. Gauri was wearing a black salwaar-kameez. She has past shoulder length brown hair and dark brown eyes. Mahi was wearing a hot pink tank top and a dark blue thigh-length skirt. She has shoulder length dark brown hair. We were all sitting around the living room talking in groups. The parents, guys, and girls were in separte groups. Everone was getting along pretty well.

It was around 9:30 at night when mom asked us if we knew where Soneya was and we told her that we had no clue. Soneya didn't tell us when she left at 8 in the morning. Mom thought that we might've known because she and dad didn't either. She has been gone for more than half the day. Mom started to worry but right at that moment the phone rang. Mom talked for couple of minutes and turned to us relieved. She told us that it was Soneya and she was staying at her friend Riya's place. But the thing was that i don't think she has a friend by that name. I glanced at Shabd and he seemed confused too. We showed the newbies their rooms and ate dinner. It was pretty boring. We all went to the living room to see a movie. We chose HUM TUM. When it was done, the parents went to their rooms and only the kids were left. We stayed up till midnight getting to know each other better. There was a hint of attraction between me-Kashish, Shiv-Gauri, Shabd-Mahi, Kavya-Anjali, Neev-Prachi. Poor Zaib was left all alone, but i think he would get along well with Soneya. We'll see what the next morning will bring us. I went to sleep thinking of an angel called Kashish and about Soneya's friend Riya because im 98% sure that she has no friend by that name. Where could she be and why would she lie? if she was, then she better get ready to answer lots of questions.

Did you guys like this part? i know nothing really happened but wait till the next part, thats when all the fun begins.

Preview- a fight btwn Anju and Soneya, attraction in the air btwn all the couples, Zaib-Soneya meet face-to-face in her room for the first time.

question for all viewers- is sone aka soneya really lieing to Sujal or is sujal just mistaken? what do u think the fight will be abt? what will happen btwn Z-S??

PLZ COMMENT AND REVIEW!!!

on last note- HAPPY V-DAY!! I HOPE U HAD A GREAT TIME WITH UR TRUE AMOR!!! LOL

Edited by khushpari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwwww lovedd that part!! 👏 This story is soo cutee & so many twins haha 😆 i lovee all the couples in here! Soneya seems like a really interesting character itd be intresting to c how her & Zaib get along! Awwww Sujal attarcted towards Kashish 😳 bless so sweet! Poor zaib being left alone 😆 im sure he'll find sum1 soon though i think it'll be a weid meeting? im not sure lolz hmmm i think they'll fight about this Ria? and where she's been maybe? i dont think ria exists & Soneya somewhere singing? hehe i dunno! 😛 please cont soon! i lovee it! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part. Love all the couples. LIke how Zaib and Angad have different color eyes, now we can really distinguish them . Can't wait for more.

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