FF - Dil se ..Part 18 Pg 32 - 28/6 - Page 18

amazng prt.............22222222222222222 guddddddddddddddd...................... luvd d way d suprise was opened...... plzzz update sooon 😊 😊 😊

tat was really very nice...!!
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hmmm....i loved it! as always!! lol

bt i didnt get a PM!:(!!!

that was awsooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmm plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooon

hey pari...amzain part...keep up the good work....want to see what happens when Muskhaan's parents come

wow....it was a cute part.....plz continue soon .......pm me surely

Hey Pari

Both the parts were lovely
I like the way you use simple words and
still make it sound so good
Very nicely written
Sorry for the late reply
had run out of printer paper lol
Gr8 and update the next part soon
Love
Hina

Part 15

After the dance is over, almost everyone has left and all interns, shashank, padma and nani are left in hall. Shashank, nani and padma leave as well. Ridz is talking to atul and anji while Armaan moves towards muski and rahul who are standing on a side…

Ar: muskaan, tu kuch keh rahi thi na ki tere parents aa rahe hai yahan?

Mu: haan

Ar: kab aa rahe hai?

Mu: do din baad

Ar: gr8, muskaan dekh muje lagta hai ki yeh acha mauka hai, hum saab ko mil kar tere parents ko sab kuch sach sach bata dena chahiye. Kyun rahool tu kya kehta hai?

Ra: mein bhi iss se yehi keh raha tha.

Mu: lekin agar hum unhe nahi samja paye toh wooh log meri shaadi karva denge, aur rahul tu toh janta hai na papajee ko, wooh choto ki baat kabhi- kabhi sunte hi nahi, khas kar tab jab wooh log unhe kuch samjane ki koshish karte hai

Ra: haan yeh baat toh hai

Ar: haan toh hum ek kaam kar sakte hai, hum log meri mom ya phir mere hone wale sasurjee ko keh sakte hai help karne ke liye

Ra: gud idea Armaan.

Mu: idea toh changa hai lekin kya dr. shashank manenge?😕

Ar: wooh tum muj pe chod de.. do din hai na? mein mana lunga… aur ridhima bhi saath de rahi hai humara. Dr. shashank mana kar hi nahi sakte

Mu: matlab ridhima ko saab kuch pata hai? Tu ne vada toda Armaan

Ar: aree meine kahan vada toda yaar,

Mu: tune mmujse vada kiya tha na ki tu kisko nahi batayega ?

Ar: haan lekin yeh to nahi kaha tha na ki mein apne app ko suli pe latkaunga? Aur waise bhi, tumse vada karne se pehle meine ridhima ko vada kiya tha ki mein usse kabhi juth nahi bolunga aur nahi kabhi koi bhi baat us se chupaunga. Toh meine apna vada nibhaya and first come first serve. 😉😳😆

Ra: bilkul theek keh raha hai Armaan. Toh hum saab phir muskaan ke parents ko tere ghar par laye?wahi baat kar lenge?

Ar: nahi.. mere ghar nahi, riddhima ke ghar milte hai..

Ri: bilkul theek, mere ghar par hi milte hai.

Ra: ridheema aap.. atul aur anjali kahan gaye..

Ri: di atul ko chod ke ghar jayegi..

Rahul luks from armi to ridz n then goes

Ra: muskan chal mein tuje chod deta hu

Mu: (also luks from ridz to armi in a sad way) haan chal

N they leave…

Ar: hmm… toh phir chale?

Ri: kahan?

Ar: ghar (and winks😉)

Ri gives him a luk which means… are u up to ur shaitani again

Ar: aree ... mera matlab mein tumhe tumhare ghar chodu?

Ri: (smiles sarcastically) nahi.. mein auto mein chali jaungi. Di ne bhi mujse yehi kaha ki ridz tum auto mein aa jana mein atul ko drop kar ke ghar ati hu.😆

They luk at each other and burst laughing 😆

Ar: chalo..

They start walking towards his car and Armaan is holding ridz's hand and as usual playing with her fingers

Ar: waise meine tumse kaha ki tum aaj bahaut khubsurat lag rahi ho?

Ri: (with a very innocent look) nahi toh,

Ar: nahi?

Ri: nahi

Ar: theek hai (he puts his hand on her shoulders and makes her face him and creases her cheek with his hand) tum aaj bahauuuuuuut bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho, itni ki …

Ridz blushes: ki?

Ar: (smiles) ki kahi meri jaan hi na cha..

Ridz puts her hand on his mouth

Ri: aisa phir kabhi mat kehna, mare tumhare dushman

Ar: oye hoye…..

Ridz blushes n hides her face in his chest.. while he smiles and pulls her closer and hugs her

Ar: I luv u riddhima, aaj ka din mere liye bahuat hi khushi ka din hai

Ri: I luv u too Armaan.

They stay like that feeling the warmth of eachother and feeling content and luved, and feeling very lucky to have each other… after some time (they don't remember how long they stayed like that) 😳they get in car and drive home. In the car armi keep glancing at ridz while ridz keep blushing n stealing glances of him.. armi has not left her hand and is holding her hand on the gear stick.

They reach ridz's home…. Both luk at each other, Armaan kisses her hand then creases her cheek,

Ar: kal mein tumhe lene aunga aur hum saath me sanjeevani jayenge theek hai

Ridz nods positively while armi smiles seeing her turning red

Ri: aab muje jana chahiye… kal milte hai. Gud night

Ar: (kisses her hand again): maan toh nahi kar raha tumhe jane dene ko but u r right. (ridz gets out of the car) Aur neend bhi shayad nahi ayegi aab par phir bhi gud night and my dreams (and winks)

Ridz blushes: gud night Armaan, n sweet dreams. And runs inside. While armi sighs, luks up and says I luv her.

Ok every one finally this day is over, I really really hope I have not disappointed u and please forgive me as I m not gud at romantic scenes. I will post a promo sometime next week pakka... n ya as always please feel free to add your honest comments or critisms and also tell me if u want me to add anything to the story😳

-Pari