Falling in love ---The original !! - Page 8

plz countine soon and plz rema far form kan-ran plz write soon!!! make and the next one more romantic!

you said it wouldn't be a good part.. i find it really funny!

hey please continue soon.
i am really.. waitting for the next update..
please please pretty please

Recap:
Ranbir and kanya fight because rewa told her Rema is his ex.

PART 7

Ranbir is in the bathroom taking a shower. And there is no towel.
R: great!! Just great!! No towel. Aab use bulaoonga to who zaroor soche gi ke yeh ek bahana hai. But oh well what can I do? KANYA!! [screams]
K: [outside fixing clothes, ignores his call]
R: KANYA!! [screaming]
K: [screams back] Aab kya hua?
R: yaha koi towel nahi hain.
K: Kitna ghatia excuse hain. Main yeh scene movie mein hazar baar dekh chuka hoon. Uske bheje mein koi original idea nahi aaya? Chalo thik hai bheja hota tab na idea aati.
St: [enters the room] [music playing- shanta tai shanta tai shanta tai]
R: KANYA!! Sunai nahi deta kya?? [thinks to himself bechari..sharma rahi hogi, koi baat nahi hain. Who jab towel lekar ayegi to main sab thik kardoonga]
St: King kong itna chilla kyon rahe hai?
K: Shanta tai, mujhe thora help kardo naa please. Yeh towel zaara Ranbir ko de aao.
St: [takes the towel and goes to the bathroom]
R: [happily showering with his eyes closed, thinks it's Kanya and pulls her to the bath tub]
St: aaaaaaaaaaaaahhh!
R: [opens his eyes] aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Kanya yeh tumhe kya ho gaya? Gori se itni kaali sirf panra minute mein? Kaunsi cosmetic use kiya? Who kaun hai joh mera chamakti chaand ko kahika nahi chora??
St: [slap him on the cheek] Bandar kahike!! Kaala to hai. [slaps him on the other cheek]Saalah Darinda, akele aurat miltehi shuru kardi? Kutta, kamina, suaar.[slaps him on the other cheek] Kanya nahi mili aab mujhpe line marna shuru kardi?[slaps him on the other cheek]
R: Ehh! Bohut ho gaya. Maine socha ki kanya aayi hai. Now get of my shower.OUT!
St: [leaves and goes to Kanya who sess she is soaking wet]
K:[laughs] yeh aapko kya hua?
St: yeh saab us saand ke baje se hain. Main change karke aati hoon. Phir dekhloongi use.
[ she gets out of the room bumps into Rewa and Rema]
Rema: yuck! Tum bheegi kyon ho?
St: Uss Ranbir ne mujhe bathroom mein pakar liya tha is liye.
Rema: Ranbir ne?? Ewwwwwwwwwh! I don't believe it. Tumhare saath? Ewww!
St: Eeh eww ki bacchi. Mere raasta chor nahi to ek doongi naa. Sare zindagi kuch bol nahi payegi ewww ki sibha. [pushes her leaves]
Rema: Didiii!!
Rewa: I know I don't believe it either.
Rema: 1st ek hotel maid aab ek bai? Chi chi chi chi chi koi to standard ho na chahiye!

------In the breakfast table Ranbir sits beside Rema instead of Kanya. Shanta tai gets happy but kanya gets sad. Big D and Malika see this.
BD: [whispers to Malika] yeh kya ho raha hai?
M: hmm.. main bhi yehi soch raha hoon.
BD: Hum hai kuch karna chahiye.
M: Who dono bacche nahi hain. Pyar karne saath saath, use samajhna aur nibhana bhi zaroori hain. Yeh uska aapaas ka mamla hain. Hum dakhalandazzi nahi karenge.

After breakfast Kanya goes to her room, Shanta tai follows her. Kanya starts crying.
St: Ehh kanya..tu kyon ro rahi hain?
K: [cries some more]
St: mummy papa ki yaad aayi?
K: [shakes her head]
St: kisine kuch kaha? Balon ki dukan aur us phati kapre ne?
K: Shanta tai..mujhse bohut bari galti ho gayi hai.
St: Kanya, dekh…tu dusre ladkiyon tara baat baat par nahi rooti hain. Aab rona bandh kar.
K: [she wipes her tears off.]

She goes outside to take a walks on the field then comes close to a river. She was throwing rocks at the river, loving how peaceful it is.
R: aatma hatya karna paap hai!!
K: [annoyed that he came to disturb her peace] aatma hatya? Aur main? Is se pehle main tumhe maar daloongi!!
R: Mujhe maloom tha I would never get this lucky. Oh GOD [ looks up as to pray] yeh bojh kab halka hoga. Kab jayegi yeh mere zindagi se? bohut bhaari hain.
K: I hate you
R: hah!! Mujhe bhi pyar nahi hai tumse. I hate you more.
K: [throws rocks at him when she has none left she goes to strangle/choke him] I hate you! I hate your ghatia surat…tumhara ghatia baatein..ghatia jokes….aur who saare ghatia paal joh mujhe tumhare saat bitana parta hain.
R: [tries to get free and pushes her in the water] hah!! I hate you too! [he walks off and wonders how long it will be before she comes after him and attacks him. But why isn't there any noise behind him. He turns and sees she is drowning]
R: KANYA!!!! Ohh my god [he jumps and saves her] she is a little unconscious so he does the mouth to mouth cpr. She comes to her senses and sits up] oh my god! Kanya I am so sorry. Tumhe swimming nahi aati? Tumhe kuch kaha kyon nahi??
K: Kya kehta? Ranbir aaao mujhe bachao? Yeah right!
R: [hugs her really tight.]

They head back to the house. He carries her back upto their room. He puts her on the bed and tells her to rest as she seems exhausted. He sits on the sofa across from the bed and sees she is shivering. He comes and joins her under the blanket. He holds her in his arms. Kanya is too tired to protest and it felt so good and so…right. She puts her head on his chest
R: [ his arms wrapped around her, kisses on top of her head] I am so sorry baby. [in a low soothing voice]
K: [2 minutes later whispers ] It's ok.
R: agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh………
K: toh…? Tumhe chootkara mil jata?
R: [pulls her closer]
K: [her tears fall on him]
R: kanya!? What's wrong baby? Roo maat. Please!!
They sit up, as he wipes his tears off. He kisses her cheeks softly, her nose, her forehead and then her lips
K: [she kisses him back. Trying not to think about anything.
R: [Ranbir kisses all over her face. He goes down to her neck. Being as gentle as he can he kisses every inch of her. Then for the second time they make love. Closing the world out acting like nothing exsists except each other.]
Afterward they fall asleep wrapped in each others arms.

u always.. have to end like that dont u..
please.. yaar.. dont do this.
continue soon.
thank god..
they both made up.

great, awesome and beautifual.

please please please con't soon.

that was soo good...continue pleassee 😃

that was simply mindblowing 😛 pleaseeeeeee write the next part nowwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!! 😳

loved it
that was gr8
LOVE IT PLZ CONT 😉

toooo good 👏 pls cont. ASAP 😛

-Axita 😃