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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hi ash! I really loved your ff so far. It seems more realistic and I can relate to it more clearly. Can't wait till the next part.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#42

Heyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!
Sorry 4 da late update.........

Part6
Scene 4 cont.....................still driving in da car..........
K:so........ho do u liv wid?????
S:well...........my mom(prena) and my dad(anurag) and i hav a sister MUKTI ho iz in da usa studing rite now................wat bout u??????
K: well..............i.........i dnt liv wid my parents............their........their separated..............my dad luved sum1 els so my mum left my dad and................me😭😭😭..........long story i'll tell u somoder tym..........but i liv wid my Ba.........and my cozin nimmo.........and i hav a lil bro azwell ho studies in da usa azwell...................well dat waz my lifestory...................lol😆
S:oh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😔
den dey chat ....................den dey reach shilpa's house...............karan gets out ov da car and helps shilpa get out azwell.....................he takes her 2 da door............
s:ao na nadar
k:no.............soory phir kabi.........aj bohot der ho gayi hai ba pareshan ho rahi ho gin.................
s:oh😔............ok
k:ok den bi
and he leaves.......................

scene 5:karans house
karan gets in hiz house and starts 2 walk 2wards dis dark room........he quietly opens da door
and inside da room dere iz a girl lying down...............he goez near da bed ................bends down and kises on her soft cheeks..........
k:gud nite ba....................sleep well
sorry aj late ho gaya..............and he leaves da room..............

precap:karan iz on da phone takin 2 hiz bro PREM...............about hiz gf........................and den hiz cozin NIMMO enters and asks ho iz SHILPA..............

Ok guyz dat waz it 4 now i'm gona post da nxt part in bout 2-3 hours
sorry!!!!!!!!!!! i no dat it waz a small part but i promise dat da nxt part will be long.................so plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz coment on it

LUV ASH❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by ashprincess - 17 years ago

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@faiza_elahi202

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Posted: 17 years ago

#43

hmmmm gf cool yaar update sooon i will be waiting

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123abc123

@123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#44

hey dat
was great
sry i cudnt
comment on previous
part anywyz
its really gd
luvin ur wrk
kp it up xxx

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Swancy Cherry xx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#45

hey ash
just amazing love it
too small next one has to be long
swansea

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Kanzy

@pwincess kanzi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#46

thank u sooooooooo much 4 da pm!!!!!!!!!! i love ure ff!!!!!!!! its ammazing! 😳

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sumayyah patel

@Patel 1993

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Posted: 17 years ago

#47

thanks so much for the PM. When is Prem-Mukti gonna enter. Wait a minute, is Prem younger than Karan or older and what about Mukti - is she younger than Shilpa or older. I'm confused 😕 .

Well anyways, fantastic updates, it was a bit short compared to ur other updates previously but it was kewl!

Update soon please, i'm wondering whether Prem & Mukti study in the same college and if they r in love?

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Super.woman

@Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#48

hey tht was great..plz continue soon.
luv ur ff
ishiqa

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333360

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Posted: 17 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Patel 1993
thanks so much for the PM. When is Prem-Mukti gonna enter.dnt worry deir gona enter soon Wait a minute, is Prem younger than Karan or olderyounger and what about Mukti - is she younger than Shilpa or olderyounger. I'm confused 😕 .

Well anyways, fantastic updates, it was a bit short compared to ur other updates previously but it was kewl!

Update soon please, i'm wondering whether Prem & Mukti study in the same college and if they r in love?dnt woory yr gona find out soon........sumfings shud b a surprise .........lol