TeriUmeedTeraIntezar: Part22 Page80 8/18 NEW!! - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great part! loved it cant wait to read more

pls cont. soooooooooooooooon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
rllly nice ff
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont super soooooooon
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi everyone!! I'm going to update in an hour or two... so if you want me to PM you when the part is ready... tell me...

I have lots of schoolwork... The disadvantage of doing homeschooling online: falling behind pace 😵😭

😃Zainab

Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey. i will be waiting for ur part, do update soon, and send me a PM 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veiledbeauty

Hi everyone!! I'm going to update in an hour or two... so if you want me to PM you when the part is ready... tell me...

I have lots of schoolwork... The disadvantage of doing homeschooling online: falling behind pace 😵😭

😃Zainab

hmm..dont have to send a pm..will keep checking! lol..and i cant believe i kept spelling ur name wrong! so sorry!! Zainab..there i got it right! lol..continue soon and remember school comes first! lol

Kajal šŸ˜›

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 5:

Next day:

Malaika, Sapna, and Riddhima came to the locker room, laughing. They were making fun of Dr. Armaan. Malaika went into the changing room, and to her horror, she say Safwan sleeping on the floor… shirtless.

"AAAAAAAAA!!!" she yelled. Riddhima and Sapna came running.

"Kya hua????" they said together.

Malaika pointed at Safwan, who had woken up, because of her yell.

"Tum bhi na," he said bemused. "Saari raat sone ko nahi mila, aur ab tu agai, dimag khane ke liye."

"Ghar jaake nai so saakte, kya?? Changing room mein sone ki kya zaroorat hai, who bhi kapdre bina?"

Safwan looked at his chest, then *shock*, he covered it with his arms, got up and wore his shirt. Malaika gave him a disgusted look.

"Muhje Dr. Armaan ko yeh files dena hai, duty ke pehle, so see you guys later!" Riddhima said and went towards Dr. Armaan's cabin. She knocked… no answer, she knocked again… still no answer, one more knock, again no answer. Riddhima opened the door, and was taken aback. He was sleeping too.

"Saab ko sone ki padri hai…" But what surprised Riddhima was that his feet were on his desk, there were a lot of files on his desk, otherwise it was incredibly clean and organized. There were four empty coffee cups on his desk and his shirt was half unbottoned. Riddhima glanced at his manly chest… then his innocent baby face… His mouth was open, he was almost snoring. She moved her hand forward to touch his hair… but pulled it back because he has just opened his eyes.

"Aaap??? Aap yaha kya karahi hai??" He put his feet down, buttoned his shirt, and straightened the files on his desk, then put on an angry face, which he couldn't do… because he saw her beautiful face, blooming like a flower, full of innocence.

"Sorry, sir." She said with her head bowed, she put the files on his desk.

Riddhima's dress, with jeans, not short shorts, same color though :D

She looked gorgeous today. He thought yellow suited her innocence. He was staring at her… She was feeling uncomfortable. Why was he looking at her like that? Oh! She wasn't wearing her lab coat, pagli, she thought, and put her coat on… but he still kept staring at her…

He smiled… She was too innocent. All of a sudden he broke free of her spell and looked at the clock. He was five minutes late!!

"Riddhima… mera matlab.. Dr. Riddhima… meet me at the front desk… bohot late hochuka." He said.

"Yes sir," she nodded, and left. Armaan slapped himself on the forehead.

"Who tuhmari junior hai, tum aise soch bhi kaise sakte??" He fixed his hair, put on his lab coat, and left to meet the interns.

The interns were waiting for Armaan to come…

"You are 10 seconds LATE! Ab dekho, khud paanch minute late ho chuka. Muhje bohot neend aarahi hai… ghar jaana hai. He rested his head on Malaika's shoulder, as she was the only one next to him. She pushed his head off her shoulder and went to stand next to Sapna.

Malaika's outfit, with a blue wrap scarf, and a long sleeved blue denim shirt under the black dress:

Armaan came in running. Before he could say anything, Safwan woke up suddenly and said, "Sir, aap paanch minute late ho."

"Dr. Safwan… Night duty." Said Dr. Armaan, angrily.

"Phir se???????????"

"HAAN, AAP APNA MOO BAND RAKHYE." Armaan yelled. Everyone got scared.

"Yes, sir," Safwan said meekly. Malaika was laughing andar andar…

"Aur haan, Dr. Atul ko phone karke kehdena ke uski night duty canceled, kyunki Dr. Safwan ko night duty pe bohot maaza aata hai. Dr. Sapna, aap Dr. Atul ko phone kar ke bata deejye."

"Yes, sir."

"Staff directory reception desk pe hai… Dr. Malaika aur Dr. Sapna, aaj ap dono ki duty Cardio Ward mein hai. Dr. Riddh… Riddhi… Riddhima, aap mere saath. Dr. Atul se kehdena ke unki duty Neurology ward mein hogi. Dr. Safwan aap ghar jaa sakte."

Safwan ran out the hospital as fast as possible, before Dr. Armaan could change his mind.

Armaan and Riddhima left together…

"Tum jau, mein Atul ko call karke aati hoon." Sapna said to Malaika… Malaika left to the Cardiology Ward.

Sapna was looking through the staff directory… She didn't know Atul's last name… She looked up at the ceiling… then she looked back at the directory… her finger was on Atul Malik's name… and right above it was Armaan Malik… and their home phone number was the same.

"Iska maatlab… Armaan aur Atul bhai bhai hai… Hmm… isi liye Atul muhje apna surname nahi bataya…"

Armaan and Riddhima:

"Sir, mein kuch phooch kakti?" Riddhima asked him.

"Gee, puhchiye," He said, while writing something on a patients file.

"Aap… mera naam lete waqt haqlate ho…" she asked, shyly. "Mera naam kehna mushkil hai, kya?"

He smiled at her… He himself didn't know why he stammered. She looked at his smile. He had dimples!!! OMG, she went crazy… her eyes closed…

When she opened her eyes, he wasn't there anymore…

To All The Silent Readers: Please COMMENT so I know you're reading!!!!!! Or else... I'll cry 😭😭😭 LoL.

Hope you guys like this part! I feel like somethings missing... but tomorrow's part will be better.

Edited by Veiledbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I will tell you what is missing...Armaan! He was gayab when Ridhima opened her eyes! lol..great part Zainab..and i think i got your name right this time! srry for the previous times!

Sawfan is too funny..reminds me of Armaan. šŸ˜‰..and aww poor Ridhima..she is so innocent. And Armaan is too cute..i like him as a stern doc but love him as a doc in DMG..hehe! But love how you altered his character..it is so sweet!

Hmm..i was wondering the same thing! Why does he stammer everytime he says her name? Ridh..ridhi..ridhima..remind me of..k-k-kiran..(fprgot the name of SRK'S movie! lol..)..aww..it is so cute!!

And hmm..Sapna knows Atul and Armaan are brothers..now what?

I think I am missing something..oh yah..where did Armaan go?

And continue soon! Am impatient to read more! lol

Kajal šŸ˜›

Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey part 7 was gr8....luved AR scenes....plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Armaan*

I will tell you what is missing...Armaan! He was gayab when Ridhima opened her eyes! lol..great part Zainab..and i think i got your name right this time! srry for the previous times! Its ok, you can call me zuzu if zainab is too hard šŸ˜›

Sawfan is too funny..reminds me of Armaan. šŸ˜‰..and aww poor Ridhima..she is so innocent. And Armaan is too cute..i like him as a stern doc but love him as a doc in DMG..hehe! But love how you altered his character..it is so sweet!

Hmm..i was wondering the same thing! Why does he stammer everytime he says her name? Ridh..ridhi..ridhima..remind me of..k-k-kiran..(fprgot the name of SRK'S movie! lol..)..aww..it is so cute!! It was Darr... dnt wanna ruin anything, so im not gonna say why he stammers (he's in lowwwww šŸ˜†)

And hmm..Sapna knows Atul and Armaan are brothers..now what? Next part šŸ˜‰

I think I am missing something..oh yah..where did Armaan go? Umm.. i don't know where he went either.. šŸ˜• he just left, lol

And continue soon! Am impatient to read more! lol

Kajal šŸ˜›

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Posted: 17 years ago
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First of veiledbeauty...I love the title of your fanfic...one of my fav songs...Teri umeed tera inteezaar karte hain....hum sanam sirf tumse sirf tumse pyar karte hai!! hai! šŸ˜

anyway I really enjoy reading your fanfic...it's sooo much fun! and sooo interesting! I love how your building up curiosity...I'm still wondering if Armaan will stop himself only bcuz Ridz is a junior to him! and I love the clothes you pick out for Ridz...really pretty! keep up the great work! 😊

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