Kaisa yeh pyaar hai(fanfic)Prt-19,pg29 - Page 4

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Posted: 20 years ago
#31
come on khushi u cant leave the story hangin like this i mean not again
continue soon yaar i like ur story
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Posted: 20 years ago
#32
Racape- angad and kripa become friends

Part10

The door opens and angad was shocked to see........

........kripa's cloths torn,blood and she was crying

then he saw a a guy indside.Before anyone can say anything angad goes into the house and starts beating up the guy.

A-how dare you touch kripa?

K-(trying to stop him)-Angad chodo usse angad mare bath tho suno.

A-(beating up the guy)-nahi kripa is ke himat kaise hue tumhe chune ke.

After some more fight people gather around and stop angad.

K-(angry tone)what the hell were you doing?

A-(Calm)-Kripa i was just helping you.you should thank me.

K-(yelling)-thank you my foot we were just doing a play.we were just doing our rehersal and the play is
mext week.

A-play what play?

K-the one that yo just saw.

A-(couldn't belive his ears)I....a..mmmm....sor....ry.

K-what sorry now this person is gone now where am i going to find an actor for this roll? and he was the main lead in the play.

Someone from the group comes and tell them why not take angad for the roll.

S-kripa tum isse roll kyun nahi karwa leti?

K-waise idea bora nahi hain.

A-lakin kripa.

K-kal thik 8 baje yaha aja na.

A-kripa

K-angad you have done the mess so now you hae to do this play.

K-and angad main tumse punch nahi rahi ablke tumhe order de rahi hum. now you can leave.

Angad leaves from there he was really angery at himself.
next day he goes to kripa house for the practice everyone in the group have started to like angad.Kripa and angad can't spend a single day without meeting eachother.

Finelly the day of show.the show was a big hit.Everyone loved angad and kripa's performance.days goes and angad and kripa get busy with their daily ruteen but they still talk to eachother on the phone.one night when Kripa was in her room when angad comes in.

K-hi angad tumm yaha etne dino baad?anyway how are you?

A-I am fine.lakin mughe tumse kuch baat karne hain.

K-ha kaho.

A-kripa tumhe yaad hain jab hamne who play kiya tha na tho us waqt hemare show k organizer bhi the who chahte hain k hum dono ek show saath main kare.so if your ok with it.

Kripa thinks for a while angad tries to make her angree and finely she agrees.

K-thik hain.

A-thanks kripa tanks alot.

before kripa cansay anything angad runs out of the house.

K-angad suno tho..(smilling)-pagaal.

Angad goes out the house and phons saomeone.

A-kaam ho gaya.Kripa concert k liye maan gaye.

S-good.

A-tanks alot.misty ur the best.

M-i know i am the best.

M-Thik hain tho hum kal milthe hain.bye.

A-bye.

Next-Angad and kripa do the concert.

Thanx for your comments and sorry that i didn't post soon.
Edited by khushi19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
wonderful part 😉 👏
please update soon 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
AWESOME JOB....PLZ CONT SOON..DON'T KEEP US WAITING LIKE LAST TIME..PLZ CONT.........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35
khushi..those were 10 awesome parts 😆..plz continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#36
thnx guyz i will try to cont at night since it's friday i might type more then one episode 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37
really gud....plzzzz post the next part soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#38
awsome job khushi i just caught up continue soon!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#39
coooooooooooool

👏 👏 👏
appreciative work
keep going
Edited by touchmenot - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
nice job
i liked the episode cant wait to read the next part
gud job

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