Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22! - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry,sorry..i know u r waiting for the date..but i'll post half of the date just now and the other half later...!...

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Near Armaan's car..........

Armaan "kab aaogi Riddhima?"
Riddhima comes "tumne bulaya aur main aa gayi"
Armaan was just staring Riddhima...She was looking so pretty...Armaan was staring Riddhima continuously...Riddhima was feeling shy bcoz of Armaan's
intense gaze...Riddhima broked the silence and said "Armaan...Armaan"(waves her hand in front of his face)
Armaan came into the real world and said "Riddhima,u r looking very very beautiful"
Riddhima blushes...!..."thanks,ab chale"
Armaan "haan..."...he opens the gate of his car for Riddhima...
Riddhima sits in...Armaan also sits...
Armaan was concentrating more on Riddhima than on driving and Riddhima was blushing by the way Armaan was staring her...
Riddhima "Armaan...samne dekho"
Armaan "agar tum har roj itni khubsurat lagogi to mera to accident ho jayega"
Riddhima "don't worry...tum sanjivani ke patient ban jaana"
Armaan "main patient to ban jaunga agar tum meri doctor banogi"
Riddhima laughs and says "by the way,hum kahan jaa rahe hai?"
Armaan "dekhti jao"
.................they reach a place far from the noise and pollution of cities......
Riddhima"Armaan,hum kahan hai?"
Armaan "hum jahan bhi hai sath hai"
Armaan gets down from his car...opens the car gate for Riddhima..
Armaan offers a hand and says "chale?"...Riddhima nodds...They walk down to a building and enter the place...
Now they were standing in a room beautifully decorated with candles all over...There was a table for two in the center of the room...There was a soft romantic music going on in the background...She was really happy with the beautiful setup done by Armaan just for her...
Riddhima "Armaan,tum ne ye sab mere liye liya?"
Armaan "koi shak?...sirf apni Riddhima ke liye kiya"
Riddhima "Armaan,I LOVE U" She hugs him...
Armaan "I LOVE U 2"...he holds her...
After a minute...
Armaan "gate pe hi rehenge ya andar chalne ka bhi iraada hai"
Riddhima laughs and they walk in...
They both go near the table...
Armaan "sit..."(takes out the chair for her)
Riddhima sits...
They both started to talk...
Riddhima "Armaan,can i ask u something if u don't mind?"
Armaan "ya sure"
Riddhima "pakka...bura to nahi manoge?"
Armaan "nahi"(keeps his hand on Riddhima's hand which is on the table)
Riddhima "Armaan,aaj tak tumne apni fanily ke baare mein nahi bataya,main jaana chahti thi ki tumhari family mein kaun-kaun hai...i'm sorry if i'm getting personal"
Armaan "Riddhima....don't worry..ab kabhi na kabhi tum meri family ka hissa to banogi naa..to it's no harm in asking"
Riddhima smiles...
Armaan "meri family mein meri MOM , SWAPNIL BHAIYA , unki wife TANVI yani meri BHABHI jinke main bahut close hun,mom se bhi jyaada close...aur bhaiya-bhabhi ka beta ADITYA.,meri behen SHIFALI aur mere DAD aur ....."
Riddhima "aur kaun?"
Armaan "aur TUM meri hone wali wife...MRS.RIDDHIMA ARMAAN MALLIK..."
Riddhima blushes!!!
Armaan "to MRS.RIDDHIMA ARMAAN MALLIK mere saath dance karengi"(offers his hand)
Riddhima puts his hand over his hand ...
They move over to the dance floor...They danced on the slow romantic music going on in the background..
Riddhima's one hand was in Armaan's hand and the other on Armaan's shoulder...
Armaan's one hand was in Riddhima's hand and the other was on Riddhima's waist...
Armaan made her go round and after that Armaan placed his both hands on Riddhima's waist and Riddhima's both hands were around Armaan' neck!!
Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
awesome i waiting for next scene do continue 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
awesome part *riddhima* .. do continue soon ..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooo...nyc scene...u stoppd in da middle!!! 😭 😭
plz cont. soon...i luv ur ff!! 👏 👏

Luv,
Marisha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
pls dont stop in middle like this 😭 .
waitin for the next scene 😳 😳
continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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mind blowing! really ggd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so sweet n romantic! contd soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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tht was 2 gud.......plz conitnue soon......
luv ur ff
ishiqa
*riddhima* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'm posting the new part in 10 minutes...!! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part-6

Riddhima now layed her head on Armaan's chest...Armaan kissed her hair...
They danced slowly till Armaan realised that he is feeling hungry..
Armaan "Riddhima..."(slowly)
Armaan "Riddhima..."(little louder)
Riddhima straightens her head "kya hua?"
Armaan "wo....bhook lagi hai"(he made a cute face)
Riddhima laughs seeing his face.."to chalo"
Armaan & Riddhima walk to the table and sit down...
Armaan feeds Riddhima and She feeds him...
After the dinner...
Armaan "mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan "chalo to sahi"
Armaan took her to the back of the place..There was a bench ...and if u look down the balcony u could see a beautiful lake...
Riddhima "wow! kitna khubsurat hai"(looking at the lake which was looking very beautiful in the bright moonlight)
Armaan "par tumse zyada nahi"(looks at her face and she blushes)
They both sit down on the bench...Riddhima layed her head on Armaan's shoulder..
Armaan "mujhe tumhe kuch dena hai"
Riddhima "kya?"
Armaan takes out a box...Riddhima opens it...It had a beautiful heart shaped locket with AR carved on it...
Armaan "sirf tumhare liye"
Riddhima "tum hi pehna do"
Armaan makes Riddhima wear it...
Now they facing each other...Riddhima's eyes were closed as she was soooo happy that she thought that she will cry any moment and she didn't wanted to cry as this would ruin the moment...
She never knew that Armaan loved her soo much...
Armaan kissed her on her forehead then on her eyes then her cheeks and on the place were was her locket was hanging and before he could kiss on her lips her phone started ringing...Armaan was damn angry while Riddhima was smiling after seeing Armaan's angry face..!
Riddhima picked her phone...
Riddhima "hello..di"
Anjali "Riddhima...1 bajne wale hai,papa aane wale hai...tum unke aane se pehle aa jao"
Riddhima "oh shut!..main bas aayi"
Anjali "ok...come soon..bye"
Riddhima "bye"(cuts the phone)
Riddhima "Armaan,chalo..papa aane wale hai"
Armaan "hmmmm....chalo"(this time,Armaan didn't stopped her bcoz he knows that if Riddhima doesn't reaches home on time ..everybody will get tensed)
Riddhima & Armaan walk to the car and sit inside..!
They did not talk much on their return...they reach Riddhima's house..
Riddhima "bye"
Armaan "bye"(sadly)
Riddhima suddenly gives a kiss on his cheek and left leaving Armaan confused on her sudden reaction...
While going Riddhima turns and gives a flying kiss and Armaan also kisses her back!
Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
hey.....it's grt plz cont soon 👏 👏

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