Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22!

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sana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

hey u write so gud..... do cont soon

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Super.woman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

hey tht was gr8 .................i mean really GRRRREEAAATTTTTTTTTTTT......wonderful 👏 👏 👏 continue soon
luv ur ff
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Iram

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

ur ff is gr8. plz continue soon. will be waiting 4 the next part😳

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mubina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

SOO CUTE AWW PLZZZ DO CARRY ON UR DOIN GREAT JOB 😎 👏

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Riddhima gupta

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Posted: 17 years ago

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sorry,this is a short part...but i will post the next part(date 😳 😳 ) today evening or may be tomorrow..!njoy..! 😉

SCENE-11

Riddhima's house...!!!

Riddhima hunting through her cupboard...'
Riddhima "di...main pehnu kya?"
Anjali "kuch bhi pehen lo"
Riddhima "par di..."
Anjali "arre haan...aaj to tumhari pehli date hai"
Riddhima "di..."
Anjali "kuch Armaan ki pasand ka pehen lo"
Riddhima "par kya?"
Anjali "uska favourite colour kya hai??"
Riddhima "RED"
Anjali "hmmm...Red-colour of love"
Riddhima "di...aap dress chuno"
Anjali "ok...(she picks up a nice red suit)ye lo"
Riddhima "nice choice di...thanks"
Anjali "ab jao...loverboy intezaar mein kahin mar naa jaye"
Riddhima "di aap bhi na"
She goes and changes...She was looking owesome...
Anjali "ohho...loverboy kahin tumhe dekh kar behosh(faint) na ho jaye"
Riddhima blushes and wears her earings and a pretty red locket...
She was looking Simple and Sweet...Her phone rings,but Anjali picks it up...
Armaan "hi jaan...jaldi aao...i'm waiting...tumhe 1 ghante se dekha nahi hai,tumhe pata hai na I LOVE U so much ki tumhe dekhe bina jee nahi sakta"
(he said this without realising who was on the line)
Anjali laughing "ohho,to tum meri behen se itna pyaar karte ho"
Armaan was shocked!!!
Riddhima was doing her make-up...listening this she turns and takes the phone from Anjali's hand...
Riddhima "hello,Armaan??"
Armaan "haan,jo maine kaha vo Anjali ne sun liya?"
Riddhima "i'll ask...u hold on"
Riddhima "di,Armaan ne jo bhi kaha vo aapne sun liya?"
Anjali "haan,aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ki vo tumse kitna pyaar karta hai"
Riddhima blushes and asks "kya kaha tha usne"
Anjali tells her that what he said and Riddhima blushes...
Riddhima on the phone "hello,di ne sun liya tha"
Armaan "oh!!!...accha ab tum niche aa jao"
Riddhima "ok...bas aayi"(cuts the phone)
Anjali "jao jao...loverboy mar jayega"
Riddhima "di...aap bhi naa"...(she leaves)

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago

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tvshowfan14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

it was really cute but really small .. plz cont soon ..

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Jia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

hey that was really cute and armaan saying all this to anjali was simply hilarous. 😆 😆 😆 u know now i cant wait to read abt their first date. 😳 😳
pls cont sooooooooon