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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: namelesssr

Something's cooking in that brain of GF, isn't it? He's not the type to compromise easily.
Angad's not doing a good job of being a good father... trying to soothe a terrified child with the sight of guns... highly irresponsible ... and sets a bad example too.

Thanks nameless!

GF is going to implement his plan now..... the question is HOW? 😉

Prateek already used to seeing his Josh Papa having a revolver.....like all boys he likes guns and trusts the might of fire-power. He was terrified after the bomb blast. Angad showed him the guns to placate him but he didnt touch them....hes promised Kripa...😳

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

glad tha Gf's plan was successful. awesome part.

Thanks sana! Im glad u liked it! 😃

pallavi


~Sana~

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Posted: 17 years ago

Aww...how romantic 😳 ....I thought it was really sweet how both AK were singing togther...and then the blast killed the moment...lol

Omg GF's plan was just MINDBLOWINGGG!!...For some time I even thought why would GF risk imprinting Angad' sname on the card...but I should have known that GF would have some plan up his sleeves....

Awww...angad is so considerate...how thoughtful...he even went shopping for kripa.... He was all prepared with everything..loll

omg for sec I even got scared when kripa called GF papa....but good thing that GF covered it up...

hahah...I could just imagine the look on karthic and Mittals' face when the heard kripa call GF her dad...certainly a shocker 😆

omg poor Prateek he must ahve been soo terrified....waking up to the blast and seeing his mother missing...

Its must have been really hard for prateek to forget about his kidnapping experience....after all it was a huge thing for a four year old to encounter....being seperated from his mom and dad....living among stangers....and getting forced....it was a good thing that Karthic got him out of those monster;s claws and took him to Mr. and Mrs. Mittal....If it werent for kalayani aunty wonder what condition poro prateek would have been in...

Awww.....prateek still misses Josh..well even though he's getting used to Angad and started loving him and callling him dad....Josh will always remain somewher in his memeory...because there is noone who can take Josh's place....not even Angad.....but its really nice to see that prateek is getting used to Angad....and all teh engative feelings he had within himself towards Angad is vanishing...

I guess any mother woud be scared to see someone showing her kid a closet full of guns ..but in prateeks case it was differant...no matter how hard kripa tries....guns, violence, and crime are always going to be part of prateeks lief whether it be in a good way(such as Josh being a CBI officer) or in the form of Angad and GF....but It was really nice seeing that after being amazed by how many guns Angad had prateek feel protected and safe...

Awwww....I was soo happy when prateek asked Angad to sleep with him....I am glad that with time prateek is letting Angad be part of his life...and sharing sweet moments with eachother...

Welll in Angad's case its differant...he is happy so he doenst have to sleep alone in a seperate room no more😆...angad certainly knows how to get what he wants...lolll.

Kodak moment...it was soo cute when Angad was trying to put prateek to sleep while patting him..

kripa being tensed and being scared is jsutified...who wouldnt be scared when their family is in danger...but as Angad said its not easy to run away from the situation particulaly in their case....eventually Damodar will haunt them down...its better to face teh circumstances...and who know s they might even be able to win at the end...and then can live a fearless and happy life...without having to worry about people like Damodar..

Omg cant belive that GF's own man had betrayed him....even though his family was in danger...he should have stayed loyal to GD and asked him for help...GF might have been able to save his family....but I guess as GF stated that maybe Raghu didnt have enought faith in GF...and thought that being enemy's with Damodar while his family was at stake wasnt a good idea...

However...Raghu should have known that it isnt wise to trust people like Damodar either...they use people for their own selfish reasons....and what's the gaurantee that they would spare his family even after the work is done??...

Just like Damodar's brother didnt spare Zaib and Mr. ALi....But its Raghu's misfourtune that Damodar's plan backfired and now Raghu will have to pay for his gadarri towards GF....

Omg there is no way he would try to compromise with Damodar..and would be willing to just give up everything in a jiffy....no after what he went through all these years....GF definatly up to something😉

I really liked this particular last bit of the part:

Angad, Kartik, Javed, Mittal……all stared at Godfather, dumbfounded! They were stunned, shocked out of their minds! Godfather was accepting defeat from that fiend? That Monster? He must have lost his mind!
But they were too respectful to voice their views……just looked on in disbelief as his eyes twinkled at them with a glint of devilry in their depths!

hahah...I could just imagine all their shocked expresisons..and the GF having the devil twinkle in his eyes😉😆😃

Mindblowing part as always....cant wait for the next one...really looking forward to GF and Damaodar face to face...continue soon and keep up the great work👏




Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice..i knew nothing can happen to our AK they r saved...
GF is definitely called GF for a reason..he is smarter...and he has equally smart sil who knows how to win everyones heart..whether its prateek or prateek's mother or GF himself...
Its confusing..tht GF really wants to end this all struggle by surrendering before his enemy by inviting him for a patch up or he is planning something else to end this game of blood and revenge once for all...i wonder. 😕

its ok..if u update in 2days..thtz cool with me..its just sometimes the suspense just kills... 😛

continue soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

nice..i knew nothing can happen to our AK they r saved...
GF is definitely called GF for a reason..he is smarter...and he has equally smart sil who knows how to win everyones heart..whether its prateek or prateek's mother or GF himself...
Its confusing..tht GF really wants to end this all struggle by surrendering before his enemy by inviting him for a patch up or he is planning something else to end this game of blood and revenge once for all...i wonder. 😕

its ok..if u update in 2days..thtz cool with me..its just sometimes the suspense just kills... 😛

continue soon....

Thanks sweetangle! 😳

GF is smart, so is his damaad no doubt! 😉

Is GF really conceding defeat to that monster Damodar? Lets see what he has in mind! 😃

I understand.....suspense is killing....😆 But Im afraid next update will be on Sunday night, tonight Im too exhausted to write!

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Aww...how romantic 😳 ....I thought it was really sweet how both AK were singing togther...and then the blast killed the moment...lol

Yeah, A-K were having a great suhaag raat before the blast put a damper on it! But they will be back in action soon! 😳😆

Omg GF's plan was just MINDBLOWINGGG!!...For some time I even thought why would GF risk imprinting Angad' sname on the card...but I should have known that GF would have some plan up his sleeves...

GF knows how Damu's mind works....they have been adversaries for a long time!

Awww...angad is so considerate...how thoughtful...he even went shopping for kripa.... He was all prepared with everything..loll

Hes an unusual husband, a fictional one! 😆

omg for sec I even got scared when kripa called GF papa....but good thing that GF covered it up...

hahah...I could just imagine the look on karthic and Mittals' face when the heard kripa call GF her dad...certainly a shocker 😆

Kripa had a slip of the tongue but GF covered it up! 😳

omg poor Prateek he must ahve been soo terrified....waking up to the blast and seeing his mother missing...

Yes, any child would be terrified in such circumstances....

Its must have been really hard for prateek to forget about his kidnapping experience....after all it was a huge thing for a four year old to encounter....being seperated from his mom and dad....living among stangers....and getting forced....it was a good thing that Karthic got him out of those monster;s claws and took him to Mr. and Mrs. Mittal....If it werent for kalayani aunty wonder what condition poro prateek would have been in...

We cant imagine what Prateek had suffered during his kidnapping ordeal. Especially the betrayal by Kanan whom he trusted.

Awww.....prateek still misses Josh..well even though he's getting used to Angad and started loving him and callling him dad....Josh will always remain somewher in his memeory...because there is noone who can take Josh's place....not even Angad.....but its really nice to see that prateek is getting used to Angad....and all teh engative feelings he had within himself towards Angad is vanishing...

He already is fond of Angad as a father figure but nobody can replace Josh in P's heart! 😭

I guess any mother woud be scared to see someone showing her kid a closet full of guns ..but in prateeks case it was differant...no matter how hard kripa tries....guns, violence, and crime are always going to be part of prateeks lief whether it be in a good way(such as Josh being a CBI officer) or in the form of Angad and GF....but It was really nice seeing that after being amazed by how many guns Angad had prateek feel protected and safe...

Yes, u are absolutely right! Guns and violence has been a part of P's life so far....his Papa was a CBI Officer, then the kidnapping, the bomb blasts and of course his real father and grandpa are gangsters....

Awwww....I was soo happy when prateek asked Angad to sleep with him....I am glad that with time prateek is letting Angad be part of his life...and sharing sweet moments with eachother...

Welll in Angad's case its differant...he is happy so he doenst have to sleep alone in a seperate room no more😆...angad certainly knows how to get what he wants...lolll.

Angad got both his wishes fulfilled......Prateek's faith in him and sharing same room with Kripa...😳

Kodak moment...it was soo cute when Angad was trying to put prateek to sleep while patting him..

kripa being tensed and being scared is jsutified...who wouldnt be scared when their family is in danger...but as Angad said its not easy to run away from the situation particulaly in their case....eventually Damodar will haunt them down...its better to face teh circumstances...and who know s they might even be able to win at the end...and then can live a fearless and happy life...without having to worry about people like Damodar..

Yes, they can run but they cant hide from Damu or CBI.....Damu will hunt them down....

Omg cant belive that GF's own man had betrayed him....even though his family was in danger...he should have stayed loyal to GD and asked him for help...GF might have been able to save his family....but I guess as GF stated that maybe Raghu didnt have enought faith in GF...and thought that being enemy's with Damodar while his family was at stake wasnt a good idea...

However...Raghu should have known that it isnt wise to trust people like Damodar either...they use people for their own selfish reasons....and what's the gaurantee that they would spare his family even after the work is done??...

Raghu was too scared for his mother's life.....he didnt think GF could save his mom as Mumbai is Damu's turf!

Just like Damodar's brother didnt spare Zaib and Mr. ALi....But its Raghu's misfourtune that Damodar's plan backfired and now Raghu will have to pay for his gadarri towards GF....

Omg there is no way he would try to compromise with Damodar..and would be willing to just give up everything in a jiffy....no after what he went through all these years....GF definatly up to something😉

I really liked this particular last bit of the part:

Angad, Kartik, Javed, Mittal……all stared at Godfather, dumbfounded! They were stunned, shocked out of their minds! Godfather was accepting defeat from that fiend? That Monster? He must have lost his mind!
But they were too respectful to voice their views……just looked on in disbelief as his eyes twinkled at them with a glint of devilry in their depths!

hahah...I could just imagine all their shocked expresisons..and the GF having the devil twinkle in his eyes😉😆😃

Yeah I was imagining that glint in Ronit's eyes when I wrote that scene! I really like Ronit! 😳

Mindblowing part as always....cant wait for the next one...really looking forward to GF and Damaodar face to face...continue soon and keep up the great work👏

Thanks Mita, for ur incisive comments! 😃

pallavi




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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Thanks iqra! 😳

Kill Damu with apple knife? 😆😆 Thats a plan! 😆

GF is too smart.....he anticipates D's every move! 😃

Yes, this story is ending in 2 more parts, then epilogue.....😳

pallavi

duh....ar konsii knife ho sakti hai muj jaisi bechari k paas....lol yeh plan hai....to phir batao kahan thok daloon usay??lol

awww i m gonna miss it...

u know wat last night i finished readin bhalobasha 50 times!!!😳...its sooo gud...

iqra

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Posted: 17 years ago
aww romantic part 😳 😛 soo glad they're safe man angad and godfather are just too good!! very cute how angad calmed prateek down ..sweet little moment 😃 awesome like always continue soon! 👏

Choco 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great part..continue soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

duh....ar konsii knife ho sakti hai muj jaisi bechari k paas....lol yeh plan hai....to phir batao kahan thok daloon usay??lol

awww i m gonna miss it...

u know wat last night i finished readin bhalobasha 50 times!!!😳...its sooo gud...

iqra

Ohhhh U read Bhalobasha 50 times!!! 😃 Thats the biggest compliment for me!

Im planning another Bengal based FF next.....hope to post promo next week! 😳

Damu ko chaku se bhonkna maangta hai aur Arabian Sea mein tapakney ka plan hai! 😆

pallavi

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