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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

First of all...congarat on the hundred pages...and as A$K 4ever-S said more like 200 pages šŸ˜† ....

Oh so now its clear how Rishi became Rishab bajaj...and who's identity he has taken...Its really nice of his chacha to understand him...and help Rishi out in this time of crisis...

Aww...It was so sad when Zaib's family came to know about their son's death.....

Zaib's mother certainly had a really hard time to accept the fact that her son is no more...as well as her brother....poor thing had a stroke..she really went through alot...it was really a huge shock for her to bear 😭

And Zaib's father..had to keep his emiotions to himself for the sake of his wife...It must have been really hard to overcome such a crises...especially for parenst who loose their only child...for whom they had so many dreams and expectations for the future...

Poor Naaz..she must have really loved Zaib... but its a good thing that she started her new life after some time..

Awww...It was really nice that Rishi still remembered Zaib's dream and was trying to fufill Zaib's wish even after enduring so much...even though it was also something he was doing for himself...but atleast there is a presence of his friend..

Poor Rishi was trying to endulge himself in his work load to try to forget all the disaster's that took place in his life...but its really not easy at all...even impossible....forgetting the people whom you loved so much after loosing them is not an easy task...especially if you are deeply hurt and anxious to seek revenge...each day you feel that agony, pain, and lost in your life....

Experiences in life certainly change a person's thinking...who would have thought that a middle class person like Rishi would be forced to belive that people in today's world take money to be everything...emotions, love, and relationships are nothing in front of the power of money....

Omg Zaib's father is all alone...and is still facing the trauma of his son's death...but atleast he is seeing his son's dream being fulfilled...


Its nice to see that Rishi ha a home right next to his dear friend...atleats he will feel as if his friend is always around him...even though he doesnt need a momento in order to feel the preseance of his friend...but it must be really nice to have something besides just memories to get away from the feeling of lonliness...even if its just for some moments..

Even though it took soo lang for Rishi to become successful...but all his patience and hard work certainly did pay off...Damodar is zinch compared to GF...

GF and Damodar have been playing a cat and mouse game for a long time...and each time one tries to catch the other...fate just lets them slip away from the claws of death...I guess...if Damaodar was already killed then maybe GF and kripa might have not met...since in some way or the other Damodar's enmity with Angad's family led to such circumstances that he had to turn into Zaib,and live with GF which led him to see Anurdha's portrait..and was the cause of Kripa and GF finding out their realtion with eachother...atleats there were soem really positive outcomes for Damodar still being alive...Guess fate has something else in store for him..

Oh so all those people who work for GF have some way or the other been ruined by Damodar..so they are seeking their own revenge with teh help of GF...

I really liked GF's moto : An Enemy's Enemy is my friend...certainly hold alot of depth...

Awwww...Even though kripa had already accepted him as her father after hearing about his past which realted to her mother...It was really nice to see that kripa finally understood what led her father to become what he is today...and that its people like Damodar and the crupted government which lead innocent and noble people to take paths which might lead to their misery..

Awww...i think angad was really moved by Zaib's character he was so eager to knoe if he resembled him in any way...it was cute though..lol..

Yes I agree wiht GF...that angad has most of the traits which Zaib did...and maybe that is something that makes GF feel even more close to angad considering the fact that not only had he shared his friend's name...but resembles him as a human being

Even though GF really missed hsi love and best friend...but atleast he now has his daughter, son-in-law, and grandson with him...so he wouldnt feel that lonely anymore...

yeahhhh...Karthic's brother is responding

Awww...it was realy nice to see that even Zaib's grave was placed taking his liking under consideration..

hahaha...omg Angad really is the limit...it so soo halarious when he was dressed up as a Sheikh šŸ˜† šŸ˜† ...

Loved his dialouges...gulbadan, janasheen, Malikh-e-husan..loll...really cute šŸ˜†

As usual Loved AK flirting with eachother 😳...this time in a unique style šŸ˜†

Awwww.. no doubt prateek ceratainly is a Shehzaada...a really adorable one too..

hahah...angad's beard came off šŸ˜†

Awww...prateek thought it was a fancy dress party šŸ˜† ...prateek and his innocent thoughts...

I bet kripa really enjoyed shopping for her dad for a change...and she even bought something for Mr. and Mrs. Mittal...really considerate indeed..

Omg AK are goona get married again..yeahhhh....GF's feelings are understandable...every father would be delighted and the most happiest person when he does kanyadaan of his daughter...and after being away for so many years its ovious that he wants to feel that joy of fulfilling his duty as a father towards his daughter

Ufff stupid Angad grinning all the time šŸ˜† ....Well anyone can guess how happy angad might have been after hearing about hsi marriage by the way he was behaving so impatiently...if it was up to him he would have married krip aright then and there šŸ˜†

Awww..kripa was getting all shy and embarressed because of angad AGAIN!..LOLL...

Omg prateek is going to find out about josh...wonder how he's going to react...and what AK will break the news..well its a good thing that they decided to tell him before their marriage...so they can all start their new life without any problems...and its prateek's right to know about Josh and the fact that angad is his real dad before AK get married...Hope all goes well..

Great part as always...cant wait for the next one...continue soon and keep up the great work šŸ‘



Thanks mita! Wonderful comments as always! šŸ˜³šŸ‘

Oh Nooo, no more 100 pages, GF is ending in 3 more parts...😃

Yes, GF was an embittered man, hopeless about Law and Order, he took the law into his own hands......to avenge deaths of so many loved ones, Anu, his child, his father, his friend, his employer.

But he still kept humanity alive inside him....he gained respect and love of many people who are his friends and employees now. Damodar won ppl by fear, GF won them over by caring.

Angad is despo to marry Kripa again, then he would get to live with her as hubby! 😳

Everything is linked in this story, every event happened for a reason...u r right, if Damodar had died, a lot of events wouldnt have taken place. And if GF died, Kripa would never have met her father!

pallavi

Edited by pallavi25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: armaghan0

spledidly explained magnificent each and everything

Thanks, sidra! 😳 Im glad u liked it!

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanks abhilasha, jdsean, mita, sahr, sana, sidra, ananya, Chocolate, Shalini, Faiza, rima, Hinna, sweetangle, sweetie, deeya, desiqt, sapphire9.

Im sorry, I just didnt have the heart to make Kripa tell Prateek about Josh's death.....hes only 4 years old and the shock can severely damage his pysche!

PART 62

Wedding preparations were on in full swing at the Villa. Godfather himself called the best decorators in Dubai for the wedding and his Hotel Regency would cater all the food and drinks. Invitations were sent out to a few close friends and acquaintances as well as local big-wigs like Government Officials and Police Chief of Dubai.

Mr. Bajaj was a powerful and influential man in Dubai. The invitations all read: Mr. Rishabh Bajaj requests the pleasure of your company at the wedding of his Godson, Angad Khanna to Kripa Sharma, daughter of his friend, the Late Suryabhan Sharma.

Yes, Godfather acknowledged Suryabhan as Kripa's father…..he would never put her life at risk by announcing his blood relations. It was to be a simple wedding ceremony conducted by a priest flying in from India. Kalyani Aunty was very excited…..it was like she was reliving her own daughter's wedding again. She had grown very fond of Kripa and Prateek within a few days….they were just too endearing. Kripa always gave her the respect of an Aunt and let her decide everything in Godfather's household and kitchen.

Kalyani Aunty and Kripa went shopping for the wedding, both covered with Burkhas, accompanied by Kartik and Javed as bodygaurds. The two ladies bought saris, jewelry, and cosmetics for Kripa…. Sherwani sets for Angad. Kripa's bridal dress was a red and green lehenga set…with heavy brocade and stone-work. Angad's wedding Sherwani was midnight blue with silver brocade embroidery. Kripa chose a Sherwani for her Dad, a silver grey that would suit his dignified looks. She bought a maroon set for Prateek. They also bought formal dresses for Kartik, Mr. Mittal and others in the household. Kripa chose a dark blue sari for Kalyani but she protested….she never wore bright colors ever since……Kripa knew what she meant….she returned the blue sari and bought a cream colored brocade sari for Aunty Jee instead.

They returned from shopping with a car-load of bags. Godfather was delighted with their purchases. He had secretly ordered a diamond set for his daughter and a diamond –studded watch for Angad. Those would be his surprise gifts on wedding day.

Meanwhile, Angad looked after Prateek, spending more time with his son each day. They played soccer, baseball, tag. He even started giving Prateek tennis lessons on the tennis court inside the compound. After checking with the Security room that there wasn't a boat or yacht within 2 miles….Angad sneaked out with Prateek to the little strip of beach adjoining Godfather's property. They splashed around in the waves, played beach volleyball and had a rollicking time.

As they were returning to the Villa, Prateek sitting on Angad's neck, his sandy legs dangling by Angad's face, holding his head tightly, he declared: Angad Uncle, you are my best Uncle! I love you!

Angad grinned and kissed a sandy foot: I love you too, my son! Kya tum mujhey Dad kehkar bulaogey? I will like that!

Prateek was silent for a few moments: Lekin merey Dad toh Josh Papa hain…..

I know that, Beta. Josh tumharey Papa hain…..lekin kya tum mujhey Dad kahogey? Mujhey bhi tumharey jaisa Beta chahiye. We will be buddies, Okay?

Okay……Prateek agreed after some careful thinking…..he was sure Papa wouldn't mind if he called Angad Uncle Dad.
Okay, DAD ! Prateek finally replied.

Angad was ecstatic ! He leaped up in the air, with a whoop of joy! Prateek giggled loudly, clutching Angad's windswept hair tightly in his fists. Angad ran with his kid on his shoulders…..he ran in circles, made figure 8s….generally goofing off on the lawns in front of the Villa. Prateek laughed and screamed in excitement, hanging on for dear life….this was as good as a Rollercoaster ride.

Godfather heard sounds of excited laughter and came out to the terrace to watch them play. He grinned affectionately, his heart filled with warmth at the sight of his son-in-law and grandson. He was delighted that father and son were bonding so well. He blessed them silently in his heart: Shabash Angad! Main jaanta hoon tum Prateek ka dil zaroor jeet logay. He knew Angad had that endearing quality in him….he could win over anyone's heart with his affections.

Angad ran around for some time, then finally, he became a Train and chugged and tooted his way into the Villa, straight to the Kitchen. Kripa was helping Kalyani make lunch….both ladies laughed at the rambunctious duo!

Kripa shook her head, giggling : Kya bachpana hai, Angad! Arey dekho sambhalkey…..wahan daal rakha hai….abhi tum kaali daal ban jaogey" …

Angad chugged his way to Kripa, quickly bent his head to her ears and whispered: Agar tum saath dogi toh main daal makhani bhi ban sakta hoon"
Kripa blushed a beetroot red and hit him hard on the back with her fist.

Prateek was indignant: Mama, Dad ko kyun maara ? He is my Buddy !

Kripa's jaw hung open: DAAADD? She couldn't believe her ears……Prateek called Angad DAD????!!! OH MY GOD! HOW DID THIS HAPPEN? WHEN DID THIS HAPPEN?

Angad saw her dumbfounded expression and winked, then grinned triumphantly at his achievement.

He asked Prateek: Okay, Buddy, do u want ice-cream?

YES! YESSSS! Prateek was delighted….what a treat!

Kripa protested: Lekin Angad….abhi adhey ghantey mein Lunch tayyar ho jayega….abhi ice-cream mat khilao"

Koi baat nahin….hum ice-cream bhi khayengey….aur phir Lunch bhi….hum bahut bhookhey hain! We are building up our muscles, Right, Buddy?

Right, Dad! Prateek was his echo…..Mama, Main ice cream bhi khaoonga aur Lunch bhi…I am Batman….mujhey muscles banani hai!

Kripa rolled her eyes and sighed hopelessly. Angad ran to the fridge and opened the freezer, taking out two frozen cones from a ready-made packet.
You like Chocolate, Beta ?

Haan.... Dad! Give me chocolate!

Angad handed over the chocolate cone to Prateek above his head…..he took a vanilla cone for himself and both began slurping at their cones.

Kripa shook her head and laughed at the picture……Prateek sitting on Angad's neck, licking at the cone, Angad licking the cone below….both were wearing muscle Tees and shorts, Angad looking very buff and muscular, Prateek his miniature version. They looked very similar…like big and mini sizes .

Then she noticed Prateek's sandy legs: Of—fffo….Beta, tumharey pairon per reth laga hai, aao saaf kar doon…chalo neechey uthro.

But the kid wouldn't get down: Nahiiin….mujhey yahin baithna hai….Dad ke kandhon per"

Angad gave Kripa a devilish look and winked again. She would have to come near him to wipe off Prateek's legs. Kripa looked at him with narrowed eyes, then wet a kitchen towel and wiped Prateek's dangling legs, grumbling: Achha tareeka nikala hai, bachchey ko pataaney ka….rishwat dekar!

Angad laughed naughtily..….he checked quickly, Kalyani Aunty was busy stirring the pot. He grabbed Kripa's waist and kissed her cheek: Mummy ko itni asani se pataa liya toh betey ko kyun nahin?

He rubbed his ice-cream cone on Kripa's nose…..and quickly licked it off. Prateek didn't notice what was going on below….he was too busy licking his cone.

Kripa glared at Angad and turned away, muttering: Besharam! Badmaash!

Angad quickly grabbed her departing backside and squeezed it! Kripa gasped, looking back angrily to see him grinning shamelessly. She reached out and pinched his bare arm really hard.

UFFFF! Angad winced loudly.
Kalyani Aunty turned around with a jerk: Kya hua, Angad Beta? Tumhey chot lagi kya ?

Haan, Aunty! Angad smiled….Zyada kuchh nahin……buss apney zubaan ko kaat liya tha (bit my tongue)

He sauntered out of the kitchen with his boy on his shoulders, whistling:
Dilbar merey kab tak mujhey aisey hi tadpaogi
Main aag dil mein laga doonga wo ke pal mein pighal jaaogi"

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Kripa had been keeping him at arm's length ever since their wedding date was fixed.

When he went to her bedroom that night…she refused to go to his room, pleading : Please Angad….kuchh din aur wait karo…..shadi se pehley dulha-dulhan ka milna apshagun manaa jaata hai"

He was indignant: Lekin Jaaneman, hum toh already miya-biwi hain….phir kaisi yeh dooriyan?

Zamaney ke nazron mein nahin….aur phir merey Papa ke vicharon ka bhi lihaaz karo…wo chahtey hain hum dono phir se shadi ke pavitra bandhan mein bandhey…..she held and caressed his cheeks, trying to reason with him: Yeh intezaar hamarey liye ek intehaa hogi…..aur shadi ki raat hamari sabsey khubsoorat raat hogi. I will make it up to you, Darling! I promise!

Sach keh rahi ho? He looked into her eyes, still pouting peevishly like a little kid deprived of his candy.

God Promise! She squeezed his cheeks lovingly, ab jaakar so jaao….Goodnight!

Kam se kam ek goodnight kiss toh de do….he whispered (they were talking near the terrace door to avoid waking up Prateek)

She reached up, her arms circling his neck, and kissed his lips softly….he grabbed her waist, yanked her closer and deepened the kiss at once, exploring her mouth thoroughly, showering his love and desire on her with his smooches.

Finally she moaned , pulling away breathlessly: "Aisey kiss karogey toh main bhi apney aapko rok nahin paaoongi"

That was my plan! He chuckled, knowing well the effect of his kisses upon her.

Suddenly Kripa said: Waisey Angad, Thank you!….(kissing his cheeks)….Tumney meri bahut badi pareshani door kar dee…..Prateek ko tumney Dad kehna sikha diya….ab mujhey aur tension nahin hogi….kaisey usey samjhaoon….kya kahoon usey tumharey baarey mein?…..Sab kuchh sulajh gaya.

Angad looked gravely at her: Yeh toh mera farz tha…aur mera haq bhi….Prateek ke zubaan se Dad sunna merey liye sabsey bada tohfa hai. Bachchon ko pyaar se samjhaya jaata hai, zabardasti se nahin……..waisey wo abhi bahut hi chhota hai…..usey poori sachchai bataney ki koi zaroorat nahin. Wo mujhey Dad kehkar bulaye isimein main khush rahoonga. Bhaley hi wo Josh ko apna Papa samjhey…..Josh ne uski parvarish kee hai itney saal, yeh Josh ka haq bantaa hai….main kabhie ussey wo haq nahin chheenunga. Haan, Prateek jab bada ho jaye…when he can understand the difference between biological father and adoptive father, toh hum usey bata dengey. Ab yeh raaz usey bataney ki koi zaroorat nahin. Hes too young to understand.

Kripa was moved to tears: Haan, Angad…..Prateek abhi bachcha hai….tumney theek kaha……usey wo sab batana nahin chahiye. Lekin Josh ke maut ke baarey mein usey batana kya theek hoga?

Nahin….bilkul nahin! Usey bahut bada sadma lagega…..let it be. Usey kehna Josh abhi kaam mein busy hai….yahan aa nahin sakta. Dheerey dheerey wo bhi bhool jayega. He will accept that Josh wont come back to him. Kuchh saal baad hum sachchai bataa dengey….Jab wo thoda aur bada hoga…..

Kripa nodded, relieved that she wont have to break the painful news to Prateek yet! She was dreading the very thought of telling him that Josh was dead.

Yes, you are right…..main bhi toh apney asliyat se anjaan thi 20 saal tak…..bachchey bahut jaldi haalaat ko accept kar letey hain. shadi ke baad jab hum dono ek saath rahengey tab Prateek bhi dheerey dheerey samajh jayega ke tum hamarey jeevan ka hissa ho. Bhagwan karey wo hamarey rishtey ko bhi kabool kar le.

Haan, Kripa, aisa hi hoga. I know he will accept me as part of his family.

They hugged each other and stood silently for a few minutes, brooding about the future, hopeful about Prateek's reaction to their wedding.

Then Angad kissed her forehead, gently said "Goodnight" and left her room.
But he ran into Godfather in the passage again, who didn't look very pleased to see Angad coming out of his daughter's room 2 days before the wedding.

Angad quickly gave his excuses : Main Goodnight kehney gaya tha, Papa.

Godfather smiled at his calling him Papa. Angad certainly knew how to melt hearts!

Angad, mujhey tumsey ek zaroori baat kehni thi…..can you come to my Study?
Angad nodded: Sure, Papa ! Chaliye!

They closed the door after them…..Godfather wanted to discuss some Security measures he had taken for the wedding when guests would be coming into his compound for the first time. Angad went over the details and agreed it was a foolproof arrangement.

Then Godfather suddenly said: Beta, ek baat kahoon? Bura mat maan-na…..jab tum Zaib the…tab wo saari ladkiyan…..???

Angad blushed a deep red in embarassment! What a false position for him….his father-in-law knew about all his peccadillos as Zaib!

NO, NO, Papa! Wo sab mera ateet hain…..tab mujhey Kripa ke baarey mein kuchh yaad nahin tha. Wo main nahin…koi aur hi tha, samajh leejiye. Aapki beti hi merey liye sab kuchh hai….shes MY LIFE! SHES EVERYTHING TO ME!

Good! Mujhey tumsey yahi ummeed thi" GF smiled approvingly…Lekin Beta, dhyaan rahey…Kripa ko un sabkey baarey mein pata na chaley. She will be very upset!

Of course, Papa! …..Angad quickly mumbled Goodnight and escaped from the Study. He was horribly flustered and sweating bullets: . " Yeh Baap-Beti dono khatarnaak hain….very dangerous!" he grumbled as he escaped to his room. But he knew in his heart he couldn't have had a better family.

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The decorators set up a huge colorful tent near the wall, overlooking the sea. Inside the tent, a makeshift Mandap was erected, with 4 pillars and flowers, leaves and painted urns.

Trucks carrying flowers and catered food from GF's hotel also came at the gates and were checked thoroughly before they were given passage inside.The Priest had arrived from India and staying at the Hotel.

A short Mehendi Ceremony was held the day before…..as female representatives, only Kalyani and the Housekeeper were there. A mehendi artist arrived from Dubai and applied henna on Kripa's hands and feet . Angad watched from afar…..Kripa looked up and smiled tremulously at him…..both remembered their makeshift wedding 5 years ago, when Kripa had applied mehendi on her own hands from ready to use tubes. It had been so simple, yet such a memorable day for them, before Fate cruelly snatched away their happiness.

Prateek came running into the tent and saw his mother's hands being painted. He was most surprised: Mama, yeh aapkey haath per painting kyun kar rahi hai?

Kripa laughed: Painting nahin, Beta, yeh mehendi hai…..haath per lagatey hain….
Mujhey bhi lagana hai……he held out his hands.

Angad quickly came and lifted Prateek in his arms: Ladkey mehendi nahin lagatey, Buddy. Chalo, hum mard log yahan se bhaagtey hain….nahin toh yeh humein bhi mehendi laga dengey.

Prateek happily left with Dad, wondering why Mama was getting all dolled up. But grown-ups were weird anyways, they dressed strangely all the time. Maybe this was a fancy dress party too!

The wedding day dawned bright and sunny, with not a cloud in the sky. The marriage ceremony was scheduled for early evening….Guests started arriving from the afternoon. Mr. Bajaj received them at the entrance of the Tent himself….most of them were his friends and acquaintances.

Godfather looked handsome and distinguished in the silver grey Sherwani bought by Kripa. He was every inch the proud father…..although he wouldn't declare that in public.

Kartik, Mr. Mittal helped him in greeting the guests and supervising their refreshments and welcome. All the guests were sprayed with attar-water (perfumed water) and given rose corsages. Soft strains of shehnai played on the speaker system.

Kripa was led out to the tent by Kalyani. She looked gorgeous in the red and green lehenga, red and green bangles on her hand, a jewelled teeka swinging on her flushed forehead, heavy gold and kundan sets adorning her neck and ears.


Godfather was thrilled to see his beautiful daughter as a bride…..he silently told his dead wife: Anu, tumhari beti Pariyon ki Rani jaisi lag rahi hai . Kaash aaj tum zinda hoti aur usey suhaag ke jodey mein dekh sakti….khair… aaj main akela hi Maa-Baap dono ka farz adaa karoonga."

He went forward to Kripa….she looked up with a smile, then bent to touch his feet.
Godfather smiled affectionately and kissed her forehead: Sadaa suhaagan raho! Ishwar tumhari har aasha poori karein……Yeh lo Beti…..yeh meri taraf se tumhari shadi ka tohfa.

He took out the diamond set and handed it to her. She opened the box and gaped…..it was a brilliantly sparkling necklace, made of diamonds, rubies and emeralds…..with large matching earrings. It must have cost nearly a crore!
Kripa handed the set to Kalyani and thanked her father with a simple smile.


Kalyani took Kripa to the mandap and made her sit down beside Angad, who was looking remarkably handsome in his dark blue sherwani. Angad and Kripa stole looks at each other furtively, checking out how the other looked. Kripa smiled shyly at her handsome dulha, Angad's eyes were fixed on his beautiful dulhan.
The priest asked who would do the Kanyadaan.

Godfather came forward: Panditjee, Kripa merey dost ki beti hai, merey dost ab iss duniya mein nahin rahey….Kripa meri beti samaan hai…main uska kanyadaan karna chahta hoon.

Haan zaroor, aayiye! Baithiye yahan!
Godfather sat down next to Kripa…..
Ab dulhan ka haath aap lekar dulhey ke haath mein rakhiye aur kahiye……he chanted the mantras, Godfather repeated them.

Then Angad and Kripa's hands were joined by a sacred thread . All the guests sat on chairs, watching the mandap which was slightly elevated for better viewing.

The ceremony was simple and beautiful. Angad and Kripa repeated chants promising a lifetime of faith, love and devotion…..vowing to live a life of Dharma, Artha and Kama. They exchanged garlands, Angad put sindoor on her forehead and mangalsutra around her neck. They circled the holy fire 7 times…Saptapadi Gaman. And then the marriage ceremony was complete.

Angad leaned over and whispered amorously: Yeh panditjee kyun nahin kehtey, Now you can kiss the bride?

Kripa frowned at him in mock anger, whispering back: Paagal…..wo toh Christian shadi mein hoti hai…..

I know….but I wish hamari shadi mein bhi kehta…….Im dying to kiss you, Biwi!

Kripa smiled archly at him: Patience, pyaarey patidev! Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai"

Angad rubbed his hands gleefully: I cant wait, Beghum Sahiba!
She pinched his arm secretly, making him wince silently.

Apney patidev per haath uthatey huey sharam nahin aati, Balikey? He chided her with disapproving looks.

Ab toh roz tumhari khabar loongi….Patidev ya Shaitaan number One! …..She promised with a grin.

Angad rolled his eyes heavenwards: I knew it! Beta Angad…..tumhara falooda banney wala hai!

The newly married couple (2nd time) were led to a raised dais, where they met all the guests and invitees, accepting their wishes, congratulations and gifts.

Godfather's esteemed guests gave them very expensive gifts. They accepted with smiles of thanks and passed them on to Kalyani Aunty.

Godfather got up on the dais….Angad and Kripa touched his feet, he blessed them, then gifted the diamond-encrusted watch to Angad, who was thrilled. It was his favorite designer brand!

Prateek, looking adorable in the maroon sherwani, was being entertained in another part of the tent by Kartik Uncle. He didn't witness his parents' marriage ceremony at all. They didn't want the poor little boy more confused than he already was!

Angad couldn't wait for their suhaag raat! Arrangements had been made at an outhouse several yards away from the main Villa. The small building was brilliantly decorated with lights! It was visible from far away.

After a sumptous feast of Indo-Arabic dishes, Continental and Chinese, Thai and Italian dishes…..the guests left the premises.

Angad and Kripa retired to the Villa, where Prateek had already been given dinner by Naani Maasi. But he was being very cranky….he wouldn't go to sleep without his Mama.

Nahin….mujhey Mama ke paas sona hai……he whined and fretted. Then he saw his Mama coming back from the Tent, heavily dressed up and her forehead all covered with some red stuff.
MAMAA…..he ran to her….Aapka yahan laal rang kyun hai? Aaj Holi hai kya? Mujhey bhi holi khelna hai"

Nahin Beta, yeh sindoor hai…..Ladkiyan lagati hai, ladkey nahin lagatey.

Prateek sulked, thinking it was really unfair that girls had all the fun with paints and coloring their skin and hair. Oh well, at least they couldn't be Batman or Superman! He smiled at that thought!

He flung his arms around her neck: Mama, mujhey neend aa rahi hai….
Kripa glanced apologetically at Angad….who looked crestfallen. She pleaded with his eyes to understand the situation….he nodded and blinked with a smile. He would wait for her.

Godfather, the Mittals, Kartik, Raghu, Javed and all the villa residents hugged or congratulated the couple and expressed satisfaction with the successful completion of the wedding.

Angad and Kripa bid them goodnight and retired to the her bedroom with a sleepy Prateek in her arms. He clung to her as she quickly took off her heavy jewelry and veil. Then she lay down on the bed with Prateek, who yawned : Goodnight, Dad! … Goodnight, Beta! Angad replied and walked out to the terrace.

Angad paced restlessly on the terrace, waiting for Prateek to fall asleep.
Finally after an hour, Prateek drifted off into deep sleep. Kripa crept out of bed and went to Angad. He whispered: Line Clear? she nodded.
He grinned with delight.

Kripa went to call Aunty to come sleep beside Prateek in case he got up at night and got scared all alone. Kalyani Aunty was waiting for her summons…she quickly came and lay down beside Prateek. she blessed Kripa : Jaao beti, tumhara suhaag tumhara intezaar kar raha hai!

Kripa smiled shyly, wrapped the veil on her head and went to Angad. He gave her a slow, heart-melting smile, picked her up in his arms and went down the steps leading from the low terrace. He walked towards the building planned to be their wedding chamber that night. Kripa didn't even look up, hiding her face in his chest, listening to his deep, loud heartbeats as he carried her to the bridal cottage.



Buried under the floorboards of the brightly-lit outhouse, a timer ticked….TICK-TOCK…TICK-TOCK! It had been set for detonation at 2 AM….just when the newly married couple would be deep in slumber after their passionate tryst!



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pallavi

Edited by pallavi25 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow... me first... yeeehhhhh.... 😃

okay... y did u end the happy update with a tense note... šŸ˜• i was smiling throughout... atlast my eyes bulged out šŸ˜•
the marriage affair... damn good... angad pataofying GF calling papa... šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

atlast prateek called angad dad... i can imagine angad carrying prateek in his shoulders.. damn sweet... oops i am using this damn word again and again... šŸ˜†

who has planted this bomb???
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg....whoz tht b**************....

aww i loved their wedding things!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww yay prateek called angad his dad...cute moment when he said it for the first time 😃 ...

they're married again!! 😳 was def. a sweet and cute part!! šŸ˜›

but OMG i had to like read the last part twice to make sure i read wat i read lol ...ohhh nooo who planted the bomb there gosh i hope they find out before it's too late šŸ˜• gosh now i want to know continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
hayeeeeee
how cuteeeeeee
Godfather gifted angad another watch....since he lost his old one in the vomv vlast rite?
i wish i had such an understanding hubby lyk anguuuu LOL....and a dad lyk mr bajajjj:D
cont sooooon....nd plzzzzz dnt end it...keep stretching ittt
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Posted: 17 years ago
Pallavi, you've left at such a crucial part!
There's a bomb in the outhouse😲....I can't wait to see how they will get out from there. I hope no one gets hurt in the process 😭
It was a beautiful part tho with AK's marriage, son-dad(Angad-Prateek) moments....and everything else!
Great work! šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘.....Continue soon 😳
P/s: I've alwayz had sapphire9 as my id....so yeah I'm not AK4eva. My location status was not up to date šŸ˜³šŸ˜†....sorry for the confusion 😊
Edited by sapphire9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashasharma

wow... me first... yeeehhhhh.... 😃

okay... y did u end the happy update with a tense note... šŸ˜• i was smiling throughout... atlast my eyes bulged out šŸ˜•
the marriage affair... damn good... angad pataofying GF calling papa... šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

atlast prateek called angad dad... i can imagine angad carrying prateek in his shoulders.. damn sweet... oops i am using this damn word again and again... šŸ˜†

who has planted this bomb???

Thanks abhilasha! 😃 Yes, last time u were first too! 😃

Ending with suspense? Thats the hallmark of all serials and stories. 😃 Always leave the readers/viewers on edge at the end! šŸ˜†

On a more serious note, Damodar will never give up.....😔

Angad is expert at pataofying! 😳 Ur saying damn is like my sh** sometimes when I make mistakes I say it.....now my 2 yr old son has started saying it too! šŸ˜†

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

omg....whoz tht b**************....

aww i loved their wedding things!!!!!! 😳

Thanks iqra!

Lets see who planted the bomb.....and what happens to A-K!

Wedding shopping....I like to describe in details...😃 Lagta hai phir se apni shadi ki shopping karoon...šŸ˜³šŸ˜†

pallavi

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