Originally posted by: mita_mita01
heyyyy....I am so sorry I couldnt comment on the last three parts...Actually I have been really sick for the past week....and as much as I wanted I had no strenghth to write a comment...I am still recoverying...but I am feeling much better than before...So now I am going to make up by commenting on all three parts...Sorry if its not long and detailed as usual...but I will try my best
PART 54
Awwww....I am soo glad that prateek and kripa finally met...they were soo happy to see eachother....Prateek just wouldnt leave his mom...Its understandable for a child it so hard to adjust and stay away from their parents for a moment...and here prateek was not only away from his parents but was kidpanapped and was among stangers...It was a good thing that Mrs.Mittal was there to give prateek a mother's love...other wise god knows what might have prateek goen through..
Monster Uncle...lol...Its going to take time for prateek to have positive feelings for Angad....he disliked him from the sart for some reason....maybe seeing the way he would behave towards his mom...but I am sure Angad has his ways...and he will be able to make pateek accept him...
It was really sad to see how Angad was longing to hold his child his own son in his arms and when Angad was going to stoke prateek but he juts turned away....Its really heart wreckning to see the way the father son are soo distant from eachother....Hopefully things will soon improve between both of them...after all they are blood related hwo long can they stay away from eachother..
And poor prateek it must be really hard for him to just randomly start calling soemone else his dad...he really loves Josh..wonder what will happen later on...how will kripa and Angad be able to tell prateek about Josh...Poor thing....hopefully all goes well..
Aww...it was so cute in the room when prateek just wouldnt let go of kripa and the way kripa sang a lullaby to him...he must have feel asleep so peacefully after a long time...with his mother by his side...
Ufff yeh Angad never leaves a chance 😆 ....but their longing and love for eachother is understandable...after being away from eachother for 5 long years and finally after facing so many hurdles they have united...yet there is fear around them...and at this time them being together means everything for them....
omg woww....Angad saw the picture of kripa's mom in GF's study....and now finally GF will find out who his daughter is...omg cant wait to see his reaction...but will he be able to tell the truth to kripa ones he finds out??...I guess not since at this moment the circumstances are not really with them...
PART 55
Omg yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh GF finally found out about kripa being his daughter..
Omg that doctor...he lied to GF about his child so he can save himself...becaus he gave the child to someone else 😡....but then sgain is GF did find his child then things indeed would have been differant....kripa would be with her real father....but what kind of a life would she be leading...her childhood as well as her youth would be surrounded by criminals...but would GF chosen a life of crime if he had known about his child...maybe even GF's life would have been differant...And who knows would GF been able to save his child from Damodar at that point??...Maybe kripa being with her adopted parenst with a new identity was the best way to keep her safe..
But I guess as they say whatever happened happenes for the good....Kripa's parents (the ones whom adopted her have given her a great life...a kind of life which they would have given their own child...they have always loved kripa alot and have always done the best they could have for her...and lets not forget she met Angad because of her new life...yes there are the negative aspects of all this too...but tehre were many positive things which happened in kripa's life given to her by her adopted parents...
And also the sharma's had gotten a child themselves...it gave them a reason to live...So I guess what ever happened did consist of some good aspects as well...
And now after being all alone fo rall these years...GF is finally getting his family...he surley must have been on cloud nine at this point...
Awwww....it was such a cute scene when GF was looking at kripa....
I really feel bad for him...after soo many years he has finally found his family...but he still has to act like a starnger to them because of the circumstances...the way he covered kripa with a blanket...even the littlest gesture such as GF kissing kripa's forhead and the tears in his eyes after seeing his child and grandson was a really heart touching moment....really sweet indeed...
And what a better way to make thinsg pefect...he got a son-in-law like Anagd....
GF's fear is justified...who would want to risk the lives of the people they love the most for their own happiness....But will the hatred in kripa's heart for GF melt once she finds out about her realtion to her or will more misunderstandings take place...hoping for the best...
Awww...its great to see the father son atleast playing with eachother...and spening time with eachother....major improvemnet indeed...hopefully Angad will be able to build hsi own special plce in prateek's heart really soon...
hahah...it was soo cute to see prateek excited about his batman costume...and AK admiring him...really found that scene cutee...perfect family moment...
Wowww....kripa really does hate GF...she's holding him responsible for Angad becoming Zaib and having him involved in this crime world...how is GF ever going to manage to bulit love inside of kripa....but I am sure kripa wont be able to hate GF for a long time considering the fact that he is her father after all...but why doenst she look at the positive side...that if GF had turned Anagd into Zaib he has also saved Angad's life as well...and now because of GF AK are together with prateek...she needs to start looking at the positive aspects....
haha...naughty naughty Angad...always fooling around with kripa...but love their teasing with eachother..
I really liked the ending when prateek and Angad were playing soccer...I really liked the fact that Angad didnt try to take Josh's plce like you mentioned in the part...He allowed the little thing between Josh and prateek about playing cricket the way it is...but instead he tried soemthing differant and is trying to make a new place in prateek's heart for himself...
PART 56
wow...GF surley must have felt really happy to see his family all together with smiles on his faces after such a long time...
and his longing to call his child beti...as a father it must be really hard for him to control his feelings when his daughter is right in front of him..yet can not go up to her and give her a fatherly hug...and has top stay distant from her...
Aww...I found the scene so cute when GF was looking at kripa and trying to find the similarites between his wife and him...that was such a sweet scene...
Angad cant even stop romancing infront of his future father-in-law??....you expect him to be a little scared after finding out GF is his father-in-law but no Anag being angad is just shamless...and fearless...loll
I bet GF must be feeling extremely ahppy to see his daughter so happy with Angad....atleats he knows that god for bid if anything happenes to him in the future he wouldnt have to worry about his daughter...because Angad would never stop loving kripa...and would always keep her happy....
hahaha... looks like GF was really romantic in his youth as well...he couldnt even keep hi shands off his wife either...loll
I am glad that prateek likes being in kalyani's company....and by this Mrs. Mittal also gets happy to spend some more time with prateek
haha...loved Angad teasing and goofing around with kripa on the dinner table...Angad kabhi nahi suderega...and I dont think we would want him to either now would we?? 😉 😆
hahaha...ok wowww....Angad kidnapped kripa in the middle of the night 😆 ....now why would he have to do that...lol..I guess that's just one of Angad's unique styles...loll
Awww...their romancing was soo cute...with kripa calling him a dakhu and chor.. 😳 😆
Aww...Angad really liked playing with prateek...and he was remembering his own father...
Angad I guess being a human still feels bothered whenever Josh is mentioned...but atleast he is always shrugging the feeling off...after thinking about all that Josh has done for him and his family....
haha..Angad being scrared of the bhoot??...Anagd and his excuses 😆
Angad certainly is a shaitan 😃
hahah...omggg it was sooo funny when Angad was carrying kripa to her room and they got caught by GF...and they both started stuttering. 😆
Aww...really like dteh wya that Angad helped prateek over come his fear of the lightening..
Awww AK romancing in the rain 😳
Kripa was soo happy to get her locket and the picture of her mother back...those two things certainly mean alot to her...and now having them back really means alot to her..
Omg kripa finally found out about GF being her father...
It must have hurt GF deeply after hearing kripa saying that a Don and a criminal can not be her father
Wonder hwo GF is going to explain his side of the story to kripa...and will kripa understand his point of view...and will she be willing to accept GF as her father...Really hope that Kripa accepts GF...and starts thinking positive for once...and look at all the nice and right things he has done...even after becoming a don he has helped many innocent and helpless people..
Marvalous parts as always!
Must say you are doing a tremendous job with this ff...everyhting from the charceter's to the plot, to the descriptiveness of the scenes, and the way the story if turning out, to the way the mysteries and secrests are being unfolded is just exceptional...
Mindblowing work...cant wait for the next part...continue soon and keep up the great work 👏
Thanks a lot, mita! I loved all your detailed analysis! 👏
Really sorry to know u have been sick awhile....but glad to know u are feeling better now. Hope u are absolutely fine soon! 😳
Im really touched that you took the time to read and analyze each part so beautifully! 😃
It makes my writing worthwhile! 😳 I was missing your comments so Im really glad to see you back again. 😃
What you said about Godfather and Sharmas is absolutely true.....GF would have had a different life if he found Kripa and brought her up....he would never have become a mobster. But Kripa had a more normal and happy upbringing with the Sharmas.
Angad is always a shaitaan......he knows Sasurjee has no objections to his flirting with Kripa...😆 so hes making the most of his opportunities...😉
pallavi
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