THE GODFATHER- Part2...Index/ pg1 - Page 32

Originally posted by: seasplash

the romantic part was really awesome i just loved it 😳 😳 finally they are united 👏 👏 👏
continue soon............

Thanks seasplash! I like ur name....it goes with this story with its sea imagery! 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: pallavi25

Does that mean I can or cant steal it? 😉😆

pallavi

Omg lol.... i mean you can steal it😳

Diii ayee mar dala.... absolutely mindblowing part... 👏 Ayee mar jawann their both one againnn 😳 Cont sooonn... coz now im getting impatient...
Luv alwayz
Madiha<3

Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

👏 👏 👏 You're such an amazing writer di!!! 👏 👏 👏

The way you write, his desperate attempts to revive her, his concern for her, that part was just as romantic and a pleasure to read as the love scene!

I love how this FF is so intense, I am writing my own FF right now (haven't posted yet) and I was admiring the way you portrayed the revival scene, how she kept relapsing and they had to think of different things like CPR, turning her on her back, and the warm compresses. If I had written this scene, I would have had her up at CPR, but that would have been so boring and unrealistic. You made it so exciting, my pulse was going up and down reading the parts! You are truly an inspiration di! 👏

Awww Thanks Shalini! 😳 I really appreciate ur compliments!

Ohhh its wonderful that u are writing a fan-fic too! 👏 It must be abt A-K, isnt it? 😳 Writing is very good exercise for imagination and its also relaxing and enjoyable....most of the time! 😃

Kripa couldnt be revived by CPR as she had hypothermia.....I just did online research and found out what paramedics do for treating hypothermia....for writing I have to do a little research here and there! 😃

pallavi

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

ok, so right now all I'm feeling is 😳 that was very very ehem. But I'm glad they are reunited but she's not her complete senses yet, is she? He didnt realize but he took advantage of her week state. Mr bajaj saved her, afterall she is his daughter, I wasnt expecting him to dive in the water. Now angad has to answer kripa and baja has to answer both of them

Thanks Faiza! 😳

Kripa was delirious, but she was conscious and in her full senses when they made love! 😳 She was just as eager to be with him as he was! 😉 she got back her angad after so long.....

Bajaj and Kartik were both expert divers....as I wrote in a previous part, in HK Harbor, when CBI were watching his yacht, both the men slipped out in wetsuits, dived in water and emerged out of sight....

Its symbolic that GF saved Kripa....hes her dad after all! 😳

Yeah theres going to be a lot of recriminations, accusations and explanations! Hey, thats a lot of tions! 😆

pallavi

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part...loned i...cont. soon...yay...angas back 😛 😃 😛

Thanks Babygirl!

Yeah, Angad's back! 😃

pallavi

Originally posted by: namelesssr

The day when Kripa will bajaaofy Angad's band, and when Angad will bajaaofy GF's band is nor far... 😆 Ab toh GF will get it back proper both from beti and damaad 😆 ... not that he doesn't deserve it.
Pls. describe how Kripa lagaaofies Angad's thikaana in detail... he's done everything to deserve what she's going to throw at him. And can't believe he took advantage of her weakened state
Thanks, Pallavi. 👏

Thanks nameless! 😆

Yeah, ab sabka band bajney wala hai! 😆 Poor GF and Zaib/Angad....dono ki toh shaamat aa jayegi! 😆

Oh sure! Kripa will make him see stars in daylight! 😆

Well, he didnt exactly take advantage....she was as willing and eager to make love as he was.....after all theyre together after a loooong time! 😳 she really wanted him to....it was as natural as anything...😳

But Angad is Angad....aisa mauka kabhie haath se jaaney deta? 😉😆

pallavi

Originally posted by: armaghan0

mindblowing the last two parts were amazing just loved it everything was so exciting if only prateek was with them everything would just be perfect

Thanks armaghan! Yeah theyre together again.....Prateek is ahead of them.....lets see when the whole family can reunite!

pallavi

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Diii ayee mar dala.... absolutely mindblowing part... 👏 Ayee mar jawann their both one againnn 😳 Cont sooonn... coz now im getting impatient...
Luv alwayz
Madiha<3

Thanks Madiha! 😳

Im glad u liked it! I will continue tomorrow as usual.....update every alternate day! 😃

pallavi

aww.. they r togeather once again😳. i hope prateek is safe.


~Sana~