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Posted: 17 years ago
So Kanan sold Kripa, Prateek's info/pics to D gang?
This proves that Zaib is dangerous for Kripa in more than 1 way 😆 (sorry for laughing).
But seriously, Prateek will come out of the ordeal unscathed, won't he? Will Josh's life be endangered... will he go after Prateek's captors?
Now you're the one who is introducing twists 😉 , and I'm sure there are more to come, right ?
Thanks Pallavi!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: namelesssr

So Kanan sold Kripa, Prateek's info/pics to D gang?
This proves that Zaib is dangerous for Kripa in more than 1 way 😆 (sorry for laughing).
But seriously, Prateek will come out of the ordeal unscathed, won't he? Will Josh's life be endangered... will he go after Prateek's captors?
Now you're the one who is introducing twists 😉 , and I'm sure there are more to come, right ?
Thanks Pallavi!

Thanks nameless!

Zaib is dangerous for himself and Kripa...and poor Prateek too! 😭

Kanan is the one....the crooked agent.....the double dealer...😡

Now the story will move faster with more action....thats all I can say!😃

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
omg i feel a seperation again NOOOOO well atleast is gona move faster...teh story...cauz honestly nothing really happened cept god father finding otu abt kripa but thats it...no offenc 😃 😛 hope this suspence wudnt take too long
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

omg i feel a seperation again NOOOOO well atleast is gona move faster...teh story...cauz honestly nothing really happened cept god father finding otu abt kripa but thats it...no offenc 😃 😛 hope this suspence wudnt take too long

Thanks sahr! Actually this story isnt a Romance, its a suspense thriller, so the suspense is supposed to be there always....till the end....but dont worry, its speeding up now!

Sorry if Im boring you all! I dont write as fast as others, who hurry through their stories like an express train! I like to write it long and detailed. 😃

Lots more is going to happen in next 2 parts...😉

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG Kanann 😡 grr u cheaterr. Awesomee partt no wrdss relli it was tht goodd*clapping* 😳 Continuee sooonn
Luv alwayzz
Madiha<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
kanan must hav helped the two mobsters in kidnapping prateek.
i really hate her,
and ak again separated
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Posted: 17 years ago
Zaib has definatly lost his mind in love...he cant think no more... 😳😆 ...Well atleast GF made him understand that not only will Zaib be causing trouble for himself but also to prateek and Kripa...

hahah...I bet zaib was cursing Josh crazy in his mind when he saw him with kripa and prateek 😆 ...But wouldnt it make sense to think why Kripa had actually agreed on coming with Josh...seeing that shes smiling and all..But angad being Angad will not get things soo easily hes too slow....specially when it comes to kripa...he can never think straight...lol...But knowing that teh D gang was after him he really didnt have time to think about it in detail either...so its ok..

Aww...I loved the song Zaib sang....its one of my favorites....and ZK looking at eachother during the song was soo cute...but aww poor Josh he was trying to hide his pain...Its not really easy to see the one you love with someone else ...But he's doing a really noble thing by trying to bring ZK together gain...


He blew her a kiss??...wowww...haha....but as they say pyar kiya tho darna kya...and at this point Zaib is scared of nothing...except at the thought of loosing kripa

Wow...they got his rifle too noww??...wonder who told them about it?? 😕 ...but i am glad that atleast he didnt get caught and was able to sneek out..

Aww...poor kripa...I feel sooooo bad for her at this point...I mean Zaib left her again...poor thing....shes all heart broken again...and the thought of loosing him again must be haunting her like crazy 😭 ...

I really liked the part when she was like to Josh that she had the HAQ to know about Zaib...It reflected her strong love...and the fact thats she considers Zaib her own and isnt afraid to admit that in front of anyone...she really is one strong woman...the way she faced all her hurdles all these years...and even now she is trying to stand strong...but after knowing that Zaib has left I see her weakening...but hopefully she wont fall apart...

Aww..prateek and his innocent questions...thatt was sooo cute...I thought is was so adorable when he was like :

Bad Uncle! Mama ko batana chahiye tha na? Main hamesha Mama ko batakar khelney jaata hoon!

aww....man if he finds out that the so called friend is Zaib wonder what he will think...lol...he already doesnt trust him...and now after he made his mom cry wonder what kind of impression he will have..haha...but I think that after he finds out that Angad is his real dad he will probably forget everything...and gain that trust in him...

I am soo glad that Kripa is trusting Josh again...and their beautiful bond of friendship is still between them

It was so heart touching when Josh was like that he was happy that he got atleast some more days to be with prateek and kripa...I can understand...letting them go isnt easy at all....specially prateek at this case...I cant even imagine the moment when prateek find sout that he has top leave Josh..its going to be sooo harddd for both of them 😭

Omg prateek got kidnapped 😲 ...I think that the people who kidnapped prateek were the two guys that came to the hotel which I assume belong to the D gang which GF was telling zaib about...and when they recognized kripa...they probably went to her room and kidnapped prateek as soon as they saw Josh and kripa leave...so they can use prateek against them...for blackmailing or something...in order to nab Zaib...

I think Zaib might come and rescue prateek once he finds out...Omg the secrets are soo close from being revealed...this is getting more and more exciting 😆 ...

Kripa still has three shocks to bear:

1) Prateeks kidnap

2)Zaib's reality of being a killer

3) and that she's the daughter of GF who is an underworld Don 😆

Man kripa sure does have a really interesting family background.... 😆 ...poor thing..wonder how she will handle all this...Well hope for the best...Cant wait till Zaib gets his memory back...his reaction to everything...will surely be very intersting 😆 ..

Mindblowing part as always....cant wait for the next one..and dont worry we enjoy reading ur detailed and marathon running ff's 😆 ...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏




Edited by mita_mita01 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

OMG Kanann 😡 grr u cheaterr. Awesomee partt no wrdss relli it was tht goodd*clapping* 😳 Continuee sooonn
Luv alwayzz
Madiha<3

Thanks Madiha! 😃

Kanan is a crooked agent....greed has bought her! 😡

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: deeya123

kanan must hav helped the two mobsters in kidnapping prateek.
i really hate her,
and ak again separated

Thanks deeya!

Kanan is definitely involved....lets see what happens....

A-K are apart once more, now only GF can bring them together...😭

pallavi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mita_mita01

Zaib has definatly lost his mind in love...he cant think no more... 😳😆 ...Well atleast GF made him understand that not only will Zaib be causing trouble for himself but also to prateek and Kripa...

hahah...I bet zaib was cursing Josh crazy in his mind when he saw him with kripa and prateek 😆 ...But wouldnt it make sense to think why Kripa had actually agreed on coming with Josh...seeing that shes smiling and all..But angad being Angad will not get things soo easily hes too slow....specially when it comes to kripa...he can never think straight...lol...But knowing that teh D gang was after him he really didnt have time to think about it in detail either...so its ok..

Aww...I loved the song Zaib sang....its one of my favorites....and ZK looking at eachother during the song was soo cute...but aww poor Josh he was trying to hide his pain...Its not really easy to see the one you love with someone else ...But he's doing a really noble thing by trying to bring ZK together gain...


He blew her a kiss??...wowww...haha....but as they say pyar kiya tho darna kya...and at this point Zaib is scared of nothing...except at the thought of loosing kripa

Wow...they got his rifle too noww??...wonder who told them about it?? 😕 ...but i am glad that atleast he didnt get caught and was able to sneek out..

Aww...poor kripa...I feel sooooo bad for her at this point...I mean Zaib left her again...poor thing....shes all heart broken again...and the thought of loosing him again must be haunting her like crazy 😭 ...

I really liked the part when she was like to Josh that she had the HAQ to know about Zaib...It reflected her strong love...and the fact thats she considers Zaib her own and isnt afraid to admit that in front of anyone...she really is one strong woman...the way she faced all her hurdles all these years...and even now she is trying to stand strong...but after knowing that Zaib has left I see her weakening...but hopefully she wont fall apart...

Aww..prateek and his innocent questions...thatt was sooo cute...I thought is was so adorable when he was like :

Bad Uncle! Mama ko batana chahiye tha na? Main hamesha Mama ko batakar khelney jaata hoon!

aww....man if he finds out that the so called friend is Zaib wonder what he will think...lol...he already doesnt trust him...and now after he made his mom cry wonder what kind of impression he will have..haha...but I think that after he finds out that Angad is his real dad he will probably forget everything...and gain that trust in him...

I am soo glad that Kripa is trusting Josh again...and their beautiful bond of friendship is still between them

It was so heart touching when Josh was like that he was happy that he got atleast some more days to be with prateek and kripa...I can understand...letting them go isnt easy at all....specially prateek at this case...I cant even imagine the moment when prateek find sout that he has top leave Josh..its going to be sooo harddd for both of them 😭

Omg prateek got kidnapped 😲 ...I think that the people who kidnapped prateek were the two guys that came to the hotel which I assume belong to the D gang which GF was telling zaib about...and when they recognized kripa...they probably went to her room and kidnapped prateek as soon as they saw Josh and kripa leave...so they can use prateek against them...for blackmailing or something...in order to nab Zaib...

I think Zaib might come and rescue prateek once he finds out...Omg the secrets are soo close from being revealed...this is getting more and more exciting 😆 ...

Kripa still has three shocks to bear:

1) Prateeks kidnap

2)Zaib's reality of being a killer

3) and that she's the daughter of GF who is an underworld Don 😆

Man kripa sure does have a really interesting family background.... 😆 ...poor thing..wonder how she will handle all this...Well hope for the best...Cant wait till Zaib gets his memory back...his reaction to everything...will surely be very intersting 😆 ..

Mindblowing part as always....cant wait for the next one..and dont worry we enjoy reading ur detailed and marathon running ff's 😆 ...continue soon...and keep up the great work 👏




Thanks mita...for ur wonderful analysis ! 😃

Yeah I write marathon stories but this story is ending in 15 more parts....hopefully...😆😆😉

and at this point Zaib is scared of nothing...except at the thought of loosing kripa ....u are so right abt that! Zaib and Josh are both careless now...their only thoughts are for Kripa and Prateek...both are making mistakes...which might be fatal! 😭

Kripa has more shocks to bear.....how long can she keep up her mental and emotional strength?....shes bound to break down! 😭

She still has to learn abt Zaib being a killer and GF her Dad...a Don!

She certainly has an interesting and colorful family......Mafia style! 😆😆 Poor girl....kya naseeb paya hai...😆But seriously shes in for more horrid shocks! 😭

Prateek and Josh...how will they leave each other....Fate will decide it for them! 😭

We will find out who kidnapped Prateek.... and what GF will do....

Angad wont be happy to know abt his own identity too....

pallavi

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