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Posted: 17 years ago
gr8 part
ur skool ended already
😭
not fair mine ends the 24 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey
Just caught up wid the fanfic 😃
WOnderful Job
AK 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey u guys i noe its been a long time but i went on vactation n then dance comp. n then when i was supposed to find out about if i won or not my mum fainted n the E.R. ppl had to come n get her cuz she wasnt responding n i just came back so...iam really sry....but i will cont soon!!! i promise!!!! i am really sorry again.


~Preeti~
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey preeti its fine dear...your family is important first...so take care of her and continue after she gets better 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey preeti hope ur mum is ok.. continue when u can..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

heyy preets,... will wait for next part plz write sooon...

Sonia



thank next part will be up soon hopefully.

Originally posted by: madu1006

gr8 part
ur skool ended already
😭
not fair mine ends the 24 😭



thank u....lol its ok at least now u r free rite?

Originally posted by: imdudehead

Hey
Just caught up wid the fanfic 😃
WOnderful Job
AK 😳



thank u!

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

hey preeti its fine dear...your family is important first...so take care of her and continue after she gets better 😳



thank u! n she is better now so i will cont soon thank u!

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey preeti hope ur mum is ok.. continue when u can..




thank u! i will cont either today or tom :)


thanks u guys :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey u guys thankz for ur patience :) but b4 i start i want to say a big thankz to saki (imdudehead) for helping me with it!! with out her i would be like ...AHH kill me!! lol she helped me soo much with this part thank u!!! ok now enjoy!!

MPOV:
"Happy birthday Mishty!" says Angad whiling giving me hug. I smile real big. If I never had told him that I am lovelylady I would have never gotten to me in his arms.

He lets go too soon for my liking and goes and hugs Kripa. That's fine that he is hugging her but what really bothers me is that he kept his arm around her waist.

I can tell that I don't have that much time left to get Angad to actually like me more then a friend. He is attracted to Kripa I can just tell.


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Part 23
000
KPOV

People are entering from left and right. This party is on full swing. There is music, food, and lots of people. What more could you want, right?

This whole evening I have been trying to get away from Angad but the entire time all he seems to be doing is following me around. The one day I want him to go to Mishty he doesn't. Why?

Ah..
You better put your fist up,
Ah, right now…
[One for the treble,
Two for the base,
King is in the place,
You better watch this space…>- 4 times

Put you fist up- 8 times



I walk into the crowded living room and hope to lose Angad. But rite when I turn around to see if I have I bump into someone.

"Ow." I say quietly. "Sorry." I look up and see Angad. "Angad! It's Mishty's birthday why don't you go and dance with her?" I start walking towards the fridge while saying that.

"I will…soon." He says smirking. I hand him a coke and take a sip of mine. "Soon means now Angad."

Hain ek colour ke terah patte,
Lekin sab mein bass ek king,
Ace bhi hum hai, base bhi hum hai,
Aur jigar mein hain daring..
Right now…now..
Hain ek colour ke terah patte,
Lekin sab mein bass ek king,
Ace bhi hum hai, base bhi hum hai,
Aur jigar mein hain daring..
Hum..hum kare dil ki jo marzi,
Karte karte bass had kar di,
Dil agar sachcha ho,
Rab sab karde setting..

[Singh is king,
Singh is king,
Singh is king..>- 4 times

000
3rdpov

Kripa is in her room sitting on the bed with her laptop open when the door opens.

"Kripa what are you doing here while the party is down stairs?" says Josh. "I just got bored," says Kripa smiling. "At your own party?" he says rising his eyebrow.

Kripa laughs, "It's Mishty's party." "That YOU are throwing. This is sad." Kripa looks up from her laptop, "what is sad?" Josh sits down and takes the laptop from Kripa, "That you are looking over your messenger convo!! God Kripa why don't you just tell Angad the truth??"

"And then what?" Kripa says. "I don't know Kripa but just tell him that Mishty is not lovelylady and that you are." Josh sighs.

Kripa laughs, "its not that easy!"

Oh but little did both Kripa and Josh know that they didn't have to tell Angad that…at least anymore. Angad was already by the door when they started their little feud.

000

As Kripa and Josh come down the stairs, Angad goes up to the stage. "Can I have everyone's attention??" Everyone stops dancing and looks up at Angad. "First of all I want to say happy birthday Mishty."

Mishty smiles widely and gets closer to the stage. "I know how its your birthday and everything but I was wondering if I could ask you of something instead?"

Mishty comes on stage and says, "Of course Angad!" Angad smiles, "Can you sing our song?" Mishty looks at Angad and whispers, "Our song?" "Yeah you know the one that you sang at my birthday…or more like wrote to me on messenger."

Mishty looks back at the party and chuckles nervously, "Uh…come on Angad not here." "No come one Mishty I bet everyone wants to hear you!! Right people?"

The crowd cheers. "Our song?" Mishty says nervously. Angad chuckles again and says, "Come one Mishty, you're lovelylady…you wrote me that song remember?"

Mishty looks at Kripa and then back at Angad, "Uh…Angad I forgot the song…" Angad laughs, "Come one Mishty…sometimes I feel your not lovelylady." By now the whole party is watching this drama.

Mishty just stays quiet. "Well Mishty is you are lovely lady then you should know that song by heart!" yells Josh from across the room.

Angad looks at Josh and says, "Yeah…if she WAS lovelylady…but she isn't, right Mishty?"

Mishty looks up at Angad in shock, "what are you saying Angad?" Angad looks at Mishty in anger, "You know what I am saying….you lied….to me…to everyone. And just because you wanted me to like you? Wow that's low…you took someone else's identity and then you pretend that you don't know what I am saying?"

Mishty just stands there speechless, "Uh…Angad…I…uh.." She looks frantically at Kripa who is in tears. Angad looks at Kripa and says, "But most of all…how could you do that to your closest friend? Did you really just become friends with her to get closer to me? There are other ways to getting to me other then hurting your friends…especially Kripa."





I hope u guys liked it :) btw the song was bas ek king lol


~Preeti
Edited by ~DeSiHoTtIe~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww great part 😃
This is mii second tym reading it buh its styll great 😃 😃 😃
neways continue soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey just read your whole fan fic and i have to say it is really good keep continueing this is getting super good, cant wait to read the next part 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part!!!!
so angad found out that Kripa is Lovelylady!!!
mishti is gonna get it left, right, and center.
seems like you love Hard Kaur...lol.......you use her songs all the time....hehe.....😆

Awesome Update!
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