FF: Shattered Dreams.[first FF] Part2 pg2

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Hiii... 😊 this is my first FF ever.. pls read an do comment.. they mean A LOT to me.. n especially since this is my first FF! not technically first.. but hopefully i'd stick to this.. i never do so that's why.. 😕 😆

A shy, sweet, adorable, n loveable girl who falls in luv wid da boy of her dreams.. da boy next door.. 😳 BUT something drastic happens. Do these 2 become one? Read to find out all da twists an turns to this story.. 😳

Girl's Point Of View, basically you.. imagine yourself .. 😃

Where da 2 live/the lobby

Ahhh .. Mom what did you make me wear.. i look hideous i look soo bad.

Mom: Come on hurry up.. get into da car.. your dad is waiting fr you.. jaldi karo..

*They get in da car*

OMG! i forgot my purse inside da house. lemme go n get it.. i quickly run inside..i heard my mom calling me from da back but my purse was more important.. 😆
Ahh.. she's soo annoying cuz of her i forgot my purse.. JALDI KARO.. i immitate your mom.. 😆 i start running..

Then all of a sudden it turns dark ..
*BOOM*
i find youself on da ground, cussing at myself Oww! im such a clutz ..i look down n i see myself on TOP of a cute handsome boy..😲

OMG! im sooo sorry.. (starts blushing 😳) i get up my long black hair brushing against his face..

Meanwhile.. -- Outside

Mom: Whats taking her soo long? -- HONK -- HONK

Sorry.. i have to go *runs* i get my purse then hurry backk..
i start mumbling to myself .. i'm such a clutz, i hate myself.. how could i have fallen ..? 😕 especially on a cute boy like him. 😳

Meanwhile she doesnt see that the boy is standing right in front of her eyes wid a BIG smile across his face..

*gasp* sorry once again fr fallin on you.. i say..

Boy: it's okayy.. 😳

*thinking* OMG! his voice .. so nice n cuddely.. n soo soft.. Hey, what am i thinking he prolly already has a GF anyways.. i leave n get into my car..

MOM: it took that long just to get a purse?

Mom, can we just go.. gosh.. 😆 😳

While in da Car

what;s wrong wid me? why do i keep thinking about him? kya horahay mudje? why? i dont like him so why do i keep thinking about him?what wrong wid me? 😕 😳

Is the girl falling fr him? is it luv @ first sight? Read more to find out..

k. that;s it fr now..Hope you guys like it.. n continue to read it.. A LOT more to happen.. many twist n turns that will give you a HUGE shock.. 😆 😳

pls comment.. they really mean A LOT.. 😳

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P u j a- -* thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww great first part! The falling part was cute 😳 who are the boy & the girl like is it based on a show or not? Cont soon! 😳 x
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a really great start Rids. 👏 👏 👏
do continue w/ it. btw what r there names. 😳 😃
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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Awwww great first part! The falling part was cute 😳 who are the boy & the girl like is it based on a show or not? Cont soon! 😳 x

Awww.. thankooo soo muchh!! 🤗
i will defentily contiune soon.. and to answer your question. No. this is not based on a tv show.. it;s apart of someone's life.. 😳 will tell you that at da end. 😳 😊

keep reading..! 😊 n once again.. Thank you fr da wonderful comment. 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *~Anjali~*

a really great start Rids. 👏 👏 👏
do continue w/ it. btw what r there names. 😳 😃

Thank you anjalii..
Awww.. will defiently do so. 😳
Hmm.. their names.. you'll find out la8er..
thora suspense to bhi ho na hay. rite? how's a story interesting w/o suspense na?
well you already know da girl's name.. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great Start. Who are the characters though.
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Originally posted by: animerocks

Thank you anjalii.. np Rids.😳😃
Awww.. will defiently do so. 😳 thnx
Hmm.. their names.. you'll find out la8er.. that's awesome. can't wait..
thora suspense to bhi ho na hay. rite? definitely how's a story interesting w/o suspense na? u're right.😳😃
well you already know da girl's name.. 😳 yup.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: animerocks

Awww.. thankooo soo muchh!! 🤗
i will defentily contiune soon.. and to answer your question. No. this is not based on a tv show.. it;s apart of someone's life.. 😳 will tell you that at da end. 😳 😊

keep reading..! 😊 n once again.. Thank you fr da wonderful comment. 😃

Np😊 yeahh i'll be waiting!😳 Ohhh okayy cool, yeah i will awwww it's okay!😃 x
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Great Start. Who are the characters though.

LOL .. i think i should just introduce da characters soonn enough .. 😃 😳

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The next day 12:00pm.

Mom. im going out gonna wait fr my frendz you say.. n u leave

your sitting outside waiting ..

*gasp* it's him again.. he just looks at you.. you look away.. is he still up wid what happened yesterday?
i dont like him i dont.. you sayy..

boy looks @ you, n this time he keeps staringg.. 😳

Why? Why cant i help myself? am i in love?

*cell rings*

Hello..Oh hi priiya watzup? you say?
Priiya:
nothiing..
you randomly start mumbling to yourself. why da hell does he keep looking at me?
Priiya: huh? what did you say? who keeps lookiing at you?
no one.. you say..
Priiya: come on you have to tell me. im your best frend
Ahh.. fyne. you tell priiya everything. afterall she is your best frend. 😳
Priiya: He likes you ☺️
No he doesnt .. just cuz he looks @ me? ehh, i just know that he doesnt.
Priiya: Oh well. im sure you'll like hiim..
*cough, cough* ARE YOU KIDDING ME?
Priiya:
you do right?
Hell NO!
Priiya: admit it you do
Okay fyne.. maybe i do. just a lil bit though. he's soo cute.
Priiya:
see go n talk to hiim
No i cant. not after what happened yesterday
priiya: if you dont then i will.
SHUT UP!.. oh hey are you coming today?
priiya:
where?
To da mall @ 3
Priiya: Oh yehh. k. i'll come by your house la8er today..
k anyways. i'll talk to you la8er.. Bye!

*sigh* now what? you decide to just walk around. Until you see him. The boy you
ACCIDENTLY fell on yesterday.. your standing there waiting for your frends to arrive. shivers run down your spine.

Suddenly you feel someone tap you from the back. your heart starts pounding, you start shivering on a hot sunny day like this, you start getting goosebumps all over your body. you FINALLY turn around.

*sigh* Oh it's you Ranii. you say kinda dissapointted..

Rani: Why? you were expecting someone else?
No, No, nevermind..
Ranii: so where's priiya?

i dont know.. she said that she's coming..
Rani: Okiee, then let's sit here and wait or do you want to go inside?
No, it's okay.. let's just stay here

Rani: Look, who's that? he cute?

*BADUM*, it's da guy that you have feelings fr.. or so your just too scared to admit..
OMG! your shattered. you sart thinkingthat she might start falling fr him.
Rani: *laughs* im just kidding.. i know you like him priiya told me. she called..
Oh. WHEW! but how did you know it's him?
Rani- you keep looking at him.. and your face went bright red when i said that. oh well.. look he's leavingg..


*Honk*, you both turn around to see a car behind you.. you glance in it n it's him.. da boyy..😕 why is he everywhere? you thinkk..
he looks at you and you n rani quitely move to da side.

Rani: Oh look, there's priiya. Oh god! she's sooo damn dressed as if shes not going to a mall but to a wedding..😆

You both laugh..

Priiya: Hey! you guys ready? n what are you laughing at?
Rani: YOU!
Priiya: WHY?
Rani: your soo dressed just to go to da mall 😆
Prriya: DUH! the boys need to look at me.. i need to look pretty fr them.. 😆 😉

so how are we going? you ask?

Rani: oh my mom's here, so why not you guys come in her car.. basically mine.. 😆 then will come back here.. chalo?

Okay.. you all get into da car.. n leave..

@ da Mall.

Priiya: that guy's cute
Ranii: im going, you can fantisize.. that guy already has a girl frend.. look.. 😕 😆

you guys continue shopping && priya continues to look fr her perfect guy. 😃

you enter a store and ou see him. the boy AGAIN! why da hell do i keep seeing him? you think

Rani: *gasp* priiya look da guy
Priiya: im going up to hiim
No, dont you say but priiya had already left..
you turn around && look da other way
Priiya: Hi
Boy: Hi
Priiya: my name is Priiya, this is Rani and that's *ANJALI*
you turn around so fast your hair whipping in your face..
Rani: Hi
Boy: *think* Hmm, Anjali nice name.. he smirks..
Priiya: what your name? n ur frendz?
since he was wid his frendz..

Boy: Im Aryan.. these are Aditya, Rahul n Rohan.
Rani: hi, nice names..
You think.. OMG! Aryan.. what a sweet name

Priiya, Rani n Aryan's frendz continue talking.. But YOU.

You find yourself gazing into Aryan's eyes, n he yours.. 😳

*you both are lost into each other's world*

Are Aryan & anjali in luv wid each other? do they feel da same way? would they confess OR let fate just decide fr them?

find out next time.. Enjoy..! do comment.. they mean a lot.. 😳

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