fan-tiction by earthsky - Page 2

we said na we luv it and as hetal said we almost feel as if we r watching d show...i to almost imagine each nd every scene 😊

allright newkidontheblok heres the next part of my story;
Vishal: good morning arjun! Kaise ho?

Arjun: ab tak to thik hoon. Bhavri mera tiffin.

Bhavri: ha ye lo. Vishal yeh paratha lo na.

Arjun: mai jaa raha ho.

(bhumi wasn't even listening. Arjun realized that bhumi had missed one line that is " jaldi aana". He goes to his office and seems to wait for bhumi's call which comes every 2 hours. It has been 6 hours no sign of any call)

( phone bell rings.)

Arjun: bhavri aaj tumne bahut der lagaadi.

Shakuntala: are beta mai hoon.

Arjun: maa aap (dissapointedly)

Shakuntala: ha beta aaj ate waqt zara mera dress store se pick up kar lena thik ha.

Arjun: ha ma

(he then keeps the phone)

(in the night, door bell rings and bhumi opens the door. )

Bhumi: ao tum fresh ho jao. Mai khana lagadeti hoon.

(bhumi puts the vessel and they have dinner together)

(in the bedroom, arjun sleeps on the bed. When bhumi enters she sees arjun sleeping on the bed so she sleeps on the sofa. In the middle of the night arjun gets up and sees bhumi sleeping on the sofa he gets up from his bed and looks at bhumi romantically. Suddenly she turns arjun gets back to his bed and sleeps .)

( in the morning)

Bhumi: arjun aaj mujhe mandir jaana hai. Tum jaldi aaoge?

Arjun: nahi bhavri phir kabhi . kisi aur ke saath chale jaana.

Bhumi( on the phone): vishal tum aaj free ho? Mujhe mandir jaana hai………………….ok phir mai tayyaar hoti hoon.

(Arjun gets up angrily and then leaves the office without taking the tiffen. Bhumi gets ready and goes with vishal to mandir. Then vishal takes bhumi for lunch she rerfuses at first but vshal insists and then they finally have lunch together.)

( In the factory arjun think about bhumi and vishal. Then he remembers that he had left the tiffin and still bhumi didn't get his Tiffin in the office. It strikes him that she must have gone to the mandir with vishal. Bhumi returns home in the evening)

Manasvi: are bhumi tum kaha thi itne der.

Bhumi: who mai vishal ke saath gayee thi.

Manasvi: achcha thik hai. Tumne khana khaya?

Bhumi: ha bhabhi maine khana khaliya.

Satya: Manasvi manasvi.

Manasvi: ha aye. Chal bhumi mai jati hoon.

( Bhumi then goes to her room. At night Arjun returns. )

Bhumi: Arjun tum aa gaye. Tum fresh ho jao mai khana lagadeti hoon.

Arjun: nahi bhavri mai khake ayaa hoon.

Bhumi: thik hai (dissapointedly)

(that night even Bhumi doesn't have food. This same thing continues for one week.)

(another morning)

Bhumi: Arjun mujhe aaj shopping karne jana hai.

Arjun: nahi Bhumi aaj nahi.

Bhumi: thik hai mai vishal ke saath chali jaoongi.

(Arjun goes to his office.)

😊 guys now i am switching my attension to some other pair keep gussing wwhich one it is............

to be contd

shouls i do that? i mean switch to another pair?

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! arjun bhumiii 1st.....!!! then other pairs..... *chanting* arjun bhumi, arjun bhumi, arjun bhumi....

👏 woooooah i luvd it 😊 u such a sweet❤️ nd plz cnt more na wid arjun nd bhoomi 😉

all right i will focuss on arjun and bhumi

nice.just concentrate on arjun and bhumi.make arjun jealous more and more so that he will come close to bhumi and will admit that he also loves bhumi.

all right guys now heres the nest part

Bhumi: Manasvi bhabhi. Mai aaj bahar jaa rahe hoon.

Manasvi: Arjun ke saath?

Bhumi: Nahi bhabhi Arjun ko time nahi hai isiliye mai vishal ke saath jaa rahe hoon.

Manasvi: Achcha thik hai. Ye juice baisa ko de dena.

Bhumi: Achcha bhabhi.

(Bhumi goes to baisa's room)

Baisa: are Bhumi aaona.

Bhumi: baisa yeh ligiye aapka juice. dadaji aapne apni davai pi li?

(dadaji nodes Bhumi gets angry)

Bhumi: baisa mai jab nahi rehte hoon tab aap unko davai nahi dete.

Baisa: mujhe maaf kardo Bhumi.

Bhumi: baisa aur kuch kaam hai aapko?

Baisa: kyu?

Bhumi: kuch nahi mai aaj bahar jaa rahe hoon.

Baisa: achcha thik hai.

(Bhumi leaves the room and goes to her room and then changes and gets ready to go with vishal)

Vishal: are Bhumi tum to aaaj bahut achche lag rahe ho.

Bhumi: thak ku.

Vishal: thank ku nahi baba thank you

Bhumi: ha ha pata hat tumko bahut English aati hai. Ab chale?

Vishal: ha

(vishal takes her to a shopping mall Bhumi takes what she wants and in ther end vishal takes her to an electronic shop)

Vishal: can I have a nokia 9500?

Shopkeeper: ya why not?

(the shopkeeper hands him over the phone vishal asks Bhumi)

Vishal: Bhumi ye kaisa hai.

Bhumi: ha yeh to bahut sunder hai. Kiske liye?

Vishal: Bhumika goenka ke liye.

Bhumi: kaun hai who?

Vishal: (hitting on his fore head) are tum. Tumhe tumhara naaam bhi yaad nahi hai kya?

Bhumi: nahi vishal yeh to bahut mehenga hai.

Vishal: Bhumi rakh lo na ab tumse baat karne ke liye mujhe kisi aur ko poochna nahi parega.

Bhumi: lekin…..

Vishal: lekin vekin kuch nahi. Tumne agar nahi liya to mujhe bhul jao.

Bhumi: achcha baba thik hai.

(then vishal takes her to a five star hotel)

Bhumi: nahi vishal mai ghar pe khana khaoongi/

Vishal: nahi aaj tum mere saath khana khaogi.

Bhumi: lekin…..

Vishal: tumne to kaha tha ke pichle ek hafte se woh bahr kha raha hai
Bhumi: karat ha lekin……

Vishal: looks at her in annoyance

Bhumi: achcha baba chale mujhe bahut bukh lagi hai.

(they have the dinner and by the time Arjun reaches home)

Arjun: Bhavri bhavri.

Manasvi: kya huwa Arjun?

Arjun: bhabhi bhavri kaha hai?

Manasvi: who vishal ke saath gayee hai.

Arjun: abhi tak aye nahi?

Manasvi: nahi aa jayenge.

(Bhumi reaches home)

Bhumi: Arjun tum….. aaj jaldi aa gaye?

Arjun: haa jaldi se khana laga do mujhe bahut bukh lagi hai.

(she goes to kitchen and starts bringing vesssels)

Arjun: Bhavri ye kya sirf ek plate?

Bhumi: who kya hai na Arjun. Maine khana kha liya.

Arjun: mere begair.

Bhumi: tum peechle ek hafte se bahar kha rahe ho to maine soocha ke …. Aur phir vishal ne zid ke to main a nahi kar saki.

Arjun: (getting up) mujhe khana nahi khana.
(bangs the plate on the floor . it breaks in to pieces. Bhumi brings a tray and starts picking up the pieces and sobbing. Arjun realizes that Bhumi is crying and then looks at her. She then picks up the tray and starts walking and shouts "ouch" she gets hurt on her leg, the piece of glass gives a cut on sole . Arjun rushes to her and makes her sit on the sofa. He then gently removes the glass and sucks her sole. He calls the servant and asks him to clean up the place.)

Arjun: tum dekh kar nahi chal sakti kya?

Bhumi: AAAAA

Arjun: chalo room mein.

(she then gets up and is about to fall then Arjun holds her. She slips again. Then Arjun picks her up And takes her to the bedroom. He takes the first aid kit and then finally bandages her feet , makes her sleep puts the blanketr on her and goes to the sofa and sleeps there. Bhumi gets up and goes to the kitchen and then gets and plate and comes back)

Bhumi: Arjun, Arjun

Arjun: kya huwa bhavri?

Bhumi: utho utho. Khana kha lo?

Arjun: nahi….

Bhumi: mujhe kuch nahi sunna. Mujhe bahut bhukh lage hai.

Arjun: tum

Bhumi: ha tumhare saath agar khana nahi khaya to mera peth bhata hai kya.

Arjun: thik hai. Lao

Bhumi: tum ye khao mai dusra plate late hoon.

Arjun: (grabbing her hand) hum ek plate mein kha nahi sakte kya?

Bhumi: kyu nahi lekin…

Arjun: ssssshhhh 😛 ( he takes a small piece of roti and then feeds Bhumi. In the same way they have their dinner. After dinner they sleep)

Hey guys now I will continue my story little later so guys stay tuned and give post your comment
Ok then bye..:-) 😊

lovely....plzzz post the next part soon.

great work saniyarumani
please update soon 😆