Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 83

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Posted: 19 years ago
Day Dreamer Wrote:

OMG........

It's a fantastic part gulli

U r too good gulli just too good



Gulli I've also wrote a stroy called "kkusum ending by me".... It's in kkusum forum...Plz do read it's a request....and other who watch kkusum....Plz read and cooment...This is 1st time in my whole life I wrote a story.... Plz read....


okay i will...!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
how cum u did not continue..were so eager
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Posted: 19 years ago
guli continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
i will dont worry!!! i rather write it when i am not getting disturbed! becuz in the day... something is always up!!! so its better if i write it 2nite!!!!

And since i receieved a lot fof comments.... it'll be long!!! i didnt know i would receieve so many!
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Posted: 19 years ago
oooo lol i c!and how cud u not think ud receive ne comments?man dis fan fic is da best!i luv it!!!!!!an ya continue wne u can!yay!!!!!!im so glad its gonna b long!lol
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea..i have been waiting for like eva
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg..i just caught up 2day..and omg..guli ur such a good writer! keep up the fabb work!

i cant wait to read the nxt part!
im soo anxious!
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea its da bomb. 😉 love ur fabb writing, it inspires such novices like me lol. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Part 110

K is holding the knife

Kumud is shocked

She screams

And she faints on the floor

K is shocked

SO is everyone else

K manages to get the knife

And he and Nakul double team him and beat the crap out of him

Kali runs to Kumud

Kali: Kumud??? Kumud??? Wake up!! Please!!!!

Aryaman calls the cops

They arrive there

They take the guy

K is bleeding like crazy!!!!!

Saakshi takes care of it

K is looking at Kumud

Who is still unconscious

K cant believe what just happened

He is thinking that Kumud could've gotten stabbed right now!!!!!

He is sad!!!!!!

He comes closer to Kumud

Saakshi finished wrapping his hand

He tries to wake her up

But she isn't waking up….

K picks her up

And takes her inside the room

He tells everyone to go to sleep and not to worry

He is there…..

He will take care of everything

They say no

But he insists!!!!!!

They agree

And go back to sleep

Before going Kali checks on Rhea

She is okay!!!

Kumud is on the bed

K is looking at her

He looks at her face

Then looks at her stomach

Cuz she shows

And has the flashback of the guy pointing Kumud

Kumud slowly awakens

She sees K

Kumud: K????

She cries

And she hugs him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She is crying and crying

K closes his eyes

Kumud looks at his hand….

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!

She touches his hand…

K: its okay!!!

Kumud hugs him again!!!

Then they un hug

Kumud stares at him

He is looking at her

Kumud looks down (not @ her stomach)

K notices!!!

No one says anything for a while

K: Kumud??

Kumud closes her eyes

K: You said you wanted ur old K back????

Kumud is shocked!

She looks at him

K: I think ur old K is back!!!!….

Kumud is shocked!!

K: I guess I was thinking about myself!! And today… after what happened…. If anything happened… I would have never been able to forgive myself!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kumud cries!!!

K: I guess a part of me left and today it came back!!!

Kumud smiles!!

K: I am sorry!!! I am really truly sorry!!! Will you forgive me?????

Kumud smiles!!

Kumud: Yes!!!!

She hugs him!!!!!!!!

K is happy!!!!!!!!!

Kumud is happy!!!!!

K kisses her!!!!

Then all of a sudden

Kumud screams

She holds her stomach!!!

K is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

K: Kumud??????

Kumud screams…

K calls everyone

They run inside the room

She is screaming in pain

They take her to the hospital….

Docs take her in

They examine her

K is like no!! this cant happen today!!

Nothing will happen to her

She will be fine

Everyone is waiting outside

They are all worried

Doc comes out

K: How is she?????

Doc: Ur lucky you brought her just in time……. Or else…..

K: Or else what?

Doc: Or else she would have gotten a miscarriage!!!!

K is shocked!

So is everyone else!!!

Doc: She got into a state of shock…and I guess it affected the baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But everything is normal now!!!! I just have to advise you that Kumud will not be able to bare anymore shocks in the future… or else it will be bad!!!!!!! Not just her but for the baby as well!!!!!!!!!

K is relieved nothing happened!!!!!!!!!

Everyone else is too!!!!

K comes in and sees her

Kumud opens her eyes

K says everything is okay!!!

Kumud is relieved!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




The End!!!

(I aint Ekta…. No miscarriages in my story)



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Posted: 19 years ago

wow guli ..... i think u r born writer!!! no laugh!! seriousily...its just fantastic!!! "words r gonna small day by day..."

This is something 4 u 4m all of us:

"A HEART WITH FULL OF FLOWERS!!!!"

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