Kumud & Kshitij: Match Made in Heaven! - Page 2

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was brilliant guli...plz continue whenever you can...it's true...u R better than Ekta
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Part 2

The Kapoor family are at the doorstep of Aryaman's house!!!

They have heard everything!!!!!

Everyone is shocked out of thier wits!!!

Aryaman: Why are you all standing?? Why dont you come in?

They all come in.....

Aryaman: Why are you so shocked?? Because you heard everything!!?? Well.. i am sorry to say but it's a good thing that you all heard what the real truth is!!!

Everyone is like whoa!!!

Aryaman: You see i recorded this.. but neither of them knew i was there!!!!! And your pyaari Kkusum.. who is making ur lives a living hell.... its all Mahi's plan!!!

Kali is shocked... she is speechless

(ANYTHING ARYAMAN SAYS HE'S YELLING FYI)

Aryaman: Everything that has happened w/ Abhay was all Mahi's plan.... but it backfired because she killed Swati!!!!

They are shocked and confused at the same time

Sarla: Swati???

Aryaman: Yes... the woman who was living in your house was none other than Kkusum....Mahi kidnapped Kk and replaced Swati!!!!!

They cant believe it

Aryaman: But KK escaped... and Mahi killed Swati thinking she was Kk... and then Kumud was kidnapped.... and if Kk opened her mouth then Kumud would've been killed

Kumud comes back out

Kumud: Yes.. i would've been killed... and i dont know why didnt God kill me!!!

Sarla; Why are you saying that?

Kumud: Think about it... If i was dead two people in this world would be the most happiest people.... Mahi Aunty and Kali!!!!

She looks at Kali and she looks down

Kshitij is like what have i done?

Aryaman: Aur Chachi.. the day that you thought that Kk was up to something.... that wasnt even Kkusum.. it was Swati.....

Sarla cant believe it and neither can the other people

Aryaman: now.. i know its hard to believe.. but Kali!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kali looks at her

Aryaman: After knowing everything.... and you heard everything.... and KK's words... what do you have to say now?

Kali cant say anything!!!!!!

Kumud: She should be celebrating.....!!!!!!! But i am not dead so she cant

Aryaman: Why are you saying that?

Kumud: The day where i finally accepted Papa... Kali hated me the most.... and i wanted that hatred to change into Love but it never happened!!!

Kali cries and goes into her room

Kumud goes into the other room

Nakul was listening from upstairs

Sarla; Hey ram... what have i done?

They all feel really bad!!

Sarla: All the things she has been doing has been under Mahi this whole time!! I cant believe i didnt trust her!!!!!

They stay for a while and they come back to their own home

KKusum was crying for a little bit... because she was by Abhay.....

The servant tells Kk that they are back.....

Sarla sees Kk from far away from Kk doesnt notice....

Kk quickly wipes her tears..... All watch they are all sad!

Kk: You guys are back so soon?? Wat took you guys so long??

Talking w/ the attitude!!!

Mahi watches from upstairs....

Slowly every1 looks at her.. w/ a glimpse!!!

Sarla steps front turns around and gives them a wink...

SO they understand that she's about to do something!!

Sarla: Kkusum what do you want from us???

Kkusum: Nothing i want you to sign these papers!!!

Sarla: No...!!!

Mahi is getting angry!!!

Kk: I dont care.. what you want... Sign these papers!!!

Kkusum hands them papers....

Sarla takes them.... she rips them into shreds and Mahi is like " What the heck are you doing?"

Mahi comes downstairs....

Mahi is so mad everyone to see it.....

And all of a sudden Kali comes!!!

Kk is shocked....

She just leaves

Kali: Where are you going Ms. Kkusum Deshmukh?

Kk is like what did i do?

Mahi: Kali you here???

Kali: Please mom.. dont interfere... this is between me and her!!!!!!!!!

Mahi is like she's never talken to me like that

Kk: What happened?

Kali: I want you to be honest w/ me.... this is only me and her... Understand everyone?

Kk is looking everywhere...she's bit scared!!!!

Kali: What do you really think of me????

Mahi: (herself) Wat is she talking about??

She's confused

Kk: Think of you?

Kali: Yes.. what do you really think of me?

Kk: U are like a daughter to me.... you and Kumud are the same to me!!! But why do you ask?

Kali: Mom... what about you???

Mahi: Why are you asking me?

Kali: Because i have doubts whether you really are my mother or not!!!!

Mahi is shocked!!!!!

Mahi: Wat are you saying?

Kali: What about dad?? Do you love him or are you just pretending?

Mahi: Are you okay???

Kali: Yes... i am finally okay today!!!! I have realized that the only person who really cares about me... is just not papa... but Kkusum mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kkusum is shocked

Kali: You dont care whether i die or live

Mahi: KALI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (shouts) 😡

Kali: I cant believe you mom!!!!!! I trusted you blindly...........

Mahi is like why is she up in my face?

Kkusum: Kali... whats wrong w/ you?

Kali: today i have learned the truth about you....

Kk: Me???

Kali: Yes.... That you care more about me..... then mom... i want to ask you why?? I hated you for all of these years and you still love me... why??

Mahi: Kali what are you saying?

Her eyes are popping out............

Next scene:

Kumud is standing by the window crying....

Kshitij comes there.....

She doesnt really know how to approach her....

She slowly walks up to her......

Kumud notices and she walks away but b4 she does..... He grabs her hand

She doesnt look at him

Kshitij lifts her chin up

Kumud: Look....

He puts finger on her lip

She looks up at him

Kshitij: No matter how many times i say sorry its not going to be enough...... Becuase this time... i really messed it up!!!!!

Its quiet for some time and he slowly walks away...

Kumud: Kshitij???

He turns around.... She just goes into his arms.........

They hug for a while and she cries!!!!!!!!!

Next scene:

Mahi: Kali... what has gotten into you?

Kali: Today i have realized.... that the person i hate is not Kkusum... but its you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahi cant believe it!!

Everyone else is looking at each other and Kk is like what is going on!!!!!!

Mahi: But why???

Kali: Becuase it was you that tried to kill my papa!!!!!!!!!

Mahi is really shocked and so is KK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay the end...

Preview for Tom:

Mahi: What are you saying???

Kali: Shut up Mom... Today it's my turn to talk..... you have talked way to much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#13
tht was awesome guli444. I cant wait wht happens next in the Fan-Fic😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#14
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue....its 2 good...its awesome...it gr8....show some...more romantic scenes between kumud..and kshitj....it look very cute! lol...very awesome...

Shivani
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Posted: 20 years ago
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OMG both these scenes should really be happening in Kkusum so that everyone finds out that Mahi is the B---- and that she was the one who tried to kill Abhay and all that good stuff. Someone email Ekta those scripts and tell her to act them out ASAP!!! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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guli444,

that's so great & real like we feel that we r watching kkusum...great jpob buddy.,...keep it up...but don't u feel that u should also give some more time for kumud- kshitij conversation.....plz make it...u know without them this serial is creap....so plz make some more scean betwn them.....

once again great scripting....

ektaji....where r u????? listion & read it...may be u can get some goods idea from here....hey jokes a part..lol..lol....😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi Guli444! That waz marvellous!!!! Plz keep it up. I iz more worth then watching that Ekta's crap serial. U r 1000 times better than Ekta. Keep gonig.

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Edited by Day_Dreamer - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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aweosme Gulli!! how do u manage?? plz cont soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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very good job..keep it up and please post update soon.
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Part 3

MAhi: What are you saying Kali?? I love ur papa.. how can i kill him???

Kali: Shut up Mom... Today it's my turn to talk..... you have talked way to much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Mahi is shocked!!!!!!!

Just then Aryaman walks in..... (he comes back into the house.. cuz he wasnt sure if Kali was there or not)

Kali: Thanx to Papa.... i know now who you really are!!!!

Mahi is looking at Aryaman...

Aryaman: Why are you so shocked???

Mahi is confused so is KK

Aryaman: I came here today..... and i heard ur convo.. w/ you and KK...

Mahi: So he told you this and you believed it???

Kali: Yes!!!

Mahi: You dont believe ur own mother!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aryaman: You know.,... Mahi... I am not that stupid to tell Kali just like that.. because i know she wouldnt believe it... So i recorded ur convo....

Mahi is shocked!!!!! Her heart drops!!!

Aryaman takes it out and plays it...

Mahi is in deep trouble now.....

Kk is shocked!!!

Kk closes her eyes and she turns around

Sarla notices

Just then ACP Saket (i think) comes and arrests Mahi

Mahi: No you cant arrest me... they are all trying to frame me....... Kk is the real culprit.....

She is yelling and yelling and no one is believing her and on the way out

Mahi: KK i will take you to court!!!!!! and fight this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Kk is shocked.... and is a little happy....

As soon as she leaves it gets quiet!!!!!!

KK is looking at everyone and she doesnt know what to say!!!!!!

Just then the servant brings Abhay out in the wheelchair...

Kk looks at Abhay.....

Abhay is just blinking

Sarla comes forward

Sarla: Kkusum... i know i am not wortthy for anything i said to you... but if it possible....

Kk: What are you saying??? I dont have nuthing against nobody......

Aru Chachi: I am ur biggest culprit..... I know i said some really bad things to you....

Kk just smiles

KK: Its okay!!!!! Swati did all the damage...

All are shocked when they say that..... i mean they knew because of the tape but still....

Kkusum turns and looks at Kali.....

Kali looks down

Kk: Kali?

Kali turns around and isnt facing her

Kk: Look at me Kali.....

Kali doesnt

She comes around

Kk: You are not like a daughter to me Kali.... you are my daughter!!!!! If ur sad.. then i am sad!!!!!! If anything happens to you... then i am hurt 100x more than you are!!!

Kali hugs her....

Kali: I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am sorry!!!!!

Kk: No need to say sorry!!!!!!

She just consoles her!!!!

Everyone is loooking on and they are smiling and crying at the same time

They stop hugging and Kk goes to Abhay....

She kneels down

Kk: Abhay..... everything is okay but yet not okay... please come back to us!!!!!

Kk decides to have a pooja.... and everyone agrees!!!!

Kumud is in the kitchen cooking.....

Kshitij looks on and smiles.....

Kumud sees him standing there

Kumud: What?

K: Nothing!!! Jus looking at you!!

Kumud: Dont you have anything better to do!!

K: No!!!

He walks closer and is looking at what she made

He tries to pick on it....

Kumud: No...

Smacks his hand a little...

Kumud: Wait till dinner

Kshitij: Please just a little....

Kumud: No!!!

She pushes him out....

He goes upstairs....

Kumud finishes making dinner

She goes upstairs....

She thought K would be there but he isnt......

She calls him but no response.. the car is still there and so is his cell phone....

She gets worried....

She looks all over but no use...

She goes back in her room

She gets worried and out of no where... he pops out

She gets scared... and screams

He is laughing

Kumud: Why are you laughing?

K: Because... i thought i have a little fun in scaring you....

She gets a little mad...

K puts his arms around her...

K: I am sorry!!!!

Kumud: No!!

She sits on the bed....

K consoles her...

K: I said i am sorry!!

Kumud: What if something happened to you?

K: Nothing will happen as long as you are w/ me!!!!

He kisses her on her forehead...

She pushes him off a little....

He grabs her hand...

But she lets go...and she smiles and he comes closer

Kumud: No...

He runs after her... and its a little cat and mouse game....

Only in the room

And she falls on the bed and he goes on top of her...

They look at each other and she blushes 😳 😳 😳

Meanwhile everyone comes back....

Aryaman: Where is everyone?

Kumud gets scared

Kumud: They are back...

K: So?

Kumud: Please let me go!!!

K: No!!

Kumud: Please!!!!

He doesnt and then she pushes him and runs....

Before leaving she looks back and smiles!!!!!!!!

The End!!!

Preview for 2nite:

There is a pooja...

Kali sits next to Kk and Kumud is shocked.... Because she doesnt know that Kali has accepted Kkusum!!!!!!

Edited by guli444 - 20 years ago

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