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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2:

At college, we see Kripa and Angel sitting on a bench talking, Shabd came to them looking hot as usual wearing light blue jeans and white tight sleeveless top. He smiled at them and went to sit next to Kripa.

S: hey Angel

A: Hey Shabd what's up?

S: nothing much, was just walking around when I saw this beautiful lady next to you (he wink at Kripa)

A (giggle): Shabd you wont change

S: no, never (giggle)

K: hey I'm Kripa(smile)

S: nice name Kripa (grins)

K: thanks, you seem familiar

S: yeah I know, you want to go out with me even I want so lets go(laugh)

K(giggle): why would I like to go out with you?

S: well you know more than 70% of girls come to me and say Shabd you seem so familiar to me, did we met before? it's just a way to get a chance to talk to me or go out with me(giggle)

K: wow, Mr Hot has knowledge about girls

S: what can I do Kripa? I'm just so perfect (in a cool way)

K: show off too

S: hey I'm not a show off, anyways so do you accept my offer?

K: which one?

S: you know, date with me?

K: umm… let me think… you're hot I must admit but(Shabd face expression changed, Kripa laughed at this) you're so perfect sure I accept

S: really?

K: yeah

S: so cool, by the way Kripa, are you new here?

K: yeah, I came for my final year and I noticed that most of my childhood friend are there so it's a way to meet my friends too

S: aw who else did you meet still now?

K: no one, except Angel

S: hmm, you know our college hottest hunk after me of course Angad, his best friend name is Kripa too

K: Angad(shocked)?

S: yeah, he really likes her and still remember her, he says that one day I'll meet her and this day hasn't come yet (giggle) apart from this, he is a big flirt so keep distance from him

K(think): a flirt? No he can't be my Angad! My Angad was so cute and so innocent. He never dared look at any girl except me or Mishti

S: where are you lost?

K: huh? No where, I was thinking of something else! Anyway I would love to meet him

S: hey girls I go to go, Angad must be waiting for me

A: bye

Shabd got up to leave when Kripa grabbed his arm, he turned around and looked at her confused. Kripa grinned, she stood up and kissed his lips softly then looked at him

K: bye boyfriend (wink at him)

S(grin): I love it! Bye girlfriend

Shabd kissed her forehead and left running to the canteen. Kripa turned around to see Angel with a shocked expression on her face.

K: what happened to you?

A: did you just kissed Shabd?

K: well yeah, he is my boyfriend no? he just asked me in front of you?

A: oh my god, Kripa you have so much changed, before you never dare even touch a guy and you just kissed him right now (still in shock)

Kripa started laughing at Angel face while Angel was shocked. Angel had never seen Kripa like this before and never though she could change like this.

K: Jaan, that's why I said I changed a lot(giggle)

A: yeah, anyways let go

K: where?

A: canteen

K: but we got French class aren't we?

A: yeah, but it's so boring so lets go to the canteen and have fun, I think Shabd will be there too

K: cool, lets go then

They both went to the canteen. Shabd and Angad were both sitting on a table and chilling out with some girls around Angad. Shabd was enjoying his time. Angel and Kripa stepped in the canteen and everyone stared at Kripa. All the guys were like she is so hot and the girls were jealous seeing all the guys paying attention only on her. Kripa smirked and they both walked toward Shabd. Angad was shocked to see Kripa, he grinned and went in front of her .

A: hey sexy, you are so hot

K: thanks I knew it, tell me something knew (with attitude)

A: wow man, lots of attitude in the new girl

K: I'm like this any problem with that?

A: no, no problem

K: then what are you waiting for?

A: huh?

K: move from there and let me go

Angad was shocked, nobody dared talk to him like that, Kripa grinned and passed right next to him, her shoulder caressed his. She went to Shabd who hugged her and everyone was shocked. Shabd looked at Angad and winked at him.

S: she is already mine (grin)

Angad looked at them, he was angry so he left the canteen without saying anything. Once he left, Kripa apart from Shabd and looked at him confused.

K: why did he left?

S: I don't know maybe because he is jealous that I have a hot girlfriend like you(grin)

K: oh someone is flirting with me (grins)

Shabd laughed and kissed her while all the peoples in the canteen were shocked by what happened. Outside, we see Angad sitting on a tree angry, he looked at the college gate and saw Shabd and Kripa going holding each other hands.

A: she talked to me so rudely, how could she! But she seemed so familiar… I wonder how come Shabd asked her and she accepted, I mean I'm so hot compared to him and see she is in his arms. They don't even know each other and kiss each other how yucky…. I know I do it too but how can a girl do this ewww. At least, I'm sure my Kripa would never do that! This stupid behenji, I don't even know where she is!

He made a sad face remembering Kripa. Even if he was mean by calling her behenji, he missed her more than he ever missed someone. He kept on thinking about it when he got an idea and grinned.

A: you showed your attitude to Mr Angad Khanna now just wait and watch how I make your life miserable.

Preview: Kripa and Shabd were at disco having fun, Kripa went to get drink and when she turned around she bumped someone and all the drink fell on her white dress.

Hope you like it!

Laiba

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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
wow...really gr8 start to your fanfic. cant wait 2 read more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
heya likin this fic! :D

ps what is a behenji? really i dont know...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Laiba

Awesomee fictionn nd awesome start. Keep continuing and Happy New Yearr 😳
Edited by xoxIqbalxox - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GRT PART...cont. soon..how does kripa always manage to bumb int anagd...lol..cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wiw laiba just read all 2 parts awesome dear pl conti soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey laibaa
amazing prts.........
do cont asap...happy new year
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.and a very happy new year
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part! Love Kripa's attitude. Angad has a weired way of expressing things, calling her a stupid behenji and then says i miss her sooo much. anway continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the comments i'll continue today hopefully😛

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