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Posted: 17 years ago
hey
just caught on with the latest parts.. its awesome.. i love the concept..
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anushaa

eagerly waiting 4 ur nexx part...continue sooon....

thanks, it'll b posted in 2minutes 😊

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Originally posted by: ananya7736

hey
just caught on with the latest parts.. its awesome.. i love the concept..
continue soon 👏

thanks alot ananya😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part7A:

(London): Shabd was still starring at Mahi who was now getting annoyed by him. Shabd noticed this so he just helped her get up and he saw she was hurt, her arm had a cut and it was bleeding.

S: oh my god, you are hurt

M: it doesn't matter

S: it does, I'm so sorry please can I take you to the doctor please

M: no it's ok. It's just a small cut nothing more

S: are you sure?

M(smiles): definitely

S: ok, then

M: yeah, anyways bye

S: do you want me to drop you somewhere?

M: no thanks I'll go myself

Saying this she left leaving a shocked but very happy Shabd behind. Meanwhile in India we see Kripa working in the library on the laptop and she was at the same time chatting with someone whose username was killer-eyes , Kripa username was devil-angel .

Killer-eyes: hey what are you doing?

Devil-angel: I'm finishing my work, I've a presentation tomorrow

Killer-eyes: do you need help?

Devil-angel: no it's ok, it's not that hard

Killer-eyes: hey Angel lets meet today

Devil-angel: Angad, why do you want to meet me?

Killer-eyes: just like that, actually I need your help

Devil-angel: tell

Killer-eyes: there is a girl in my college, she is very attractive man. I really like her and it's been not so long that I got to know she is my childhood friend Kripa. I want her to go out with me but she is with Shabd you know the hottest guy in my college even though I'm hotter than him

Kripa smiled she knew Angad was talking about her but the thing he didn't know was that he was telling this to Kripa. She didn't know what to say when she all of sudden got an idea.

Devil-angel: it's not a big matter Angad, go to her and propose her. I'm sure she'll say yes without thinking

Killer-eyes: but she is dating Shabd

Devil-angel: then just wait for her to be alone and propose her

Killer-eyes: and if she says no?

Devil-angel: then just do what you think would be right to

At this time, the bell rang and Kripa had to log out before someone sees her or she would be in trouble. She got disconnected and went to her class where she had to sit alone as Shabd was gone. Soon M. John came and the class started. Kripa was getting bored so she started sending messages to Shabd without knowing that the teacher was heading toward her and once he reached her Kripa froze for a second and looked up to see a smiling M. John standing.

J: sending messages Miss Sharma

K: eumm…I'm sorry sir

J: it's ok now put your mobile in your bag and don't take it out again or I'll take it

K: yes sir

J: good

He turned around and continued the lesson. Kripa was getting sleepy and wanted to leave the class as soon as possible, after one hour when Kripa eyes were now closed the bell rang and Kripa woke up with a jerk and thank god for the bell and ran out as fast as she could. She was heading toward her building which was right next the college. Before she could get in the building, someone caught her arm and pushed her against the wall, she was now between a strong, well-built body and the wall. She looked up and saw Angad in front of him, she rolled her eyes and breathed heavily.

K: let e go

A: no, I came here to ask you something

K: what?

A: Kripa, do you….you… want…do you want to….go….out with me?

K: why should I?

A: oh come o yaar, we were best friends when we were kid and see us now we hardly talk to each other and I so want to go out with you

K: what? Best friends when we were kid? What do you mean ANGAD?

A: euh..nothing… leave it

K: no tell me, you were the one who told me that you'll make me meet my Angad only IF I leave Shabd. But you saw that I didn't left Shabd so you are saying you were my best friend? You're such a liar

A: no Kripa, I'm not lying I'm your Angad

Angad realised what he said and was shocked not only because of what he said but seeing the expression on Kripa face he was more than shocked.

K: so, I finally made you say it

A: huh?

K: you know Angad, when I went to Shabd to talk him about you wanting me to leave him he was the one who told me about you and your childhood friend Kripa aka me. I was angry first as you didn't tell me the truth before but then I though to play along with you. Shabd is gone London for some reasons, if he would be here I would maybe take much time to make you spill it out but today when we talked on net, I told you to propose that girl and see what you did(smiles), you proposed and at the same time told the truth

A(shocked): I can't believe it

K: trust me that's the truth, you always wondered who was devil-angel but did you ever try to understand or get to know that it was nobody else than me

A: I'm sorry, I shouldn't have done it

K: and I'm sorry as I don't want to go out with you

Kripa smiled at him and went in the building leaving a shocked Angad behind. Angad was about to leave when he got an idea, he remembered her words if she says no then just do what you think would be right to . Angad turned around and run in the building heading toward Kripa house. He rang the bell and hid himself, Kripa opened the door and saw nobody she walked out not looking at the right side so Angad got the chance to get in the house without her noticing. Kripa confused went in and closed the door and walked to her room closing again the door behind. She started taking off her top not knowing Angad was right behind her. She had taken off her top, she turned around still wearing her short white skirt and her pink bikini top when she got a big shock seeing Angad standing there starring at her.

Hope you liked it, sorry for the late update!

Laiba😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesomee update...Wooott...bikini top and skirt.. ehh 😉 lmao... can't wait to seee what happens.. contt soonnn 😳

Madiha<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oooo Cliffhanger! wonder what Kripa does, cont soon 😊 x
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg! haha. that's gonna be a funny part. cont soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow that was just wow 😆 god i can't wait for kripa's reaction when she will see angad 😆 eagerly waiting for shabd-mahi story 😛 continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

reallyyy good. cant wait for the next part. i wonder what angad will do😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the comments, i'll definitly update it n sunday😊

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