Koi Aap Sa (A-K) : Part 43 : page 150! - Page 75

Originally posted by: totally_desi

fantastic part ekta 👏
aww anju and kripa's friendship is really sweet
im glad anjali's gonig to live with them again 😊
wow the promo seems interesting
cant wait to read the next part 😃

Hey!

Thanks!

Anju-Kripa = Me-My best friend.

I have a friend who I am the closest too.. I am not that close to anyone else in the world!
next part coming up soon!

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part...waiting 4 the confession..lol....cont. soon


congrtas..u almost have 100 pgs...yay 😃

Hey!

Confession coming soon yaar…..
I know…..100 pages!!! I am sooo happy! Its all thanks to you guys!!

Originally posted by: sexy_eyes

Hey Girl!
Great part!
Take your time sweetie.
Now, About the part. It was simply great. Kripa and Anjali's relationship is so different dont you think? They both are like sisters and it is absolutely amazing. I have a friend like that too. We share just about any secrets. No one knows her better than I do, and No one knows me better than she does. It is a beautiful relationship. Even with Angad and Anjali. Even if they are not brother-sister by birth, I have not seen such a cute bro-sis pair anywhere. Please don't separate any of the six. Keep them together and happy.

I have a feeling that you have something up your sleeve. The way you said you are going to make them confess by this weekend and the way you posted that promo. You JUST might not make them confess in the next part eventhough, from the promo it seems like it. You are going to take us all the way to Sunday and then make them confess then aren't you?? Lol.

I am slightly disappointed though. There are so many readers around here but no one else but these few other readers besides me found this ff interesting? That is weird. I have read some of the stories on this forum and they basically all have the same plot just in a different time setting. But those ffs have more readers than this unique one does. I wish I could do something but sadly I cant. Well, Sweetie, you don't get discouraged by that though. Because you have some promising and regular readers, I saw their comments. Just hang in there and continue writing great stories. You are one of the best writers. Are you planning to become a publishing author?? You totally should. I am sure your novels would be award winners. There are tons of people in this world who read cute stories such as this one. It has everything. Life lessons, Friendship, Love, Romance. What else needs to be added to make your story perfect?

Well. You might be getting bored reading this comment. So I am going to finish it now.

Once again, great part and promo. Anxiously waiting for the next part!!!

Hey! Loved your extended comment. It was awesome. Thanks a ton!!

That is awesome. Even I have a friend who is so close to me. We got close really quickly. It is great to have someone like that In ur life………im sure u know wht I mean! I will try my best to keep the six happy and don't separate them.

I MIGHT have sumthing up my sleeve…but not spilling beans on that yet..lol…don't worry…I have promised my readers a confession by the end of this week and I will make sure it happens!

Well, I cant really force anyone to read my ff. If they like it, they read and do leave comments. I love my readers. They have been really supportive and encouraging. I honestly thought I wouldn't get as much support here because this was my FIRST fanfic and it has already made its way onto the "popular topics on this form" list. I am more than happy.

Sadly, Writing is just my hobby. I have written books before but my own copy. They basically summarize the events of my life that caused me to change in any way. They are pretty personal so I am not going to get them published but some of my friends have read other stories that I have written…and they have suggested on me becoming a writer….but I seriously don't find myself that good. Yes, I write with a passion, no doubt. But my dreams lay somewhere in the medicine field.

And I did not get bored at all. I loved you comment. I found a lot of things about you that are similar to me……lol….

Next part coming up soon!

Originally posted by: desert_rose

finally i got to comment...examz over...no coursework...i am totally free...lol..really happy today [:D/] !!...so much happened in the last part...their baby died 😲 😭 ...so this was the twist u were talkin abt ...right?but i hope this incident will bring them more closer to eachother...and yea....congrats...100 pages....!hope we will see 200 pages next....!!!!gr8 part!!!!

Hey!

Thanks!

Congrats on the break dear. Now that you are free, I am imprisoned again…I am loaded with the weight of five course's homework, a test tomorrow, a few tests next week on Monday and Tuesday…it does not feel like the beginning of a new semester AT ALL…..

Yea…sadly, I had to put that twist in there. The baby was too soon and it was also interfering with my future storyline. Yup…100 pages! I don't think we can see 200 pages hun since there is a rule that we have to start another post once this one reached 150 pages!!!....

Thanks a Ton : BABY-GIRL7, Smileyface, chocolate p, sameira-90, monikaseth, proud_2_b_mysel, desert_rose, kimmu, jdsean, newkidontheblock, totally_desi, iamsmart, desiqt8806, sexy_eyes, Kunal, and my silent readers.

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Part 33:

The friday before naina-dilip's anniversary:

Angad-Kripa, Aliyah-Josh, Anjali-Dhruv left for Goa as per their plan. Angad-Kripa did not know what exactly was happening in Goa but they went along anyways. Aliyah and Anjali had planned everything, as usual. They were holding a big part on saturday in the evening to celebrate 25 years of Dilip-Naina's happily married life. The Khanna family and other relatives were coming to goa for the party. The six friends were going to spend the weekend in goa. They all reached and waited in the reception area for the receptionist to call them.

While the guys were busy discussing their travel plan for the next two days, the girls came up with an idea to trick the guys. They went up to the receptionist and asked her for a favour. Soon after the conversation with the receptionist, the group of six was called to the desk.

Receptionist: I am sorry sir. Actually, hamari hotel mein sirf do kamre reh gaye hai...aur aap 6 hai....

Angad: What? please aap ek baar aur check kariye..shayad ek aur kamra hoga..

Receptionist: nahi sir..meine abhi abhi teen baar check kiya hai...sirf do room hi hai..

All the girls tried their best not to giggle or laugh while the receptionist smiled at them.

Aliyah: I have an Idea.....how many people maximum allowed in one room ma'm?

Receptionist: three..

Aliyah: perfect....how about this guys?...Me, Anju and Kripa will stay in one room and all you guys in one room

Anjali and Kripa: I like that...

Angad, Josh, Dhruv: I dont!

Kripa: why?

Josh: vacation par kaun apni biwi se door rehna chahega...yea i agree we're here to spend quality time with friends but c'mon...all three guys want their special time with their wifeys

Dhruv: and how come you like this Idea anju? Lagta hai aap aurton ko hum mard ki koi parvah hi nahi....

Angad: aur nahi to kya...saath saath rehne ke bajai inhe alag alag kamre mein rehna hai..

At this point, the girls were dying to laugh and they finally gave in...they burst out laughing as if they had been collecting laughter over the years just for this moment.

Aliyah: You guys are so cute....this was all a joke..we talked the receptionist into it....

Anjali: you guys actually believed it too

Kripa: awwww....poor guys...can't bear separation from their wives...

Angad: Acha? to yeh baat hai...

Josh: are angad...no problem...koi baat nahi..hum ek kaam karte hai..inke mazak ko haqeekat mein badal dete hai...kyun?

Aliyah(pulled josh close and held him tight): Don't you even dare.....

All checked into their respective rooms and freshened up. Angad was standing in the balcony of his room on the 15th floor of the hotel, enjoying the view, when his cell rang.

Angad: Hi aliyah..kya hua? Koi problem?

Aliyah: bahut badi problem!!! tum dono kahan ho? hum sab tumhara neeche lobby mein wait kar rahe hai..

Angad: haan..woh actually Kripa shower mein hai...

Aliyah: kya bhai? Kripa ka peecha ab to chod do...yahan goa mein woh kahin bhaag nahi jayegi....oh by the way...kal kya karna hai..pata hai na aapko?

Angad: haan aliyah....tum aur anjali ne mujhe kam se kam 100 baar yaad dilaya hai...lekin...agar woh gussa ho gayi to..

Aliyah: agar gussa ho bhi gayi...to aapko mil kar sab kuch theek ho jayega....dont worry bhai....anyways....hurry your butt down....we're waiting...

As soon as Kripa stepped out, Angad-Kripa hurried down into the lobby. All four soon left for the night club as they decided to party. Dhruv and Anjali went out for a romantic candle light dinner as dhruv wanted to spend time alone with Anjali and it was not safe for Anjali to be in a wild place such as a night club. Aliyah and Kripa stepped towards the dance floor but before they knew it, they were pulled over to the bar by their respective husbands.

Aliyah: Josh...no drinks for me tonight...please....

Kripa: me neither...

Angad: who said you two have to drink but just accompany us.......please(made a puppy face)....

Kripa: ok...ok..fine...i'll have a coke....

The guys had one drink each while both girls had their coke.

Kripa: ok...now our turn to chose....we wanna go and dance!! If you want....you can stay here...me and aliyah are going...

Josh: ali darling wait up...im coming..

Josh and aliyah left leaving Kripa and Angad standing at the bar.

Kripa: Angad...are you alright?...

Angad: haan..kyun puch rahi ho?

Kripa: pata nahi kyun...lekin jab se mere saath woh accident.....tum kuch pareshaan se rehte ho...you want to talk about it....after all I am your diary remember?

Angad: nahi...aisi koi baat nahi hai Kripa...bas...thodi si stress hai...university aur family ke beech mein daud kar thak jaata hoon..

Kripa(came closer to him): I bet I can take away some of your stress...

Angad(smiled): Of course you can...you always do...come on! lets move!

Angad grabbed Kripa's waist and led her to the dance floor. They joined Aliyah and Josh in a night of partying.

Ok guys. I know this is very short. But something really unexpected happened with one of my best friends. She is probably in the biggest mess of her life.😭😭 My friend, Pia, is on the verge of a nervous breakdown and depression. I came home for half an hour and wrote that part while having my dinner. I have been in the hospital the whole day since after school and am going back there again. I was going to make this part a bit romantic but with the problems my friend is going through...I dont have the ability and the concentration to write anything romantic right now. But tomorrow will be better and longer I promise because Me and some of my other friends will try to help pia out of this mess right now. She is about to lose everything she owns literally.😭 we have to do something. I really hoped that I could continue again today but I really dont see the chance. I havent even touched my homework yet! It really hurts to see someone who you love dearly suffer like that. I will give you the limited details once the problem is sorted out but as of now, please try and understand.😊

Angad got up a little worried at no response or no change in expression from her. she turned around and walked back to the table. Angad felt a pang in his heart as if he just lost everything that belonged to him. His heart on the verge of a break. he was so sure she felt the same way, otherwise, he would have never confessed his real feelings for her. Angad looked at the ring that he held between his thumb and index finger and closed his eyes as tears threatened to fall any second.

*Erm yea....I think the promo says it all.....

Great part 👏

Loved how the girls play all these jokes on the guys. Its very funny.

The promo seems sad, I wonder what happened, it seems like he finally confesses his feelings, but she doesn't reciprocate. Can't wait to read the next part.

Sad to hear about your friend, I hope she's ok and everything works out. Continue whenever you can. Just hope your friend is ok.

Take care

😃

Hey Ekta

Srry hun fer not commenting on the last partt 😭 My life is a mess rite now so i was over at a friends solving things 😭 😳 Awesomee parrtt 👏 uh oh the promo... me getting wrried 😳 Awww hun hope u and ur friend are okay.. dun wrry inshallah errything will be alrite 😊 and dun wrry bouh the story rite now give ur full attention to ur friend 😳 ohh and congrats on 100+ pages 😳

Madiha<3

itne ache part ke baad yeh promo kya hoga kripa kya kahege hey please kuch garbar mat karna 😆congrtas for 100 page deat 👏

Sad to hear about your friend, I hope she's ok and everything

hey great part..awsome promo..i wonder what kripa will say..continue soon 👏 👏