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Posted: 17 years ago
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Srry guys for not posting the next pt for the past 2 days. 😭 I was kinda busy. I promise I'll make it up for those days. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Ridz sees Anjali with Kavya... Armaan asks Ridz to be his dance partner at the party in Lonavala... Anjali lies to Ridz... Everyone's worried about Ridz... They hear a scream.

AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
Anj: Yeh.. yeh tho.. di ki cheekni ki awaaz lagti hai.
A: KYA!?!!
Anj: Ha..

Everyone runs towards the scream. They heard it again. They kept hearing it for the past 5 minutes. But then, it stopped.

At: Cheek ko kya hua?
S: Who rook gi.
K: Ha.. magar who cheek kis ki thi?
Anj: Kahin who..?
A: Nahi. Who uski cheek ni hai. Let's split guys. Agar hum sab alag jaga doonde ge, tab hume Basket jaldi, doond aagi.
Anj: Ok. Mei library mei doond thi hoon.
At: Mei garden mei ja kar dektha hoon.
S: Mei class mei dekthi hoon.
K: Mei Sapna ki madat karta hoon.
A: Ok. Aur mei, janitor's closet, auditorium aur baki sab ja kar dektha hoon. Ok.

With that, everyone split up to look for Riddhima. Atul in the garden had no luck finding her even with the help of the plants. Sapna, and Kavya found out that Riddhima didn't attend any of the classes today. Anjali, found out that, Riddhima did come to the library.

Anj: Tho di, yaha aai thi.
Librarian: Ha. Who kuch books doond ri thi.
Anj: Kaunsi?
L: Poonar janam ki.
Anj: Poonar janam?!
L: Ha.
Anj: Kyu?
L: Who ke ri thi, ek project hai iss liye. Lekin mujhe tho lagta hai, ki who joot bol ri thi.
Anj: Di. Aur joot. Oh, plz. Di kabhi ni joot bol sakti.
L: Lekin usne joot bola. Uski teacher aai thi, kuch papers lene ke liye. Aur jab mene usse pucha ke, who kaunsa project de ri hai apne class ko, usne kaha, ki koi project diya. Christmas ke pehle who kabhi koi kaam ni dethi.
Anj: Kya!?! (To herself: Di ne mujhse joot bola? Kyu?) Kya aap janti hai, ki di ab kahan hai?
L: Srry, lekin but mujhe yeh ni maloom.
Anj: Ok. Thanks.

She leaves the library and goes to tell everyone about what she just discovered. Meanwhile, Armaan is continuing his search in looking for Riddhima. He searched the auditorium, basketball court and the canteen. But still no luck. He was heading towards the rest of the gang, when he noticed a long, dark and empty hallway. Armaan knew all the rooms, and hallways of the college, but he never saw this one before.

A: Shayad, basket yahan se gai hogi.

He starts heading down the hallway. In a dark, and creepy room, we see that Riddhima is lying on the floor. There's blood coming down her forehead, and lips. As Armaan is getting closer to the door, Riddhima is starting to get her senses back. Armaan is about to open the door, when...

K: Armaan. Armaan tum yahan kya kareo?
A: M..Mujhe.. maloom ni kyu lekin mujhe aaise lagte hain, ki Riddhima, yehin, aas paas hain.
K: Shayad, tum teek ke re ho. Lekin, who iss.. iss storage room ke andar ni ho sakti.
A: Kyu?
K: Yeh storage room 10 sal pehle baand kar diya gya tha.

Riddhima gets up slowly, and starts heading towards the door. She touches the door.

A: Phir bhi Kavya, mujhe aise lagte hai, ki Riddhima yehin, mere aas paas hi hai.

He also touches the door. Their hands are the same position on both sides of the door. They both are feeling a strange sensation going through them. It's as if they can hear each other's heartbeats despite the door being in their way. Riddhima was still weak, but was able to manage a whisper.
R in a whisper: A..A..Armaan.
Armaan heard her on the other side of the door.
A: Riddhima. Riddhima.
R: A..Armaan.
A: Kavya! Yeh..yeh Riddhima ki awaaz hai.
K: Kya?! Tum yehin roko, mei storage room ki chabi lekar aata hoon.

Kavya goes to get the keys from the office. Somehow, hearing Armaan's voice, Riddhima got some strength in herself. She was able to stand without support, and speak and shout as before.

R: ARMAAN!!! Armaan plzzz mujhe bachaoo!!! Who..who mujhe...MMMHHH

Riddhima's mouth got covered by someone's hand. She wasn't able to move or even scream for help. The guy that held on to Riddhima got something from his pocket. It was like a powder. He was about to put it on Riddhima's mouth to make her unconsciuos, but Riddhima kicked him on his leg, and pushed him back. She started banging on the door for help. Meanwhile, Kavya came with keys to the storage room. Armaan started opening the door... but the man got up, grabbed Riddhima, put the powder on her face. Riddhima fell unconscious. The man picked her up and ran way with her through the window. When Armaan opened the door, the man had just left. Armaan follows him. They come outside to the parking lot. The man puts Riddhima in a white van and drives away. Armaan gets on his bike, and starts following him. The man drives and drives, and gets stuck in a traffic jam. He sees Armaan is right behind him, in his rear window. He picks up Riddhima, and starts running away. Armaan follows him on his bike, still. The man sees a mandir nearby and goes inside it. Armaan also goes up the stairs of the mandir. The stairs were very, very high. There were 90 steps on each level. (In total there were 360 steps.)

A: Ab, kahan bhag kar jo ga?

The man started panicking.

M: Eh, jo koi bhi ho tum, mera raasta chor do.
A: Pehle, Riddhima mujhe do.
M: Nahi.

Riddhima started getting her senses back. Slowly, everything came clear to her. Seeing the man close to her, she starts screaming.

R: AAAAAAHHHHH! Chodo mujhe. Chodo.
M: Chup.

He slaps Riddhima, and she starts bleeding. Seeing, Riddhima bleed, Armaan gets very angry. He starts having some fade visions.

In the vision

Someone goes to this guy and starts beating him up. The other guy takes out a knife and is about stab the guy, when a girl, all dressed as a bride comes in the way.

End of Vision

The man starts dragging Riddhima away.

R: Chodo mujhe! Armaan!!!

Armaan goes to the man and starts beating him up. While, they're both fighting, the man pulls out a pocket knife. Riddhima sees this, and pushes Armaan out of the way. The man stabs Riddhima instead. He takes the knife out and runs away. Armaan is shocked about what just happend. He runs towards Riddhima and holds her in his arms.

A: R..RIDDHIMA!!!
R in a whisper: A..Armaan.

She holds on to her stomach really hard. Seeing all the blood flowing out of her, Armaan gets really scared and starts crying. He carries her in his arms and starts heading down the stairs. While coming down, someone pushes Armaan, and Riddhima falls down the stairs. She keeps rolling down the stairs and Armaan runs down after her. When finally, Riddhima stops. Armaan, picks her up and sees her face is all covered in blood. He picks her up and starts running to the hospital. Armaan starts getting more visions.

In the vision

Doctors are operating on someone. They come out. They tell the person waiting outside that the girl he brought is no more. She's dead.

End of Vision

Armaan gets really scared. He reaches the hospital. The doctors start operating Riddhima. While the operation is going on, Armaan gets really scared and starts crying. "O GOD!! Plzzz, aap Riddhima ko kuch mat hone dena." The doctors come out and say " Mr. Malik. I'm sorry but we have some bad news." They show Armaan's shocked, scared and worried face.

End.

Kya hoga Riddhima ko?
Kya Armaan aur Riddhima ki prem kahani shuru hone se pehle hi katam ho jay gi?
Jaane ke liye paarna mat bhooliye ga
Edited by Durga A. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
cool part...wow thats a shocker...is she dead? noo...please no..

continue asap

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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Kinda Creepy but really well done!!!!!! Plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
OMG this is soooo good! so they were in love before and died and were reborn!?! so cool! really hope nothing happens to ridz, and i wonder who the guy was? please continue soon, im dying for more!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!! dat ws jst really gd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really want to know da raaz!!!!!!!!!!!! plz updte soonnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ap apni ids k neecahy dmg ki siggies kaisay lagatay ho?plz reply me
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its really nice/gooood.well continue plz.. 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Some strange guy takes Riddhima away to a mandir...Armaan gets into fight with the man while saving Riddhima... Riddhima gets stabbed... Armaan takes her to the hospital... Armaan gets visions.. Doctor has bad news ( why is it that for every good person there's bad news? 😕 )

D: Mr. Malik, I'm sorry lekin aap ke liye kuch boori kabar hai.

Armaan is shocked when the doctor came outside and said those same words as the words in his blurry vision.

A: K..k..
D: Who apne jo donations ke liye paise diye the who apki mom ne maana kardiye. Tho iss sal humare paas who humare paas ni aa paye. Lekin koi baat ni, hum manage kar le ge.

Armaan was just looking at the doctor with a what-the-heck-is-he-talking-about look.

A: Yeh aap kya kare hai.
D: Aapne jo donations diye the...
A: Aap ko donations ki pari huyi hai. Aur jo patient aandaar hai, uska kya?
D: P..Patient?
A: Ha. Patient. Mei abhi tho lekar aaya tha Riddhima ko. Usko kissi pyscho dude ne stab kiya, aur phir who..who stairs se gidd gayi... aur...
D: Mr. Malik. Yeh aap kiske baare mei baat kare hai? Aap kissi Riddhima naam ki ladki ko ni lekar aaye. Aap tho akhele aaye hai. Aap ke saath koi ni tha.
A: Tum kehna kya chaate ho. Ke mei pagal hoon. Mei abhi dekha tha hoon.

He goes to the ICU room and sees the back of a woman.

A: Kahana mene tume. Riddhima hain.
D: Yeh Riddhima ni hai.
A: Riddhima ko kaun jaanta hain. Mein ja tum.
D: Aap sir.
A: Tho phir. Yeh dekho. Mein uske paas jaon ga, aur usse hoch aa jai ga.

He goes and taps Riddhima at the back. The woman turns around and to his surprise, it's........... not Riddhima. Armaan's confidence smile, turns into a defeated frown. He backs away from the woman and goes to the doctor.

A: Y.. yeh kaun hai?
D: Yeh meri ek patient hai.
A: Oh.. doctor,
D: Hmm.
A: Mujhe ni lagta ki iss ka naam Riddhima hain.
D: Aacha. Tho kya naam iss ka "Dr. Armaan"? Kyunki, aap ne kaha tha ki aap Riddhima ko bohot aachi tara se jaante hain, shayad aap inhe bhi jaante hogain. Aap jaante hain na?
A: Nahi. Mein ni isse jaanta. Lekin doctor mein aap se kehan ra hoon, mein yahan akhele nahi aaya tha. Mere saath Riddhima bhi aayi thi.
D: I believe you. Aap ne unka mobile check kiya?
A: Nahi.

The doctor just smiles an he's-such-an-idiot smile. Once Armaan gets outside the hospital, he takes out his cell, and calls Ridz. No one picked up. So he called again. Again no one picked up. So he tried once last time, before going back to college. And this time someone picked up.

A: Hello basket!!! Kahan ho tum? Mein tumara cell itni der se lagi jaara hoon, aur tum utha ni rahi. Aur subha se tum kahan thi. Jaanti ho, ki mei kitna parashan ho ra tha? Ab tum kuch bol kyu ni ri? Hello. Hello?!!
Creepy dude on the phone: Hellooooo Armaan. SSSSssssssss.....
A: Hello, Ridz tumari awaaz ko kya hua?
Creepy dude on the phone: Yeh Riddhima ni hai.
A: Tho phir kaun ho? Yeh Riddhima ka cell number hai na?
CD: Ha. Uska cell hi hain. SSSSssssss..... Aur phikar maat karo. Riddhima sayi salaam maat hain mere paas. SSSSsssss.....
A: Kaun ho tum!!?!! Aur Riddhima kahan hai?!
CD: Arre, mene kahan na, who mere paas sayi salaam maat hain. Tho phir itne phikar kyu kaarte ho? Aur vaise bhi tum jaanta ho, ki Riddhima kahan hai. Uh.. I should say basket kahan hai.

Armaan thinks back as to all the things that just happend. Him meeting Riddhima in the abandoned storage room, the fight in the mandir, Riddhima getting stabbed, and falling down the stairs, the visions he had, the doctor telling him that no one was with him, when he came to the hospital. All of a sudden, everything was making sense. Well kinda. He knew where to find Riddhima now. In the abandoned storage room. Armaan tries to get to college as fast as he can, to save Ridz in time.

Meanwhile, at college, Riddhima is walking down the stairs, when someone bumped into her, and her books fell down. She bends down to get them. While getting them, her eye spotted a corridor that she didn't see before. She goes down the path. She sees the abandoned storage room door. She turns the doorknob and opens it. She steps in, and sees cobwebs all around the place. She goes further in, and sees a white sheet covering a board-like figure. She takes off the sheet, and is frozen by what she saw.

CD: Surprised aren't you?

She turns around and before she can say anything, the creepy dude from the phone, covers her mouth. Riddhima kicks his legs and is able to make him let go for a moment. She runs towards the door, and tries to open it. But, the doorknob just doesn't move. She keeps trying and trying when at last.... the doorknob breaks off. The creepy dude starts coming after her and Riddhima starts screaming. Armaan reaches college and starts heading for the storage room. But before he goes there, he goes to the office for the keys. Riddhima is trying to throw anything in his and her way to buy some time. But unfortunately, for Riddhima, the creepy dude corners her. Armaan finally got the keys and heads for the room, to save Riddhima in time. Riddhima tries to run away from the creepy dude, but he grabs her by the waist and pushes her down to the floor. Armaan is trying to open the door, but for some reason is not able to. Riddhima tries to back off from the creepy dude, but he catches her from her duppatta. Riddhima tries to save it, but he just snatches it away from her. Riddhima is crying, and is petrified at the same time. Armaan is seeing all this from out the window. He screams at the guy for touching Riddhima. He tells her to back away from her. But the creepy dude is not listening to all of this, and Riddhima is too shocked too sense anything that's going around her. The creepy dude and Riddhima are just 5 feet away from each other. The creepy dude takes one step forward and the lights go off. Outside the window, Armaan can't see anything. He just keeps on hearing shouts from Riddhima's voice. In her scream, he could feel the pain, the fear, the helplessness, and most of all the scream for wanting her true love to come and save her. Armaan is confused as to what to do. He begs Riddhima's Ghannu Bhaiya to help him to save Riddhima. There are some kind of fast prayer tracks going on at the back. (Like the Hare Ram, Hare Ram, Ram Ram Hare Hare, Hare Krishna, Hare Krishna, Krishna Hare Hare kinds, hope you understand what I'm saying) They show the Ganpati moorti. Then they show Armaan getting up and seeing a chair by the wall. He picks up the chair and bangs it against the window. The window breaks into millions of pieces. He can hear Riddhima's screams even louder now. He tries opening the door now with key, and it works. Before he was about to enter he hears a very loud shrieking noise. And then silence. There's dead silence there for about 2 minutes. The lights turn back on, and Armaan sees the creepy dude is gone, and Riddhima lying there on the floor.

A: *Gulp* R.. R.. Riddhima.

Nothing.

A: Riddhima.

He goes closer and bends down towards her. He turns her over and is stunned by what he's seeing infront of him.

End.

Kya hua Riddhima ke saath uss andhare storage room mein?
Kya Armaan waqt par ponch paya Riddhima ko bachane ke liye?

Jaane ke liye paarna maat bhooliye ga

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, great update..so he saw the future went in it and then went into the past, and it was changed! wicked cool...i know what i wrote above doesn't make any sense but i get what you mean!! and you changed the name! so when i was looking for it, it said kasauti zindagi ki...at first i thought it was a wrong post in this forum but i tried it and it was your Fanfic!! lol...thats what happened...so continue soon oh and please don't be a rape or anything...i dont like that stuff because ekta has made it into a joke and i hate her for it...no offense to anyone!! i just think she didn't justify it properly and ruins the entire story!!

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Edited by *Armaan* - 17 years ago

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