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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
that was really cute please continue soone i'm waiting eagerly for the next part and please don't let sanya get in the way of laksh and kt 😭
please continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
its a really good part plz continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
hey ..plzzzzzz continue soon...ur ff is awesum... 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 12

Saturday morning

Kt,Prachi and Sneha was waiting in front of the film theatre.....It was 10 am..There was a huge poster of the film "Om Shanti Om" at the theatre....

S:(looking at the poster)Ooooh.....Shahrukh looks so handsome......I just love him....
K:(looking outside)Where are they?The film will start at 10:30.....
P:I had told Neev to make it early...The tickets are with him....
S:Hey Kt...Look at her...She is Sania na....Laksh's classmate..

Kt looked at where Sneha was pointing...Sania was there with her two friends....Kt didn't like the sight of her..

S:Hey there they are...Kt...Here comes your Laksh...
K:Where?

Laksh waved at them from Neev's car..Manthan was sitting at the back...They got down and came to the girls...

K:Why were you so late....?
N:Kt, All because of your Laksh....
M:Yeah...He made us late...He didn't get ready in time...
L:Kya yaar...The film will start only at 10:30...Its only 10:15 now...
K:Hmmmm...Kya Laksh...Hum kitne der se yaha wait kar rahe the..
L:Ok..Ok...I'm so sorry dear....(smiles at Kt)
K:(smiles)Hmmm...Now come on..Lets get inside...The show will start soon...

They all walked in to the theatre...They had all got six nearby seats at the center of the back row booked...They went to the back row...Sania was sitting with her friends in the back row at one end...She and her friends came to them..

Sa:Hiiii guys....You didn't tell you were coming to watch this film today...We could have booked our seats together...Hai na Laksh?
L:(smiling at her, partly looking at Kt)Hmmm...well...yeah...that's right....You people also didn't tell....
Sa:Its ok..No problem..At least we are all sitting in the same row....
Kt :Haan...Haan...Lets all sit in our places...Otherwise the lights will go off now....
M:Yeah...That's right...Neev you sit there,Prachi you sit near him,Laksh beside her,Kt you sit next,then Sneha,Then I will sit here...Is that Ok with all...?

They all agreed and sat as Manthan had indicated..Sania was sitting with her friends sitting three seats away from Manthan.....Soon the lights went off and the show started...

Laksh placed his hand around Kt's shoulder...Kt looked at Laksh...He looked at her with loving eyes....Kt leaned a little forward to allow him to keep his hand comfortably around her shoulders.....Then she placed her head on his shoulders as they watched the film ....

After sometime Kt felt his hands sliding down towards her waist and he began to tickle her slowly...

K:(whispers)What is this Laksh??Sit properly...
L:Meri jaan Kt...Aaj main tumhe nahin chodoongaa...(and tickles her more)
K:Eeeev....Go away Laksh....(pushes him away and moves to Sneha's side)
S:Kya baat hai Kt?
K:Kuch bhi toh nahin...
S:(looking at Laksh and smiling)Laksh tumhe ched raha hai kya..?
K:Nahin toh..(looks at Laksh irritatedly)

Laksh got irritated and he leaned forward and began to watch the film by resting his head on his palm...Kt felt bad...She leaned back to her seat...She tilted her head to her left side and saw Sania staring at Laksh from her seat....Kt got more irritated and she leaned forward purposefully blocking Sania's view of Laksh .....Then she looked at Sania through the corner of her eyes and saw her leaning back to her seat and watch the film....Kt became satisfied on what she had done and felt happy....She pulled Laksh's arm and made him lean back to his seat...

L:(irritatedly)Kya baat hai?
K:(smiling sweetly)Mujhse naaraaz ho?
L:(looks at her unbelievably)Haan..
K:Sorry baba...Aao na...(puts her arm around his arms and leans to his shoulder)
L:(smiling)Teek hai...Hmmmmm

Soon it was interval time....Laksh and Kt agreed that they will go and get popcorn for everyone..They got up to go out..Sania caught up with them...

Sa:Main bhi aaoongi...Tum log popcorn lene jaa rahe hai na..?
Kt:(irritatedly, lied to her)Jee nahin...Hum icecreams lene jaa rahe hai...
Sa:Koi baat nahi...Main bhi baahar chaloongi tum logon ke saath...Mujhe popcorn lene hai...
Kt:(whispers angrily to herself)Oh God....!!This girl...I will kill her...!!

The three of them moved out and walked towards the popcorn store..

Sa:Laksh,Three popcorns please...Here is the money(gives the money to him)
K:Then buy popcorns for us too...ice creams nahin chahiye...

Laksh moved to the counter...Since there was so much rush at the counter, Kt and Sania stood back...Laksh got the popcorn packets and handed some packets out to Kt and Sania since he couldn't hold all of them..They moved inside and handed out the popcorn to the others...

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The film got over and everybody was moving out of the theatre....

M:I'm feeling really hungry....Lets go to some restaurant...
S:That's right....Mujhe bhi bahut bhuk lagi hai...

Sneha and Kt got into Prachi's car with her and Laksh and Manthan got into Neev's car...
They went to a restaurant...Manthan,Sneha,Kt and Laksh got out of the cars..

N:You guys wait here..Prachi and me will come after parking the cars..
M:Ok Neev...
L:Sneha..Did you like the film...?
S:Hmmmm.....Awesome film...I just loved Shahrukh.....(to Kt)Did you see him riding the bike...??Cool na.....
K:Yeah..I liked Deepika very much...She is so beautiful!!
M:I agree....She was amazing....The songs are so nice...
L:Hmmmmm.......Thats right...(sings to Kt in a romantic voice) "Aankhon mein teri ajab si ajab si adaayein hain....."

Kt smiled sweetly at Laksh…..Neev and Prachi came to them and all of them went into the restaurant.....
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After having their food they all came out of the restaurant.....

M:Neev lets go somewhere else...Where we can sit and enjoy....Where shall we go Neev....
S:No, lets go back....I'm feeling really sleepy after having food....
P:Then we shall go to my home...You can sleep there Sneha, if you want...Rest of us can enjoy....
S:No...No...Then I won't sleep....I also want to be with you all.....
P:Ok then…I will call my Mom and tell that we are all coming there now....
N:And in the evening, you all can come to my home and have the dinner there.....Kyun Prachi?
P:Ok then....
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END OF PART 12......

SORRY FRIENDS.....I DIDNT UPDATE AS SOON AS I HAD TOLD....HOW WAS THIS PART??......HOPE YOU LIKED IT........PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.....THEY ARE ALWAYS ENCOURAGING....THANK YOU ALL...... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
amazing part👏
can't wait for the next part😳
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
hahahaha lmao!!!i luvvvvvvvvvvved it sooo soooo soooooo much!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
PART 13

{{RECAP:They watch the film on saturday.....They decide to go to Prachi's home to spend the afternoon....}}

They all reached Prachi's home...Prachi went and rung the doorbell...Her Mom opened the door...

Pl:Namaste....Aao...Andar aao....

They all greeted her and went inside....They all sat in the sitting room...After chatting with Prachi's Mom for sometime,they all decided to move to Prachi's room....She showed them around her home...After that she led them to her bedroom....Her room was very pretty...There were photographs of her with her family members,and with Neev..

P:Look at that photo...That was when Neev and me were babies...See him pulling my hair..
S:Oh Neev....Tum Tab se usse chedna shuroo kiya tha...
N:(laughing)You know...Isse chedne mein bahut mazaa aata tha....Hai na Prachi?(hugs her from behind)
P:(smiling at Neev)Main bhi woh sab enjoy karti thi...Issi liye toh... main uski deewani ban gayi....
K:Come on Prachi....Tell us your love story...
They all sat on her bed....

M:Haan.....Bataao...Pehle kisne propose ki?
N:You won't believe this...We didn't propose each other at all....
P:Haan....We knew that we loved each other.....As we grew up we realized that we can't live without each other....(smiles shyly at Neev)
S:How sweet....!!
L:Do your parents know about your relationship?
N:Well....There was no need for an explanation...They sort of knew that we were in love before we told them....When we told them about it after our schooling, they told us that they also wished us to get married....
L:Kt, let us also tell our parents about our relation...
K:Not now Laksh....The time will come.....
S:Kt teek keh rahi hain Laksh...Now you both are studying...So they will tell you both to concentrate in your studies...
M:Laksh,Sneha teek keh rahi hai....
L:Ok...As you all wish....

Kt noticed a shy smile appearing in Sneha's lips when Manthan told this..When Kt looked at Manthan she saw him looking at Sneha with lots of love in his eyes....But he couldn't see Sneha smile as she had her head turned towards Laksh..

S:Acha....Yeh bataao Laksh...Tumhe Kt se pyaar kab hua tha..?
L:Remember our first day in college....I was playing football when Neev called me to introduce me to all of you...The first time my eyes fell upon Kt, I was totally in love with her..Kt tum bataao... when did you start loving me....?
K:(shyly smiling at Laksh)That day itself...But before you saw me,I saw you at the football ground....and well....I also fell in love with you.....
P:Yeah....You must have seen her face when she was staring at you Laksh.....
K:Prachi.....(and she pinched her)
P:Aah...What is this yaar...?Well...You guys sit here..I will go to the kitchen and ask Mom to get something to drink for us.....
N:I will also come with you....

They went downstairs...

K:Laksh, I want to talk to you....Lets move to the balcony....
L:Ok Kt...(To Manthan)We will come now (and he gets up)

Kt and Laksh moved to the balcony of that bedroom....And Kt kept the door to the balcony half shut..Then she went to the door and looked inside so that Sneha and Manthan won't see her.....

L:(whispers from behind)What are you doing Kt?
K:Shhhh....I will tell you....Please keep quiet..

Meanwhile in the room...

When everybody left, Sneha and Manthan began to feel awkward because they were the only ones left....At first they didn't talk with each other for sometime...Manthan was looking at her....Sneha started to play with her bangles in a casual way without looking at him...

M: (nervously)Sneha....
S:(looking at Manthan)..Haan...
M:Sorry....
S:Sorry kyun.....?
M:For holding your hand in the theatre.....I did it without knowing....sorry....
S:(becomes nervous) Its ok...

L:(widening his eyes,whispers)What?
K:(smiling)Shhh....Listen....

M:You didn't misunderstand me na...(now looking into her eyes with the same loving gaze)
S:(looking away)No...No....Not at all......
M:So then.....

But at the same time Neev and Prachi came inside with their drinks....

K:(turning to Laksh)Did you understand something..?
L:(confusedly)Nothing..
K:Laksh I think they are in love...
L:But how can you say so...?
K:I think so...You ask Manthan about it?I will ask her..ok..
L:Ok..Lets go inside...

They walked inside....They chatted with each other about many things...Meanwhile Kt noticed both Manthan and Sneha...But there was no such reactions in their faces like before...In the evening they had tea with Prachi's family...Then they went to Neev's home...
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The time was 7 o clock

They were having dinner at Neev's home...His Mom Niharika was serving food for all of them...

Ni:Neev beta,You were saying that you are going for a camp from your college tomorrow...
N:Haan Maa, koi social service camp hai...All the first years have to go..Its compulsory..
M:How boring..!
L:Its for one week...But we can all enjoy...At least we all will be together...(looks at Kt)
K:(thinks "that Sania will also be coming")Yeah..thats right....
P:We have got to pack our luggage then...
S:Hmmmm....Anyway Prachi we have to leave soon...We have to reach our hostel before 7.30..
Ni:Koi baat nahin...Pehle khaana to khao beta...

After having dinner,Sneha,Prachi and Kt left soon from Neev's home since they were late...

Neev had gone to get some drinks for them while Manthan and Laksh were standing in the terrace.........

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END OF PART 13......

WHAT DO YOU THINK?WHEN LAKSH ASKS MANTHAN,WHAT WILL HE SAY..?DO YOU THINK HE LOVES SNEHA?DOES SNEHA LOVE HIM?FIND OUT IN THE NEXT PART WHICH WILL BE UP TOMORROW……….. 😉

PLEASE DON'T FORGET TO GIVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS.........THANK YOU ALL FOR GIVING NICE COMMENTS.......... 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved it 👏
can't wait for the next part😳
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing part!!
totally luved it...!! ..continue soon..!! 👏

love,aliya 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
Amazing update as usual totally rocked please update soon

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