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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
You have tremendous potential as a writer! Your descriptions are really nice. That was a wonderful part! 👏 Keep it up!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey great intro ...continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tava

hey wonderful start can't wait for the next part 😊

Thanks😃 ..Shud Be Up Tommorow/Tonighy x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: NYC_gurl_17

hey! just read the first part, i loved it. the emotions were very well portrayed. i could feel the tension between a-k when kripa was on top of angad 😍 . very good beginning.

Thankyouu!😃 Lol ..Yeaa I Was Wishing I Was Kripa At That Moment😍 x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmagic4u

You have tremendous potential as a writer! Your descriptions are really nice. That was a wonderful part! 👏 Keep it up!

Awww Thnks😊..That Really means Alot Too Me! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt intro...cont. soon 😃

Thnks! Will Do😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great intro ...continue soon 😊

Thanks!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part Two-

They lay there admiring each other for what seemed like hours, Until they were jerked back to reality by the sound of a taxi beeping at them.

'Omg… I'm so sorry I just sort of tripped again!' she said as they finally stood up ...she could feel her cheeks reddening at his piercing gaze.

'Whoa, she's got one fine body…boy did he wish that he was that black dress. He stopped checking her out at the mumbling of some words…he caught the word sorry but was way too busy just admiring her face. 'What the hell are you doing man…! Stop thinking and talk'

"Oh don't worry I didn't mind at all I could lay there all day" …'Oh no! Did I just say that aloud? Shit! Quick think of something else too say! Her cheeks further burned in embarrassment as he was inwardly cursing himself.

Urmm...Im Angad, Angad Khanna and you are?

She breathed a sigh of relief that he didn't flirt with her. 'Im Kripa Sharma…Nice to meet you.'

Nice name Ms Sharma… he said with his signature smirk. Kripa muttered a 'thanks'.

They both turned their attention too the grey sky the as the bellowing of thunder pierced their ears. This brought a new wave of rain … but it was sharp and when it came in contact with anything it pierced like daggers. The goosepimples all over Kripa's body were going too burst in agony, she freezing, Angad's touch had warmed her up before.

Angad noticing her state instinctively grasped her hand and made her run with him. The same currents ran through her yet she ignored them this time. They stopped under a shop front closed due do the bad weather. Kripa and Angad started laughing at them selves at the emergency dash too shelter …yet secretly they were admiring each other. The laughter soon died down and turned into an awkward silence.

Kripa shuddered …and Angad being the gentlemen he was gave her his jacket. Her eyes made a plea of protest; he forcibly put it on her noticing her stupid ness to wear such attire in this weather. 'That jacket was MADE for her…she looks so cute'.

Angad then heard a giggle from Kripa. "Oh no did I just say that aloud?" Kripa smiled and replied with a nod…smirking at the fact he was lightly blushing.

"Yeah…anyway how come you're wearing such a short dress in this weather Kripa?"

"Ohh… well I was going to the club and then…" she blushed remembering how she lay on him.

Angad grinned and said "so friends right?"…
"Yeah. Sure".

"So new friend, do you want a lift? I'm sure you wont want too go walking in this weather."

Kripa hesitated of course she didn't go around taking lifts from random people, yet there was something different about this guy he seemed genuinely nice…
As she stood there pondering Angad noticed her hesitance and said "don't worry you can trust me I wont kidnap you love" Kripa laughed and finally agreed.


So was this the start of just friendship or something even deeper?

Thanks for all your comments guys! Really means a lot too me! 😃 Tell me your opinions guys and hope you liked it.

Lovee Puja x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww! How adorable! 😳

I absolutely loved this chapter. The cutest thing is how Angad keeps saying things aloud which he meant to say in his mind, lol. Great work. Please update soon!
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part..continue soon

Thnks😃 x

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