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Posted: 17 years ago
it was too good!!continue soon!! 👏

-abhi
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Posted: 17 years ago
It was awsome nikky....sorry couldn't comment for last few days...i was very busy....but finally catch up all of them and i would say it was very well written and very very romantic.... 😳 😳 😳 keep it up.. 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awwww veryy romantic 😳 wrotee well 👏 x
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

it was too good!!continue soon!! 👏

-abhi

thnak u!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Angelic_Pari

It was awsome nikky....sorry couldn't comment for last few days...i was very busy....but finally catch up all of them and i would say it was very well written and very very romantic.... 😳 😳 😳 keep it up.. 😉

Pari

i am glad u liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!and u commented!

thank u!

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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Awwww veryy romantic 😳 wrotee well 👏 x

thank u!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: saira_1

👏 👏 👏
cont.soon 😳 !

thnak u!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww nikky awwwwww the part where yu used "LakshyBoo" .. that was soo sweet cause thats what i ALWAYS call him aww i own that awwww .. i loved that part !
oooh the soccer game was very hot, and the cookoff was too cute !
fabulous job .. please update soon hun<3
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: babypink<3

awwwwwwwwwww nikky awwwwww the part where yu used "LakshyBoo" .. that was soo sweet cause thats what i ALWAYS call him aww i own that awwww .. i loved that part !
oooh the soccer game was very hot, and the cookoff was too cute !
fabulous job .. please update soon hun<3

awwww!Thanks for the comment.I am glad u liked it!Just imagin 4 hot guys shirtless playing soccer.HAWWWWWWW!lol

thanks for the ocmment!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 10



Kt was sitting otuside on the swingy thing in the backyard, Laksh's freinds had left now and it was 10 pm.The full moon was glowing and the little stars were sparkling.It looked beutifull.Kt swung on the little swing thing as she watched Laksh in the kitchen washing the dishes.He looke dhot washing dishesAfter he finsihed he looked around for Kt.He looked in her room, his room,the washrooms, EVERYWHERE!He couldn't find her.He walke dinto the back yard to look at the beutifull night sky, not knowing Kt was thier.He looked around the yard and spotted Kt.

He smiled at her."I was looking for you."Kt looked up at him as he neared her,"I was waiting for you."She said.

Laksh sat down next to her.He then began to talk,"This night is beutifull.I love it.It's even better because you'r here with me.You'r beutifull face is just as beutifull as the moon, the stars, everything."

Kt's eye's got filled with tears.He was so sweet to her.Kt didn't know what to say right at this moment.So, so she held on to his hand, Laksh was startled a bit, he thoguth she would be to shy to react.Laksh squeezed her hand tight.Kt rested her head on Laksh's shoulder and closed her eye's.

"Why are you so nice?"Kt asked him, she looked up at his face, he had a smug look on his face.Kt cuddled into him.Laksh shifted a little bit, he layed on the swing and pulled Kt's ontop of himself.He kissed her cheak."I don't konw."he shrugged.

Laksh twined his fingers with Kt's and pulled her hand up to his lip's.He kissed her hand.He kissed hr shoulder, neck and then chin.He was about to kiss her lip's but did't.He smiled at her, she was confused, why didn't he kiss her?It was the perfect moment?The thing was that Laksh wanted her to wait. he wanted to make her wait for him, he wanted her to want the kiss so bad that she couldn't handle it anymore, he wanted to torture her.

Laksh carried Kt up to her room and layed her on her bed.He tucked he rin and turned of the light saying"Good night, Sweet dreams".



A few days had passed now, Kt and Laksh had become closer to eachother, they knew almost everythign abotu eachother and they began to love eachother more and more everyday.It was the 9th day now and the Virani parivar would be coming home in 1 more days.

It was around 9 pm, Kt was prepairing breakfest for The virani's who would be coming home the next morning or so.She prepaired osme breakfest and put it into the fridge and went to her room.She rested on her bed looking at a picture of Laksh wich she kept under her pillow.Laksh was in his room looking at a picture of Kt wich he had.They both fell asleep at the same time, holding the pictures close to their hearts...

1 am~

Kt woke up and so did Laksh, at the same time.They felt weird.They felt like they needed to be with eachother.Kt controlled the feeling but Laksh couldn't help it he got up and barged into Kt's room.It was dark but the light of the moon lit up the room so they could clrearly see eachother.

Kt got up and looked at Laksh.Laksh came closer to her and held her waist.Kt couldn't help er self eaither she clung on to his neck.Both of thier heartbeat's were louder and faster now.Laksh breathed heavily while Kt practikly couldn't breath at all.

"I want to kiss you, Kt."Laksh said to her in a deep romantic voice.His eye's were intense, filled with love, love for her."I need you to kiss me,"Kt siad.Laksh did what he needed to do.He kissed her hard and un controlled.Kt couldn't stand it, she kissed him back with the equall ammount of streanght.They both collapsed on the bed with thier lip' still rubbing against eachother's.After the long passioaante kiss Laksh and Kt fell asleep in eachothers arms.

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I hope you guys liked it!Please leave ur comments!

Edited by ~NiKkY~ - 17 years ago

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