Hey Guys,
I have decided to write a new fanfic with characters mixed from 2 or three different shows…It's kind of like a mix but since it's my first fanfic please bear with me….i have read so many great fanfics and I had a lot of ideas too so I was like why not write my own....Guys I'll write the character sketch and you tell me if I should continue…….and the ones whose writing I admire so much…I would really appreciate if you would comment….My title is:
~~~~Ajeeb Rishtey ~~~~
Ok so it's like this: The setting is in London. Both their parents were best friends since collage so they when they graduated they got married together as well. When both Angad and Kripa were 8, angad's family had to move to Chicago, Illinois. And now they meet again. But are they the same as when they were kids?
The Sharma's
Sujal Sharma, 26: The oldest in the family after their mom and dad passed away during a plane crash. He stays out a lot because he has to take care of his father's business. He became very successful and famous in the business world, he is the youngest billionaire in London He is a very good looking man. He loves his wife, brother and Sister a lot. Kripa is the apple of his eye and he pampers her so much.
Kashish Sharma, 24: She is the wife of Sujal and loves her family a lot. She takes care of kaavya and kripa all the time. She loves them. She is a house wife but also helps put Sujal in his business. She is a great Bhabi. She loves kripa often give her advice. She is a mother like figure to kaavya and kripa. She has been married to Sujal for 2 years.
Kaavya Sharma, 19: Kripa and Kavya are fraternal twins. His is older by 5 minutes. He is going to start his senior year at M.A high school with kripa. He is the hottest and most popular guy in his school. He is the captain of the football team and is very famous between the girls. Most girls just drool over his one look. He is sexy and has an amazing fashion sense as well. His weakest point is his little sister Kripa. He loves her and is very over protective of her. He loves his bhai and bhabi a lot.
Kripa Sharma, 19: She is the other twin and loves her brothers and bhabi a lot. She is traditional yet modern. She wears fashionable clothes and name brand clothes. She is the most popular girl at her school. She is pampered by both her brothers and gets what ever she wants. She is a bright student and she mostly hangs out with her brother and other frenz in school. She believes in love and thinks that there is someone made for her and she is waiting for him. She has a bubbly personality but can be very stubborn and sometimes she gives a lot of attitude. She loves John Abraham.
The Khannas
Dilip Khanna and Naina Khanna: They are the parents of Angad and Anjali Khanna. They are very good parents and love their children a lot. They are mostly out on business so the kids are alone all the time. They give their kids whatever they want. They are not really that important. They will only be included in some part. They are the same from KYPH.
Angad Khanna, 19: He is a hot and sexy guy. He is like a Casanova and changes girlfriend a lot. He loves his little sister Anjali a lot and is very protective of her. Girls drool over him and he plays around with them. He doesn't believe in love. He just finished his junior year and his family is moving to London so he will be going to M.A high school with his buddy Kavya and his sis. He loves to play guitar and he sings really good.
Anjali Khanna, 18: She is a very modern and hot girl. She loves her brother angad a lot. She can make any boy fall for her. She loves to partii and hangs out with her friends a lot. Sometimes she parties so much that she comes back home in the morning but she can always count on her brother to save her. She gets spoiled by him. But however she acts doesn't change the fact that she believes the fact that one day her prince charming will come and take her away.
Aaliya Shinghania, 19: Friend of Kripa, Kaavya, and other people in the gang.
Prithivi Singh {Amit Tandon}, 19: He is part of the gang. Has a crush on Aaliya. Only Kripa knows that he likes Aaliya.
Prem Bajaj{Manoj Bohra}, 19: Part of the gang. Is a Casanova and everything but it has changed recently since he has been secretly in love with Mukti. No one knows that except for Kripa.
Mukti Deshmukh {Mukti in KZK}, 19: Part of the gang. And the smartest and gets the most marks in her classes.
Guys what do you think? Should I write? It's my first one so plz comment.
Part One
It's the second week of summer vacation and things seem rather quite this morning at the Sharma house. We see a big compound and inside is a extordinary 3 storied white house in the middle of yards with fresh green grass, flowers and a fountain in the middle surrounded with small rocks and flowers. There is a big pool in the backyard with a basket ball court and a pretty outdoor swing. We move on inside the large antique bronze colored door and we see a big hall with French dcor. Everything seems perfectly neat and organized. We move on up stairs to the second floor and we see 4 large bedroom doors. We enter a room and see a white colored wall covered with framed photos and a big bed in the middle surrounded by a dresser study table, arm chairs with a tea table. We move towards the bed and we see a figure lying there with only his shorts. We move on to the night table next to his bed and we see a picture of a couple in their wedding outfits. The alarm suddenly rings causing him to moan and he moves his arm forward to stop the sound. Then he goes back to sleep. Just then the bathroom door opens and a tall woman in a yellow chudidaar comes out. She has fair shin and her hair is wet from a recent shower. She looks at the Sujal still sleeping on the bed and moves towards him. "uff, yeh abhi tak so rahe hai" She pulls of the covers and struggles waking him up. Then she gets an idea and slowly moves to his face and pecks his cheek and her wet hair slowly brushes pact his eyes and cheeks. He jerks up and tries to catch her but she runs out screaming "main mama aur papa ke kamre me hoon aap jaldi aao". He groans and gets out of the bed and heads to the bathroom. Now moving on the room next to his, we walk in and we see posters of super models wearing short clothes and other posters of him hanging on the blue colored walls. We then see a queen sized bed surrounded by matching furniture. The room looks real messy with clothes all over the floor. His pillows are on the floor and his sheets are all messy on the bed. We can't see his face because he has a pillow covering it but his cell phone rings playing the tune of akon's nobody wanna see use together……He throws his pillow on the floor "s***" and throws his left arm towards the phone. He moves forward and sees it's Kripa and picks it up. "WTF I was sleeping" he mumbles into the phone "Kaavya, utho it's mom and dads wedding Anniversary today, and you better not go back to sleep like last time! God you're so lazy". "Okay Okay" he throws his phone somewhere on the bed and heads towards the bathroom with his eyes barely open. Next the scene moves on to a room with pink walls. And there is a huge circular bed in the middle. The walls have pictures and posters all over the walls. The bed is covered with stuffed bears. The bathroom door opens and a petite girl walks out in a pink bath robe with a towel in her hands. Her hair is dripping water. She bends forward and flips her hair back revealing her beautiful face and it's none other than kripa. She walks up to her dressing table and blow dries her hair. She brushes it again and walks into her walk-in-closet. She looks at all her clothes and decides to wear a light pink tank top and a black knee length skirt with pink laces. She walks back to the dressing table and puts on silver hoops with a small pink jewel. She applies some blush, mascara and for a final touch she applied a light coat of pink lip gloss on her naturally pink lips. She looked at herself one last time and says "awesome krips". She quickly ran out her door then stopped right in front of a door and slowly turned the knob. She walks into the room furnished in matching beige color. She walks up to the bed and tearfully looks at the picture frame with a garland hung above it. "Happy Anniversary Mama, happy Anniversary Papa..." She starts sobbing silently "I miss you Papa" and in no time she bursts out crying. She just stood there and her mind drifted away and she remembered the time when she found out her parents died.
Flashback: 3 years ago
She was sitting on the dining table reading an article about john Abraham while Kaavya, Prithivi and Prem were sitting out in the living room watching football. She was too engrossed in the magazine to notice the Prithivi was sneaking up on her. It was too late when she saw him because he had snatched the magazine and was running out to the hall. "Prithivi come back here, give me back my magazine …..Gosh Kaavya you friends are so annoying…idher aao Prithivi nahi to main Aaliya ko bata doongi ki tum ukse deewane ho" he froze and turned back to look at her "kripa I was just playing aur agar tumne Aaliya ko kuch bhi kaha to main…." He started to run again when he stopped right in front of Kaavya and Prem who were watching TV. When kripa reached out in the living room she saw all three of them stood in front of the T.V. "Kya hua bhai, koi naye model hai kya jo inte ghoor ghoor ke dekh rahe ho?" She questioned with a slight laugh but no one responded. "Are kya hua?" She neither could hear nor see well from there so she walked up to them and stood behind the couch and focused her self towards the T.V. "The private jet was located near a lake in a destructing condition. We were informed that the passengers Mr. Surya Sharma who is a well known industrialist and his wife who were traveling to India for a business meeting were pronounced dead on the site…." Kripa stood there numb for a while but in a matter of seconds she dropped to the floor and passed out. Prem heard her fall and tugged on Kaavya before running towards her. Kavya was just too numb to move or notice anything at all. Pools of tears were forming in his eyes. Prithivi was helping Kaavya while Prem was panicking looking at Kripa's state. Just then the door flung open and Sujal rushed in with red eyes and ran towards kripa. "Kripa ko kya hua, oh god kaavya kaha hai. Koi pani lao D***"Kaavya realized what was happening and rushed when he heard Sujal screaming. He tearfully ran up to them and dialed for the doctor. They carried her up to her bedroom and the doctor was there in no time.
"***Knock***Knock***"She returned into reality when a knock distracted her. She wiped her tears quickly and turned back to find Sujal knocking on the door. She gave him a slight smile and turned back. He walked up behind her and looked at the picture. "Happy Anniversary mom, Happy anniversary dad. Kripa tu ro rahi thi?" he looked at her with concern in his eyes. "nahi bhai main to ase hi…" "Don't lie to me kripa…you know I don't like seeing tears on your eyes. Acha thik hai mere liye nahi to mom and dad ke liye to ro rona band karo" As soon as he said that she threw herself at him and sobbed out loudly. After a while of crying she wiped her tears "I'm sorry bhai aap kaavya ko bulaiye and I'll help bhabi in the kitchen." She hurried downstairs while Sujal stepped into kaavya's room. He looked around the room and especially at the models posters. He was busy staring at the posters when kaavya stepped out of the bathroom in a pair of faded ripped jeans and a towel in his hands showing his toned packs. He noticed sujal looking at the posters and mentally smirked. "**wistles** bhabi ko bata doon ki aap un ladkiyon ko kaise dekh rahe the" Sujal jerks backwards and looks at kaavya. "oh! wo..wo main to sirf kamre ki haalat dekh raha tha and forget that kaavya, tu mom and dad ko wish karne nahi aya! Kher chod come down for breakfast and at least put on some clothes man." "I just woke so… aap jao main niche ata hoon" Sujal walked out of the room while kaavya picked out a plain black shirt to wear. He left open a couple of buttons to display his chest making him look irresistible. He walked down stairs and headed to the dining area. He took a seat next to Sujal "good morning krips, good morning bhabi what's for breakfast?" Kashish walks into the dining area with a dish bowl in her hands. Followed by kripa who was carrying a plate with pancakes "Good morning mere pyare dever jee, so you finally woke up!" "Bhabi, yeh aur pyara?" "Tu chup kar chipkalli" "Bhabi dekho na" whines kripa. "Kyun tum dono hamesha bacho ki tara ladte ho? Anyways guys I have some good news." "What good news?" "Do you guys remember Khanna uncle and Aunti?" "Yea, the ones in Chicago?" asked Kaavya. "Yea them, they are moving to the house next door, and most importantly their kids are coming early this week so they will be staying here until their parents get thing ready and move here as well." "Omg, bhai I remember Anjali, I use to call her anju and her bro angad, he was so rude for an 8 year old boy. I bet he is still like that. Gosh I hated him." "Lekin kripa doesn't mean that he is still like that." "Oh come on bhabi aap uski side le rahi ho, but you know I don't care how he is. Jaisa bhi hain what's it got to do with me." "And kaavya, remember you said you needed a new player for your team! Well angad was a quarter back in his school." "Cool, bhai I think we'll be gud frenz." They all talk and enjoy their breakfast
The scene slowly fades and we land up at Khanna mansion in Chicago, Illinois.
We enter through the wood lined door and walk inside the beautifully decorated hall. We move onto the dining room. We see Mr. Dilip Khanna completely engrossed in a news paper while Mrs. Khanna was buttering some toasts for her husband. He puts down the news paper and takes a bite of the toast. "Are yeh dono abtak so rahe hain kya?" "Ha abhi tak so rahe hain, main jake jagati hoon." Saying this she walked up to Anjali's room that is right next to the stair case. She first knocked but there was no response so she barged right into the purple colored walls with matching purple comforter purple curtains, and everything screamed girly. There were posters of her all over the walls. She went near to the bed and pulled the blanket to see that anju was not there but rather there were few pillows created to look like a body figure. She was shocked to see Anjali not in her room so she went to check for her inside her walk-in-closet and her bathroom but she was no where to be found so she ran towards Angad's room with a not-so-happy look. She just turned the knob and barged in. She looked around and saw Anjali trying to wake Angad up. She finally breathed out an air of relief. She walked out the room saying "Anjali wake up your brother and both of you come down for breakfast. We have to discuss about your flight to London." As soon as she left the room Angad jumped out the bed and Anjali started to jump in happiness… "Omg, bhai I love you, you're the best. If it wasn't for you then I was so dead todaii." "Thank to god that I saved you're a** anju nahi to….and anyways where the h*** were you?" He questioned her with frustration. "Bhai main Saniya ke sath ek party ma thi and I didn't realize it lasted till 5:00 in the morning."
Okay, so this is what happened:
Anjali mad Saniya came up to her house in her silver Ferrari but She made Saniya drop her off and take her car so her parents wouldn't find out. Since Saniya lives alone in a condo she has full freedom on what time she goes and comes back home. So Saniya dropped her a block away from her house. She ran in through the back gate and climbed up through the fire escape that lead up to Angad's room. Even though she had experience in climbing the fire escape a thousand time before it was a little trouble since she was wearing a mini denim skirt. But she finally climbed up but to her shock she heard her mom and dad were awake and talking in the dining room. She went to angad's balcony and kicked him hard so he would wake up already. She begged him play along and fake sleeping while she faked to wake him up. She went to his bathroom and got his robe so if mom came in she wouldn't be startled to see her in a short mini and a halter at this early in the morning. It was hard to convince him this time since she'd already asked so many favors from him already but when she heard someone turn the knob she pushed him on to the bed and started to ask him to wake up. When her mom came up she gave her a smile and mouthed "good morning" and walked back outside saying "Anjali wake up your brother and both of you come down for breakfast."
"So thanks again bhai, I promise I'll make it up to you" saying this she stripped of the robe and tip toed back into her room. She went in and took a nice shower. She came out in a robe and walked into her walk-in-closet. She looks around and finally decides on a baby blue brooks beach cami from Hollister and a faded strands point skirt. She put on some baby blue hoops and did a little makeup for a final touch. Looking at herself one last time she walked downstairs to the dining room. The scene shifts to Angad's room and we see him walking out the bathroom door with only a towel wrapped around his waist. He goes to the closet and picks out dark jeans and to go with it he wears a black T shirt that shows his rippling muscles. He puts a silver chain around his neck and looks at himself in the mirror. He has a slight smirk playing on his lips because he knows that he looks good. He jogs down to the dining room where his mom dad and anju were having breakfast. "Good morning mom n dad, good morning ANJU, woke up early today" He flashes a smile. She gets annoyed and gives him a look that says shut up-or you'll regret it. "So Anju aur angad, tum dono ka flight ek din baad hain so I hope you started packing." "Yea dad, don't worry mai ne 2 credit cards already max out cardi hai" she laughed out saying this. They had their breakfast looking forward to their trip.
So guys did you like it? Please comment…if you don't like it then I'll stop writing. It depends on your comment so I hope I can get at least 10-20 comments.
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