-x- Kisi Ko Naa Maloom -x- {Chap.3 - Pg9} - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
yay!love ur ffs 😳 ,and this one has no eku 😃 😆
love the concept-very diff 😊 ,cnt w8 4 promo 😳 !
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
nice thank god no eku!!👏
Can't wait for the promo!!😛😛😛
Plzzzz continue soon!!😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
I love the concept!!! A Catholic and Hindu! Awesome...
Cant wait till the first part. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Yeah No EKU, Finally i Baksh your guys's lives, eh? No, JK! 😉 😆

Chapter One: Coming Soon ! :)
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Posted: 17 years ago
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-x- Kisi Ko Naa Maloom -x-

Chapter One

KT: common Su, lets get going, we're getting late ..hurry!

Su: im coming, im coming, relax Kt,

Susan(Su) comes running down the stairs of her house, and goes towards KT's car..

Su: yeah! now say.. were are we to?

KT: Ohh, just the mall ..then later the beach! college starts tomorrow, so lets enjoy today! what say?

Su: im all in! Hey! by the way--where's Kat ?

KT: next stop!!

Su: dressing?

KT: oh yeah! as usual, madam takes so long to dress,

They both laugh,

KT: come lets get in the car,

Su: okay!

They both get in KT's car, and they ride off...

***

KT: Kat.. hurry up ..we're getting late,

Su: no use KT, you know her ..just tell her mom!

KT: (sighs) as usual!

Ka: no need guys! i'm ready.. and i'm looking just perfect ..as usual! hah!

KT: yeah, yeah! miss. Fashion is my life! can we leave now? (laughs)

Ka: yeah, yeah! where are we to anyways?

KT: mall, then beach!

Ka: Okay!

***

They reach the beach after they'd been shopping at the mall...

it was 1 hour till sunset,

KT sat down on a chair, under the shades of the trees,

Su accompanied her,

whereas Kat (Katrina) wanted to "tan"..

Su: hey, KT!

KT: hmm...?

Su: what are your plans later on?

KT: what do you mean?

Su: i mean, we only have one year of college left, what are you gonna become?

KT: Maybe a travel agent, im still not so sure you know ..i wanna travel places, but i hate travelling, i wanna know diffrent cultures, again i hate to travel, so confused still.. why? what about you?

Su: ohh, same situation ..confused! even though, were late for being confused, we shud have it planned out by now.. but its so obvious about Kat..

KT&Su: Fashion Boutique..

They both laugh,

KT: hey, common, lets go get some ice-cream!

Su: yeah! im starved..

KT: Kat you want some?

Ka: Nope! i'd rather be here, you guys go ahead!

KT and Su walk away,

They walked with the Sun Beam on their faces, it was too hot that day, but, they still wanted to enjoy!

KT got the ice-creams, and walked towards Su who stood and waited for KT in the shades,

KT tripped over a piece of Rock, she hadn't noticed,

But, felt a pair of strong hands catch her,

"Woah, there..careful!" said the man,

KT looked up at him, and glared at his attractive greyish eyes,

He pulled her up..

KT: Thanks,

He smiled,

He looked at the ground and picked up the sandy ice-cream cones, he had bought!

KT: ohh, i'm so sorry ..i can--i didn't--

"Hey! Don't worry about it ..i'll fetch some more.." He slightly laughed, and smiled at her.

He left,

KT looked back at him, and started ti walk towards Su,

Su walked towards KT,

Su: Wow! Was he Cute or what?

KT looked back at the guy buying another set ot ice-cream, and walking towards his family,

KT: Yeah! Guess he's not so bad...

Su: what did you just say?

KT: What? said soemthing wrong?

Su: NO! It's just-- you NEVER find ANY guys "Cute".. then? Why--OMG! You like him don't you?

KT: Ohh, No! Common Su.. don't be ridiculous, he's Okay, i said..

Su: whatever ..thanks for the ice-cream,

She takes the ice-cream from her,

KT seems a bit annoyed from her talks, she ignores the fact, and decides to enjoy the rest of the half hour, they had left, until sunset..

-End of Chapter One-

Edited by .::Kittu::. - 17 years ago
Riyaa147 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
love it can't wait for next part!!👏

Plzzzzzz continue soon!!😳
Edited by Radhakrishna123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
omgomgogmgogomgogmgogmomgomogmgomogomgmogmogmogm

I KNOW ITS LAKSHYA!!!!!!!! JUST TELL ME IM RIGHT... oo0Oo0O im too good *pats self on back* 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
Ya i agree with Janvi...i'm sure its laksh..... 😳 gr8 job kittu... 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
its def laksu!

loving it kittu! continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
Oooh...nice part!! very cute! continue soon! 👏

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