~Kabhi Socha Na Tha ~(Rajeev-Aamna FF)updatePG 39

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Priya

@pinky901

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

nice part

so finally sujal confess his lov in frnt of his mumm..well i'm glad that he shared such a beautiful realationship..jus feeling awesum by reading their convo...well i'm really afraid nw ..welll wat happens if kash complete denied herself wit this ...well the story itself moving in past n in present it already in such tragic mode...but dear its a request pls dont let kashish die as dimple in actaul moving pls do this woit uniqueness n in diff stylr frm movieeeeee plsssssss i reallly wanna see lots of love n romance of s-k in this story..hope u understand my emotions..n welll its otally upto u dear..i suggest let u knw mahhh wish..

well very well written part ear..

pls cont so soon..

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: pinky901
nice part
so finally sujal confess his lov in frnt of his mumm..well i'm glad that he shared such a beautiful realationship..jus feeling awesum by reading their convo...well i'm really afraid nw ..welll wat happens if kash complete denied herself wit this ...well the story itself moving in past n in present it already in such tragic mode...but dear its a request pls dont let kashish die as dimple in actaul moving pls do this woit uniqueness n in diff stylr frm movieeeeee plsssssss i reallly wanna see lots of love n romance of s-k in this story..hope u understand my emotions..n welll its otally upto u dear..i suggest let u knw mahhh wish..
well very well written part ear..
pls cont so soon..

Thanks a lot for the appreciation dear!...i'm glad that you told me your suggestion as I can know what my readers actually wants and expection from this fanfiction!...and yes about the concept ..it's going to be remain the same but i'll add loads and loads of variation in this fanfiction!...relationship between Sujal,Kashish and her daughter Diya also some of memorable romantic scene between 3 jodis😊...and thanks a ton for liking the part 😊..and happy reading and please leave your feedbacks and suggestions😊😊...

Edited by VishakaGal12 - 14 years ago

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#133

At the jewellery shop

Sujal eager to tell his feeling to Kashish and he decides to buy something special to Kashish as he is going to propose to her.

Salesman: welcome to the store sir,may I help you?..

Sujal: Yes ..mujhe ek ring kharidh naa hai..can you please show me the latest one?..

Salesman: Sure sir...please come with me...

Salesman shows the latest ring to sujal..but he was confused which ring he will buy for Kashish.Later he sees another ring in the display .

Sujal: Excuse me ..can you please show me this ring?

Salesman: Sure sir...(he shows the ring to sujal)..Yeh lijiye sir..yeh hamare showroom mein sabse aachi aur special ring hai..it's made with pure diamond...

Sujal: wow!..bohot sundar hai!...please pack this one!...

Salesman pack the ring to Sujal and gave it to sujal

Sujal: Thank you!...😊

At Kashish's place..

Kashish rushed to the door as she hears the doorbell

Kashish: kaun hai?

Sujal: Sujal!..

Kashish opens the door

Kashish: aare sujal?!..what a wonderful surprisee!...please..aandar aao!...

sujal enters the house

Sujal: Kaisi ho?!..aur Diya kahan hai?..

Kashish: Well..diya apni dosto ke saath bahaar gayi hai...and she is going to stay there tonight..

Sujal: Wow!...sounds nicee!!..good for a change!

Kashish: haan!..well...so tumne kaise yaad kiya?!...bohot khush nazaar aa rahe ho!...

Sujal: Ya..you can say that!..hmm kashish?...walk par chale?...

Kashish: Haan!..zaroor!...ghar mein baithe baithe mein bore ho rahi hoon!...ek min!..i'll go get my purse!

At the park..

Sujal and kashish walks together and kashish noticed that sujal was in different mood

Kashish: Kitna aacha mausam hai na?...totally love it!...soo peaceful!

Sujal: Sahi keh rahi ho!...pata hai..yeh meri sabse favourite jaga hai!..

Kashish: Sujal...main ek baat puchoon??...

Sujal: Haan kaho?!...par ek min..main aabhi aati hoon..you just wait here...

Kashish: Yeh achanak sujal to kya hogaya hai?...pagal...(in mind)..

Sujal was making a call from the decorator to make sure that if the arrangement is ready...later he goes to see kashish as she was waiting for him...

Sujal: Kashish..please come with me..mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai...I'm sure you'll like it...

Kashish: Kya??!...please tell me...i'm very excited...

Sujal: It's a surprise...Chalo!...aur zyaada bhag bhag maat karna!...(grabs kashish's hand)....and yes...apni aankhen band karna..(he blindfold her eyes)...

As soon he arrives the venue...he opens his scarf with he blindfolds kashish's eyes...after a few second,Kashish was really speechless as the venue was decorated with roses,and she hears her all time favourite song Tum se hi from Jab we met

Kashish:Wow!!....that's beautiful sujal!...tumhe kaise pata chala ki mujhe yeh saab pasand hai..aur tumse hi mera favourite gana hai?!...😊

Sujal: Well...yeh Sujal ki speciality hai!...well can we have a dance?

Kashish: Sure Sujal!....

Sujal and kashish danced Tumse hi and both of them were staring at each other .Later,sujal realised that he should tell his feeling to kashish..

Sujal: Kashish!...mujhe tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon!...

Kashish: Haan kaho!...

Sujal: Samajh mein nahin a raha hai..main tumse kaise kahon...hope you understand....

Kashish: Baat kya hai sujal?....I'm totally confused!....

Sujal( in mind): what are you waiting for sujal!..keh do apni dil ki baat!.

Sujal brings the ring that he bought for Kashish and show it to kashish..also begin to propose

Sujal: Kashish!..shayad tumhe maloom nahin hai..but..you have been one of the most special girl in my life...aur meri zindagi badal di hai...and I always love you!..will you marry me and accept my proposal?...😳

Kashish was all shocked after hearing the proposal and she is very angry at him

Kashish slaps at sujal

Kashish: Yeh kya bakwas hai sujal?!....how dare you to say something like this??!...Maine tumhe hamesha ek dost ke tarah dekha hai..aur tum??!...How could you?....aur yeh jante hui ke ....😡

Sujal: Tum ek talak shuda ho...aur ek bache ke ma...right!...

Kashish: Right!...I never thought that you would stoop this low!....

Sujal: Kya tum mujhse pyaar nahin karti ho!...

Kashish: Nahin!....and never will!.....😡😭

Sujal: To yeh sab kya hai ?...main janti hoon ki tum mujhse pyaar karte ho!...can see it in your eyes!...mujhe koi farak nahin parta kya hua hai tumhari ateet mein....I will always accept you and diya...because both of you are always special in my heart!...and i will give you the entire happiness that you deserve!..aur mein tumhara intezaar karunga.

Sujal leaves the venue...

Kashish: Main janti hoon ki tum sach keh rahe ho..par mein tumhari zindagi kharab nahin karna chahti!...Kash..mein tumhe keh pati ki main..............................

Kashish's replica: Sujal se pyaar karti ho....hai na??!...

Kashish: Haan!!..I love sujal!....

Kashish's replica: To tumne usse na kyun kiya kashish?!...

Kashish: Kyunki main uski zindagi barbad nahin karna chahti hoon!..and he always deserve an happiness..aur voh mere saath khush nahin rahengi!....

Kashish's replica: Yeh tumhari ghalat femi hai!...Sujal tumhe sache dil se pyaar kiya hai Kashish!....aur voh tumhe bohot khush rakhega...Jao!...jaa ke roko!.....aur apni dil ki baat kaho!...go kashish go!......

Kashish realised her love for sujal and she decides to stop him...and then she ran to see sujal...and she finally sees him..

Kashish: Sujal..................Sujal!!!....please roko!....

She finally caught him ...

Sujal: Kya hua kashish?..tum thik to ho na...

Kashish: How can i be alright Sujal?!.......maine tumhe dil dukhaya hai na!...

Sujal: Please don't be!..meri hi galti hai...I'm sorry!...

Kashish: Sorry kyun?!....tumne kuch galat nahin kiya..and love is not a crime..

Sujal: Matlab?....

Kashish: I.........

Sujal: I what?!...

Kashish: I LOVE YOU SUJAL!...I love you tooo!!....

Sujal is really happy to hear that she also loves him and he brings the ring that he bought to Kashish...

Sujal: Will you marry me?...

Kashish blushed: Of coursee!!.....😳

He puts to kashish's finger and he hugs kashish....

Edited by VishakaGal12 - 14 years ago

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Priya

@pinky901

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

well wat apart dear

really like each n every scene n emotions

well so first she refuses but very soon she admitted her love n tell her feelings to sujal also...dats really veryyyyy gud n appreciated;))

well i'm glad ki k ne jyada nakhre nai kiye ab will be eager for nex part ...wanna see na ki sujal-kashish ki life kaise going on...

well done dear

tanks alot for continue n pm ...

luv u...

:))

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

nice parts........................glad that sujal proposed kashish and she too accepted him.....................cont soon.................

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Saumya brings pari to the most famous beach in india..and Pari was very amazed by seeing this beach ...while saumya was staring at her..

Pari: Wow!!...kitni khubsoorat beach haii...aur voh bhi India
mein!..😊.can't believe it!...but yahaan to koi bhi nahin hai....

Saumya: ...haan...yahaan koi bhi nahin ata...but you know something...jab mein khush ho jata hoon ..to yahaan aa jata hoon...

Pari sits in the sand and turns back to saumya : Mujhe bohot aachi
lagi...soo peaceful and calm!...😳

Saumya: Mujhe paata hai..meri pari to kya pasand hai...(pari smiles and stares at him )..

Pari: Aacha??!...tumhe to meri beri baare mein to bohot kuch paata hai...i'm impressed!....

Saumya: Jaanemaan..yeh saumya ka style hai...

Pari: aur mujhe yeh style bohot pasand hai..( she kisses on his cheeks)..

Saumya: aareee waah!...mujhee ek aur chahiye....

Pari: Hmmmmm....if you really want too...soooooooooo.....( she splashes water on saumya's face)...you better catch me....

Saumya:youu......i'll catch you!....

Pari: catch me if you cann!....(pari began to run)..

Saumya began to run after pari after splashing water to him...after a while...he finally manage to catch her...but suddenly they accidently fell down on the sand and grabs pari..later both were staring at each other and deeply lost at their thoughts...

Saumya( snaps): Pari?!....

Pari: Haan??!...

Saumya: Tum thik to ho na??!....

Pari: haan!..mein thik hoon...😳

Pari tries to get up but she couldn't walk ....

Pari: Ouuchh!!...

Saumya: Pari ..tum to chal bhi nahin sakti...let me carry you!.....

Pari: no no..it's ok...main chal sakti hoon..ouuchh!!....

Saumya: I don't think soo!....tumhe bohot chot lagi hai...

He carries pari to his car and both began to stare at each other and smile...

Saumya: hmmmm parii...

Pari: Kya?!...

Saumya: tum kuch bhool gaye...

Pari: kya?!...

Saumya: Voh kiss?!....yaad hai...

Pari: Thik hai!....(she kisses on saumya's cheeks )...

Edited by VishakaGal12 - 14 years ago

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: pinky901
👏
well wat apart dear
really like each n every scene n emotions
well so first she refuses but very soon she admitted her love n tell her feelings to sujal also...dats really veryyyyy gud n appreciated;))
well i'm glad ki k ne jyada nakhre nai kiye ab will be eager for nex part ...wanna see na ki sujal-kashish ki life kaise going on...
well done dear
tanks alot for continue n pm ...
luv u...

:))

Heyy!!...thanks a lot for your appreciation dear!...i'm really glad that you loved the part!:-)...keep reading!!....

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: spvd
nice parts........................glad that sujal proposed kashish and she too accepted him.....................cont soon.................

Hey!!!...thanks a lot for your feedback dear!!..i'm glad you liked the part!!...