AR made 4 eachoder.(ff).pt 6 pg 11 - Page 7

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hope ur sis is well.........continue soon plz.
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yaar pls u tak cre o ur sis , we will adjust but dont forget okay to PM whenever u update
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😉😉Don't worry..! Ur sister will be fine soon..

And after she is Fit & Fine continue soon😉!!

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PART 6

they now seperate frm their first smooch but a very gentle 1...........dey look at eachoder n blush...

armi"oye-hoye, tumhe pata hai ki meri ridhima sharmate hue kitni sundar lagti hai"

ridz"armaan"

armi"ridhima ab tum dekhna ab hum sath hai na , ab main hamesha tumhare sath rahunga, tumhe kabhi koi kharoch tak nahi ane donga"

ridz listening n feeling armi's love 4 her through his romantic words hugs him tightly n says"i love u armaan "

armi"luv u 2 jaan, ab tums o jao, sube tumhare kuch tests bhi to hone hai"

ridz"armaan, kal mere tests honge?

armi"ha pure din"

ridz"par maine socha tha ki hum dono kahi bahar jaenge akele"

armi after listening 2 d words "akele" and "hum" becomes really happy within inside but rudely says" ridhima tum khud 1 doctor ho,tumhara abhi abhi itna serious accident hua tha aur ab tum,..........chalo ab chup chap so jao"

ridz makes an innocent face n goes of to sleep...........armaan notices dis n kisses her on her 4head........

its 2 clock at the night n armi goes 2 d beech where ridz's b'day party wud take place............dere he has made an arrangement of a seperate room made up of straws for him n ridz,,,, which is decorated frm flowers all over inside nd wid petals of flowers he him self has written " i love my basket"

he has prepared everythng 4 her alone himself as he requested every1 dat as its ridz's 1st bday wid him......he wants 2 do everthng n every1 agrees as well......
he goes back 2 d hospital n sees ridz sleeping.,.......n smiles at her beautiful innocent luking face......he den goes off to sleep.........

in d mrng he gets up n gets ready in d changing room......he den goes 2 d ICU 2 check ridz........
was still sleeping n armaan wakes her up (in d same sweet tone he said her name in d holi episode wen ridz was saying niche panii haimain doob jaungi)

ridz gets up n luks at armaan n smiles at him.......armi smiles bak n says"gud mrng n happy b'day darling"

ridz blushes n starts luking here n dere.............at dat moment only wen armi was about 2 kiss ridz sister lovely came in n said"o ji dr. ridhima ji ap kaise ho"

ridz"main thik hu lovely ji"

armi whispers "kabab mein haddi.........nahi nahi badi si haddi"

ridz smiles a bitr n den lovely says"o ji dr. armaan ji apko dr. ridhima ko us dark room(dnt knw d name of d room where armi n ridz romanced wen armi was not well) mein lekar jana hai kuch tests karne ke liye"

armi smiles n says "ok ji lovely ji" n lovely leaves

armi says" basket mein 2 min mein ata hu, jab tak tum fresh ho jao, mein sister ko bhejta hu"

dey both pass smile 2 each oder n armi leaves
sister cums n takes ridz 2 d room after ridz is freshened up..........

armi on d oder hand is waiting 4 ridz in d room wid a surprise

ridz is coming on d wheel chair wid sister n armi is shocked 2 see ridz's beautiful hair tied in a pony 4 d first time n her beautiful face glowing wid happiness widout any make up...........

sister "dr. armaan ap inke test kar lijiye main thodi der mein inhe le jane k liye aungi"

but armi is not listening 2 sister n is lost luking at "HIS RIDHIMA" AT "HIS BEAUTIFUL RIDHIMA"

ridz bcomes conscious about d way armi is luking at her n starts luking here n dere.........dere is absolute silence...... n as d sister leaves d desperate armi who desperatly wants 2 take his beautiful luv in his arms n wants 2 kiss her picks up ridz in his strong arms frm d wheel chair.......

both d lovers are lost in each oders eyes where dey can only see luv , care n passion for each oder.....armi makes ridz sit on d bed........ both r still luking in eachoders eyes........

armi nw is coming close 2 ridz n holds her gently frm her waist........ she feels very comfortable in his arms in puts her head on his chest........... armi feels very warm n romantic n never wants ridz to let go off his arms.......both of dem close dere eyse n r lost in d world of luv.........armaan starts kissing ridz on her head n den 2 her eyes den slowly moves towards her cheek n den comes towards her neck n kisses her on her neck.......ridz is all happy n lost in armaan's luv and holds armaan tightly on every kiss armaan giver her.........dey both den hug eachoder tightly .....

armi"i love u ridhima.........mughse plz kabhi door mat jana .......main sach mein tumhare bina mar jaungi.......hamesha sirf mughse pyar karna"

ridz"armaan main bhi tumhare bina nahi ji sakti....... i love u 2 armaan" n den ridz kisses armaan on both his eyes

armi"chalo ab apni ankhein band karo"

ridz widout questioning closes her eyes.......armi luks at her beautiful face n takes out a beautiful neckpiece wid a small heart shaped diamond which he puts on ridz's beautiful neck and kisses her on her lips ........ridz is amazed 2 see her present n thnx armi 4 it....... dey den have a small little smooch n den after finishing all d tests armi takes back ridz 2 d general ward now.........

armi takes her dere n dere is a new patient named ranbir dere (HE IS RANVIJAY of mtv roadies)

ranbir luks at ridz n feels sumthng 4 her after luking her beautiful face but only feels sumthng

armaan supports ridz n helps her 2 lie down on her bed luking at her wid luv........ dey both pass smile 2 eachoder n den armaan goes 2 ranbir........as he is armi's patient

n dey have a brief chit chat n introduction......n ranbir has been admitted 2 d hospital 4 sum small operation only.........

armi leaves n finds out whether everythng is fine and bout d arrangements of d party,........

as armi leaves he gives a flying kiss 2 ridz n she blushes........ranbir is just on d next bed 2 ridz...... he tries 2 talk 2 ridz but as he was just bout 2 say sumthng angie, sapna,atul,keerti,shubhankar cum 2 meet ridz n wish her........dey all hav a small chit chat wid ridz bout her health n all leave 2 dere duties

as dey were laeving ridz calls out angie n asks her where is armaan

angie says"ridzi vo sirf humara jiju hi nahi sanjeevani ka 1 baut hi acha doctor bhi hai.....duty par hai"

ridz blushes whereas angie said dis just avoid any doubt by ridz.......as armi had gone 2 d beach.....angie leaves

ranbir"hi" 2 ridz
ridz"hi"
ranbir"main ranbir,ap?"
ridz"main ridhima,dr.ridhima gupta"
ranbir"o....hie n happy b'day"
n ranbir n ridz have a small talk n ranbir finds out hw she bcame a patient.........

sorry 4 d late update n i have written such a big part nw so i hope u wont complain........b'day party wud be d next part.....enjoy reading!!!!!

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