YeH pYaR kAsIa - - -* (A-K) 2nd PART PG4 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tava

nice part continue soon 👏 👏 👏



awwwhh thx alot 4 the commnet... will cont soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Second Part:
Angad was staring at kripa ... kripa slowly moved her hand away from her face ... wen someone taped angad on the shoulder
person - yaar lets go
angad turned around , kripa moved back slowly and ran away
angad tunred around to see kripa wen he spoted no one! angad looked around but didn;t find her
person- watz wrong? are u okie again
this person was none other thenn SAGAR!!
a- nothin, i'll be bac
angad ran off lookin for kripa
Sagar then stood in that same area waitin for again wen he bumped into Vidya...all the items in the Vidya hand had
fell on the floor!! Sagar bent down and help pick everything up
sagar- am so sorriee
vidya- ...... (Not saying a word))
sagar- am sorrie
vidya grabbed the item out of his hand and walked away
sagar- gush gurls these dais, now wheres angad
angad was searching for kripa, and kripa was lookin for vidya
angad was walkin toward kripa not knowin it was here, kripa saw vidya, which was commin from the same direction as angad...
angad and kripa both walked pass each other!
k- di lets go!! plzz
v- but kripa
k- plz di (in a sad tone)
v- okie lets go
kripa ran out of the store and vidya followed...
s- angad there u are, lets go
a- but sagar..
s- angad are u lookin for someone
a- no.. noo.. noo, letss go
s- finally
as they both walked out angad kept lookin back lookin for kripa... in his he remember wen he saw her.
kripa walked toward the car wen she saw abit of fire from the outside cookin store... kripa backed of... she was so frightened
k- A..aa....ggg..ggg ( heavy breathin and all scared)
kripa started runnin bac..
k- AAAAGGGGG
kripa was goin crazy ... she bumped into angad
k- AAAGGG (lookin in angads eyes)
s- are u okie ?
angad still didn't recognize her
a- but theres nuthin there
k- AAAGGG
vidya saww kripa and ran to here
v- kripaaaa
vidyaa grabbed kripa and gave her a hard core slaapp
v- STOP KRIPAA
v- am sorrie .. wen ever she see fire she get scared cause of the past
a- o np .. we would have help but we didn;t see nuthing
s- hey ur that gurl
vidya glanced at sagar
vidya grabbed kripa and walked away
a- u noe here
v- she weired when ever i say something she shuts up and ignores me
a- thatzz weired lets go !!!

Kripa and vidya reached home!!
kripa ran inside, into her room and locked the down !
she lean against the wall and broke down crying
vidya knocked on teh door
vidya- kripa open up
kripa--- (crying)
vidyaa- kripa plzzz
kripa- i hate myself I HATE MY SELF... kripa started throughin everything around the room ... why did god do this too me WHYY (crying out loud)
vidya opened the door and grabbed kripa
v- are u crazy kripa
k- AM CRAZYY ( crying)... i wnt to kill myself, my life is over
v- stop this... it's been a yr that past and u still haven't forgot everything
k- i can't dii i can't (broke down in vidyas arms)

In the night
vidya tuked kripa in bed as she was sleepin and went to her room vidya lyed on her bed lookin at the celing

vidya had a flash back
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k- di wow todaiss ur weddin and amm soo happy .. I LOVE YOU!!
v- go get readyy
k- amm ganna sleep for abit and later i'll wake up
the house was full of ppl perparin for the wedding.. everyone was so happy...
kripa went to her room and fell asleep for a bit
The ppl in the kitchen were makin food wen sumething caught on fire.. they all started screamin and yeelling anf ran towards the outside door...
vidya ran outside with the whole crowed..
v- where kripaaa...
vidya went around askin everyone in a cryin way .. vidya was totally freaked,
v- KRIPAAAA!!! KRIPAAA(crying out loud)
wen she remeber then kripa told her tat she was going to sleep for a bit..
vidya was about to step back in the house when they all stoped her
ppl- the whole house is on fire we can't let u go in .. ur the bride
v- but kripaaa
the guy vidya was ganna marry came...
guy- vidya watz wrong
v- kripa insidee plzz get here (crying)
guy- i'll get her don't worrieee...
v- i love u
g- i love u too
the guy gave vidya a hug and ran inside
v- he careful (crying)
kripa had opened her eyes and saw she was surrounded in fire
kripa ran back and forth yelling for help
kripa turned as saw the fire commin forwards her.. when she fainted
after a while the guy came and grabbed kripa and ran out bot carin about himslef
wen he reached out he was burned and fell to the ground with kripa in his arms
v- AMIT.. vidyaa ran to the guy and dropped on the floor
v- AMITTTT(crying)
amit- i ..s...aa...v...e...d...k..r..i...p...aa
vidyaa crying
all the ppl around called the ambulance
amit- v..i..d..y..a...i...l..o..v..e ..u...
v- i love u too .. i cna't live without u (crying)
amit- i h..a...v...e t...o g...o...o n...o..e I LOVE U
say that he had deid at the spot
vidya was bladin her eyes out and fainted


I hope u all liked the first part!!
i will continue soon!!
kashish <3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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grt part...that was soo sad...poor amit...continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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such a cute and sad part.... continue soon 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part...that was soo sad...poor amit...continue soon



awhh thx alot for the comnet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: popgirl

Gr8t fanfic cont soon



thx alot hun 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: laksh_ktfan

such a cute and sad part.... continue soon 😊 😊



awhh thx of the commnet

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏



awhhh thx alot hun 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30
Great ff.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

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