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Posted: 17 years ago
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For people who read on Kasauti Forums:
Im adding some more parts of PM before they get married!!! So these r new not the same from KZK forums!

Part 3
Breakfast the Next Morning!
Everyone was down there except Mukti.

Prerna put the food on the table and asked: Are Mukti kidar hain?
Sneha: Mujhe nahin pata subha se nahin mili.
Prerna: apne kamre mein bhi nahin hain?
Sneha: meine dekha par vahan bhi nahin thi.
Prem: (thinks) kya kahan chali gayi hogi??? Aur is halat mein!
Prem: mein jake dekh tha hoon
Prem leaves.

Muktis Room:

Prem: Mukti!!! Mukti Kahan Ho Tum!!!
Prem turns around and see's Mukti walking outside
He starts to run to catch upto her.
Prem: MUKTI!!! RUKO!!!
Mukti turned around: Kya hain Prem????
Prem: u weren't @ the breakfast table…everyone was worried….especially me!
Mukti: sorry lekin mujhe kaam hain!
Prem: nope! U have to eat first!
Mukti: nooo im getting late!
Prem: I don't care and ur not gonna go alone im gonna come with u!
Mukti: ok fine!
Prem smiles and walks with Mukti inside the house

In The Living Room:

Prerna: Mukti beta tu kahan chali gayi!?
Mukti: mujhe kaam hain mujhe jana hain toh aap plzz mujhe nashta container mein dein aur mein baad mein khaloongi!
Prerna: nahin…tumhe khana hoga abhi isi waqt! Ayr tumhare waja se Prem ne bhi kuch nahin khaya
Mukti looked at Prem…
Prem: maa hum raste mein kuch khalenge
Prerna: …acha theek hain lekin Prem yaad rakhna!
Prem: yea sure mom!
Prem: bye! Chalo Mukti…tumhe jana hain!

The Car…

Prem: toh kahan jana hain?
Mukti: office.
Prem: office!!!
Mukti: haan???? kya hua???
Prem: kuch nahin…agar office jana ho toh mujhe pooch leti! tum kahin nahin jao gi ok! Ajj ke baad sirf mein kaam karoonga aur tum ghar pe rehna phir adat ho jaiyegi aur phir shaadi ke baad…
Mukti: Prem…(she blushed)
Prem: sorry
Mukti: acha tum yahan ruko mein abhi ayi!
Prem: ok…but jaldi ana…mujhe bohot bhook lagi hain!
Mukti: ok…ek minute mein wapas aongi!
she smiled and so did Prem!
She made sure there weer no cars coming then left the car.
She went inside the mall that they stopped infront of.
Then all of a sudden a huge truck comes from behind Prem's car and crashes into it.
Prem looked back and yelled at him for being careless, couldn't he see his car!
The truck backed up then again crashed in to his car.
Prem cursed under his breath at the driver.
Then the driver reversed all the way back about 5 blocks.
Then Mukti came out of the store and looked @ the car. She went to Prems window and asked:
Prem kya hua gadi ko???
Prem: koi truck driver…stupid he hit the car on purpose.
Now the Truck driver was coming @ full speed and headed for Prem's car.
Mukti: ok
She starts for her side…but she went from the back of the car…she paused and looked @ the car.
The truck was coming right @ her. Prem look in the rearview mirror and saw the truck. He quickly got out
Prem: MUKTI!
He ran to her and he pushed her just in time before the truck hit her…
She landed hard on the ground. She screamed in pain. She finally decided to et up and saw Prem on the ground unconscious
Mukti: PREM!!!!!
She tumbles over to him
Mukti: Somebody! Plzzzz Help Me!!!!!
Mukti: Prem! Prem Utho! Prem! Ah! (she holds her stomach)
Mukti: Prem…prem…..pre…
And everything went black.

ok this is it for right now i might updateanother part later if i get @ least 5 comments! plz...i need to noe if ur interested in this ff or not! ok thats all i gotta say
luv ya bye
Umam
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
wonderful part. hope nutting happens
to Mukti's baby or Prem
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice update!!!!continue sooooon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys im not getting much comments it seems as if u guys r not interested.. plzz tell me if i should continue or nott even if ur not a pm fan tell me to comntinue or not plzzzz i need to noe!!!

love Umam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

Wen Mukti had woken up she found herself in the hospital….the doctor comes to visit her…
Doctor: Hello! How r u feeling today?
Mukti: Doctor Prem kahan hain?
Doctor: Prem?
Mukti: haan jo mere saath the voh kahan hain?
Doctor: oh haan Mr.Prem! voh theek hain…app rest kijiye!
Mukti: nahin kya app Prem ko yahan le aa sakte hain? Yaa humhe dono ko ek kamre mein le ja sakte hain plzz
Doctor: mein kuch kar tha hoon
Mukti: plzzz aur thank u doctor.
Doctor leaves, Mukti waits for Prem.
15 mins later they both were moved to a different room.
They were right beside each other.
Mukti looks at Prem and starts crying, Prem was still unconscious.
She hugs him wen she got pain in her stomach. She screams.
The doctor comes.
Doctor: Ms…u shouldn't move lie back down!
Mukti: nahin mein Prem ko nahin chod sakti!
Doctor: ms app unke saath toh hain plz app inhe chod dein.
Mukti: nahin…! Prem zinda toh hain na! plzzz Prem aisa chup rahein toh mein pareshaan hoti hoon plz tell me doctor!
Doctor: Prem is fine! Don't worry u just rest it'll be good for u and ur child!
Mukti slowly lets go of Prem and lays back down.
But she holds his hand.
Another 15 mins later Prem finally wakes up, but Mukti was asleep.
The doctor comes again. And Prem sits up.
Doctor: are! Mr. Prem app kaise hain?
Prem: mein theek hoon…Mukti toh theek hain aur bacha?
Doctor: Ms. Mukti and her child r fine
Prem: thanks god!
Doctor: Mr. Prem how r u related to Ms Mukti???
Prem: y do you want to noe?
Doctor: just asking cause the guy that came in said u were bf gf but she is pregnant?
Prem: ohh nooo nothing like that! She's my fianc
Doctor: but the child?
Prem: how about I say were in "Love" ok…now stop the questions!
Doctor smiles.
Prem: u noe wat happened to me?
Doctor: Mr. Prem… (he looks over @ Mukti) don't tell ur fianc but….u have cancer.
Prem: Kya!?
Doctor: im sorry but plz don't tell ur fianc she is already in worse condition.
Prem nods, but inside he was really shocked.
Prem: doctor who'd u say brought us in?
Doctor: it was a young man…he said he knew u guys from a few months ago…
Prem: how'd he look?
Doctor: black hair…brown eyes, about ur height…and can't really remember right now.
Prem: gets an image of Sharad in his eyes (thinks) I couldn't be him could it???
All of a sudden Mukti wakes up screaming"PREM!" and just hugged him.
Mukti: meine bohut bura sapna dekha tha Prem…tum mujhe kabhi chod ke nahin jao Prem! Plz (she was crying)
Prem (thinks): lekin mujhe cancer hain!
Prem: don't worry I wont!

The next day:

The guy who had came to their rescue never informed their parents so Prem called Prerna, Mr. Bajaj , Anurag and Jeevan to the hospital.

Prerna: mujhe lagta hain ke humhe tum dono ki shaadi jald se jald shuru karni chaye
Prem: nahin!
They all look @ him
Prem: I mean let Mukti have her kid first then well get married…I don't want to put Mukti into ne stress
Mukti: Prem u wont…lets get married meine is pal kiliye kitna intezaar kiya lekin…ab intezaar nahin kar sakti! Plz
Prem:…acha theek hain maa app pandit ji ko bulaiye.
Prerna smiles and so do the rest.
Mukti looks @ her dad: Baba!
Jeevan: Mukti beta…he got tears in his eyes then he hugs her
Mukti starts to cry too.
Jeevan : tu theek toh hain…
Mukti: haan baba.
Jeevan: kya hua tha…jab yeh sab kuch hua?
Mukti and Prem tell everyone.

AUTHORS NOTE:
Plz Read:

ok here is the next part but i've not written much because of the comments plzz peeps comment if u read it! and thanks Patel 1993 and Raym for being like the only ones i've seen comment on this ff! love u 2! but plz neone who reads this plz tell me if u like it ill only continue with that! and its not much im asking for...it'll bring my hopes up even if u just type like a letter or like continue soon!if u do not like this one tell me i have another one...and if u just dont like my ff's then i wont even type! k...so bye for now 2 tired plz comment...bye!
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dont worry yaar!! 😊
u should continue this ff 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
u shld definite continue this
ff u knw.
and me username is 1993 nt 1994
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys ill try to update soon today! and sorry Patel 1993 ill fix ur username ok! really sorry!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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This part is for Diwali!

Part 4

5 years later later

Prem and Mukti get out of the hospital and there mariage is the day after Diwali! so five years later diwali and there anniversiary is the next day!

Diwali!

a little boy and girl start singing:
Yeh din jahan mein har kahin, bar de rohsini, usi ke pyaar ki
Prem: Yeh din jahan mein har kahin bar de roshini usi ke pyaar ki.
Mukti: Dil Dil Se
Kids: Woh mila de
Mukti: Har Chera
Kids: Woh Khilade
Mukti: Rut laaye
Kids: Aaj kushiyon kii

All: Mere tumhare sabke liye
Saare sitare uske liye

Mere tumhare sab keliye Happy Diwali
Saare sitare uske liye Happy Diwali(x2)

Prem: Hum sabi mein har kisi ke
All: Dil mein hain wahi!
Prem: Ho zameen ya asmaan ho
All: Vo hai har kahin

Kids: Roshani
Mukti: Roshani
Kids: Roshani

Prem: Yeh hi usi ka naam hain
Kids: Yeh Jahan
Mukti: Yeh Jahan
Kids: Yeh Jahan
Prem: Saare Usi Ke Kaam Hai

All: Usne banaye sab keliye
Saare sitare uske liye

Usne banaye sab keliye Happy Diwali
Saare sitare uske liye Happy Diwali(x2)

Duniya Meri Aise Chamke, Jaise Roshini Ne Roshini Ko Bardhi Har Kahin
Duniya Saari Aisi Mehke, Jaise Is Kushiye Mein Har Kali ho Mehki Har Kali
Ajj Jahan Bhi tum Raho Chal Saath Humare Ab Kaho Say Happy Diwali Happy Diwali
Aaj Mile tumse Koi Use Tum Bhi Bare Dil Sey Milo Say Happy Diwali Happy Diwali(x2)
Kids: Mere Tumhare Sab Keliye Happy Diwali!

Prerna: aww wat a wonderful dance! Mr.Bajaj wat do u think?
Mr.Bajaj: haan Janki aur Mitul ne bhi acha gaye!
Prerna: aur Prem aur Mukti?
Mr.Bajaj: mujhe nahin pata lekin mere poothi aur pootha ne bare acha gana gaya!
Prem: Papa now dont be mean ok! me and Mukti did a wonderful job!
Prerna: haan!!!! aur Mukti ko itne sey lines diye!
Prem: woh gana hi nahin cha rahi thi!
Prerna: toh! ab tum dono abhi isi waqt gana gao! aur Mukti ko bhi lines dena! tum koi Raja nahin ho!
Mukti: c'mon Choti Maa its ok !
Prerna: nahin ab meine kaha hain ab tum dono jake dance karo!
Prem: im fine with it! wat bout u Mukti!
Mukti: theek hain!

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

Mukti: Kaise naino se naian milaon sajna, kaise mein aise na ghabrau sajna
kaise aaye aise mohe laaj sajna, chuna na dekho mohe aaj sajna

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

Prem: Mriganaini tu na jaane, prem kitna mere mann mein hai, yeh bechaini maangti hai, roop jo tere yowan mein hai

Tera phool sa hai ang, tere ang mein hai rang
tere rang ke main sang goriye
tere rang mein hai roop, tere roop mein hai dhoop
teri dhoop hai anoop goriye
sajna se kahe aaye laaj sajani, choone de ang mohe aaj sajani

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

Mukti: Dhalki dhalki phirthi hoon, thalki thalki si phirti hoon, jispe yeh mera koi jam hai jaise
nazarein milaati hoon khwaabon mein saama jaati hoon
dil mein bas jana mera kaam hai jaise

Prem: Dil mein bas ja maine roka kab hai
lekin kya armaan hai mera yeh to samjhaane de
sajna se kahe aaye laaj sajani, choone de ang mohe aaj sajani

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

Mukti: Kaise banjaara mann ki baat mein aaye, kaise ek raaja ko manmit banaye, kaise pehnu main pyar ka yeh taj sajna, karte tum kyu dil pe raj sajna

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

Prem: Mriganaini tu na jaane, prem kitna mere mann mein hai, yeh bechaini maangti hai, roop jo tere yowan mein hai

Mere meet tere geet, tere geet mein hai preet
teri preet meri jeet goriye
meri jeet mein bhi haar, meri haar mein hai pyaar
mere pyaar mein ikraar goriye

Prem: Bhool ke saare kaamkaaj sajni, chhoone de ang mohe aaj sajni
Mukti: Aaye na kaise mohe laaj sajna, chuna na dekho mohe aaj sajna

dhoom taana ta dhoom ta ta na na na - 2, dhoom taana dhir na dhir na

k thats all for now sorry but ill update again on Sunday! bye for now!
luv ya!
Umam
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice update!!!
continue soon ..........!!
and happy diwali 😊

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