PM-Fanfic-Roshni-Part 4 Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys i have a ff on the Kasauti forums and i want to continue it here. sorry i haven't really kept up with my ff's but this one i have really kept with it i have @ least 9 parts but ill update one each second day....like monday then wednesday...then friday like that ok soo ill post the first part in a few mins ok! if i get @ least 5-10 comments. Here is a little inrto:

"MUKTI MUKTI"yelled a stanger.
Mukti just kept on hiding scared to come out and scared to move.
"MUKTI DONT WORRY WE WONT HURT U'yelled the man.
"NAHI MEIN NAHI AONGI SHARAD"yells Mukti
"MUKTI BAHAR AO DEKHO PREM BHI AYA HAI"yells Sharad.
"Prem?"mukti thinks.
"Tell him to say something"says Mukti
"ahhhh....um he cant talk because we put a rope on his mouth'said sharad.
Mukti phones Prem's cell.
"hello"says Prem
"Prem mujhe bachao plzz sharad ne...SHARAD(he holds her hand and starts pulling)CHODO MUJHE AH(SHE DROPS THE PHONE)"
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ooo sounds intresting umam!!! 😃
great intro!! cant wait!! 👏
good luck with it!! 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!cool it sound great!hope prme will save her!
continue soon!
good luck with ur ff!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i swear i read that ff.
anyways, continue soon please
I really miss PM and their ff
are more than welcomed.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, please od continue, sounds really interesting!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Goo ahead sis ur doing good!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Repeat: this fanfic was is on Kasauti forums

Part 1 Starts right after the inrto:

Prem:(thinks)Mukti?
Prem leaves right away.

Mukti u think u could get away so easily didn't u? now u must be thinking that Prem should be on his way to the rescue but i dont think so because he doesn't love u
Mukti: I KNOW PREM DOESN'T LOVE ME
Sharad: okay okay u didn't have to scream
Mukti: sorry
Sharad: c'mon guys
Then all of his men walk towards Mukti and the camera fizzes out.
15 mins later

Prem: MUKTI!
Mukti heard Prems voice and was soo happy Prem came to help her.
Mukti:Prem...PREM!
Prem:KAHAN HO TUM?
Mukti tries getting up but couldn't.
Prem walks forward and c's Mukti dupatta but it didn't look like her dupatta it was all torn up.
Prem walks towards the dupatta and c's Mukti.
Mukti:Prem!(she hugs him)
Prem hugs her back.
Prem:what happened?
Mukti:s...sh.sharad...mujhe..rape(she cries so much)
Prem:phirse...kyon?
Mukti:i dont know but i want to go home plzz Prem
Prem:acha chalo...
Mukti gets up but then goes down again.
Mukti:ahhh(she holds her ankel)
Prem:kya hua?
Mukti:my ankle i think its sprained!
Prem:umm try standing up!
Mukti gets up but falls again.
Mukti:ah Prem it hurts
Prem:just try once more just to the car
Mukti makes it to the stairs leading to the car but trips down the stairs and bangs her head on a rock.
Prem:my god ......Mukti.
he runs down the stairs picks Mukti up and takes her to the car.
He lies her down. Gets a water bottle and sprinkles some water on her face.
Mukti:Prem...i luv u thank you.
Prem:Mukti....i dont luv u sorry but we have to get u home chalo.
Mukti:nahi(she get up)
Mukti leave Prem in the car and starts walking. When all of a sudden "BOOM" a car hit Mukti
Prem:MUKTIII

Hospital:

Mukti wakes up in the hospital wondering "why am i here"
Mukti: nurse umm mujhe yahan kaun leke aya hai
Nurse:Mr.Prem
Mukti:voh kahan hain?
Nurse:bahar gaye hain.
Mukti:mujhe kya hua hai?
Nurse:i think u should rest.
Mukti:NOO I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?
Doctor:Mukti... u woke up....u know u should rest .
Mukti:noo where is Prem?
Doctor;Mukti plzzz not for urself but for...
Mukti:kis kilye?
Doctor:congratz u r 3 months pregnant.
Mukti:p..pre..pregnant?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

Mukti:abortion...
Doctor:KYA!
Mukti:meine kaha mujhe abortion chaiye!
Doctor:lekin Mr.Premse pehle pooch liya
Mukti:kyon poocho? voh kya lagte hain mere?
Doctor:voh apke pati nahi hain?
Mukti:nahi!
Doctor:KYA!
Mukti:haan ab mujhe abortion chaiye plzz dont tell Prem about this!
Doctor:lekin humne DNA test kar diya hai aur report kehte hain ke yeh bacha Mr.Prem ka hai.
Mukti:i dont care i want an abortion.
Doctor:theek hai...nurse sare tayarrian karo.

The doctor is about to leave when he c's Prem standing @ the dorr staring @ Mukti angrily.

Doctor:Mr.Prem?
Prem:jao...JAO!

The Doctor and Nurse leave.

Prem:kya kaha tumne?
Mukti looks the other way.
Prem:abortion...u know u could die from doing this!
Mukti:i dont care atleast i well get peace
Prem:what kind of peace?!
Mukti:u know in heaven^^
Prem:u cant do that!
Mukti:kyon tum kya lagte ho meray? dewanna ho kya?
Prem:NAHI lekin...mein abhi aya...
He leaves Mukti starts to cry and thinks:Prem i can feel it u do love me but just once plzzz just once say u luv me
Prem is walking in the corridor thinking:yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai mein Mukti ki parva kyon karo mein toh use pyaar bhi nahi karta...maybe this is what u call luv but no i never loved Mukti and never well(or maybe not )
Prem sits infront of the room where Mukti is. The Doctor comes
Doctor:Mr.Prem humne sari tayariaan kardi ab hum abortion kar rahe hain lekin ek baat sono agar tum Mukti se pyaar nahi karte toh voh bacha tumhara kaisa?Prem:kya yeh kya keh rahe hain app?
Doctor:humne tumhara DNA test kardiya tha lekin humne app ko nahi bataya aur voh test kehta hai ke yeh bacha app ka hai Mr.Prem.
Prem:kya?
Doctor:ab hum chalte hain yeh jo karna hai.
Prem:n..the doctor leaves.
Prem thinks:haan mein...mein Mukti se pyaar karta hoon lekin mujhe yeh nahi pata isme mujhe der kyon laga?
Prem stands there for about 5 mins and barges into the room where Mukti is.
Prem:STOP!
Doctor:kyon?
Prem:nahi...nahi yeh abortion nahi ho sakta!
Mukti:(who is half asleep)kyon nahi ho sakta?
Prem:kyon ke...I...luv..you...i luv you Mukti!
Mukti:OMG..Prem...(she fell asleep)

2 hours later.

Prem:Mukti...Mukti..
Mukti:ah mein kahan hoon?
Prem:dont u remember Hospital.
Mukti:oh haan...Prem..I luv u too.
She hugs him...he hugs her back...
Prem smiles:tumhe ghar jana hai?
Mukti shakes her head still hugging him.

Bajaj House

"Mother India!!!!"
Prerna:Pre...tumhe kya hua hai?
Prem:Mujhe pyaar hai..Mukti se.
Prerna:KYA!
(Prem is holding Mukti)
Mukti stuffs her head in his jacket and blushes.
Prem:maa kya mein aur Mukti...u know?
Prerna:kya kaha?
Prem:maa kya mein aur m..
Prerna:voh nahi..pehle..
Prem:maa?
Prerna:TU sudar gaya?
Prem puts Mukti down and goes and hugs his Mother.
Mukti also comes and hugs Prerna then she runs to her room.
Prem also runs to his room.
Prem goes to his window to check if Mukti was at hers but she wasn't so he decided to try throwing something in all he could find was some popcorn and a ball. he did not want to throw the ball so he threw some popcorn.
Prem threw all the popcorn and still Mukti did not come.
Soon Mukti comes out of the washroom and c's a huge pile if popcorn in front of her window.
Mukti:OMG prem just can't think of nething else...
She goes to the window and c's Prem looking at her with this kind of face altogether
Mukti:kya hai?
Prem:Tum kahan thi?
Mukti:washroom
Prem:ohhh sorry
Mukti:its ok.
Prerm:bye
Mukti:kyon?
Prem:ok if u want to stay...
They stare for like 20 mins.

Thats the end of the part plzzz comnment, gud and bad ones if u like!

luv ya Umam



(Belated) Eid Mubarak
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one. do continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 update continue soon 😊

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