Tears of Love..Sujal&Kashish...Last-part

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

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👏 awesome intro yaar...continue soon!!! 😛

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Part-2

Om: Ab jaldi se nasta kar lo main tumhara car me intzaar kar raha hoon.
(He goes).
Kashish : Mama, muje bahot dair ho rahi hai main chalti hoon. main office me nasta kar loongi.

Parvati: Kam se kam juice to piti jaa.

Kashish: thik hai mama lekin jaldi se do.
( woh Juice pikar dauti huyi bahar chali jati hai.)
Dadi
(sir pe hath rakh ke) : Kya hoga is ladki ka. koi bhi kam thik se nahin karti.
Kripa: Dadi, aap iski shaadi kar do. Isse yeh hamare ghar se bhi jayegi aur khud bhi jimedar ho jayegi.

Parvati: Mera bas chale to main apni beti ki shaadi isi seher me karoon. taki main use roz jake mil saku.

Angad: Mama, bhulkar bhi aisa mat karna verna kashish sara waqt yahi pe bethi rahegi.

Dadi: oy Tu chup kar, tuje office nahin jana kya.

Angad: Haa haa ja raha hoon.
(Everyone laughs at table)
(In car)

Om: To tumne sari details padh li. Kal iski meeting hai aur usme announce hone wala hai ki yeh project kis ko milne wala hai.

Kashish
(pareshan hokar): Papa, agar aap bura mat mano to main kuch kehna chahti hoon.
Om: Aisi kya baat hai. tum kuch pareshan lag rahi ho.

Kashish: papa jab maine details padhi to muje sirf ek baat ki tension hai aapne Sinha industries pe 10 carod ki loan li hai. Aur papa jis comapny ka yeh project hai woh India me pehli baar business kar rahi hai aur hamara bhi yeh pehla project hai jo hum kisi foreign company se kar rahe hai.

Om: Tum chinta kyun kar rahi ho. Maine sab kuch dekh liya hai. Koi problem nahin hai sirf ek choti si hai. Kal sabke tender me humse koi compite kar sakta hai to woh hai Garewal Industries per tum iski chinta mat karo.

Kashish : Papa, yeh to wahi comapny hai jo is saal india ki top 5 industries me se hai.

Om: hai to wahi lekin muje nahin lagta ki woh log khas is project me hissa lenge.

Kashish : Per aisa kyun.

Om: Unke baki ke projects ko dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki yeh project unke liye bahot hi chota hai.

Kashish: Phir bhi papa hume itna lightly nahin lena chahiye.

Om: Yeh lo tumhari baatoin baatoin me hum office bhi pahoch gaye.

Kashish
(apne aap se) : pata nahin lekin jab se yeh Garewal industries ki baat suni hai mera dil bahot hi ghabra raha hai
Om: chalo beta.

Kashish: ji papa.
( Woh log office me jate hai)
(In Garewal mansion in Mumbai)

Veena
(dining table pe intazaar kar rahi hai) : Sujal jaldi aao. nasta thanda ho raha hai.
Sujal
(apne kamre se) : Mama, bas do minute me abhi aaya.
Charu: Do minutes bhaiyaa ke matlab 20 minutes.

Veena: Tu bata kal kyun itni dair se aayi.

Charu: Come on mama, aap to janti hai muje sab parties me jana padta hai aur phir muje waqt ka khayal hi nahin aata.

Veena : Muje to pehle se hi yeh achcha nahin lagta tha tumhara yeh fashion career or modeling.

Charu: Mama, Ab isme kya kharabi hai. Aur waise bhi bhaiyaa ko mujse koi shikayat nahin hai.

Veena: haa haa janti hoon. usne hi tuje bigad ke rakha hai.

(sujal walks down the stairs in Black suit with blue shirt.)

Sujal: Kya kaha mama. maine charu ko bigada hai.

Veena: sach hi to keh rahi hoon. Tune hi ise kuch jyada hi chut de raki hai.

Sujal: Kya mama, Abhi to yeh bachchi hai. aur haa mama main aaj Shimla jaa raha hoon.

veena: tu aaj ja raha hai aur abhi bata raha hai.

Akshat: Yehi to main keh raha hoon. Per phir bhi aauntie aapko to nahin jana. muje to saath jana hai phir bhi muje aaj subaah bata raha hai.

Veena: thik hai lekin is tarah achanak.

Akshat: Woh auntie kal hamare naye project ke tender ki meeting hai is liye.

Sujal: Aur agar yeh project hume mil gaya to hum India ki top 3 indusries me se hoge.

Akshat : per meri kuch samaj me nahin aata ki tum yeh project kyon le rahe ho. yeh to bahot hi mamuli hai hamare liye.

Sujal: Tum nahin samjoge. Teen din aur tum dekhna.

Akshat: Matlab.

Sujal: kuch nahin.........

Charu: Aapko samjna bhaiyaa means impossible. pata hi nahin chalta ki aap kya chahte ho.

Sujal: Mera ek hi wasool hai. Sujal garewal ko jo bhi pasand hai woh use hasil karke hi rehta hain.

Charu: I know bhiyaa like you always " what is Best has to be Sujal Garewal' s" . right

Sujal
(apne aap se) : Aaj lagta hai ki mera sapna pura ho jayega."
( in Sinha industires)

Om: Kashish beta, chalo ghar nahin jana.

Kashish : papa muje abhi ek ghante ka kaam baki hai. aap chaliye me bad me aajoungi.

Om : thik hai beta, main Angad ke saath chala jata hoon. tum driver ke saath ghar aa jana.

Kashish: thik hai papa.

Om: per ek ghante ke bad ek minute bhi nahin. jaldi aana main tumhara dinner pe intzaar karoonga.

Kashish: Ji papa.

(In car)

Akshat: Muje teri baat manni hi nahin chahiye thi. car me woh bhi Mumbai se Shimla tak.

Sujal: Abhi dair nahin huyi. Tum chaho to abhi bhi car se uther sakte ho.

Akshat: Bas kar Shimla ab sirf 15 km dur hai.

Sujal: Thik hai lekin Shimla pahochte hi hame kisi se Hotel ke bare me pochna hoga.

Akshat: tu abhi kyun sir kha raha hai. Abi 15 km baki haina.

Sujal: tera kuch nahin ho sakta.

(In Office)

Kashish
(Clock ki aur dekhke) : Lagta hai aaj main mar gayi. Do ghante ho gaye. Muje jaldi se nikalna hoga papa mera intzaar kar rahe hoge.
Kashish : Driver, zara car tej chalao. Papa mera intzaar kar rahe hoge.

(raste me)

Kashish : Driver, aaj yahan mandir me itni bhid kyun hai.

Driver: Madam, Aaj shravan mass ki poornima hai is liye.

Kashish: Matlab

Driver: Agar aaj ke din aap jo bhi bhagwan se mangogi woh aap ko mil jayega.

Kashish: thik hai tum car roko. main bas abhi aati hoon.

(Kashish goes to the mandir and gives chunari to panditjee to put it on god)

Kashish: hey! bhagwan muje apne liye kuch nahin chahiye. Sirf mere parivaar ko duniya bhar ki khushi mile. us per koi aanch na aaye.

( Mandir ke bahar sujal apni car rokta hai)

Akshat : yahaan tune car kyun roki.

Sujal: Bahar jaa aur kisi se Hotel Sunshine ka address pata kar ke aa.

Akshat: thik hai thik hai lekin aakhri baar ja raha hoon.

Sujal: ab tu jata hai ki.............

Kashish sidiyon se neeche utar rahi hai Aur Sujal car se bahar nikalta hai.

Sujal kashish ko bas dekhta hi rehta hai jab woh apna dupatta apne sir se nikalti hai......

Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi
Mehkege tumhari baho mei
Kashish sidiyon se neeche utar kar chal rahi thi tabhi uske chehre pe hawa ke jonke se sindoor lag jata hai aur sujal wahaan aakar use apna romaal deta hai aur Kashish bas use dekti hi rehti hai..Sujal ke liye Kashish ki aankhon me ajeeb si Kashish thi jo use baar baar dekhne pe majboor kar rahi thi aur Sujal ki aankhon me ajeeb sa nasha jo kashish ko majboor kar raha tha....

Tum tum the kahin
The hamare kuch nahi
Hum hum the tumhare kuch bhi nahi
Itna chota jaha
Ab achanak huwa
Khoye tum hamari raho mei
Aye hum tumhari chaao mei
Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi

Haan methane lage
Zindagi se sab gile
Hai jabse shuro
Tere mere yeh silshile
Choronge bas nahi yeh gile hum kabhi
Itani dher se kyu bin phire
Pahele kyu huye na tum mere

Kashish thanks karke wahaan se chali jati hai. Sujal bas us rumal ko dekhta hi rehta hai jispe woh sindoor laga hua tha...
Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi

Lekin car me beth ne se pehle woh mud kar Sujal ko dekti hai. aur dono ek dusre ki aur muskurate hai

Tumse yoon milenge
Humne socha na tha
Aur yeh zindagi

End episode ends on Sujal's smiled face.

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

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👏 nice part..i hope sujal ko contract mile to koi jhagda na ho jaye inke beech 😊

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nikita

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Posted: 17 years ago

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goshhhhhhh!!! what a perfect part and perfect entry of every character 👏 .kashish maana padega tumhe, that you create more and more excitement in every different fanfic you write cause every fanfic has it's own developed flavour 😉 .muaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!and the parts that u wrote today,they were fabulous . dono parts padh ke i am smiling continuously specially when sujal says that 'sujal garewal ko jo cheez pasand aati hai woh usse hasik kar ke reheta hai' ohhhhhh goddddd!!! uss line pe tohmein fida ho gayi 😳 .he is so amazing 🤗 .hey by the way i loved kashish's family a lot 😉 .kitna hasta-khelta parivaar hai joh hamesha aik doosre ke saath khada reheta hai ⭐️ .muaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! i loved everything in these two parts 👏 .and now i am sooooo damn excited to know what will happen 😉 .sujal aur kashish aik doosre ko office mein kaise milege 😳 and what will be their reaction when they will stand opposite each other,as in rivals for getting this project 😉 .the part were great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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Bhumika amin

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Posted: 17 years ago

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WOW yaar...wat a part i love both of your part. ..it was awesome....lets see who gets thr project...sujal or kashish.... 😆

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Imaan-Ki-Duaa

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Posted: 17 years ago

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lovely ff dear... 👏 ..gud concept...seems interstng 2..frst 2 parts were gr8..n the way thy both met 4 da frst time... 😳 ...was really nice..cont soon... 😊

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey kashish!!!!..........so sinha n garewal going 4 the same project this time 😊............although sujal is a biggger buseiness man than u taking interest in that project ❓.........intro of garewal family n akshat was great !!!!!!!!!.................akshat n sujal firnedship 😆 😊 .............sujal n kashish saw each other for the first time 😉!!!!!!!!............continue soon plzzzzzzz...........can't wait 4 the next part !!!!!!!!!!!!

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

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very good..ahaan pehli nazar mein sujal , kashish ke dil mein kuch kuch hua...lekin yeh kya they are business rivals... i hope sab theek ho unke beech..very well written. bohat achcha.. 👏 do post the next part soon.. me waiting eagerly for it... 😊

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Part-3

Akshat aakar dekhta hai to Sujal kahi khoye huyi nazaro se kisi ko dekh raha tha.

Akshat (Sujal ko hilakar) : Kis khayal me khoye huye ho. lagta hai Sujal Garewal ko koi khas chij pasand aa gayi hai. Chal chal bata kaisi thi woh.

Sujal (Uske khayalon me khoya hua): Naa aaj se pehle maine aisa khubsurat chehra dekha hai naa kabhi dekh paunga. Kya masoomiyat thi uske chehre pe. Aur aankhen to aisi jise dekte hi pyaar ho jaye. Kuch to kashish thi us ladki me jo pehli nazar me hi kuch kar gayi.

Akshat: kya kar gayi.

Sujal: kuch kuch.

Akshat: thik hai ab chal hume hotel nahin jana.

(woh dono wahaan se nikal jate hai aur dusari aur Kashish ghar pahochti hai.)

(in Sinha house)

Dadi : Beta, tu kahan thi. hum log kabse tuje phone karne ki koshish kar rahe the. Aur yeh kya pure chehre pe gulal laga ke rakha hai. Ja jakar naha le.

Parvati: Per yeh sab hua kaise.

Kashish: kuch nahin aate waqt Mandir gayi thi aaj Shravan mass ki poornima hai na is liye. Mama, papa kahaan hai.

Parvati: Woh dinner karke so gaye hai kal subaah meeting hai na is liye. Ab tu jaldi se fresh ho ja main Kripa ke haath tera khana kamre me bhijavati hoon.

Kashish: thik hai mama.

(Kashish's room)

(Kashish apne Bathroom se bahar nikal ke aaine me dekhti hai aur kuch rang nikal hi nahin raha tha aur woh aaine me dekhkar kahin khoyi huyi thi)

Kripa( Khana lekar): Yeh rang aise chutne walon me se nahin aur aaj to upper se Shravan mass ki poornima. Chal jaldi se aa khana thanda ho raha hai.

Kashish: Muje bhukh nahin hai.

Kripa: Aur ek baat aur bhi kehte hai log ki jo bhi aaj aap se mile use ek hi nazar kafi hoti hai pyaar ke liye. Bata kaun hai.

Kashish: kripa tu bhi naa. Koi nahin hai……

Kripa: Ab muje nahin batayegi to main papa se jake batati hoon.

Kashish:Kripa...., thik hai batati hoon. (kashish ko Sujal ka chehra nazar aa raha hai) Pata nahin lekin uske chehre ko dekhkar laga ki sari duniya ek hi pal me tham gayi. Uske chehre ke samne kuch bhi aur dikhai hi nahin deta tha. Aisa lagta tha ki bas use dekhte hi jao. Pata nahin lekin uski ek hi jalak ne mere sare hosh uda diye. Kya ise hi pyaar kehte hai.

Kripa: Tu mujse pooch rahi hai. Woh Kashish jise pyaar ki alawa aur kuch baatein samaj hi nahin aati. Lagta hai Papa se kehkar teri doli ruksat karni hogi usse pehle tu puri pagal ho jaye.

Kashish: Kripa tu jati hai ya nahin.

Kripa: thik hai thik hai lekin Barah baje se pehle woh tuje dikh jaye to uska matlab yahin hai ki woh tera sachcha pyaar hai Aur haa khana khana mat bhulna.

Kashish: tum bhi na.. Aisa kuch nahin hoga. (Kashish khana khane jati hai.)

(In Hotel)

Akshat ( Sujal ko uska jacket dete huye): Ab uth yahaan se hum log bahar ja rahe hai.

Sujal: Mera mood nahin hai.

Akshat: Tuje yahaan devdas banane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Maine manager se baat ki hai usne kahan hai ki yahaan kuch hi doori pe ek club hai aur kya pata Woh ladki bhi wahaan aayi ho.

Sujal: Woh ladki aisi nahin hai. Woh wahaan nahin hogi.

Akshat: tu ek baar chal to sahi. Woh kya kai aur mil jayegi.

Sujal: Nahin akshat ab to sirf woh.

Akshat: thik hai mere bhai ab chal to sahi.

(Woh dono car me bethkar nikalte hai lekin raste me uski car kharab ho jati hai aur woh dono pedal chal ke club me ja rahe hai.)

Kashish Khana khakar khidki pass bethi hai aur usko Kripa ki baat aur sujal ka chehra samne dikhai de ta hai.

Sujal: Main kaha tha ki mera mood kharab hai aur upper se yeh car bhi.

Akshat: tu chinta kyun kar raha hai. agar woh ladki tere nasseb me hai to tuje zaroor milegi. Aur waise bhi dekh kitni achchi raat hai. woh dekh chand ko. Hey! tu sun raha hai koi ga raha hai chal jakar dekhte hai.

Kashish Khidaki ke bahar chaand ko dekh rahi hai.

(song she is singing )

Sab jag soye hum jagein

taaron se karain batain

ho............chandi ratain, chandi raatain

Takte takte tooti jaaye aas

piya na aaye re takte takte

Sham savere dard anokhe uthe

jiya ghabraaye re sham savere

raaton ne meri neend loot lee

din ke chain churaye re

dukhiya aakhen dhoond rahi hain

kahin pyaar ki baatain

ho..............chandi raataein .. ho chandni raatein

(Kashish Sujal ko neeche raste pe dekhti hai aur phir clock me dekhti hai to thik barah baje hote hai)

Dil ke dhadkanen tujhe pukare

Aaja balam aayi baharain

Baith ke tanhai main karlain

sukh dukh ki do batain

chandni raatain, chandi raatain

Sab jag soye hum jagein

taaron se karain batain

ho.................chandni raatain, chandi raatain

(Sujal kashish ko upper khidaki me dekhta hai jisne safed color ka satin night suite pehna rakha hai aur uske baal hawa ke jonke ke saath bikhr rahe hai aur dono ek dusre ki aankhon me kho jate hai.)

Parvati: Kashish beta tu abhi soyi nahin. kafi dair ho gayi hai.

Kashish (ek dum ghabrake pichche mudti hai) Kuch nahin mama bas main to khidaki hi ban karne ja rahi thi.(Woh sujal ko dekhkar khidaki bandh karti hai).

Parvati : Lagta hai aaj tu bahot khush hai. kitne dino ke baat gana gaya hai.

Kashish: Bas kuch bhi to nahin hai. dil ne kaha to gaa diya. Thik hai ab tum yahaan se jao main sone ja rahi hoon. Good night mama.

( Kashish sone chali jati hai aur akhir me woh dono bhi club me pahoch hi jate hai.)

Akshat: Come on yaar, tune kab se club me enjoy karna chod diya. Her club me hungama karne wala Sujal aaj chupchap ek khone me bethkar pi raha hai.

Sujal: kuch nahin. tu jana yahaan se.

Akshat: tu maan ya naa maan tuje us ladki se pyaar ho gaya hai.

Sujal: tu janta hai phir bhi. Sujal Garewal aisi choti baatoin me viswas nahin karta.

Akshat. Tu kuch bhi kehle lekin teri aankhen jooth nahin bol sakti..

(Akshat Dance floor pe jata hai lekin wahaan woh kisi se takrata hai)

Akshat: Neev tu yahaan kya kar raha hai. mera matlab Delhi se Shimla.

Neev: Kuch Nahin Do din ke baad meri shaadi hai is liye. Tu bata tu kaisa hai aur Sujal kahaan hai.

Akshat: Congrets. Chal main tuje Sujal se milvata hoon.

Neev: Hi! sujal, Kaisa hai tu aur yeh kya halat ki hai. Jo sujal party ko rock karta hai woh aaj meri hi party spoil kar raha hai.

Sujal: Kya matlab

Neev: Do din baad meri shaadi hai aur aaj maine kuch apne dosto ke liye party di hai. so cheer up buddy.

Sujal: Mera mood nahin hai.

Neev: Hey Akshat ise kya hua.

Akshat: Janaab ko ishq ho gaya hai. Pareshani yeh hai ki sirf hum log us ladki ka chehra aur ghar jante hai.

Neev: dont worry yaar, Sun kal mera aur Prachi ka sangeet hai aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki woh koi praachi ki saheli ho. To tum log kal Snowhill Soceity bunglow no 4 pe sham 7 baje aaja. bhulna mat.

Akshat: tu chinta mat kar hum log 7 kya usse pehle hi aajenge. Waise is shah jahan ki mumtaz ko jo tundana hai.

Sujal: Whatever.

(Aur kuch dair baad Neev un dono ko hotel chod deta hai aur phir woh apne ghar chala jata hai.)

kashish aur Sujal dono sone ki koshish karte hai lekin so hi nahin pate. aur dono ke mann me ek hi baat aati hai ki kahi muje pyaar to nahin ho gaya.

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago