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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMGGG AWSUM PART!!!!!

I luved it I jsut read the whole thing and it is omgg awsum, okay starting from the beggining i luvv ur title, I liked the part where Kripa is like "i wish i didnt have a repute to keep"lol, angad is soo ugh 🤢 poor Kripa, this is like the only ff i have read where the perfect person is always making the mistakes and the bad image person is always gaining the sympathy. And angad and mishti **gosh** they do not look gud togeatha....Ak on teh other hand are matchinn...lol i guess Kripa should hang with prithvi nd make Angad jelous! 😃 ANd OMGG I HOPE ITZ NOT ANgad hu says teh promo thingg cause its his fault....


anyways continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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GOD!!! what TwistS n TurnS!!! da FF iz goin gr8! plzz continue soon!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hhmmm...do continue

well I had liked this:

M- angad I think you should talk to her, I mean we all know how much she likes you, angad nodded and went out to follow her.



it sounded somewhat....well I don't know how to explain that.......hhmmm...wel I had felt that Angad was the very mature type and all till the scene in the lift...he got carried away.....but he sounded very mature and not like the Angads in your other fanfics......he sounded like a totally goodie goodie guy in here....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54


thankssssssssssss guys for the comments!!!!!!!!!!!!, really apprecitae it!!!, thnx a ton!!!!!!!! 👏


Part 4

The next morning, kripa stretched, rolling over, when she felt a pair of hands around her waist, she opened her eyes and screamed, waking up angad. Gosh how could you have done this kripa, when she thought about mishti, gosh now she would be called a s*** for taking someone else's boyfriend to bed. Angad slowly got up to realize, A- wtf, omg sh**. K- what happened last night, I mean, A- god, just shut up if you weren't so drunk and tempted me, K- hey it's not my fault, A- just shut up, he said putting his clothes back on and leaving. Kripa had no choice but to do the same. Angad arrived to school for graduation, what was supposed to be the best day turned out to be the worst, he felt so guilty but what had happened last night, there was something, he just didn't know. Angad walked up to mishti smiling when it turned into a frown when he saw kripa there. M- look now he comes, god Angad I never knew you were such a jerk, seriously how low can you get I never knew, you freaken betrayed me, she said with tears. Angad looked over to kripa furiously, she had told her, only to get him, A- no mishti, please forgive me , I swear, I didn't do anything , it's that s***'s fault he said point to kripa, ouch he had hit her straight in the heart, how could he say that.

The next thing you heard was angad receiving a big slap, K- Yep that's right , blame it all on me, I mean after all I'm the "bad girl" of this school right, I mean this is so typical, when a guy does something wrong blame it all on the girl, but don't forget it takes two okay, A- oh shut up kripa you're the one that seduced me to bed if you hadn't kissed me then this wouldn't have all happened, you know what forget it I didn't need any of you, firstly kripa your just a s***, and mishti it's sad to know you don't even trust me , M- no Angad I , A- you what huh? then why don't believe me it wasn't my fault, mishti looked over at kripa and stared at her disgustingly. K- omg you know what, angad I wish you just go to hell and mishti your too blind fine I 'll take responsibility but just to let you know your in love with a big jerk and she walked off never turning back.


Five years later

A lot had happened in the past five years for kripa, after graduation she had moved from Canada, and study interior designing. Though everyday she would be playing around with colors her life was dull, she wasn't the same kripa she was at school. Firstly she hadn't dated anyone, she was all alone. Basically she had turned into the reserve, boring, quiet type but most of all she had turned into a responsible woman. But what was the same , was her love for angad, yep she couldn't forget him, he truly was her first love and she had realized it over these year, except she would never forgive him for many reasons.


Kripa woke up as usual around 7 am, she freshened up wearing a nice dress, doing her hair and make up, though she could care less she had to look presentable for her job. She had a quick breakfast, and left in a taxi. She arrived at work, and walked straight into the boss's office. K- yes sir you called, B- yeh kripa, we have a very big project for you to do, you'll be getting great money, and a possible raise if everything works out, but you will have to move back to Canada. B- You will be designing the house of a wealthy businessman and will be staying at the house, so are you willing to take the offer.


Kripa stood there, she had promised herself to never go back to Canada, it'll just bring back the bad memories , but then what were the odds of running into him, I mean maybe she needed a change for her life, I mean what was her life, nothing except waking up, getting dressed, come to work, stay for long hours, go back home, eat dinner and go to sleep; she didn't go out , watch movies , she didn't even watch tv or listens to music, K- okay sir I'll take it. B- great you'll be leaving in three days, I hope that's okay, K- yep she nodded and walked back out.

Kripa came home that night, she decided to celebrate by herself, she poured herself a glass of coke, she had stopped drinking ever since the prom, she had stopped a lot of things. She sat down on her couch drinking, remembering these lonely years and the pain she had gone through, when she fell asleep.


The next two days she had finished packing and cleared her apartment. She landed in Canada a few hours ago and was now on her way to meet her client. She finally arrived, in front of a huge mansion. She got off taking her luggage and walked through the gates. She knocked on the door.

A man in his late 40's to early 50's opened the door, M- hello you must be kripa, I'm Dhilip kh…. When his phone rang, kripa looked at him, he looked familiar, probably seen him in the magazine she thought to himself. When he hung up, D- sorry I have an urgent meeting, I have to go now, make your self at home, and be free to look around the house , if you need anything my number is near the phone , and the Mrs. should be home soon. Kripa nodded and walked in as he left.


She settled herself in her room, and decided to walk around the house. She noticed the walls were all white no color just like her life, dull and plain. She checked the living room and kitchen out, trying to figure what would look good. She had a lot of work to do, it seemed as she walked around the huge house. She looked around in the rooms, when she ended up in the last room.

She walked in, it seemed to be a guy's room, she noticed as there were shirts around , when she noticed a girl's top, she just looked away disgustedly only to see beer cans. The wind blew through the window, causing kripa to have goose bumps, it seemed as if it were to rain anytime now, she decided to close the window so the rain wouldn't come in.

She put her arms up to close the window , when she felt a pair of hands on her bare waist caressing it softly, god the touch felt so familiar , V- I wasn't expecting you so soon, sweetheart. Kripa froze in her position , it was him, s*** how was she supposed to turn and face him after five year, after what had all happened , when she felt his lips on her shoulder moving her top. Before she knew it , angad had turned her around and was kissing her with his eyes closed, going deeper and deeper, the kiss felt so familiar for him, except she wasn't giving in , when he was pushed back and slapped across the face, angad looked up angrily when he stood there shocked , K- don't you dare touch me you disgusting man. And she walked out , when she was stopped by his voice , A- well, well if it aint the girl who was head over heels for me in school, what's your name again , oh kripa right , yeh , well what a surprise , and how the heck did a s*** turn so good he said looking her up and down , A- I mean you must have enjoyed me touching you, kripa looked at him disgustingly , while he just smirked.


Yep this was the new angad khanna, after the whole graduation , he had a rep for having two girls at a time, going off to college had made it worse, he turned into a total party animal, he drank, smoked like h***, he flirted and date so may girls and even two at a time, being the jerk her was. He's irresponsible, brags about his wealth; but he had managed to get a degree in business though, yet didn't have a job. All he did was party, hand out with his mates, and latest girlfriend, basically he was a useless and pathetic.

As for the khanna family, dhilip had started a business which turned out to be real successful, and which is why they have millions.



Okay so here's the part😃, now I just want to say kripa didn't know that was his dad, coz obviously she never met his parents.


Edited by Chocolate_luver - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
gr888888888 god idiot angad called her a slut but actually he was tempted

gr8 part

plz cont soon this time u are taking long

love
nihita
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Posted: 17 years ago
#56
wow. amazing part. interesing how one mistake can change sum1's life nd personality. cont soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
nice part
our mistakes help us a lot in life...
btw i dont like any1 of the khanna... neither the new one nor the old one...
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
great part!
angad called her a s*** and blamed it all on her just to hide his own guilt, he knew he was the one to blame but his pride got the better of him!

angad accusitions had had such a huge effect on kripa that from a bubbly and full of life girl she turned into a dull and reserved one.

and angad is still a jerk!

update soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59

man Angad Khanna you are discussing😡that was a rocking part cant wait to read more 😃 poor kripa and you Angad you better stay away from her otherwise you dead😡👏👏

Love, Laiba😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60
angad is gay guess whos the slu* now mr angad khana....(all fingers pointing towards angad)
hes so disgusting hello earth to angad u were not drunk SHE was!!!
and wasnt kripa supose to get pregnent???? 😆

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