Kick of love-ak Note Page 152+link - Page 3

Originally posted by: joa123

wow gr8 start...
i luv this tomboy kripa 😉
first meeting me hi ladai start ho gayi inki😆 😉
do update soon

thanks!!!!😳, hehehe glad you like kripa's character!!, lolzzz😆, will do thankss!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: iamsmart

awesome part
i'm glad u started writing another ff
i'm soo happy
cont soon
can't wait for the next part


thanksssss sana!😃, awwww thanks!😳, will do!!!, next part should be posted either today or tomorow!!


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~Sana~

Originally posted by: Kaj!

wow gr8 part. another fab fan fic....continue soon 😆 😛

thankssssss kaj!😳. will doo!!!!!!! soon hopefully!😃😆

Originally posted by: mintfresh

glad u started this ff
i loved the concept
it really sounds fun and interesting
amzing start
plz cont soon

awwwww thanks!😳, glad you like the concept!!, thanks will continue soon hopefully!!!!😃

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Fab start.
liked it...interesting.
plz cont. soon

awww thankyou!!!!!😳, glad you liked it!!!, will do!!😃

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

AWWW....you started a new fanfic...omg...I love this one too....hmmm...so I guess I'd prefer you to continue this ff and Chupke Se Nazar Mille..... 😳 😉

yeh lolz😆, awww thanks 😳glad you like this one toooo!!!!!!!!!, lol i'll continue chupke more but yeh lol thanks!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: tommygirl

awesome part
continue soon

thanks tommygirl!!!!!!!, will try and do!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

woaw amazing start 😆 loved it continue soon😃 btw can you do me a favor and please tell me the name of all your FF as i'm trying to find all of them and read them😳 i cant stand the fact i've not a FF of yours to read 👏
Love, Laiba

awwwwwwwwww thanksssssss laiba!!!!!!!!!!😳, will try and do!!!!!!!!!, umm okay lolz there's a few 😆, - desire, unpredictable, annoymous, no time for luv, unwanted love , chupke se naazar mile and yeh that's about it lolzzzz, awwwwww so sweeet!!!😳😆,thankssssssssssssssssssssss😃

Originally posted by: damilola

aww another ff again yehhhh lolz another😆

great part 1 thankssssssssssss

loved it glad you liked it!!!!!😃

ctn soon will try and do!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: srk ki deewani

wow another 1. 👏 👏 yehhhhhh lolz thanks!!!!!!!😃
nice part. 😃 😃 😃 thankyou glad you liked part 1!!!!!😃
cont sooon!!!! 😊 😊 will try and do!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: babygirl

kl part continue soon 😊

awwwwwwww thankyou!!!, glad you liked it, will try and do!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: crazy_craze

Hmmm....liked Angad's introo...it rock'd!! Fantastic name "Kick of love" soo awesome choco!!!! Ummm....i hope Angad makes Kripas like hell...HAHA, tht will be too hialrious!!!! Seriouslyyy *] great part!! cont soon=]

thankssssssssss, glad you liked his intro!!!!!!!!!😃, awww thanks, aww choco sounds so sweet 😳lolz srry😆, he willl lolz 😆, thanks will try and do!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: me_iq

awwwsome intro...do cont sooon 😳

awwwwwwwwwwww thankyouzzzzzzzzzzzz😳, will try to do!!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

loved it...continue soon

awwwwwwww thanks!!!!!!!!!!!, will try and do hopefully !!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

what!! u can't just stop there!! u gotta continue!!!
longing for more!!!!!
please!!!!
lol
great part!!!!!!

awwwwwwwwwww lolz sorrry for stoping there😆, thanksssssssssssss, i'll try and continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!😃, glad you liked the part, thanks!😳

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!!!! i like this story already 👏

awwwwwwwwwwwww thankuuu!!!!!!😳😳, will try and do!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, glad you like this story already!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. gr8 start. i actually like this fan fic a lot better now than wen i read the intro earlier. is this the only fan fic that ur starting or r us starting ne of the other ones?

thankssssssss😳, ummm no i've started we're simply opposite as well😃, aww glad you like it better now!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

lol i loved the part plz continue soon dear 😃

aww thanks hun, will try and doo, glad you like part 1!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: ishu124

its awesome. you must continue...im dying for the rest. continue sooon.

awwwwwwwww thankssssssss!!!!!!!😃, glad you like part 1!!!, will try and continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 awesome start 👏

thankyou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😃,😳 glad you liked the start!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😊😳

Originally posted by: huntor

Great part continue soon plz!!

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu😳, will try and post next art today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃

Originally posted by: popgirl

Awesome start cont soon 👏 👏

thanksss popgirl!!!!!!!!!!!, glad you liked the start , will try and continue soon!!!!!!!!😳😃

Originally posted by: jdsean

I love the idea of this story. It reminds me of Bend It Like Beckham. But I abtime isolutely love it from the time I saw the promo I was excited to read it. Continue soon.

awwwwwwwwww thanks , glad you like the idea😃, yeh when i was writing the first part i was like wow it's like bend it like beckham, i lurveeeeeeeeeee dat movie!!!! lolz, awwwwwwwwwww thanks !!!!!!!!!!!😳, will try and do!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanku!!!😃

thanks guysssssss, for your lovely comments!!!!!!!!!!!🤗, ummm i'll try and continue soon, after i do my dumb essay!!!!!!!!!!!, thanks once again !!!!!!!!

Part 2

Kripa swallowed , she looked away, while angad just grinned harder , when he spoke , A- hey girls , sorry for the delay, something had come up he said eyeing kripa, as you know my dad is Mr. khanna , well don't except anything different in training wise except that I'm a lot harder, as I believe the more you train the better you get, so no lame excuses or trick will work on me , and you can all close your mouths now, and by the way call me angad and not coach it's so old fashion, and I'm only 21 , and I'm pretty sure your all smart girls to know that consider young, now hit the grounds I want four laps around , followed by twenty push ups and crunches.

The girls ran away giggling and talking about their new dashing yet arrogant coach "angad", kripa was about to turn to start her laps , when she was held back, A- as for you missy, I didn't know you loved praising me, seriously , next time you got something to say , say it to my face sweety, now move it, I want you to do 6 laps , K- but I will, A- you will what?, K- I'll go run six laps she mumbling in anger, A- now that's like a good girl , he said with a grin, kripa just rolled her eyes and ran to complete her six laps.

The rest of the team were done before kripa as she was on her last lap, kripa came running back to them, A- nice of you to join us ms?, K- it's kripa, A- what kind of name is that, the girls laughed while kripa said K- it's my name , A- whatever don't need to know your life story miss k-r-i-p-a. A- anyway as you know our first game is coming up soon, so I except every Saturday and Friday afternoon, for everyone one to be here on time, and don't worry miss kripa I'll be here before you, okay you guys can leave, I'll let you off early today only because i came late, and felt bad, now go before I change my mind, team- thank you angad, A- no problems girls he said waving bye to them.

Sanjana waved bye to Angad while kripa just ignored and walked off, angad just smirked and walked back to his car. Sanjana caught up with kripa, S- omg kripa his soooo hot, K- yuck, S- wait what would you know, your not even into boys yet, K- yes and I am glad I this way. When a few girls came up to them from the team, g1- omg he' soo cute huh, gosh how are we supposed to train in front of him, it's going to be so embarrassing, g2- my gosh I could jut look at him all day, I agree, what if look stupid or make a mistake, how embarrassing, K- WHAT THE HECK, HIS ONLY A GUY NOT SOME KIND OF GOD, she said running off. G1-G2- what's her problem, S- you know kripa is miss attitude around here. K- I'm not she screamed from ahead. While the girls' just laugh shaking their head.

Kripa went home and took a shower, she unfortunately was going shopping with her mum for the engagement that was taking place on Saturday and then the wedding on Sunday. Gayathri and kripa drove to the mall, where they sold Indian outfits, kripa walked behind texting on her phone wearing baggy pants and a white t-shirt. G- kripa hurry up, I have to be home soon to cook, K- why?, G- one of eijaz friend's are coming over, kripa just sighed and walked with her mum. They walked into a couple of stores, and got a few outfits for her, finally they were done. They left and reached home.

Gayathri was busy cooking, while kripa stayed in her bedroom, her dad, Mr. Dev Kapoor was still at work. Gayathri came up few minutes later knocking on her door, G- kripa open the door, kripa opened the door, K- yeh mumma ,G- get ready nicely, eijaz's friend is coming over, I want you to looked presentable please, not like this, K- mumma, she whined , G- kripa please beti for me, K- mumma you know your very good and emotionally blackmailing someone, G- I know sweety ,thank you now be quick, how about you wear one of the costumed we brought today to see how it goes, huh?, K- fine , I'll be down soon. Kripa closed the door and stomped her feet, she hated this, it was as usual, whenever some one came over, she had to dress up like a sweet Indian girl. "Sweet girl, my foot, she said to herself, "why oh why "she said whining into the bathroom.

A few minutes later she came out wearing this, "gosh how do you put this scarf around, ufff, MUMMA!, she screamed, but she didn't reply, kripa opened the door and walked down into the living room, K- mumma, how do you put this stupid thing, when she looked up and realized her brother was standing in front, with her mum and his guest, when her eyes widened, it was non other than her annoying coach. Gayathri just smiled and moved with kripa out of the room into the kitchen. G- kripa gosh you can't do anything , she said placing her dupatta properly, K- well it's not like I wear this everyday she said folding her arms, plus I don't see why I always have to impress everyone , seriously I feel like one of those girls in a Hindi movie, where the guy has come to ask for my hand in marriage she said pretending to be shy with her dupatta. G- kripa you and your stubbornness and attitude. K- what I get from dad, G- of course your daddy's pet after all.

G- now go and give these drinks and snack while I finish off, K- fine, kripa put on a fake smile and walked into the living room. She saw her brother and her coach angad chatting, angad looked up and grinned at her, while kripa cursed him under her breath, god she hated this guy already , E- oh Angad you must already know kripa, she's the captain after all, A- yes I met her today , she's very sweet he said with a smirk, K- here you go she said pushing a glass into his hand, E- well not really she's a pain , btw kripa you must remember angad remember back in elementary school , K- no I only remember important stuff, now if you may excuse me I don't have all day to chat with you and she walked out, E- sorry she's brat, A- yeh I figured .

Eijaz and angad went up to his room to catch up, Gayathri was done , and forced kripa to set the table, which she did and went and changed into normal clothes, she had enough, she changed into a pair of baggy jeans , and a brown hoodie, and went back down, G- kripa why you change, K- mum please G- fine but go call you brother and angad, K- ufff, am I some kind f servant, G- KRIPA, K- okay jeeze I'm going. Kripa went up and opened the door, finding eijaz on the bed and angad on the computer chair chatting. A- wow eijaz I didn't know you have a brother he said , eijaz couldn't help but laugh, K- SHUTUP BOTH OF YOU, bro mum said to come down and eat, she then eyed angad with a evil look , A- what stop staring, and she disgustedly turned away to walk down on to hear angad say to her brother , A- I think your brother wait sorry sister has a crush on me he said sarcastically, E- please kripa and boys equals a disaster, and they both laugh , while kripa mentally reminds her self to kill eijaz later while cursing angad.

preview- angad's girlfriend decides to drop in for practice😉

okay here is the next part!!!😃 hope you like it!

Originally posted by: joa123

fab part...do cont soon

thanks!!!!!!!!!😳, will do later on in the week!!!!!!

Originally posted by: ridhijai

Great part.

thanks!!!!😳

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

woaw amazing part loved it😳 i prefer kripa in baggys jeans more than in indian outfits😆 anywes thanks for telling the name of your FF i finaly found them lol😆 conttinue soon i woneder who is Anagd girlfriend😕😆
Love, Laiba

awwwww thankyouzzzzzzzzzz😳, i'm finding it a hard time imagining her like this lolz😆, aww no probs!!!!!, lol glad you found them all !!😆, hmmm as for his girlfriend , we'll just have to see!!!!!!😉, thankssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

Originally posted by: Kaj!

haha she dislikes him already 😆 uff i hate it when bros make ur izzat ka falooda infront of their friends 😡 jee mein aata hai jhaapad maaru 😆 😆

yeh lolzzzzzzzzz😆, omg i know ufff i feel like beating them up, 😆, they think they're all cool and stuff though i dnt have a bro i can totally relate to kripa lolz, my sis always does this at times😆, anwyas thankssssssss😃

Originally posted by: crazy_craze

HAHA. That was funny!!!! Loll....I never knew you had a brother..LOL!!! OMG!! You better continuee..I cant wait!! Seriously!!! This ff roxx!!!! its soo damn hilarious!!!!! HAHA.!
Imma call you "Choco" from now on.....k 😉
Hmm...Angadz GF......if its Mishti I swear imma kill soemone...I hate that stupid Bufallu   ; ; ; Cont soonn 😆

awww glad to make you you laugh😃, nah i don't have a brother lolz i have an annoying sis , but i have many cousins brother who can be a pain 😆, awwww yep choco it is hehehe, glad you liked that part😃, i'll continue soon hopefully!!!!!!!!!😆, lol only time will tell😉, lolz😆, will do thanks!!!!!!!!😳

*edited*

wow i'm such an idiot lolzzzzz😆, i just got you were talking about that partttttttt, lol hahahhaa and i thought you were asking me, wow i'm slowwwww😆