'EK KHWAHISH' PART-1 updated RN FIC

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mehrun

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hello frnds,

We (MEHRUN & RABI) together have started a creation "Dreams_world_creations" and we present the very first fic of our creations "EK KHWAHISH"

Presenting Story with a difference…………

BY Dreams_world_creations

EK KHWAHISH!!!!!

Kabhi kabhi humari zinadgi hume kisi aise mukaam par le aati hai jahan hum sab kuch paa kar bhi sab kuch kho jate hai….

Humari zindagi mein sab hote hue bhi kuch kaami reh jati aur adhoori reh jati EK KHWAHISH!!!!!!

Wo EK KHWAHISH jo humari zindagi hoti hai, jo humare jeene ki wajah ban jati hai………..

Lekin kya RAJVEER aur NAINA ki wo KHWAHISH puri hogi????

Ya phir adhoori he reh jayegi????

Main Characters of the story

Rajeev Khandelwal as Rajveer shekhawat

Arjun bijlani as Sameer sharma

Priyanka basii as Naina singh

Other Characters

Deepraj rana as Nair

Rajesh Khera as Bhargav

Sameer sharma as Navin singh

Ghazal rai as Pooja ghai

Harshad Chopra as Nihal kapoor

Akashdeep saigal as Amit sahay

Vikas sethi as Prashant sahay

Chetan hansraj as Vikram

Farida jalal as Geeta ghai

Irawati Harshe as Neelima shergil

Chaitanya chowdhary as akshat shergil

REGDS:

Dreams World Creations

Edited by anam_mehrun - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Ritika2025
sounds interesting..continue soon

Thanks Ritika we will continew it Soon 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: amritafan
plz cont

Inshallah we will continew it very soon 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: amritafan
plz cont

Inshallah we will continew it very soon 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

mehrun rabi awesome intro...cont please 😊

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mehrun

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: arabia786
mehrun rabi awesome intro...cont please 😊

hi arabia thanks for ur comment v shall continue it soon😊

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mehrun

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Posted: 17 years ago

EK KHWAHISH!!!! PART -1

Aaaye aap sabko le chalet hai shimla ke ek ghar mein yahan par thodi si hulchal machi hue hai , aaeye dekhtein hai k yaha kya ho raha hai
Lekin rukiye humne to aapko bataya he nahi ye kiska ghar hai ye ghar hai NAINA SINGH ka , wo NAINA jo na sirf aapne bahiya ki jaan hai balki pure colony ki bhi jaan bhi hai , wo bacho ke saath bachchi ban jati aur waqt aane par apne bahiya ko dadi ki tarah samjhati hai, uske bahiya Navin Singh ek Army Officer hai isliye bhut kam waqt apni family ko de pate hai , naina ki mummy neetu singh aur papa Ashutosh singh ko apni bete aur beti dono par bhut naz hai , ek Army mein hai to dusri apni singing ki wajah se pure shimla mein jaani jati hai, waise naina M.B.A kar rahi bas singing uski hobby hai ,uska aim to hai ek achchi si job pana. Ufff….. Hum bhi na aap sabko batao mein ye to batana he bhul gaye aaj Naina ke ghar mein itni hulchal kyun machi hue hai

Naina – mummy jaldi karo mujhe late ho raha hai
Neetu- aa rahi hun, tu bhi na ghar ko sir par utha rakha hai is ladki ne

Neetu room se bhar attin hai naina ka bag lekar

Neetu- ye lo tumhara bag sara saman rakh diya hai ok.

Naina – ok papa ab main jati hun warna train chut jayegi

Ashutosh – ok beta aapna dhyan rakhna aur pooja ko humari wishes dena

Jaise he naina bag uthati hai uska mobile bajne lagta hai, wo dekhti hai k Pooja ka call hota hai, Naina call receive karti hai
(pooja uski bachpan ki friend hai )

Naina – hi
Pooja – oye tu ye hi hello chod phele ye batao delhi ke liye nikli ya nahi
Naina – tum phone rakhegi tabi to niklungi
Pooja – kya tu abhi tak nikli nahi, naina yaar kal meri engagement hai aur tu abhi tak wahi hai
Naina – arre yaar tu ghabra matt main kal subha tak pohach jaungi, achcha chal main phone rakhti hun warna train miss ho jayegi , ok byee

Naina call disconnect karke railway station ke liye nikal jaati hai
Naina station par pohachti hai ,aur uske samne se he train ja rahi hoti hai, naina train ke peeche bhagti hai but train chali jaati hai

Naina – oh god!!!!! Ab kya karun main meri train miss ho gayi

Naina railway enquiry office mein jati hai, wahan usse pata chalta hai ke kal shaam se phele aur koi train nahi hai delhi ke liye,
Naina ghar lautti hai

Neetu – aare beta tum gayi nahi kya hua train late hai kya??
Naina – nahi mumma aaj phir meri train miss ho gayi.
Ashutosh haste hue- to ye kaun si badi baat hai aksar aisa he hota hai
Naina – papa please kuch kijeye ab main kya karun, kal shaam koi train nahi hai aur 6 pm par last bas thi main wo bhi miss kar di , aur kal subha 8 baje se phele koi bas bhi nahi milegi, ab main kya karun???

Ashutosh – beta ab job hi hoga kal he hoga , aur jahan tumne pooja ki engagement miss ki to tumhari to wo jaan he lelegi

Naina – papa please kuch lijeye

Tabhi telephone ki ring bajti hai, nain call receive karti hai

Naina- hello
Navin – hey kya hua tum, yahi ho kya hua phir se train miss ho gayi kya(laughing)

Naina – bhaiya please aap to mat mazak kijeye , main bhut tension mein hunk al tak koi train aur bas bhi nahi hain aur mujhe har haal mein kal delhi pohachna hai, ab main kya karun

Navin – hmm ye to bahut badi problem hai to ab kya
Naina – pata nahi mujhe to kuch samajh mein he nahi aa raha hai
Navin – to ek kaam karo na car lekar abhi nikal jao subha tak to pohach he jaogi na
Naina – gr88 idea bhaiya , ok bahiya main abhi rakhti hun got to go

Naina, neetu aur ashutosh ko car se jane ko kehti hai but neetu nahi manti hai

Naina – mumma please jaane do please please

Neetu – beta shaam ke 7 baj rahe hai tumhe delhi pohachne mein subha ho jayegi. And I dnt think k raat ka safar safe hota

Naina – mumma please jaane do, aur driver bhi to rahega na saath mein

Ashutosh – ok beta tum jao

Neetu- lekin…
Ashutosh- ab jane bhi do usse aur waise bhi driver rahega na saath mein , jao beeta aur raastein mein call kartein rehta ok beta

Naina – ok papa love u

Naina car se nikal jaati hai delhi ke liye

Neetu – pata nahi kyun mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai, wo safetly pohach to jayegi na

Ashutosh – tum bhi bewajah tension leye rehti ho , wo bilkul safetly pohach jayegi.

Naina car se delhi ke liye nikal jati hai.

Kafi der tak tak ye log bina ruke ja rahe hote hain, ambala pohachne par naina ek dhabba par rukti hai dinner ke liye

Naina – driver yahi par rok do, yahin par kuch kha lete hain, phir aage ke liye badhtein hain

Driver – ok

Naina uttarti hai jaise he wo aage badhti hai ek ladke se takra jati hai

Nain – ohh I m so sorry main dekha nahi

Wo ladka bina kuch bole chala jata hai naina ko uska behaviour thoda theek nahi lagta hai.

Wahin kuch dur kuch gundde baithe hote hai, WO dekhtein hai k naina ki car mein kafi saman hai aur WO sirf driver ke saath hai, wo log kuch plan banate hai.

Naina – chalo driver

Driver – ok madam

Ye log kuch dur he pohachte hai k kuch log inka raasta rok lete hai, unmein se ek knife nikalta hai aur driver ko bahar nikalta hai
Aur phir naina ki taraf jata hai , naina ye sab dekh kar darr jati hai

Naina – ye kya kar rahe ho

Man – ae chal chup chap se bahar nikal aur sara maal humare hawale kar de

Naina saman nikal kar de he rahi hoti k tabhi driver bhagne ki koshish karta hai, par ye log usse bhagne nahi dete hai aur usse marne lagtein hai, ye sab dekh kar naina chelane lagti hai
Uski cheekh sun kar ek ladka jo wahan se ja raha hota hai ruk jata hai. Aur wahan aa kar naina ki help karta hai, wo phele uss admi ke haath se knife cheene ki koshish karta hai , issi koshish mein usske haath par chot lag jati hai,but kissi tarah wo knife cheen leta hai, knife uske haath mein jata dekh wahan se sab log bhag jate hai.
Ye wahi ladka hota hai jisse naina takrayi thi

Naina- thank you so much agar aaj aap nahi aate to pata nahi kya hota.

Wo ladka bas usse khamosh nazron se dekhta hai aur age bad jata hai

Naina ko kuch ajeeb sa lagta hai wo dekhti hai k wo akele ja raha hai tabhi wo kuch der soch kar usse peeche se awaz deti hai

Naina – excuse me, aap kahan ja rahe hai, agar aap chahen to I can give u lift

Wo ladka abh bhi chup chup rehta hai aur ja kar car mein baith jata hai

Naina ko kuch samajh nahi aata hai

Wo log wahan se nikaltein hai, rasteein mein naina ki nazar usske haath par padti hai, uske haath se blood nikal raha hota hai

Naina – arre aapke haath se to khoon aa raha hai, ek min

Wo uske haath par apna rumal bandhti hai

Naina- waise aapka naam kya hai??

Wo ladka phele to usse dekhta hai aur phir aage mud jata hai aur kuch der baad bolta hai

Boy – RAJVEER SHEKHAWAT

Naina usski awaz sunkar thodi der ke liye hairan ho jati hai, phir bolti hai

Naina – mera naam naina hai, waise kahan jaana hai aapko

Rajveer – Delhi

Naina - (muskurate hue) Delhi??? Arre what a coincidence main bhi delhi ja rahi hun

But rajveer ki taraf se koi reaction nahi hota hai

Well frnds that's it for now, I hope u all enjoyed reading it
Plzzz do comment and if there are any suggestions plzz let us know

Regds:
Dreams World Creations

Edited by anam_mehrun - 17 years ago

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sherlock_holmes

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Posted: 17 years ago

Simply fabulous, 👏 👏 great superb,excellent,brilliant,too gud 👏 👏 hats off, 👏 👏 Please continue soon

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Rabi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sherlock_holmes
Simply fabulous, 👏 👏 great superb,excellent,brilliant,too gud 👏 👏 hats off, 👏 👏 Please continue soon

Thanks for ur Great Comments 😊

Inshallah we shall send it next part very Soon 😊

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mehrun

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Posted: 17 years ago

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EK KHWAHISH PART-2

Well frnds here is the second part of our fic hope u all will enjoy reading it.

Rajveer ko khamosh dekh kar naina ko thoda ajeeb sa lagta hai , ye log thodi he dur pohachte hai k tabhi unko aage ka rasta band milta hai hai, aage gadiyon ki lambi line lagi hai.

Naina – oh god ab kya hua ye rasta kyun band hai, driver zara pata lagao k kya baat hai.

Driver aage jaata hai, aur dekhta hai k aage check post hai aur sabi gadiyon ki checking chal rahi hai, wo aage badh kar ek police officer se pochta hai aur wapas aata hai

Naina – kya hua hai?

Driver – wo aage checking chal rahi hai, koi terrorist bhag hai hai, isliye aage sari gadiyon ki talashi li ja rahi hai.

Naina – oh God!! Yahan to bhut der ho jayegi, zara pata to karo k kitni der lagegi.

Driver chala jata hai.

Rajveer sari baatein sunta hai aur car se uttar jata hai

Naina – arre aap kahan ja rahe hai

Rajveer bina kuch kahe aage badhne lagta hai, naina usko rokne ke uske peeche jati hai

Naina –arre suno to kahan ja rahe aise veernae jagahn mein aapko koi taxi bhi nahi milegi

Rajveer peeche mud kar dekhta hai tabhi, ek officer ki nazar un dono par jati hai, wo un logon ke pass jata hai

Officer – aap log bin checking k kahin nahi ja saktein hai

Naina peeche mud kar dekhti hai, tabi us officer ki nazar Rajveer par jati hai, usse uska chera saaf nahi dekhayi deta hai

Officer – aap bina checking k nahi ja saktein hai

Rajveer dheere se naina k pass aata hai, aur dekhte he dekhte bag se gun nikal kar uske sir par laga deta hai

Ye sab itna jaldi hota hai k naina ko kuch samjh nahi aata hai, udhar wo officer aapni gun nikalne he chalta hai k tabhi rajveer hawa mein fir karta hai

Rajveer – agar mujhe pakadne ki koshish ki to main iss ladki ko shoot kar dunga (ye kehte waqt rajveer ki ankon mein bhut gussa hota hai)

Naina ko kuch pal ke liye yakin he nahi hota hai k jis insaan ne uski jaan bachyi thi woe k terrorist hai
Rajveer naina ko lekar car ki taraf badhta hai, naina bhut ghabrayi hue hai

Rajveer uspar chelatte hue bolt hai

Rajveer – baitho car mein

Naina car mein baithti hai rajveer car lekar wahan se nikal jata hai
Police wale un logon ka peecha kartein hain

Rajveer bhut speed mein car chala raha hota hai aur udhar naina wahan se bhagne ki koshish kar rahi hoti hai
Udhar officer sabko mana kartein hai k koi goli nahi chalayega

Officer –us car mein ek ladki bhi hai issliye koi bhi goli nahi chalayega, hum logon ko bhut dhayan se unka peecha karna hoga aur haan ek baat sab dhayan se sune hume usse zinda pakadna hai
Remember I want him alive OK

Rajveer bahut speed mein car chalata hai aur achanak se kissi sunsan road par mud jata hai, jo police jeep unka peecha karti hai wo bhi ussko nahi dekh pati aur wo unki nazron se ojhal ho jate hain

Udhar naina, rajveer par chellane lagti hai

Naina- tumhe kya lagta hai k tum bach jaoge , nahi ye log tumhe dhundh he lenge

Rajveer – jab tak tum mere kabze mein ho ye log mujhe kuch nahi karenge

Naina – agar aisa hai to………….

Itna kehte he naina car ka door khol kar bahar kudne ki koshish karti hai but rajveer uska haath pakad leta hai aur car rok deta hai

Rajveer – marne bhut shock hai na tumhe to ek goli uttar deta hun bewajah itni taklif kyun le rahi ho

Naina – haan tumhe mare k alawa aata he kya hoga, ek terrorist jo ho, masumo ki jaan lene wale

Rajveer usse gusse bhari nigah se dekhta hai aur uska haath kheech kar car mein baitha tha hai aur jungle ki taraf le jata hai
Jungle mein pohach kar wo naina ko ek jagah baith ne ko kehta hai

Rajveer – (gun naina ki taraf karte hue) chup chap yahin baithi raho agar yahan se jaane ki koshish ki to jaan se jaogi

Tabhi rajveer ko naina ke purse mein mobile dekhta hai, wo usse uska mobile chenta hai aur wahin pass mein baith jata hai
Phir kuch der baad jab usse lagta hai k naina so gayi hai to wo kissiko call karne ki koshish karta hai
Udhar naina jab ye dekhti hai k rajveer ka dhayan uspar nahi hai to wo wahan se bhag jati hai .
Naina ko bhagta dekh Rajveer bhi uske peeche jata hai

Naina bhut tez bhag rahi hoti hai, achnak wo peeche mudti hai k tabhi uska leg ek patthar se takrata hai aur wo khai mein gir jati hai

Rajveer wahin peeche hota hai aur naina ko ghai mein girta hua dekhta hai, wo wahan ja kar neeche dekhta hai to naina ek peedh ko pakhde hue latki hai

Naina,Rjveer ko dekhti hai but usse bachane ko nahi kehti hai
Uska haath fisla ja raha hai , wo phir se ek bar uppar ki taraf dekhti hai, wo rajveer ko dekhti hai mano uski aanken usse maddad k liye keh rahi, wo usse bebas nigahon se dekhti hai.
Rajveer neeche usko dekhta hai aur 2sec baad wo wahan se chala jata hai.

Well that's it for now we hope that u all liked it, plzz do comment

Regds:
Dreams World Creations

Edited by anam_mehrun - 17 years ago

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