Journey of Hearts(LAST PART IS UP!) - Page 92

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
r u back yet natu??? kitna aur inteezar kar vao gi???.....plz jald se jald continue karo....ab aur inteezar nahi hota....lol 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol i am extremely sorry guys we got so into the dance thing!!! it looks sooo good it is going to rock!! anyways i ended up staying later then expected cuz i ate dinner their and now i am going to go watch a movie BUT i will post what i have done for the next part so far!!! and dont freak out when you see how short it is i have mosted of the next part done i just need to make it match and flow together so i will post it in like 2 minutes....

I AM SOOOOOO SORRY ONCE AGAIN YOU CAN KILL ME IF YOU WANT I KNOW I HAVE KEPT YOU WAITING!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
PART 43

Everything was crazy. Everyone was running around preparing for the wedding. Everyone was stressed. There was only one week left before the wedding and they are not even close to being done with preparations. Evee, Alliyah, Kripa, Natasha, and Happe are sent to go live in a different house, and Ria and Shereen come too so they don't get bored at home. All the guys weren't too pleased about this, but they know better then to go against it. All the girls are having a blast in the separate house. They stay up late, and talk about everything! Guys are just sulking around the house. They missed the girls.

The wedding date is coming closer and closer. There is now only one day left till the wedding. The girls go to sleep early with the nerves, and the guys just can't fall asleep. The next morning the girls all wake up super early (at like 5ish) and they see a rose pathway leading them. They all follow it and are taken out to the balcony. Then there is a note titled Kripa. Kripa picks it up and reads it and then looks down and is shocked at what she sees. All the other girls follow her gaze down to the tennis courts below and see I love you written in flowers. The word love is replaced by a heart. There are candles outlining the I (heart) you so they stand out in the early morning sky and in the middle of the heart is Angad looking up at Kripa with his arms stretched out. Kripa runs down the stairs and flies out the backdoor and runs into Angad's arms. They hug passionately and then Angad slowly brings her closer and gives her a soft kiss on the lips. All the other girls clear their throats and Angad and Kripa part quickly.
Angad: Hi ladies!
All the other girls: HI ANGAD!
Angad: Do you mind if I borrow Kripa for a while?
Alliyah: Hmmmm….you are not supposed to see the bride on the wedding day….. (she looks at everyone else) should we let him?
Evee: Of course! The guy has probably been waiting here all night!
Happe: Yeah I agree! I think we should give it to him…..
Alliyah: but….
Natasha/Ria/Shereen: I agree!!
Alliyah: (looking defeated) Fine Angad go take her but bring her back soon!
Evee goes back inside while everyone stays outside. When everyone else comes back inside they can't find Evee anywhere.

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Evee goes inside and she is about to go into the bathroom when a strong arm covers her mouth and wraps another arm around her waist. Evee is struggling but the guy doesn't give up and then finally when they are outside in the backyard he lets go of her and Evee turns around quickly, and she is shocked to see John standing there rubbing his arms where Evee dug her nails in.
Evee: (whispering) John….
John: (looks up and smiles at her) Yeah….
Evee: What was all this?
John: (Walks closer to Evee and puts his hands on her waist to bring her closer) I was missing you so I thought while everyone is being distracted by Angad I could come and kidnap you for a while! Sorry if I hurt you! I didn't mean too. I just didn't want you to scream!
Evee: (puts her arms around his neck) Awwww…..so sweet!! (Eyeing the nail marks on his arm) Sorry about those nail marks.
John: Its ok hun right now I am with you and that is all that counts!!

John and Evee spend some time together and then Evee realizes she has been with his for a while and so she tells him to leave quickly. Evee then nervously walks back inside the house and she is just shocked at what she sees.
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great hun...but tooooo short...plz continue soon and make the next part longer...lol....keep up the great work
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Posted: 19 years ago
yeah shereen i know not worth the wait but i am rly sorry next part will be longer i promise!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was good natasha.
u guys are killing me here. I mean everyone who writes fan-fics and haven't continued yet.
how more u guys gonna make me cry?

natasha.
I read you fan-fic over again last night and i realized that Kripa suffered so much in ur fan-fic and she got seperated from angad 2 times and then she went to depression when you brought evee. I felt so sad last night and cried so much. It's you fan-fic's fault.
I want my water back that went with my tears. 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: happe

that was good natasha.
u guys are killing me here. I mean everyone who writes fan-fics and haven't continued yet.
how more u guys gonna make me cry?

natasha.
I read you fan-fic over again last night and i realized that Kripa suffered so much in ur fan-fic and she got seperated from angad 2 times and then she went to depression when you brought evee. I felt so sad last night and cried so much. It's you fan-fic's fault.
I want my water back that went with my tears. 😆

dont cry happe...its just a fan-fic...n...to bring ur water back...ummmmmmmm....aha!!...idea!!!....drink plenty of water...u will get it back!!😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: bollygirl87

dont cry happe...its just a fan-fic...n...to bring ur water back...ummmmmmmm....aha!!...idea!!!....drink plenty of water...u will get it back!!😆

HAHAHAHAHAHA lol sry happe for making you cry!!! and yeah drink lots of water!!! and sry bout not continuing i just have been sooooo busy!!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
hahahahahahahahahaha
that waas really good
evee is shocked to c us with ours guyz right
hahahahah
plz cont soon 😆

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