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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great Part!!!!!!It was a great start!!! :) short but sweet! SO preeti and Neev are in college right? anyways CONTINUE SOON 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Munni yes they r in college...my fave college..the one i am going to n hopefully love! lolz its NYU!
LOVE
Part 2

Recap: intro of Preeti n Dev.

Dev: N, Josh: J, Pinky: Pk, Ripi: R: Preeti:P

(pinky n ripi r also Preeti's friend.)
AT THE COLLEGE!

J: Hey yaar! Howz u?
D: Not bad u?
J: UH ok. Lolz
Josh n Dev start going to class while talking.
Pk: Hi Dev!(sry muffins u will get a better part…hopefully)
R: Hi Dev!
Then a slutty group of girls come n say: Dev! U noe I am free tonight!
Dev just looks at them n laughs.
J: wow man! All the girls n NYU r fida over u n u..DONT EVEN CARE!
D: wat can I say? They're just…not my type. (he shrugs)
While saying this he bumps into someone. SOMEONE:S
S n D: SRY!
The girl looks up n …its…(guess who?lolz) its Preeti!
P:lolz no it was my fault….(she stops midway of her sentence as she sees that he is just starying at her)
Again he just stares at her…lolz
P:ummm…hi my name is Preeti .
Dev doesn't do anything …not even shake her hand! He just stands there looking at her, lolz. Preeti feels akward afterwards.
P:umm(have u noticed that she says umm a lot lolz) ok umm..bye!
She leaves n neev is still looking at her(wow)
J: Dude! Wat happened?
D: …
J:DUDE!!(shakes him)
D:huh? WAT?
J: (sighs) nvm.
…………………………………………………………………...
We see Preeti going into her her class n sitting next to Loveleen(Love) Love: L
L: Hey! How was summer?
P: ok. U?
L: ok.
P: OMG! In the hallway this guy bumped into me n like I said sry but all he did was stare at me! Weird guy ba?
L: lolz ya!
Then suddenly someone comes into the class..
Who is it?

Preview: D-P bump into each other more. Lolz but this timehe wont stare…atleast not that much! Lolz hope u enjoyed!! Will cont. soon or if I get enough comments!

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey u guys idk y it comes so short here! lolz it was 2 n half pages in my notebook! ok for u guys if i finish typing my 3 part i will pos tit but then i need double the comments!!!! GOT IT?? 😡 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Love
Part 3


Recap: D-P met.
Ok enjoy!

………………………………………………………………………………….
Now where were we? Oh ya! Someone comes into the class. Who is it? Duh!! Dev!(u noe I feel rite now that I am so not funny! Lozl well that's prob cuz I am not so don't mind my stupid idiotic jokes lozl) ok so Dev comes into the classroom( I noe neev is in 3rd year n piya is in 1st but lets just say she is smart lolz…. Don't I say lolz too much?)

Prof: ok class wb(welcome back) to NYU!


Class: (groans)


Prof: Now now! Ok I remember last year I let u sit anywhere n well…that didn't work out so good. Now I am going to give u arranged seats. Isn't that fun?!!


Class: (just looks at him)


The prof. gives everyone their seats n this is our special couple to be's seating.
Josh-Love
Dev-Preeti
So J-L r behind D-P.
All four of them look at each other. N the Dev remember that Preeti is the girl he had the little incident with in the hallway with (wow short memory no?)


D: hi! Am Dev.(embarssed) uh..we met b4. remember?


P: (laughs) yes, I do!
AKWARD SILENCE(I hate when this happens in real life with a cute guy! Don't u?)


Dev was about to say something when the prof. started speaking.
Prof.: Class plz I noe ur table partner must be prettier then me but I must say I am more important if u want to pass.
Btw taking notes D-P kept taking quick glances when they thought the other wasn't looking.(hmmmm? Do I smell a little chemistry?)


D: (thinks) wow she is really pretty


P: (thinking) He is really cute!


Ok u guys I hope this makes up for the short part, lozl.
I need more comments to cont.! othe wise I will not!! I SWEAR!! Ok enjoy!

Edited by hotaditya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
Preetiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great update yaar.. 👏
continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u 😳
N WHERE IS EVERYONE? 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotaditya

thank u 😳
N WHERE IS EVERYONE? 😭

i'm here..but then again i'm not everyone...lol

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 parts.....continue soon.... 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u! but u guys if u dont comment (or atleast more pplz cuz u guys (sonal n ripi) r the best...but my bff isnt even updating!! meanie! love i am not talking to u anymore! but really ppl u have to comment more or i am not updating! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok u guys next part will be up in a lil while 😊
n it is dedacated(spelling?) to sonal n ripi for encouraging me so much..i am writing this ff just for u

oh yea n if u want u can predict wat is going to happen next..if u want 😆

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