~Kaisa Pyaar with (AK) Page 6 Part 4~

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Laiba

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

very cute part i liked it continue soon👏

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Alicia

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Chapter 2

Angad walks down the stairs and says Good Morning! Everyone says Good Morning to Angad! "SO whats new?" asks Angad! "yea I saw the new furniture in guest room! I hope aunt Lovely is not coming! She talks to much says Kartik! " "No! your fathers friends daughter is coming here to stay because she has to do colledge here" says Naina . " She will be coming tommorow!" says Dillip . " We will all be going to the Airport as a FAMILY! said Dilip. " But dad....I got to go at colledge!" said Angad. " Ok! Angad you can leave but Aaliya and Kartik are coming!"said Naina. As a scene shifted to Indian airort: We see 3 people! 2 PEOPLE IN THERE 40S AND A GIRL IN 20S! " Kripa Takee care!" said the women. "And Phone us daily and telly Dilip hello for me. Then Kripa says "Okay Dad" " Bye My flight time is right now' said Krpa and said bye to her mom and dad. Then scene shifts to night in USA . The khanna family is at airport! except Angad! Then Kripa is taking her Luggage and her most prized possesion her guitar and is walking out the door and then she sees Khanna Family and Khanna family sees Kripa! KArtik is dumstruck when he sees Kripa and feels something inside when he see Kripa in this Churridaar:

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Nihita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

great part plz change the page no.so others could also be informed.........bye

ur ff is gr8 but we expect a long part

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Alicia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Chapter 3'

Kripa greeted everyone. But when she greeted Kartik he was staring at her. "Hello?!?" said Kripa. "Oh..um... Hi my name is Kartik" replied Kartik. He was sweating alot. Naina , Dilip and Aaliya tried to hide there grin." So lets go home!" said Dilip leading his way to the car. " So what univercity are you going to?" asked Naina in the car. " I am going to Port Univercity. " Oh really " said Naina. " Me and my 2 bros also go there" said Aaliya. " You have a 2nd bro?" asked Kripa . " Yea, his name is Angad " said Aaliya. The reached at Khaana House. Kripa went to her room and immegiately went to her bed. She went to bed early because she had to go to college. Next day Kartik and Aaliya waited for her at the car to go to the colledge. She asked them where was Angad and they said he is already at college. " Wow he must be preety punctual. Kartik replied" Yea rite He only goes early so he can flirt with the girls". " O Ok" said Kripa. The colledge was really near. When the car was parked they went to office and the bell rang. Kartik and Aaliya went to there classes and Kripa went to her locker. She put her books in and checked her schedule . She was supposed to be at rm104. She knew she was late and she wasnt paying attention she was running. She didnt notice the water in front of her she was about to fall but a soemone saved her. It was Angad!

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eternal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

hmmmm nice part dear but please make the parts longer....and haye haye kripa and angad bumped lol cant wait to read more 😉 😉

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jiya imdad

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

nice part! now finally angad and kripa are going to meet! continue soon!

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Alicia

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani
hmmmm nice part dear but please make the parts longer....and haye haye kripa and angad bumped lol cant wait to read more 😉 😉

I will make them longer they are short because I dont have that much time and yea I m happy that you are excited!