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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..... 👏 .......i'm so happy n smily after reading it 😛 !!!!!.......it was so romantic!!!! ........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....i wanna read the next paart 👏 !!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..... 👏 .......i'm so happy n smily after reading it 😛 !!!!!.......it was so romantic!!!! ........plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....i wanna read the next paart 👏 !!!!!

hey thxn 4 liking dear n keep reading do comment aslo 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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what an awesome part.........ple continue soon..........thankjs

love

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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a solidddd romantic part 😳 .kya part tha yaar seriously 👏 .i mean they were together and their romance really rocked this part ⭐️ .i don't have words to describe it 😉 .but i can say it was excellent,superb and marvelous .it was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 8
now she comes out of washroom aur mirror k paas jake khari ho jati hai apne balon ko come kerne lagti hai when sujal is staring her woh aine se yeh baat dekh sakti hai k he is straing at her to woh usko nahi dkeh rahi directly b'coz of haya then sujal kashish k paas ata hai n put his hand on her shoulder kashish aine mein dkehti hai aur sujal bhi usko aine mein dkehta hai then unki aankhien lock hojati hain after some time tehy break their eye contact aur kashish turns to leave when sujal holds her hand kashish turn hoti hai aur apne haath ki aorh dekhti hai which is hold by sujal then she again look at him
sujal:kya baat hai kashish?(woh uski aankhon mein dekh k yeyh sawal puchta hai
kashish:kuch bhi to nahi koi baat nahi hai(jaise kuch kehna chati hai but keh nhai pa rahi hai)
sujal:(holds her by her shoulders)dekho kashish tumhari ankhein tumhari zuban ka saath nahi de rahi hain aur jahan tak main samjh raha hun tum shayd kal raat ki wajh se...dekho kashish kalrata jo bbhi hau agar mujhse koi ghalti hui iam sorrry per main jane kyun tumhein upset dekh k khud ko rok nahi aur ....per kashish kal raat jo bhi us ka mujhya bikul afsos nahi hai agar tuhein kuch bura laga ho to mian phirse tumse mafi mangta hun aur jaanti ho yeh pehli baar hai jab sujal garewal kisi se mafi mang raha hai pata nahi kyun per tumhein apni zindagi mein apke iam feeling a change in my life
kashish(woh is lost in hsi eyes aur uski baaton ko bare ghour se sun rahi hai speaks up)nahi sujal aapko sorry ekhne ki zarorat nahi hai aap se milke to mujhay pehli baaryeh ehsas hua k koi hai ji se mein apna dard apna akela pan apne ansoo baant sakti hun aisa nahi hai k mujhay aaj tak koi hamdard nahi mial per kisis ne taras kahke to kisi ne faida uthane k ghrz se mujhay sahara dena cahha aur aap se milke pehli baar mujhya ehsaas hai koi aisa bhi hai jo mera dard bant sakta hai mujhay jiske paas hoke secure feel hota hai jaise main sabse zyada mehfooz hun is aghosh mein( she went in his arms n hugs him n closes her eyes to feel him closer to her)
sujal also warpped hsi arms around her n make her feel secure he si rubing her back n tighten his grip after soem tiem woh dono lag hote hain kashish aakhien nam hian sujal uska face apne haathon mien leta hai n wipes her tears n nodded his head in No direction kashish smiesl says
kasish:sujal aap fresh hoek aye main breakfast banati hun
sujal:ok(smiels back)

after soem time sujal fresh hoke ata hai nkashish surves him breakfast dono breakfast kertay hain aur tab sujal kehta hai
sujal:kashish tum ready ho jao to hum office chaltay hain
kashish: ji acha after some time woh dono office ke liye nikalte hain jab kashish oepns teh door to bahar kuch log kharay hote hain jo door khultay hi andar jatay hain
logon ko andar ata dkeh kashish usne puchti hai k kya bata hai aap sab yahan sab theek to hain?
log:kya tamasha laga rakha hai tumne yeh?yahna shareef log rehtay hain aise koi akelii larki kisi anjan larke k satah puri rata tauba taub sab log asi ukti seedhi batein kerne lagte hain ye sab dekh k kashish ki ankhen bhar ati hain jaise woh abhi ro degi usjal was ovserving all this n aik dadm se shouted:BA Bohat hogaya aB!
sablog yeh sun k khamosh ho jaty hain aur kashish bhi durr jati hai
sujal:kubse kaya shor macha rakha hai aap sabne?(he is in so much nager jaise abhi kkis ko jan se mar dega) kay kaga aap log ko k aik akeli aur tanha larki k daman mein aap daghlaga denge?aisa kuch bolke uski izzat pe lalchan laga denge haan?aaplog meine se kiten hi hain jinhe apne ghrmei kya chal raha hai wih bhi nahi apat kisis ki beti raat raat bhar ghr se bahr rehti hai to kis ki beti k dus bara boy friends hain per kyun k unek Ma Baap hain is liye i=unpe koi unlgi nahi utah sakta uar kashish akeli ahi per ab nahi kashish akeli thi ab nhai hai ab amin hun uske satah har mor pe uska saath dene k liye samjhe aap sab main pyaar karta hun is se aur shaadi karna chata hun ab kisis ko kuch aur kehna?(uska ghussa uski bardaasht se bahar hai)kashish yeh dekh ker dur jati hai yeh pehli abar thi k usne sujal ko ghusse mein dkeh tah aur woh bhi itne shadeed
sujal contioeus aur haanab aap sab jasakte hai plzzzzzzz (woh unko door ka rasta bata ta hai)now sab log wahn se chalay jate hain aur bus sk are there ab kasish ki ankhien beh rahi rahi hain aur woh bohat dur bhi gayi ahi sujal ko iten ghusse mein dekh k sujal realize k kashish is crying aur woh kuch sehmi si hai to geos to her aur make her face him n says
sujal:kashish(uski aankhon mein bohat effection hai care 4 her) iam sorry woh main kuch zyada hi ghussa hua na actually meri aik kamzori hai jo log meri zindagi mein mayne rakhte hain unke bare mein main kuch bhi ghalat baat bardasht nhai ker sakta hun aur un kuch logon mein ab tum bhi shamil ho n i can't give ne 1 this right to hurt samjhi
kashish:(still have tears in her eyes nodded her head in yes n sujal opens hisams 4 her n they share a long hug)
after some time they separetes n sujal says
sujal:chalo kashish humein kahin chalna hai
kashish:per kahan?
sujal:tum chalo mere saath
kashish:lekin hum ja kaahn rahay hain?
sujal:mujhpe yaqeen haina?(says this during direct looking in her eyes)
kashish:aap pe to ab shyad khud se zyada yaqeen hone laga hai(she said wid lots of love)
sujal:to chalo mere satah n now they both are in car they are quite kashish is lost in her thaoghts jo abhi hua aaj ghr pe n the way sujal defened her n a smile appeares on her face
then achanak sujal car rokta hai aur kashish apne khayalon ki duniya se bahr ajati hai
kashish:kya hua sujal car kyun rokdi?(confused)
sujal: bahar ao kashish
kashish bahar ati hai aur dekhti hai ki its sujal's house woh bohat heran hojati hai
kashish:sujal yeh yahan aap mujhya yahan kyun alye hain?
sujal:ao mere saath aur uska haath pakar k usko andar lejata hai usko ghr mein lane k baad lounge k bhr rukne ko kehta hai yahan in the lounge veena aunty serving priya n prachi their breakfast aur unki nazar suujal pe perti hai
veena:sujal tu kub aya?theek haina tu rata bhar kahan tah ?
sujal:(smiels)muma mama mama mama main bikul theek hun aapke samne hun aur aapko kisis se milwana chahta hun
veena:milwana chahta hai per kis se?(confused)
sujal:mama aap hamsha mujhse kehti thi na k main shaadi kerlun aur main aapse kehta tah k jab mujhay koi aisi larki milegi jisse dekhte hi mujhay yeh ehsaas ho jaye k she is made 4 me to us din sab se pehle usse aapse milwaonga
veena:( aankhon mein khushi k aansoo hain)sach sujal tu sach keh raha hai?kon hai woh khunaseeb?
sujal:mama khushnaeeb to main hun kyun k woh bohat achi hai jitni khubsurat woh surta se hai us se kahi zyaad uska andar khubsurat hai(i mean dilse)
usse dekhte hi mujhay laga k shayd wohi hai jiska intezar mujahy hamesha tha(yeh saari baatein priya aur prachi bhi sun rahay hai)
priay:(bohat khush hai)hey Bro ab bus bhi karo n plz bata do who's the lucky girl?n where is she?bahar hai main dekhun ?(excited)aur woh bahar jati hia aur jaise uska koi sapna bhar khara ho this was more tahn a shock 4 her she swa kashish standing there
priya:aap aap hain meri bhabz?aap haina woh jisne Bro ko jeene ki wajah di?
kashish bohat ebbarace feel ker rahi hai jaise us se koi ghalti ho gayi ho tabhi priya hugs her aur uska hath pakar k usko ghr ke nadar lejati hai jahan sujal,veena n prachi are already majood
kashish ko dkehte hi veena n prachi bhi priya ki tarah shock hojatya hain
veena:aray kashish beti?tum yhan?
sujalL:ji mama yehi hai woh insaan jinse mujayy pehli nazar mein hi sochne pe majboor ker dia k we are made 4 eachother(he smiels)
prachi:(was still in shock us se bahar ati hai aur kashish k paas jati hai n hugs her tightly)Dii iam so happy 4 u atlast u u find yr Mr perfect (she saying this looking in her eyes n kashish's eyes have so many emotion at the moment)
veena:chalo bacho tum log i uni ka tiem ho gaya hai shaam mein milte hain aur pandit ji se bhi to baat kerni hai bahi(she said in a happy mood)
kashish becomes red wid shram o haya(haila)
priya:ok mom chal prachi
prachi:ok bye sab log bye Dii n jijs(woh us dono ko ankh marti hai n then kashish kpaas ati hai n again hugs her tight aur then dono wahn se chali jati hain)now there are veena,sujal n kasish ,kashish is feeling very uncomfortable shy aur uski nazrein zameen mein dhasi hian tabhi veena breaks teh silence
veena:kashish beta yahan ana to zara mere paas kashish slowly moves 2wrds her
kashish:ji ji Mama
veena:(kya kaha tune?phir se bol
kashish dur jati hai jaise us se koi gahlti ho gayi ho so woh ji ji woh main to main to bsu aise barbaraen lagti hai
veena:aray pagli main to yeh keh rahi thi k boat acha laag tere mun se khudko mama kelana to aik bar phirse bol
kashish:(chain ki sans bharti hai n says)Mama n hugs her tightly
veena also does teh same aur yeh sab sujal dkeh raha hota hai so he interferes liek ahm hahem can i disturb 2 drama queens?(says in taesing tone)
veena:(hits him on his arm nhold his ear in he hand)kya bolA?haan phirse bol
suajl:ahhh Ma dard hota hai yaar mani to Bus yeh keh raha tah k aap dono Saas bahu ne toa bh se mujhe side mein ker dia baad meinkay hoga mera?
kashish:jo abhi hai use se bhi bura hoga aur kya(she said thsi aur veena k peechay chup jati hai aur chupke se dekhti hai )
sujal:(have a ahn haan expresion in his eyes)
veena:(kashish k hath pe hath rakhti hai n says) aur nahi to kya .acha baa ab tum dono zara betho sujal tu kashish ko ghhr dikha la waisay bhi ye ghr ab usi ka to hai ( aur pyar se kashish k sar pe hath pherti hain kisses heron her 4head)main zara mandir hoke ati hun apne is pagal larke aur meri hoen wali bahu ki ane wali zindagi k liye dua ekrke
sujal:ok mom u mus go
veena:yah yah i know my dear son also carry on(aur hanstay hiiye whan se chal;i jati hain)now teh couple is there alone kashish is palying wid er duppatta when sujal comes t her kashish uske kadmon ki ahat sun rahi hai per nazrein nahi utah rahi b'coz of sharam

so sorry 4 the alte update guyz but i was in so many personal pbs so didn't get time 4 writting so sorry again waisay i think no 1 missed my story except le_me_star
Edited by 143786 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great part now SK wedding 🥳 🥳 🥳 [:D/] [:D/] chalo un stupid neighbourhood ppl ki interference ka kuch to faida hua plz cont. soon cant wait any longer. bye. Take care
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: aishwaria

hey great part now SK wedding 🥳 🥳 🥳 [:D/] [:D/] chalo un stupid neighbourhood ppl ki interference ka kuch to faida hua plz cont. soon cant wait any longer. bye. Take care

Hmm yes u are right atleast ab sk will get married😃,n thnx 4 likng
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow sujal kashish ki shadi thts gr8.Ab bus muje in ki shadi ka wa8 hai prt was so nice i hope ab sk akely hai so sum romantic scene ho gye😉 plz continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anam azhar

Wow sujal kashish ki shadi thts gr8.Ab bus muje in ki shadi ka wa8 hai prt was so nice i hope ab sk akely hai so sum romantic scene ho gye😉 plz continue soon

thnx 4 lking dear n will surely try 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwww the part was amazing 👏 .kab se intezar kar rahi thi part ka and so finally u updated it 😉 .it was wonderful !!!i loved it 😉 .goshhhh!!!!i liked the way sujal handled the situation in front of all those neighbours 👏 .i was really impressed with the guts he showed in front of everyone by telling that he will marry kashish and he also accepts this in front of veena ⭐️ .that was the best thing ever 🤗 . lollzzzz.....now they r alone in that big house 😳 .veena chali gayi hai,prachi and priya are alose not there and these two r alone 😉 .aur toh aur veena told him to show kashish the house 😆 .hmmm....abb sujal usse uss kamre mein bhi le jayega jaha woh shadi ke baad aik saath rahege and that will be really rocking 😳 .waiting for the next part and shadi too 😉 .the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzz.....can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊

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