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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks for the lovely comments next part will be hopefully up by tomorrow..!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good goin larz...anywayz....itne saree couples!!!! thatll b hard my bfff.....anywayz....good that u added s-p2 as u new that i wouldnt read it widout them.... 😉

cont soon....

missin ya loadz...
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome start!!! i love all of the couples!! plzz cont soon! 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow keep on writing man i am impressed! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks alot guys ur comments r my motivation...next part will be up soon as i got loads of comments keep commenting..!! i love all ur comments..!!!!

Laraib...!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum ff..luv it..ma fav/. cpoule in it. continue soon 👏 👏 cant wait to read mor..woinder wats anjali's past..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesum ff..luv it..ma fav/. cpoule in it. continue soon 👏 👏 cant wait to read mor..woinder wats anjali's past.. 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Episode 1

In India

Its a beautiful sunny day, We see a big mansion named Sharma Mansion..its a very grand mansion as they r the richest family in India…in a big room which is filled of all the girly stuff like makeup, clothes and etc we see a beautiful girl in a deep sleep… who is smiling while sleeping.

Suddenly…ALARM…its 7am.

Ring…Ring..Ring..!!

(Girl=G)

G: uff yeh alarm bhi naa itna ache sapna dekh rahi thi kaash yeh alarm abhi naa bajta mein apney Prince charming ko dekh leti…

Then suddenly she looks up at the watch..!!

G: OMG I m getting late I have to drop Kt and Saksham at the college. Chal kripa ready ho jao dair ho rahi hai.

The girl is non other than our Princess Kripa Sharma.

She quickly rushes to the bathroom to take shower and after taking a shower she comes out wearing a towel and stands infront of her wardrobe.

Kripa: kiya pehno…Hmm….(thinking while looking at the wardrobe which is full of clothes.)

Then she takes out a frilly long brown skirt with white sleeveless top and after changing into them she quickly does slight make up.

K: perfect..i m ready..!now all I hav to do is wake up Kt and saksham.

She picks up her hand bag and heads out for another room.

Now we see another room which has a combination of pink and purple and contain all girly stuff and loads and loads of make up kits. We see a girl sleeping peacefully.

K: kt utho na college keh liye dair ho rahi hai.( trying to wake up kt)

Kt: kiya hai di subhay subhay kyon tang kar rahi ho.( annoyed)

K: madam shayad app bhool rahi hai aaj aap ko hi college jaana hai.

Kt: toh abhi toh college mein itna time baaki hai..

K: yeh aap ki bhool hai u only hav an hour left..its 8 am

Kt: VT OMG… I had to put on my beauty mask and I had to hav a bubble bath abb kiya ho ga…di app jaey mein 45 mins mein aati hoon.( worried)

K: 45 mins itni dair come downstairs in 30 mins I m waiting till then ill wake up ur twin…uff us ko bhi uthana ek museebat hai..

Kt: ok ..ok whatever…!now go..!

K: acha baba..!1( going out of the room)

Now kt hurriedly put on her beauty mask and then head towards the bathroom to have a bubble bath…she is really conscious about her beauty.

Mean while…kripa enters another room which is very messy clothes r lying here and there…there are posters of girls everywhere..a guy is sleeping peacefully on the bed and saying something while sleeping.
(Guy=G)
G: haan riya mein tumharey saath date pey aonga..!! haan haan don't worry darling..!

K: uff yeh larka kabhi nahin sudhrey gaa

Then she goes towards the bed and tries to wake up the guy.

K: saksham utho..! saksham utho naa dair ho rahi hai.

Still there is no response frm saksham. Kripa then gets an idea..!!she goes to the washroom and comes out while holding a bucket full of ice cold water. Kripa goes towards the bed and threw the whole bucket of cold water on the guy who is non other than our Saksham.

S: ahhhh..Di I hate u for this app ney meray upar thanda paani phenka uff….!!!( Screaming at top of his lungs)

K: its not my fault I was waking u up frm the last 10 mins but still u were not waking up so I had no choice…(patting his wet cheek) now jaldi karo as its 8.15am and u r getting late for college..!

S: u go ill cum in 10 mins…(annoyed)

With tht kripa left and went downstairs. She greeted everyone one (mom,dad and Neev)

Kripa : good morning…! Hey bhai..!

Everyone : Morning..!!

Neev: hello sis..!! where is saksham and Kt..!!

Kripa: oh they r coming..!(while giggling)

N: kiya hoa haans kyon rahi ho..??(confused)

K: nothing bhai…!

Now we see a guy coming down frm the stairs in a bad mood..! he is wearing black sleeveless t shirt and black cargo pant looking hot as usual and he is non other than saksham.

Neev: good morning Saksham.

Saksham: Bad morning bro…(annoyed)

Neev: what happenned..??( while looking at Kripa who was laughing)

Saksham: di sey poochey..!

Kripa: hahah well bhai I threw cold water on saksham as he was not waking up..!

Neev: hahahaha..!! so this was the reason u were continuously giggling..!

K: yup…bro..!

Saksham: bro app bhi ab mujhey tease karey gey.

(Gayatri= G)

G : ab tum log pls saksham to tumg karma bund karo aur neev jaldi karo we r getting late for office.

N: ok mom..(still laughing) wheres kt..?

K: bhai u toh noe her…u noe she takes ages to get ready…and today she is taking a bubble bath.

Saksham: whoa man really..??Kt is too much..!!


Just then Suryaban phone rings..

(Suryaban=S)
Ring..**ring**
S: hello

Mr Oberio: sir can u come to the office now u hav an urgent meeting.

S: ok I will come.

S: Gayatri neev we hav to go office early theres an urgent meeting.

N: ok Dad

With that Suryaban Gayatri and Neev leave for office.

After 30 min..

K: what is this..?? its 8.40 am still kt is not here I m gonna kill her today..!

S: chill sis.!

With that A girl wearing mini demin skirt with short pink top comes downstairs and she is non other than KT

Kt: hello..!

K: kt u r late..!(angry)

Kt: I noe I m sorry..!!(holds her ears..)

K: now quickly eat ur breakfast or u will miss ur lecture..!

Kt: di I m not suppose to eat becuz I gained 2 pounds so I m on a diet.!!(almost crying)

S: Kt u r just too much ok so lets go we r getting late for college.

K: yeah! Lets go..!!


With that they left for college.

Preview: Khanna family intro..!


So guys this was episode 1 I hope u liked it..it was just the beginning. Do comment as ur comments r my motivation…..I will be waiting…!!!

do comment ...even silent readers...!!!!!😃

Love Laraib..!! 😳😳



Edited by eijaz-anita fan - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Part Laraib

It was very cute and funny
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful looking for 2 part soon


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