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Posted: 18 years ago
hey ania, thanks a lot for a beautiful b'day gift. i loved it and enjoyed it very much 😳 . its just beautiful. relationship shared by arzoo and ali is really fantastic. milkkkkkkkk was such a dreadful thing for arzoo. 😆 so funny. ali is such a sweatheart making food for her and she was just showing tantrum so sweeet. really it was very nice. i think she will feel really bad or distressed when they will return back as she is alone now. 😕 please continue soon. 👏 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
first of all wishing nature a HAPPY BIRTHDAY. very nice part. 👏 i liked it.
("What do you want to eat?", he asked in a stern manner. Aarzo who was standing beside him, moved back a little, scared from his anger. "I…..I……….I don't know…", she said, her eyes lowered, sticking strictly on the ground and no where else. Ali quickly made an omelet, which Aarzo refused to eat. He then prepared some toast with Jelly and butter but unfortunately, it was also rejected by Aarzo. She constantly gave silly reasons as she refused each of the things Ali gave her to eat. Ali was frustrated now, of Aarzo acting like a kid.


"Drink this without throwing any tantrums.", Ali said handing her a glass of milk. "Milk?", she replied staring at the glass infront of her, containing a white liquid called Milk . "But….Aaliiiii..I don't like it. You know na.", she said sulking and pouting at the same time. "I said NO TANTRUMS!!", he replied, making himself comfortable on the kitchen counter. "But….you know that it….it….It is MILK!!!!!!", she blabbered, meeting Ali's gaze now, which were on something else. "Yes Ms. Aarzo. I know that It Is M-I-L-K! Now drink it or I will make you drink!", he warned her, sarcasm clearly visible in his cold voice. She looked at the glass and then to Ali who was staring her, waiting for her to finish the substance filled in the long, square shaped transparent structure. Giving a last glance to Ali, she picked up the glass and drank it, holding her nose from one hand and the glass with the other. )was the best part. rest i couldnt decide as whole part is really beautiful. 😳 i couldnt write such abig part as i dont like writing too much. hats off to u who write such a big parts daily and me feels boring to write comments also. 😕 beautiful part. keep writing and cont soon as usual 😆




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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for continuing. really a nice part. ali and arzoo both acted so funny 😆. But still didnt told anything about letter 🤢 . how come shiza and afia reached there. . cont soon to ans the quest 😉 😛 😳 .
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Posted: 18 years ago
simple sweet and short 😆 well about the prediction i think they will persuade aarzo to come with them or all the cousins would stay with her i know confused thats me well anyways dont take that long again
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: nature099

hey ania, thanks a lot for a beautiful b'day gift. i loved it and enjoyed it very much 😳 . its just beautiful. relationship shared by arzoo and ali is really fantastic. milkkkkkkkk was such a dreadful thing for arzoo. 😆 so funny. ali is such a sweatheart making food for her and she was just showing tantrum so sweeet. really it was very nice. i think she will feel really bad or distressed when they will return back as she is alone now. 😕 please continue soon. 👏 😃 😳

hey nature!! sorry hun, i was a little late in posting the part but am glad that u liked it. yes! aarzo doesn't like milk! lol 😆 i love the relationship ali and aarzo share. it's so heartwarming. 😊 it's a secret as to what will happen to aarzo after they leave. you will get to know it soon.😳 keep reading and giving me big comments like this. i enjoy reading them. 😃

tc.

ania 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: devdootcn

first of all wishing nature a HAPPY BIRTHDAY. very nice part. 👏 i liked it.
("What do you want to eat?", he asked in a stern manner. Aarzo who was standing beside him, moved back a little, scared from his anger. "I…..I……….I don't know…", she said, her eyes lowered, sticking strictly on the ground and no where else. Ali quickly made an omelet, which Aarzo refused to eat. He then prepared some toast with Jelly and butter but unfortunately, it was also rejected by Aarzo. She constantly gave silly reasons as she refused each of the things Ali gave her to eat. Ali was frustrated now, of Aarzo acting like a kid.


"Drink this without throwing any tantrums.", Ali said handing her a glass of milk. "Milk?", she replied staring at the glass infront of her, containing a white liquid called Milk . "But….Aaliiiii..I don't like it. You know na.", she said sulking and pouting at the same time. "I said NO TANTRUMS!!", he replied, making himself comfortable on the kitchen counter. "But….you know that it….it….It is MILK!!!!!!", she blabbered, meeting Ali's gaze now, which were on something else. "Yes Ms. Aarzo. I know that It Is M-I-L-K! Now drink it or I will make you drink!", he warned her, sarcasm clearly visible in his cold voice. She looked at the glass and then to Ali who was staring her, waiting for her to finish the substance filled in the long, square shaped transparent structure. Giving a last glance to Ali, she picked up the glass and drank it, holding her nose from one hand and the glass with the other. )was the best part. rest i couldnt decide as whole part is really beautiful. 😳 i couldnt write such abig part as i dont like writing too much. hats off to u who write such a big parts daily and me feels boring to write comments also. 😕 beautiful part. keep writing and cont soon as usual 😆




hey dev! thanks so much for the comment. i liked the way you say what scenes you liked. 😳 thanks for liking this part. keep reading and commenting on the fic.

tc.

ania 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lrstsk

thanks for continuing. really a nice part. ali and arzoo both acted so funny 😆. But still didnt told anything about letter 🤢 . how come shiza and afia reached there. . cont soon to ans the quest 😉 😛 😳 .

hey irstsk! thank you for reading it and commenting. 😆hehe u still remember the letter? i thought everyone forgot about it. 😛 u will come to know what is in it......very soon......hopefully. well, you know that how afia and shiza went inside after their little argument with ali and zohaib. after that both came outside to apologize but found that ali and zohaib were already dozed off in deep sleep. and there fore they also landed up in sleep, sitting beside aarzo. 😳 sorry for the confusion.

will cont as soon as it's possible 😃

tc.

ania 😊

Edited by ania_91 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey its vey interstting part. cont. soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

hey monika! thanks hun.

tc.

ania😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
hey annia really a wonderful part. 👏 wow she was tied by all the four surrounding her in the morning. love the concern showed by ali towards arzoo. their beautiful bonding and relation ship (best friends foreever)is just fantastic. 😳 and that breakfast and the tantrums played by arzoo and all the milk scene omg it was wonderful 😆 😃 . that flashback scene. i must say u write it wonderfully composed of all the emotions of love, concern, fear, fun, emotions. 😊 amazing amazing amazing i can only say this 👏 is arzoo is really ok now or its just temprary recovery now coming to your question i think arzoo feel bad when will leave or maybe they force her to come with them. 😕 any way please coooooooooooooooooooooooooont soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😳 👏 😆 . not as before you took lot of time in posting previous part. 😭 this time pleaase cont. soooon

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